Reviews by christy79
Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145698
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: christy79 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just have to say WOW.  I really enjoyed this story.  As a regular reader on Fanfiction.net I found this story but never read it there.  I saw you mention that the full version was here, so this is where I went and boy was I glad.  It is a wonderful continuation of the Fifty trilogy which wasn't long enough.  It's nice to see your take on the continuing relationship between Christian and Ana as well as the extended members of their family.

 

While I am really looking forward to the next two books I did wonder what happened to Kate and Elliot's 2 month old daughter Ava who appears at the end of E. L. James' third book.  Still this minor detail takes nothing away from a truly amazing story which was just gut wrenching at the end.  Thank you, thank you, thank you.  Please keep writing so your fans new and old can keep reading.



Author's Response:

Thank you for finding this. Sometimes I forget that it is out there and people are just now finding it. I appreciate you taking the time  to leave me a review on it as ist is the only way I know if people like it or not.  I'm still plugging along on Book III right now, so a lot of things coming up. I think people liked Book II, Clarity, better than Book I, More. A lot of things were revealed in that book. 

thanks again for reading.

E.

Actually I had forgotten about Ava. I guess she changed her name to Simon. lol