Reviews by GirlWhoReads
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311144
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Sins of a Mother

I know this will sound bad, but I am glad that things will be bad for Renee too. It would be worse if Renee continued to think everything was great while bad things happened to Bella.

Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - I Will Follow

when i saw the picture i knew this wouldn't be good. i wonder what renee will think about following the rules when she sees bella.

Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Deny Thy Name

I was afraid to read this right before I went to bed, but it wasn't too horribly terrible -  the torture, not your writing - your writing is always good. 

Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Salvation

So Felix isn't really part of the cult, he's a hired man from the outside?

Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 : Rebirth

I was starting to worry we wouldn't get a chapter this week.

My only problem with the story is that Bella didn't commit the sin of lust by feeling ashamed she was naked. At least not from what is written. Lust is a passionate or overmastering desire or craving (usually in a sexual context but can have to do with other things such as power). What she felt was shame for being naked, which is a result of recognizing you are a sinner. Adam and Eve did not know they were naked until after they sinned. Now if she thought about them seeing her naked and wanting to flaunt her nakedness or was turned on by the thought of being naked in front of others then that would have been lust.



Author's Response:

What can we say... Father Aro is a weirdo... He also thinks eating poptarts in bed is a sin...go figure...

 

Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - In My Hands

I got my alert.

At least Aro does at least follow his own rules. Many times heads of cults will deny they are "sinners". But still he is evil and sadistic. Make them bleed?! yuck.

Does he expect her to get pregnant on her wedding day? Or does he consider any birth (even if it is years later) to be his?

 

 

Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Not Your Own

What does Esme mean "If you are able to walk"? Is this related to her muscles atrophing or will the do aomething else to her that makes her unable to walk?

Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Desperation

I was wondering when Charlie would make an appearance. And, oh boy, he ran into Felix. I guess we will get to see if Felix is a good guy or bad guy at heart.

Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Revelations

Apparently the Library's alert system was so shocked it sent out 12 alerts for your update. LOL!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella gets sent to a school by her boyfriend to help her become the wife he wants. It isn't what Bella expects, at all.

BDSM, Dark story.

 

 

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward, Bella/Alice, Bella/Carlisle, Bella/Emmett, Bella/James, Bella/Jasper, Bella/Jasper/Alice, Bella/Rose, Carlisle/Esme, Carlisle/Other or Original Character, Edward/Bella/OC, Edward/Carlisle (Slash), Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories, To Read
Chapters: 78 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 297603 Read Count: 1515270
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2010 Updated: 21 May 2010
Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 71 - James: Day 23 and 24

Oh My. I think I'm speechless. What's up with Heidi? At least now it is evident that if James makes it to jail he will stay there since he just murdered Laurant (I'm sure he will say it is self-defense or might get a manslaughter charge but with all his other charges yeah he is going to rot in jail, unless of course he doesn't live that long. 

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625393
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Oh. My. The guests. Hmm. Maybe Bella getting pregnant wouldn't be a bad thing. Surely Carlisle wouldn't kill a grandchild of his or want another man raising it.

Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47

He isn't going to tell her why is he? He is just going to change. I think if he explained it to her she would understand. Would she like it no, but since she knows the horrors I think she would rather go with pretending (or actually experiencing some of it) with someone she loves rather that the cold heart b..(sorry I don't use bad words, but I can't think of a more appropriate term).

Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

I feel shell shocked. Does Bella's HEA include Edward? I can't decide. Part of me thinks she will be better off if she just walks completely away from it. But I feel a little bad for Edward. He changed for her. Also I don't think anyone will ever completely understand what she went through except the Cullens so she might need them.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 312005
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches

I just got all caught up on LRM and a new chapter of V&V came through. Now what am I suppose to do? Wait?!?



Author's Response:

sorry.  i'm way behind resonding to these reviews...but i just posted another V&V today!  Thanks!

Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 72: Teepees & Tribal Law

Hi! Did you see the review of V&V on the news page of TWCS?



Author's Response:

I didn't see that...thank you for letting me know!  I'm still kind of in shock when people write nice things about my story...sometimes I cringe and read them with one eye closed fully expecting it to say:  "If you want to read a load of crap then you shouldn't miss this story by Emmamama....blah blah blah..." lol.  Thanks again!

Rain by Patch0341 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

For former Marine Eric Martin, life was a series of was just a lonely repetition of mundane moments. One rainy day at the bus stop is all it will take to change his life irrevocably.

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Beauty in Rain

By Kittyisme0341

Picture a priceless relic,

All covered in muck and decay.

It's beautiful splendor is hidden

All covered in drab shades of gray.

 

The Rain comes along and caresses it.

And slowly removes a lot of

The dirt that completely covered it.

And brings back the colors of love.

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Kissing in the rain


Categories: Original Fiction, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 14215 Read Count: 187
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2010 Updated: 26 Nov 2010
Reviewer: GirlWhoReads Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I've really enjoyed your story. I hope you will continue to update.