Penname: DataByteDL [Contact] Real name: Dee
Member Since: 04 Oct 2012
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Hi everyone...I'm best know as FangirlinGranma Dee and am trying to get my pename changed so for now I will be sure to sign all my reviews so you know who I am!


 


Completely FanFic obsessed...that's me! Especially MATURE COMPLETED TwiFics!


I usually don't read WIPs, but lately have been known to make the exception. Ok...ok...I admit it...I'm reading like 30 WIPs currently...but they're soooooo good and I couldn't resist and the writers promised they would complete! So...yeah...there's that! *Giggles*


I LOVE fluff and especially funny, SEXY fluff! But I also love an intelligently written fic that makes me think and anything that is UNIQUE. Of course humor, romance, drama, lemony goodness, sci-fi and action always pique my interest.


Basically I read anything...yeah and even ANGST it appears...but nothing too angsty as I'm an ANGSTrophobic (translation: "big baby") and I have to read those from under the covers! *shudders*


I do have my "FangirlinGranma's Emergency ANGSTrophobia Attack Kit" that I keep handy just in case!


 


I don't write but I read constantly and have read hundreds upon hundreds of FanFics! So you write them and I'll happily read them!


I review in an encouraging fashion and never tell an author how to write something or bash them! Don't understand why some peeps do that, they are the writer, it's their ideas, their storylines, their imaginations...if you think you can do better, by all means go for it! I'll be happy to read what you write too! Hehehehe!


I ADORE FF writers and think they all should get a raise and better benefits! I consider them ALL my BBs (it's the Granma in me) and am very "protective" of them! I'm their biggest Fangirl (and probably one of their oldest!) and love to try to make them smile in my reviews...it's just a tiny way to pay them back for all the smiles they give me on a daily basis!


Thanks, BBs, you'll never know how positively you affect my life!


 


On a personal note, I have been married to my soulmate for over 35 years (yes, "true love" exists!)!


I'm a Mom to one daughter and Son-in-Love (her Hubby) and Granma of two!


I'm a native New Yorker...but a happy Southern-Drawlin "transplant"! (Hey, y'all!)


I have been fangirlin movies/TV/music/books for over 50 yrs! (If you want to know what I like...see FFs above...same difference! LOL!)


I'm FEISTY, hopefully FUNNY, and definitely a little FLAKY!


{GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES TO ALL!} 


- FangirlinGranma Dee


 


I mostly "lurk" on social media and FB FF Groups but here you go:


Dee Creston (FangirlinGranma Dee) (Drama-Free FB Zone)


@FangirlinGranma (Drama-Free Twitter Zone)


DataByteDL-FangirlinGranma (FFN Name)


FangirlinGranma (FP Name & AO3 Name)


DataByteDL (TWCS & Twilighted Name)


FangirlinGranma (TwiWrite Name)


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Reviews by DataByteDL
My Viking by she_viking Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 676]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Britain, 9th century:

Bella is captured by Vikings and brought with them to their homeland where her new fate awaits. Will she ever find happiness being a slave? Will it matter that she is given to Edvard, the chieftain of the village, to be his new bed thrall? 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 137880 Read Count: 234707
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2011 Updated: 26 Dec 2019
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Another chapter where my heart was beating so fast and I was holding my breath! I reread the whole thing last night so I could bring myself back up to speed. I’m so glad I did. It’s such an amazing story. Just absolutely brilliantly written!

There is going to be one very proud red-haired VikingWard when he finds out what his woman has done! And those other outlaws better get their butts to Iceland, but don’t be planning on bringing those women with them. I hope they shiver in their boots thinking the other Norse women will take a hint from Tonna and Bella. They need to sleep with their eyes open! Hehehe! 

I’m ready for a rescue party, but first we have to find out who’s at the door...friend or foe? Can’t wait for more. Love you, my SheViking! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Yay...her “knight in shining armor” (or is it “Viking in furry shrug” LOL!) has come to rescue her finally! I love their connection that is so strong that he felt her need for him in his dreams. *Sighs* 

Well now to save the others and get everyone back home. I hope Tonna is still alive and she will get her chance to go to Iceland to be the free woman she wants to be. She made a horrendous mistake, but her punishment did not fit the crime. And so many suffered because of a decision that went very wrong. Hopefully Bella will be able to convince Edvard to let her go IF she is alive. 

I’m wondering who was at the door before Bella escaped. So many possibilities. Can’t wait to find out. Thanks for another amazing chapter! Love you, my SheViking! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Feb 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I’m glad Emundi saw her being taken, and Arndis knows she’s pregnant with Edvard’s baby! This is a horrible twist I didn’t see coming to find Tonna and Jamarr standing there. But are they ultimately behind the raid? We shall see. So glad you’re getting a chance to update again quickly.

OMG...what a comeback chapter! My heart was literally in my mouth the entire last half! Welcome back, my lovely! I’ve missed this story so much! I love you tons! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

P.S. I was so sorry to hear about your Mom. You know you were in my prayers and thoughts. Thank you for doing this even when it’s hard and painful. You’re amazing and we’re all here to support you thru it. Lots of love!

The Lost by Mamasutra Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary:

Bella Swan was not normal. She had been born with the gift of seeing the dead, but to her it was a curse. She had sworn off her abilities as she returned to her hometown to live out her final year of high school in an attempt at being normal, but nothing is normal when you are the one hope at redemption for the spirit of a lost boy. *paranormal romance & drama* beta'd


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 115308 Read Count: 9095
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2014 Updated: 04 May 2014
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I LOVE THIS STORY!  Brilliantly written, intriguing, amazing character development!  It blows me away sometimes with clues, answers, then more questions!

I couldn't adore it more!

Heart ya, BB!

{GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 31 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

It's me, FangirlinGranma Dee...here I still have my old pename that I've been trying to change forever!  UGH!

Thanks for the quickie...update, that is!  Hehehehe! 

I gave you the "full" review at "you know where"!  LOL!

((GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!)) 

-FangirlinGranma Dee

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1071249
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 9 Part 2

BB, I missed you and them! 

Poor Jasper trying to win a race with a hard-on! Bwahahaha! 

Can't wait for more! I love this story and you, Sweetie!

{GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 9 Part 1

I really enjoyed JPOV's! It was nice to get to know him a little better!

Elizabeth is too adorable! *Giggles* 

Love ya! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 86: Chapter 15 Part 1

Oh, I wonder if something happened to Rosalie in the past to make her so "cold"? But she seems enamored with Emmett...and vice versa. *Giggles* 

Great chapter, BB. I guess something whacko is happening on FFN so I posted here.

Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

-FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 10 Part 4

Nah, just making his heart "groan" to be THAT incredible "family"! *Sighs* Makes my heart "groan" too!

I love that he told her a little about Tanya, at least enough to make her think!  I just love this story, and adore you, my Beloved BB!

{GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

-FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 8 part 7

So glad they're all moving in!  Loved how he got a little "moved" over her in his clothes!  *Giggles* 

Tanya should be home soon...and the poo-poo should start flying!  Hehehehe! 

Heart ya!  {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

-FangirlinGranma Dee 

P.S.  Will you be posting these to the other site?



Author's Response:

I do sometimes, but it's so much more challenging using that site, and I know they will delete this story once the lemons hit.

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 8 Part 8

Well Edward has a "jumping" problem in his pants!  *Giggles* it's cute!

I guess the race is on for Alice and Jasper! I sure hope she wins...love the Oscars!

I liked the "Press Release"...but sad that the nannies have to provide "stability" and a "family atmosphere" for Charlie!  I don't think Edward will like part!

Heart ya!  {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

-FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 8 Part 9

*Ahem* Clears throat...I'm thinking Edward got caught with his hands in the "cookie jar"!  Poor guy!  Bwahahaha! 

Can't wait for more!

Heart ya!  {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

-FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Then, BB, I WILL be reading here no problem!  I love this story!  Just wanted to make sure you knew it was me because my name is different here!

Heart ya!  {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

-FangirlinGranma Dee (DataByteDL-FangirlinGranma on the other site)

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 8 part 10

Poor Edward, he may be stuck with QB for a while afterall!  *Sighs...not in a good way* 

Jasper is cute about Alice!  I really love this story!  

Heart ya!  {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 9 Part 3

Well, I guess you don't mess with Alice when she has a chance to go to The Oscars! She beat his ass but good! Hehehehe! 

I loved this chapter. Jasper may be surprised to find out she is attracted to his old butt too! *Giggles* 

Can't wait for more! Love ya! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

-FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 10 Part 1

So sweet...this DaddyWard is such a keeper! How do we get them together? UGH! They need to be a family...even Elizabeth knows it! *Sighs* 

Loving this story! Adoring you!

{GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 10 part 2

I missed these two and the babies...and you!

Such a sweet chapter! I love Edward's shyness with her. Hope he got an eyefull...for his dreams! *Giggles* 

This was exactly what I needed, as RL is kicking my butt right now! Thanks, my Beloved BB! Read ya soon, I hope! Love ya! 

{GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 10 Part 3

I hope he tells her about the REAL Tanya! He is such a good DaddyWard, thinking about how he can spend the most time with his son and still provide the best life for him! *Sighs* 

Write on, my Beloved BB...I'm loving it...and YOU!

{GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

-FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 10 Part 5

Hehehehe! He thought they were gone! Awww...that's sweet and sad and funny, all at the same time! Then him covering her up! *Sighs*  I can imagine Emmett! Bwahahaha! 

I love this story, BB! Sorry you're having trouble being back at work.  Hang in there! Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

-FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 10 Part 6

I wonder what happens! I bet Tanya happens! *groans* Guess we find out soon.

Love this story and you, BB!  {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 10 part 7

Bwahahaha! Well, "tittle" me pink, Tanya's home! Yeah...who cares?  Bwahahaha! (Sorry, I couldn't resist that one! *Giggles*)

I LOVED this update! Elizabeth is a never-ending source of entertainment! She is beyond adorable...and Tanya better not say a word about her, or lay a hand on her...or else!  *snorts*

I love this story, and adore you! Thanks for every word! Read ya soon, my sweet BB!

{GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

-FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 11 Part 1

I loved this update, BB! Edward thinks like an actor...everything is a "scene" to him...it's hilarious, and sad at the same time! The way he feels about Tanya bringing "Godzilla-like" destruction was really brilliant writing!

Love you and this unique tale you're telling! Can't wait for more!

{GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

-FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 62: Chapter 11 Part 2

Love that pic, BB! *Giggles* Poor BoobManWard, he just wanted to oogle Bella's "goodies"...and he wound up on a guilt trip! LOL! 

Ohhhh, I can't wait to hear Tanya's POV! Bwahahaha! 

I do adore this story...thanks for a second update before I went to sleep tonight!  Read ya soon I hope! Love ya! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

-FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 19 Part 6

They're both perfect...and so are YOU, my beloved BB! I can't wait for their Friday night "sleepover date"! *Sighs* 

They are def one of my fav E&Bs of all time! Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent with us. I adore you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

-FangirlinGranma Dee 

Comfortably Numb by mathisson Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 222]
Summary:

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Bella Swan enjoys helping people. It doesn't matter if it's the customers she pours a cup of coffee for, or the man who just drop money on a New York sidewalk. But when the kindness she shows is turned against her, how far will she continue to go to protect her family? Will she sacrifice her happiness? Or let her only relative lose everything? Angst! CC rated M for adult content.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 48864 Read Count: 34177
[Report This] Published: 22 Feb 2016 Updated: 27 Nov 2017
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Woohoo, my Cayce! Sooo glad to be reading these two again. This is FangirlinGranma Dee, by the way. I've missed them (and you) and am happy to follow here now. Sorry I fell behind. 

What a great chapter, and cheers to Bella for dumping her brother to the curb finally. She knows now what's up with her Hubby and I thinks she wants to help. Great way to do it with her precious "Anthony and Marie"!

Can't wait for more. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 08 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I hope she gets away from James before he says something stupid about Edward, and he doesn't get a chance to see her. I think he's cured...at least I hope he is! 

I love Esme...and don't know why I didn't figure it out before. Great chapter, but I've got to know what happens and have them have a reunion...PLEASE! They both need each other.

Love you, my Cayce! Read ya soon! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Summary:

Bound and United

 

Bound and United is the third installment of the Bound Series.  It continues the story of Don Edward and Donna Bella as they fight with their most evil villian yet.  Will they be able to fight death and be joined once more or will they be forever torn apart from each other?

 

Part 3 in the Bound Series

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Bound
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 76085 Read Count: 158778
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2016 Updated: 28 Jan 2017
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 May 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yay! I loved this wonderful ending to this amazing story! Can't wait to read the epi. I'm sorry I fell so far behind but I'm so glad I finally am getting to complete it. 

Kudos on a great job. That last paragraph was the perfect summary of everything they were, they are and always will be. 

Love you, my Honey Bunny! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 May 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yay! I loved this wonderful ending to this amazing story! Can't wait to read the epi. I'm sorry I fell so far behind but I'm so glad I finally am getting to complete it. 

Kudos on a great job. That last paragraph was the perfect summary of everything they were, they are and always will be. 

Love you, my Honey Bunny! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 May 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Ohhh, what a brilliant way to solidify the bounding and uniting of the families! *Sighs* 

Well to say I loved this piece of perfection would be an understatement! It's been a great ride. I know I didn't always review but I was reading and enjoying every word. Thanks for an amazing adventure. 

Yes, until next time which has already begun for me with Infinity. So on to that now. Love you dearly! Write on...and always write your heart! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Bewitched by TwiAddictAnne Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She was his only friend. She was the laughter of his childhood. And then she was gone. Will he ever find the love that was lost? Or was it all for naught? A love story as old as the times. 18th Century DukeWard. All Human. Canon couples. Rated for language and adult situations.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11225 Read Count: 17245
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2016 Updated: 15 Jun 2016
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter-1

Kitten, thanks so much for doing this for Granpa! He's excited, and truly your FanboyinGranpa! *Giggles* 

Loved working with you again...we make a great team! All my regular reviews will be on FFN. But my love for you will go wherever you go! *winks*

Love you so much! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- Your Granma Dee (FangirlinGranma)



Author's Response:

You're welcome, Granma. I'm glad to have you with me on this journey. :)

Love you too.

xo

Summary:

The Mother

The prophecy of the blood dragons was about to come true, but the future mother of the blood dragons needs to find her mate and the mate must be a blood drinker.  Will the future mother only use him for what she needs, or will he capture her heart?  E&B/HEA


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8683 Read Count: 8592
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2016 Updated: 07 Oct 2016
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

The description of the outside world and the fall of man was so sad, yet not too hard to imagine it really happening that way...including the mystical creatures (hehehe).

Got a feeling Jasper may meet an interesting...Alice? Perhaps Rose will find herself a HUMAN to rescue? I sure do hope that Bella's mate is full of light, as she is worthy of such a match. So I'm thinking he is, but I've been wrong oodles of times before. *Giggles* I can't wait to find out what's in store for this trio.  

I'm loving this story, and you, Honey Bunny! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm sooo intrigued and loving this already! I can't wait to find out more about what happened on earth to the humans and about the vamps. Also am interested in her mate...which I'm assuming is Edward. *big toothy grin*

This is written brilliantly, my Sweet Girl! The character development is strong from the beginning, and Bella seems very worthy of her "Goddess" title. 

I'm all in for sure. Read ya soon. I'm also subscribed to your blog, but I'll review here. Love ya! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ohhh, how I love this world so far, I never want the chapter to end and come back to my real one. But I'm sure there are perils and drama ahead that could change my mind quick enough. Hehehe! Angelica is adorable with her gossipy little bird friend who tells all. And now the red-eyed stranger. Well my first guess is a vamp, but not Edward cause I'm thinking her compass would know. So I'm hoping it's Emmett drawn to Rosalie. And I hope he's good and winds up having a connection to an equally good Edward.

Can't wait for more! Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This chapter was purrrrfectly wonderful! I thought it just might be Jasper meeting his mate Alice first...but once again I love the twist on things. I'm suspecting they may run into Emmett (in some shape or form. LOL!) for Rose next. But, of course, I'm most anticipating Bella and Edward's introduction to each other.

I immediately recognized the Lincoln Monument and knew they were in D.C.! The descriptions of the world thru their eyes was so childlike and innocent, explaining things they'd never seen before. Loved Rose's summation of the owl...they ARE "strange" and "different" birds! *Giggles* Brilliantly written, my BB!

I adore this unusual storyline, the unique characters and the world you've created. But most of all, I adore you for sharing them with us. Please write on. {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

 

Summary:

Infinity

Isabella Marie Cullen the only child of Carlisle Cullen Don of the Cullen Crime family, born with an infinity symbol birthmark. Tragedy hits and Isabella and her mother are killed, or are they? How far will one brother go to take control of the family?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 48278 Read Count: 75947
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2017 Updated: 28 Oct 2017
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it, my Sweetie! Adore the mix up of character names and relationships! It thrills me to no end. I'll be reading on the blog. I'm almost caught up with Bound and United and then I'll read this one faithfully. I had to read the first chapter to get a delicious taste. *YUMMY*

Write on! Read ya soon! Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well, I already hate Aro with a passion. And of course adore Lizzy Bella, DadaCarlisle, MamaElizabeth, and little Edward. Got a feeling he will fall quickly for Lizzy Bell on those play dates. 

I'm concerned for the plotting going on, but hopefully Lizzy Bell will somehow come out unscathed and one day rule the family. 

Loving this story, and adoring you. {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I don't think of myself as violent, but I want to smack the snot outta Aro! I can't believe they're doing this to Lizzy Bell. Well, on the positive side, Edward will have no problem with a role model once Carlisle is a little less grief stricken. Got a feeling he will marry the newly widowed Esme and become his father. Question is will Edward then become the new DomWard when he turns 25? Or will it go to the eldest Aro twin son? 

And poor LizzyBreeBell! Bet she never forgets how to put a gun together or who she truly is. At least I hope she doesn't. 

Oh, how I'm loving this story, my sweet girl! Write on when you can. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 


Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

How so very scary for Carlisle! Not sure if them finding Ben was part of Aro's evil plan or not, but at least Carlisle knows there's something seriously wrong now. 

I'm so afraid for LizzyBell, but she's smart and I know she will figure things out. Also she's very perceptive of peeps. She didn't like Caius and is scared of her Uncle Aro. I'm glad she has "Eddie" with her. Got a feeling that little lamb will be a big key to the story later on.

Love you, my sweet girl! Write on, when you get the chance. I'm longing for more. {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Summary:

Defiance

 

Carlisle Cullen is ruthless Don of the Cullen Crime Family, but his wife Esme doesn't want this life for their son Edward.  Running away and starting a new life and new identity, will they have a happy, safe life or will Carlisle find them?  E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42347 Read Count: 56368
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Apr 2018
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Mar 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Making a Run for It

Well, she did what a Mother had to do...sacrifice everything to make sure her child had a better life. I'm totally hooked already and can't wait to see how TonyWard and Bella grow up together. Will they be childhood sweethearts or grow into their love later on? Guess we wait and see. I'm expecting it'll be a bumpy ride ahead though. Carlisle probably won't give them up that easily.

Great start to this new one, my Sweetie. Please write on. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath

Wowsa, that is one mean Carlisle who won't be betrayed! I can't imagined what he will do to Esme if he ever catches up to her. *shivers*

I'm beyond intrigued and want more. But I could use another visit to Forks for a bit of a respite now....then back to the action. *Giggles* 

Love you, my brilliant girl! Drooling for more. {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 


Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Past Collides with the Future

I’ve been reading on the blog. Sorry no reviews but I’m loving it. And I hope Edward gets it taken care of in time so Bella can be rescued!

I’m so glad Charlie “recognized” him as Tony”! 

What an exciting chapter and heart-pounding story this is! Love you, my Sweetie! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - All Hell is Breaking Loose

Phew! So glad it was JB that caught her. And look at Charlie being all badass with Jasper. Love that guy who’s willing to go to the “dark side” to keep his family safe. 

Awesome chapter, my sweetie. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Blood Payment

Now that was a rescue MobWard style! I’m sure they’re not done with “Dickless”. And Charlie has gone to the Dark side, which in this case is really the Light side in comparison. 

So glad Bella survived her own escape and I’m not sure I knew JB was Jacob...but it was a shocker for me.

I can’t believe I’m about to read the last chapter. I’ve loved this story and will miss it. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2018 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Deleting the Past, Planning the Future

Yay! A perfect ending...I mean...beginning for their future and finally an HEA for them all! *Sighs* 

An awesome story with great characters that I’ll really miss. You really shook things up in the “canon” blender and it turned out great. So kudos.

Thanks so much for a great read once again. Looking forward to next time. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Blood is Not Always Thicker

Well Charlie is going with him! Let’s get him once and for all. 

It was brilliant to give the DVD to Alice. At least he goes down no matter what. But hopefully they all get to live to see it happen. 

Plus I loved the laxative in his oysters. LOL! That’ll teach him to even think about messin with TonyWard’s woman! 

Love this story and you, my sweet girl! Thanks for the update...I’ve been missing them! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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One summer between high school and college changed Edward's ideas about his life's plans. Could he really build a life with a much older woman two thousand miles away? My entry for the TwiFandom News Forbidden Fruit Contest.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59156 Read Count: 11454
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2018 Updated: 04 Oct 2018
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Ten Years Later

Amazing! You know I loved every word of this. Thank you so much.

More on the other site. That’s where I get mushy. LOL! 

Love you, my Lara! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 



Author's Response:

I'm happy to see you on here! I'm behind in my replies, but you know I'll get to you!

Summary:

In A Heartbeat

 

 

Summary:  In a heartbeat, Edward's life changed. What was supposed to be the joyful, life-changing experience, the birth of their daughter, turned into a nightmare. The love of his life, lifeless on the delivery table, as he held his daughter in his arms. The gift of organ donation was always his wife's desire. Bella was in the critical care unit at John Hopkins, praying for a heart transplant. What happens when years later Edward moves back home to Baltimore and enrolls his daughter in a dance class? Will the beauty in pink tights capture his heart? But what happens when he learns her secret?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35821 Read Count: 28317
[Report This] Published: 16 May 2018 Updated: 20 Jan 2020
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What an emotional chapter. First you feel such happiness for Bella at getting a chance at a new life. (Was that Maggie she met in “Heaven”? How amazing.) Then you are so broken for Edward who feels like his life ended with his wife’s. But there’s this beautiful baby who needs raising and love. Plus a father and son who have needed healing for so long...is it possible that could be happening? I hope so. 

I am so touched by this story. Can’t wait for more when you get a chance. Love you, sweet one! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I’m so glad you were able to find your muse and help her make her way back on this road again. I adore this story and have missed it so.

Elizabeth seems like a mini-Maggie...hopefully without “two-left feet”. I hope she becomes the ballerina her mother AND Bella always dreamed of becoming. *Sighs* 

So now their eyes have met. And Edward’s heart “feels free” maybe to try to love again...or free from the wall he’s placed around it since Maggie’s death? I can’t wait to see where you take us from here. 

Thanks for the update. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Absolutely heartbreakingly beautiful. Him dealing with being a father and a widower at the same time...so overwhelming. He’s also finally getting his father back. I think Carlisle will be there for him and Elizabeth.

Curious to see what happens at the time jump. Will he meet Bella then? Guess we’ll find out.

Thanks for the update, I missed this one. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!}

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I had to laugh at her checking him out! Bwahahaha! And him being all smitten and going all 1800’s on her with the hand-kiss. It was soooo swoony. *Sighs* 

Yes, I adore feisty LadyBug Elizabeth who already knows what she wants and how to get it. She’s as fiery as her hair color. But sweet as pie too. She has the whole family crazy for her. It’s nice to see that Edward has such a great support system.

Very interesting dreams he’s been having. Wonder if the voice is Maggie “releasing” him to love again?

Awesome update. Can’t wait for more. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Dec 2019 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Soooo glad to revisit these two. Their connection is getting stronger and stronger and they can’t figure it out. I wonder how long it will be before they piece it together and their reactions.

Elizabeth is certainly already attached to “Miss Bella” so that will make things easier, or more complicated. Can’t wait to find out.

Thrilled you found your muse again on this one. Read ya soon. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

The perfect setting for the perfect date. And giving each other their hearts is so symbolic since she has Maggie’s heart. I wonder how he will react to it. Though I think their connection goes beyond that, I will always believe in “fate”. *Sighs* 

Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Elizabeth is too cute and thrilled to be “dating” Miss Bella as well. *Sighs* But ohhh no not “a dark cloud”. I was just thinking how well everything was going and what a lovely family they’d make. Well hopefully there will be “a silver lining” behind the dark cloud. *sniffles*

I loved this chapter and I adore you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Nooo, not the reason, Bella. Oh how sad. And would Edward leave just because she has Maggie’s heart? It’s not her fault. It saved her life. Would he that both died that day? I think this is more about Carlisle. Unfortunately it always goes back to his father for him. Which is sad cause Carlisle has come a long way...maybe it’s a little late for Edward (doesn’t have to be) but not for Elizabeth. *sniffles* 

That pic really shows the dark cloud. Can’t wait to see what direction you take us in. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Yes! Go get him! *slobbers into shirt sleeve* Set him straight and fight for him. Silver lining, silver lining, silver lining”...I’m cheering it in my head to keep myself from falling apart. *sniffles*

Beautifully written chapter filled with the feels. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yay! Beautiful conclusion to part 1 and so excited for part 2. Thanks so much for even considering continuing their story. I can’t wait and will certainly be all in.

I am thoroughly thrilled to have completed yet another story with you...and can’t wait for more on this one. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.

Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Summary:

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She has spent her entire existence searching for the one who calls to her from within his mind. Pushing him into accepting her only sends them on a spiral into destruction. When the townspeople come for her, even her abilities are no match for the sunlight that sears her skin. Chained and weakened, with her execution looming, there is only one person who can save her.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8969 Read Count: 2339
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2018 Updated: 31 Oct 2018
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Longer review on the other site, but I wanted to put something here too.

Well, my Lara, as usual you were very “tricky” and I got a delicious “treat” because of it! That was a fantastic ending to this piece of a unique take on the familiar. But that’s what I adore about your writing! Thanks once again to you and your team for bringing something special to my heart. Like “Tyler”, this will be “a tale not soon forgotten”. 


Read ya at Christmas time, and sooooo hoping before then as well. You know I loved both versions of Jack & Crush. I’m so proud of you! Best wishes on a successful run with that.  

Please stay in touch. I love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 
- Dee (FangirlinGranma)



Author's Response:

Well, I do have something I'm publishing first, ;) Then the one shot. Thank you for being so supportive!

Summary:

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Depressed over thinking she’ll be fired before the holidays, Bella decides to get drunk at the company party. Woken the next morning by Rose texting her to look at Facebook posts from the night before, she realizes exactly how drunk she got—and it’s bad. She and Santa were very naughty, but the worst comes when Bella realizes exactly who was playing Santa. Suddenly, Bella’s last day takes on new meaning as she struggles to resist temptation.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Christmas Favorites
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7735 Read Count: 924
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2018 Updated: 12 Dec 2018
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Secret Santa

I absolutely adored this hilarious, HAWT, sweet read! I reviewed on the other site, but I just wanted to write something here too.

Thank you so much for always bringing a smile to my heart. This was such a great “Secret Santa” gift. Bwahahaha! 

Cant wait for more. Happy New Year! May it be filled with Blessings galore of health, happiness, prosperity...and definitely plot bunnies! *winks*

I love you, my Lara! Squishing you with my {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES}!

- Dee (FangirlinGranma) 



Author's Response:

Definitely plot bunnies! Lol, I have those in spades. Thank you for your love and wonderful comments!

Summary:

When Fate Steps In

Fate decides that two lost souls need a little boost in finding their soulmates.

After Bella confronts Jacob about his infidelity and evil plans to sell the companies, she chooses to spend her already paid Christmas honeymoon alone. She arrives at the cabin in the woods just as a horrible blizzard hits.

Edward finds out that woman he was supposed to marry has been lying their entire relationship. Not only was he betrayed by the woman he was going to spend his life with, but also his best friend and partner. Wanting to get away from everyone, he rents a cabin in the woods for Christmas.

 

What happens when he arrives at cabin number 5696 that Fate has worked her magic on the number? What surprises will he see in the little cabin? What happens when the roads are closed and there is no cell service?

Disclaimer: I don't own the characters names, but I do own the storyline

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9389 Read Count: 7425
[Report This] Published: 12 Dec 2018 Updated: 25 Dec 2018
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The JERKob is beyond a skuzz and hopefully she’s rid of him! YUCK! Now I wonder who’s coming to visit?

Sorry it took so long to get to this. Merry belated Christmas...but I’m still in time to wish you a Happy New Year! 

Love you, my Sweetie! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Dang...I don’t know whose story is worse! Victoria and James are like “Bonnie and Clyde” for goodness sakes! I can’t wait to see how The Cullen’s get them. I know they will.

Now as far as Bella waking up to a naked Edward? Ooooo...this is gonna be good! *rubs hands together and waits for Cupid’s arrow to fly by*

I’m thoroughly enjoying this story. Pressing “next”. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It IS a small world and a SMALL cabin too. *Giggles* Perfect ending for these two who deserved lots of happiness after all they’ve been thru. But Karma is gonna get the evil ones. Yay!

You know I never thought about Fate and Karma being sisters. Interesting concept...and makes total sense. 

i loved this story! But I say that about all your stories. Hehehe! Thank you for the Christmas present. May your New Year be filled with Blessings Galore for your and yours!  Read ya soon. Love you tons! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Words to Die By by heartfortwilight Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 537] New!
Summary:

Words to Die By

I.M. Swan a best-selling author is on top of the literary world. After coming off her book tour for her latest book, she has begun her research for the next, a book on the Chicago Mafia. Spending hours in the library and courthouse, she is surprised to find out a most curious piece of information about the Don of the largest crime family. He is not the rightful heir to the family.

Aro Volturi planned and executed the complete destruction of the Cullen family. Wiping away any documentation or body of any evidence of the family from the face of the earth, or he thought so.

Edward Cullen was smuggled away with the aid of his faithful nanny, who kept him safe until it was time for him to take revenge for his family's death. Training and building a new, stronger family to take back what is rightfully his and executing the man who took his family from him.

One evening, as Edward is following one of Aro’s hitman, he witnesses him a young woman in the alley. Coming to her aid, he is mesmerized by her beauty and when he gets to know her, he is in awe of her intellect.

            Will Bella be able to survive with Edward’s help or will Aro get to her and silence her forever? E&B

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 61545 Read Count: 29039
[Report This] Published: 05 Jan 2019 Updated: 24 May 2020
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Apr 2019 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three ~ July 12, 2017

Edward took his time and set his family just right and ready. Angela is an amazing woman. Edward has nothing but love and respect for his “Ma”. 

So can’t wait till he meets his fav author. Hehehe! It should be good. 

Another great chapter. Sorry it took me so long to get to it. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 ~ July 17, 2018 Surprise Discoveries

UGH! I have a love/hate relationship with cliffies! I hate that I love them. *Giggles* 

Well I’m hoping she says “yes”, but there’s a little scared part of me that says, “Could she possibly say ‘no’?”. Can’t wait to find out. 

This was an amazing chapter. I loved the description of the house and the rules. I think they can get Aro as long as they have all their “married” ducks in a row (hehehe).

Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jan 2019 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - June 27, 2017

Ok, so Jessica is after her. Tonya squealed on her. And Aro knows she is asking about the Cullen’s! Ruh, roh. I hope Edward will be ready to get his revenge soon...or now. 

Have I told you lately that I adore everything that you write? Well, I do. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 ~ July 18, 2017

Well...*ahem*...sturdy table. *Giggles* 

I can’t wait to see if Edward finds out what the Bishop is hiding. Also excited to find out everyone’s reactions and awaiting Angela’s arrival. To quote Original Alice, “Weddings, they bring everyone together.” Curious to see if this Alice agrees. Hehehe! 

Love all the little nods here and there to the original saga. *winks* Thanks so much for a very...uhhhm...enjoyable chapter. *Sighs* Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jul 2019 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well, she finally got her proof that the Cullen’s not only existed at one time, but still do. I’m so glad Edward came to her rescue. I wonder how much he’ll tell her about himself.

Hooe you’re doing well. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - July 14, 2017

I DO love Rose and am so glad she decided to join the new Cullen family. Her backstory is incredibly sad. The Volturi’s have affected them all. 

Edward is completely smitten with Isabella, so this should be very interesting when she wakes up. Wonder how she’ll react...so far she’s still seeing him as a hero. And he is...but one with revenge on his mind. 

Cant wait for more. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 ~ July 15, 2017

*Sighs* I missed these two. Great to have them back and I loved the chapter. Rose is awesome. *Giggles* 

Edward is completely smitten, but hopefully Bella is not too far behind on her feelings for her dangerous green-eyed hero. 

Longing for more. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2020 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wowsa! They are so hawt together! *wipes brow* 

Rose and Emmett are a comedy duo. Bwahahaha! 

Well let’s go see Granpa’s house. Off to Italy. I’m sure Bella will be most interested in hearing his whole story. Or at least as much as he knows. They can fill in puzzle pieces for each other. 

Can’t wait for more. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 ~ July 16, 2017

Well that was certainly an interesting plane ride. Hehehe! The suite sounds lovely. And Bella has a bit of “kink” to her. 

I sure do hope Alice does come around cause seems like Bella is part of the family now and there to stay. 

And Aro is baffled and trigger-happy. A very dangerous combo...or does it make him easier to get to?

Another awesome chapter. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ July 17, 2017

“Omertà” is the code of silence for the mafia, so I’m guessing it was familiar to Edward. Bella’s research sure did come in handy to help them figure out how to get that safe open. What’s in it must be something amazing. Can’t wait to find out what it is. I’m also so curious why the other families met there in that secret room.

I love this story and adore you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Found Treasures

What is Alice’s problem? I wonder why she is so suspicious of Bella. I hope it doesn’t wind up in one or both of them getting hurt. I’d like to see them become trusted friends.

The ring is sooo gorgeous! Glad Bella said yes cause I agree that she will make the perfect mafia wife. Hope the family does too. 

Sooo Tonya may have ratted them out to Aro. Hate to be Tonya if it’s true. 

Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - July 18, 2017

Ohhh I love that she met Edward’s grandmother’s childhood friend who actually made the wedding dress. She will restore it beautifully for her and will adore meeting Edward I’m sure. I felt tears in my eyes reading that whole scene. Plus it was a little amusing how Edward was finding all the weapons and Isabella found the dress. Hehehe! 

i can’t wait for them to tell everyone. Although based on the fact that Ben figured it out, I’m guessing the rest know too. I’m curious to Alice’s reaction. 

Looking forward to more. Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- FangirlinGranma Dee 

Summary:

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Struggling through tragedy and betrayal, Edward believes he’s living in a cold and loveless world with no choice but to harden his heart. He’s only living a numb half-life as his sole focus becomes revenge. If he forgets his true reason for living, is there anyone who can get through to him?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73153 Read Count: 16562
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2019 Updated: 18 Sep 2019
Reviewer: DataByteDL Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Feb 2019 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

So as you know, I usually review on FFN. Just wanted to tell you that I’m all in and already loving this.

My mind is going in circles with the theories I’ve got. They help me deal with the angst. Makes me wonder what turns a man who seems to be recovering from his grief, into a stone-hearted, vengeance-filled believer that the world is loveless. Can’t wait to find out.

You’re a magnificent writer, my Lara! Write on! Love you! {GIANT GRANMA HUGS AND SMOOCHES!} 

- Dee (FangirlinGranma) 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Dee! I'm always happy to see your reviews.