Reviews by anniem40
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Life in a maternity unit is full of ups and downs!  

Bella Swan, an experienced midwife at Forks Hospital meets the new obstetrician, Edward Cullen and the attraction is instant.

As their hands touched, she gasped softly as she felt the shock of electricity that seemed to pass through their skin.  Dropping his hand abruptly, her brown eyes wide in surprise, Bella stepped back.  Without volition, Bella felt her face flame with another cursed blush.  Damn, she was 26 years old.  When was she going to stop blushing like a schoolgirl?

 

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All Human/Alternate Universe

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 222356 Read Count: 85744
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2010
Reviewer: anniem40 Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Another great chapter, let me guess, she is going to end up pregnant again, right away, possibly with twins, that would be a hoot!!!!

Update Soon Please!!!!

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 792]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167459
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: anniem40 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24

So good, love this story, it is one when I see it hit my inbox I read immediately. Love when he said to Ted & Aro, I hope nothing happens to the twins. No that will not stop Jacob or Tanya. Please update soon, I know that real life gets in the way but this is so good.

Would love a teaser if you are sharing.



Author's Response: Hi. I am so sorry that it took so long to get back to you. Thank you so much for the review. here is a teaser for chapter 25 Suddenly there was commotion outside of the waiting room, then the door flew open and in stormed Esme and Carlisle Cullen. "Where is she? Where is Bella," Esme demanded. Alice went over to her and tried to calm her down but Esme wasn't having any of that. Instead she looked at everybody before her eyes landed on me. "You! You promised me that she would be safe with you! You promised me that you would take care of her," she yelled, pointing her index finger in my chest. I didn't get the chance to say anything before my mother started talking. "Mrs Cullen? We have spoken a few times over the phone but we have never met face to face. I am Dr Elizabeth Masen, Bella's ob-gyn," she said, offering her hand to Esme to shake which she did. "Please? Tell me that Bella and the babies are going to be alright? What happened," Esme pleaded.

Reviewer: anniem40 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

So good - I am excited to see where and why she has to leave Forks. What really happens at the party. Until next week.

 



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I hope that you continue to enjoy this story. Here is a teaser for chapter 2 Esme kept looking at me while she put about 4 pancakes onto my plate. I just couldn't get the smile off my face. "I would be smiling too if I won the kind of prize that you won" she laughed. Just then Alice came running in wearing the latest fashion. "Mum, can I use daddy's photocopier?" Alice's father was the head of the pediatric unit in Forks generel hospital. "Yes dear" Esme replied. Alice ran into her father's office with a note or letter in her hand. What is the little pixie up to now? She came back 5 minutes later with a small bag filled with copies of the note or letter. "Ali, what is all this?" "Well Bella, you know just as well as I do that Lauren is going to try and get out of this bet. So what I did was photo copy the agreement 200 times to either hang up on the lockers or hand them out to anyone that will take them, just so that she knows that she has to go through with it. Otherwise she will be labeled a coward, she smirked obviously pleased with herself. I was surprised. I can't believe that I have never thought of that. It was beyond brilliant. "OK you little pixie, lets get to school and put this plan into action," I grinned.

Reviewer: anniem40 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Great chapter - I can't wait to meet Edward family, also, what he wil think of our Bella. Really two-weeks, that will kill me.



Author's Response: thank you for the review. i'm glad you are enjoying the story. chapter 3 is with the beta at the moment so hopefully it will be up sometime in the next day or 2.my other story will be up in 2 weeks. All alone will be up every week. until then here is a teaser to keep you going. I was suddenly getting very nervous thinking that somebody played a cruel joke on me and I was ready to run all the way back to forks and hide under my bed for the rest of my life. Somebody tapped me on the shoulder. "Miss Swan?" I turned around and saw a big man. He looked to be in his early or middle 20's. He was the size of a wrestler but some how I felt safe in his company. Y-Yeah that's me," I stammered. "My name is Emmett Masen. I am the assistant director of BITE. I wish to welcome you to the olympic." As he was talking the only thing I could think about was that his last name was Masen. "I'm sorry, did you say your last name was Masen?"

Reviewer: anniem40 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

So good - I do have a question though, in the first chapter you stated that Bella had always dreamed that Edward Masen would come into her school and carry her out like "The Officer and Gentlement", so will this be happening?

Can't wait to find out where this will be going.



Author's Response: thank you for your review. Im happy that you are enjoying the story. I love reading them all. To answer your question. no that won't be happening even though I would love for it to happen. here is a teaser for chapter 4 "I want to brief you on what you can expect from tonight. The entire cast and crew will be there. Now as you know there was a lot of competitions for girls to win tickets to the premiere but Atlantic 252 gave away a big prize. The winner won invitations to tonights cocktail party, the after party and tickets for the premiere so you will be meeting the winner of that tonight," he grinned knowing that I hate these things. "I know about this Em. So some tennybopper is going to have her dream come true by attending a hollywood party," I sighed. He took a picture out of an envelope and handed it to me. "Does Isabella look like a tennybopper to you?" I looked at the picture in my hands and for a few seconds I forgot to breath. She was beyond beautiful. She had long flowing mahogony hair that framed her beautiful heart shaped face. She also has deep brown eyes that I could get lost in and a pouty mouth. My Jeans felt incrediably tight from imagining those lips wrapped around me. All of a sudden I'm very excited to attend this cocktail party.

Reviewer: anniem40 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21

Great Chapter, curious how Emily will be able to get to Bella though. Can't wait to see how Rose & Emmett's characters will be. I like that Rose is a Chef instead of all about cars that is different.

Also I really like the idea that you are considering a squeal. Are you looking at letting Bella & Edward get closer sooner than later? I would really like a teaser.

Update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. I really love reading them all and I take all ideas into consideration.

fiona xo

Teaser for All Alone Chapter 22.

Unbeta'd

I looked over to where Emmett was talking to Aro Smith the director. I decided to waited until he was finished so that we could leave until I saw him pinching the bridge of his nose. It was a sign that he was getting agitated or uncomfortable so I walked over to them and tap him on the shoulder. Aro turned to me with a sick smile on his face.

"Hello Edward. Thank you for coming over because at least I can talk sensibily to you since your brother refuses to do so," he smirked.

I knew that smile. He only smiled that way when he was up to something. I was about to say that I did not want to hear it but Emmett jumped in instead.

"Aro! I have told you already that there is no way that I will agree to it and even if Edward agreed, then I would take her myself," Emmett spat furiously.

I looked from Emmett to Aro wondering what the fuck was going on when suddenly a light bulb went on into my head.

"This is all about Bella. Isn't it? You don't want me to escort her to the party because she is my pregnant girlfriend! Well before you say another word about the subject, let me talk. Bella is my life and I am going to proudly show her off tonight and there is not a fucking thing that you can do about it," I spat, my mouth full of venom.

"But Edward. Lisa and I have been talking and it could ruin your popularity, not to mention this film if you turn up at the Beverly hills hilton with a pregnant 16 year old. We are only thinking about you," he said smugly.

I could not believe what I was hearing. I could feel myself getting angrier with every word he spoke.

"No, you are only fucking thinking about yourself and as for Lisa the whore who continues to hit on me because she cannot take no for an answer, she is nothing more than a jealous cunt. Now I will be at the welcome back cast party with my beautiful girlfriend who will be accompaning me and there is fuck all that you can do about it," I spat at him before storming over to my car.

 

Reviewer: anniem40 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

Oh Boy! - Wonder how this will go, can't wait for the update.