Reviews by Ardanwen78
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515261
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 68: Chapter 67: Bella DAY 23

WOoo, Jacob has arrived!!!! Jeej :)

James would do better to run and hide far far away in a cave now ;) It's good to see the girls being more trusting and learning that their bad experiences are not the norrmal world!

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Ardanwen

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 69: Chapter 68: Carlisle DAY 23

Hi,

Another awesome chapter! Little happened except seeing Carlisles side, but I was anxious to know that side! I cannot wait for the rest, because there are so many things happening! At the same time, this also means the story might be slowly wrapping up... I'm sad for that, but happy that I can always come and reread it!!

thank you

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Annelies

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 69: Edward DAY 23

HI,

Okay, cool chapter! Jacob explains and it seems the school in itself is not really in danger, just Laurents dirty dealings within! And that's how they can get James too :D What a relief!

I'm curious as to how Carlisle is going to take all this information and how Jacob will be able to help them out and not get convicted or something. And if they will open up te school again with extra security and enrollment procedures...

Thank you!

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Ardanwen

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 70: Bella DAY 23 and 24

Oh dear god!!! He found them??? Man, that doesn't bode well... (Oh, and I'm thinking Laurent, not James...)

Cannot wait to see what happens next :D I'm guessing Victoria might show unexpected strength!

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Ardanwen

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

I forgot about the tracking device in Victoria... Stupid me ;)

And holy hell, James just signed his death penalty by killing! And Heidi will probably squeal everything out to the police ... Yes, I can see a nice future ahead, I'm just a bit worried about Victoria and Bella in the hands of James... But I think they will take him down!

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Ardanwen

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 73: Chapter 72: Carlisle Day 23 & 24

Aaaah,

cliff again :D I'm sure Jacob, Carlisle and Jasper are going to set out against them and that Aro will be a lot of help because it is his private jet...

OOh, cannot wait!

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Ardanwen

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 73: Edward Day 23 and 24

Hiya,

OMG, James is an idiot :) Not noticing you leave your phone behind when that thing is actually the locator to Victoria -> idiot didn't think straight anymore after het got his girls, let his dick take over the 'thinking' then...

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Ardanwen

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 74: James

Ooh, you ended it on a cliffie!!! :) Thanks for the chapter! Hope RL lets up a bit ;)

 

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Ardanwen

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77: Chapter 76

Hi,

to both of you: A big thankyou! For sharing your story with us/me  AND for publishing another version. I'm looking forward to it and to the new publishing house!

Don't cry over the end, it's just another sort of beginning! It was an amazing ride and will continue to be so!

Again, thank you

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Ardanwen

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Amazing, very good ending. You given the info, but not all of it, some imagination is required but you can see that everyone will get through it!

And I cannot wait for the original!

 

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Ardanwen

Summary:

Bella's a good girl, goes to a private girls school doesn't put a foot wrong. Goes out for one night with the girls and meets bad boy Edward who is from a public school and leads Bella off onto a different path..


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33439 Read Count: 36897
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 17 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Hiya,

well, interesting to say the least :D Charlie has been houding his ass, it does get him off the hook a bit ;)

Now, will he get rid of his babies AND call bella? ;)

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Ardanwen

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Today is supposed to be the best day of Bella's life but she is freaking out. When she revisits her past will she find that she has made a wrong choice? How will she fix it?

AH, OOC.

Rated M for my explicit language and future chapters.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17107 Read Count: 8851
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 01 Mar 2010
Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Awkward Attraction

Hiya,

Well, I'm loving this story :) Had gotten behind a bit, but all caught up now! And I have no idea where you're going with this, I have a vague hope, but I'm not totally sure ;)

thanks!

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Ardanwen



Author's Response:

LoL! Thanks for reading hun! It shouldn't be long until all is revealed!

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can't wait! :)

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hi,

finally caught up on the last two chapters! And man, I'm so anxious to read the rest ;) It's lifting the veil little by little :D Which is better than yanking it off, but still, I'm craving my next fix ;)

 

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Ardanwen



Author's Response:

Thanks hun! New chapter should be up soon!

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7- Another Side of Jacob

Hi,

ooh, exciting, more information but absolutely nothing to give away who is waiting at the altar :s You're good ;) Cannot wait for the next part!!!!

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Ardanwen



Author's Response:

Thanks hun! I'm glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Fieuw, you had me worried for a while :) I didn't think she would say yes to a marriage proposal of Jacob after his idiotic behaviour!

Loved it, thanks!

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Ardanwen

Reviewer: Ardanwen78 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

Awww, very good ending! She got closure by seeing Jacob being a prick to her once again and Edward asked her to 'move in' :D

thankyou!

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Ardanwen