Reviews by chantiemaya
Summary: Past Featured Story

When Jasper and Edward find themselves out of luck in adopting a child, Jasper decides it is time to try a new route. What sacrifices will this couple make to become parents? Can Bella make their dream come true? Written for the FGB auction. JxE and eventually JxExB


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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jasper, Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Slash
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29005 Read Count: 22173
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2010
Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue: EPOV

Great story, full of love! 

Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 10: 9: When the Trial Period Ends BPOV

beautiful :)

Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: 6: All The Ways You Touch Me BPOV

Wow, very intense that last scene. Loving this story so far!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A personal ad for a fake fiancée leads to something they never expected. Two lonely souls discover that faking it might be the best thing that ever  happened to them. ExB AH 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories to read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, Bella's Must Reads!, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125397 Read Count: 141571
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Much Ado

Very cute story! Well written and I've been LOL-ing quite a number of times ;) I'm looking forward to reading more. Your Bella is a tough cookie and Edward is a softy, so they fit perfectly together :P

I'm rec'ing you on my blog, check it out if you want. I'm on inordinately dot wordpress dot com (not sure if TWCS would accept the link) or you can find me on twitter, my handle is inordinately. 

Examining Miss Swan by Aunt Bell Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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It's time for that annual exam all women hate.  To make matters worse, Bella's regular doctor is out sick.  Rescheduling is not an option.  What will she do when Dr. Tanner’s intern enters the room?  One-shot. All Human.  (Words minus ANs 7,126)

 

Banner by:  Ellie Wolf

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Jared
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7040 Read Count: 2509
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2013 Updated: 28 Apr 2013
Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Annual Exam

A cute and sweet story, I really liked it :) Very different from what I normally read. You story was rec'ed in my FB group, maybe you want to come check it out; https://www.facebook.com/groups/612854895420363/



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  It was fun to write and also a little risque for me. 

Okay.  I'll even post the banners for all my stoires, if it is alright, since they are all under 500 reviews. 

I greatly appreciate the fact you took the time to let me know you liked my little creation.  ;)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Somewhere in life I took a wrong turn and never found my way back. For me there were no second chances, there were no redos...or at least that's what I thought, until I met a girl on a bus who looked just like me...just a little richer. 

Contains Daddyward/Doctorward

Title Change! Once called My Redo Life

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24485 Read Count: 23444
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Your story was rec'ed in my group on Facebook: Hidden Little Gems Rec Group! We rec stories with less than 500 reviews.

What an awesome plot idea! I love how sweet Isadora/Bella is with the kids and Edward's surprise at her behavior, and I'm looking forward to read more about Alice and how she will deal with Bella. This story has a lot of potential both for readers who love AH and the slightly supernatural! I do think you need a good pre-reader and beta, because I've seen quite a lot of technical mistakes in your writing. I can't help going into edit-mode when ever I read, because I write as well and always get everything edited by a beta ;) I think you need help with the punctuation, such as where commas should go. You can try with SRP or PTB to get a pre-reader and a beta. Otherwise, great story, and keep writing :)

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Mark Me Contest Entry

Hey you, I finally have a moment to finish reading your contest entry! I started right after you posted it but I got interrupted. Btw excuse any and all typos/errors. I'm on my phone :P Okay this Edward? Hot as hell on the outside, but an inner monologue that made me raise my eyebrows several times. It's like he's trying to be something that he's not, while at the same time it's all he knows. An interesting character. Loved the tats and how you explained them. Bella is awkward and gorgeous. I think it's good that she didn't manage to say she was a virgin because I'm not sure it would've been as good for her as it was now. And it was a damn good first time!! She should cherish it :P So, she's ran out on him the next morning. Figures. She probably thinks it was a one-time-thing for him, and she has to leave for school and everything... Okay I'm just going on here but what I'd like to say is that it was funny, hothohot, and interesting :)



Author's Response:

glad you liked it chantie. thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - Meeting Isabella Swan

I actually read all 3 posts before writing my previous review, I forgot to mention :) just adding: mwahahahaha for tricking Mase into a date :P



Author's Response:

thanks for your review chantie. :)