Reviews by lalaloveee
Summary: Past Featured Story

15 yr old Bella has a fairly normal life. That was until her mum's new boyfriend came on the scene. Will Bella survive her new life? Dark Themes, Cannon Pairings. GRAPHIC

Thanks mkystich for the amazing new banner... AGAIN!!! :)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89516 Read Count: 311096
[Report This] Published: 21 Jan 2010 Updated: 04 May 2011
Reviewer: lalaloveee Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Discloser

OMG that Father's Day picture is hilarious in an ironic way. I was like dying of laughter when I saw it.

The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1625277
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: lalaloveee Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 49

I have a question...why did Carlisle even marry Esme in the first place if he wanted everything to be perfect? Was she like the next best thing or something?



Author's Response:

Carlisle married Esme because he knew he needed a wife and family for his image as a doctor and he couldn't have Renee.  He never loved her the way E/J/E love R/A/B.  Carlisle isn't capable of love.

Reviewer: lalaloveee Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

Hey sorry, I have another question lol.

It sort of has spoilers so anyone who hasn't read the whole story...just scroll on past this.

Edward said he won the humiliating task contest, but do we ever find out what task he thought of? Or did he do it by humiliating Esme in front of the family at dinner?

Also, if you're not planning on doing C&E's story, can you maybe do some oneshots to give us more backstory?

Reviewer: lalaloveee Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

Do you know when you'll have the outtake done?

Reviewer: lalaloveee Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

when carlisle said esme carried those scars of her punishment to this day, he meant emotionally right??



Author's Response:

No, Esme carries some physical scars from her abuse as well.  Go back and read the chapter from Esme's pov.  He beat her severely for helping Renee escape with Bella.

Reviewer: lalaloveee Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

if you started a series w. esme and renee would you post it here?

Reviewer: lalaloveee Signed
Date: 18 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

if you started a series w. esme and renee would you post it here?

Reviewer: lalaloveee Signed
Date: 24 May 2010 Title: Chapter 1: A Mother's Love

So normally I'm one of those annoying people who only posts "when will you update?". I figured since I basically followed you from the beginning, I should post a REAL review.

I love everything you created in this story, but the saddest part by far is anything with Esme. It's horrible how her husband and sons take everything out on her just because they can. I doubt Carlisle woul have beaten her so badly if he wasn't in love with Renee and didn't blame her leaving on Esme. Also when Edward blamed his father's disaproval on her and actually physically took it out on his mother.

I have to wonder though, if over the years Carlisle just "put up" with her, or if he was actually pleased with her as his wife?

~Megan



Author's Response:

In the chapter where you see Carlisle's insanity actually come out he says he tried to be happy with Esme, but she couldn't replace Renee.  He never loved her.

Reviewer: lalaloveee Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 48

do you think you're still going to do the esme outtake?



Author's Response:

I'm actually working on it this week and hope to post it for New Years.

Reviewer: lalaloveee Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

how come esme didnt get counseling/therapy?



Author's Response:

She did get help at the same time she had her sons go to therapy. I just didn't go into it.

PEOPLE LIKE US by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3989]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward Cullan is the hottest movie star. Bella Swan is an art grad, in Italy for the summer. Their worlds collide in the most unlikely way.  He unlocks what she has hidden for so long - a dark side...


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Horror, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, One-Shot, Parody/Crackfic, Poetry, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, My To Read List, Ageise02's Read Stories, Bdsm stories only, Finished, Twilight - Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 81 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339257 Read Count: 995735
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 04 Dec 2011
Reviewer: lalaloveee Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this story is so great and i love the character development you have created. would you consider doing a flashback to the early parts of carlisle and esmes relationship as a partt of a chapter? 

Blind Faith by rmcrms5 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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Karsyn McKenna grew up, sheltered and loved, in a small Texas town.  Chase Carter is the local rancher who has secretly loved her forever.  Gabriel Thompson is the stranger who comes to town with secrets of his own.  Caught in a web of deception and lies that lead to murder, she must choose between the man she knows or the one who holds her heart.  Will blind faith be her salvation or her destruction?


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2357 Read Count: 683
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: lalaloveee Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow...that was really great! loved it! ill definitely buy it...but im a little confused. are you still publishing tpw?



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it.  Yes, I'm still publishing TPW, but it is coming out a little later.  Blind Faith is all original and being published first.  TPW should be ready by first of next year.

Summary:

 

 

For those of you who read "The Perfect Wife" this takes place twelve years after the epilogue. You do not need to read TPW, but an understanding of the story is helpful.

Carlisle ran a human trafficking ring. He was an abusive husband and father. Esme suffered cruel and horrific atrocities at her husband’s hand. Her sons, Emmett, Jasper and Edward were raised to treat her no better than a slave; undeserving of love and respect. Rosalie, Alice and Bella are brought into this life as their wives and together these women fight to change their outlook on life and women. At the end of TPW, Em/J/E have learned to change and passionately love and respect their wives.

Carlisle is finally killed when he attempts to hurt Bella, freeing Esme from a lifetime of abuse. His will stated he wanted to be cremated so his ashes would remain with his family, forever a symbol of his power over his family. Esme refuses to let him control her life any longer and takes his urn from the house returning empty-handed hours later.

TPW was Bella and Edward’s story. This is Esme’s story.

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4083 Read Count: 7763
[Report This] Published: 02 Jun 2011 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: lalaloveee Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

did esme ever get to talk to her parents again after carlisle died?



Author's Response:

Yes, she got to talk to them. They passed away before the time of the outtake.