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Bio:
Heyy everyone the names jazzi...i am new to this site and basically signed up to get a feel for it!!!
A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 108595
Date: 22 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
i love this story cant wait to till the s=ceremony chapter and bella and peters talk
Things were just starting to calm down for Emmett and Bella since the death of their parents, when the new kid James comes to town and shakes up Bella’s world.
Her crush had turned into love, his love turned into obsession. His obsession became Bella’s nightmare.
B/Jms at first then B/E
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 230732 Read Count: 36438
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
wow i have just finished reading this story so far. and i gotta say its amazing!!!
its has romance, drama, hurt and comfort.
now that james has bella i think it should be five years or so before she comes back
to her family in the states, due to him keeping her in hiding or something and
possible have bella fall in love with james again becuase shes been brainwashed or
some twisted version of the the stockholm syndrome. well i hope you update soon
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
you should do a pov of james...does he really love bella or is it some sick twisted obession that he has over her? is his love misguided, and he only knows how to express any emotion through violence.
After spending an intimate night together, Edward realizes what a true danger he is to Bella and decides to leave. Depression finally sinks in when she realizes she's pregnant and a certain deadly vampire has come for her; Aro Volturi.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21135 Read Count: 8560
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
whats with the z88???? its extremely annoying i hope that wasnt done on purpose because if so its very unnecessary
Author's Response:
sorry, but i did say i didn't know how to take it off. it pissed the living hell out of me. everytime i went back to fix it, it all went down hill sorry. i have no idea how to take it down. - mili
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
well basically you could have said this
-edward goes to bella's house
-edwards finds bellas been gone for 5 months
-cullens travel to see the volterra to get bella
-cullens arrive with unease
-bella makes appearance and someone yells "daddy"
and there you have your chapter,
i feel there could have had more depth to edwards pov, including more of deep thoughts and feelings. i feel that there could be more angst in your story to give it some edge.. and not every problem you present in the story needs a cookie cutter solution.
Author's Response:
whats a cookie cutter solution?