Reviews by Motomary
As You Wish... by mama4dukes Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Banner by RachelxMichelle

Banner by the talented RachelxMichelle.

Crazy happenings are afoot in the vampire world.  Bella breaks up with Edward and everyone around her starts going nuts.  Read about the craziness surrounding Bella and how she finally finds her mate.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Caius
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6903 Read Count: 2373
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2011 Updated: 03 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I treat a lot of your work like canon Bella clung to Withering Heights.   With the difference of making me happy,not morose.  

Thank you for your talents and sharing them with us.

 

 I love the Peter/Bella Walmart saga-also , but the ending does bring me down because I feel so bad for Peter.

 

just finished reading Bella/Jasper’s great adventure and loved it too.

 

thank you again,hope y’all are well

À la carte by realjena Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

 

 

A collection of one-shots. Some human, some supernatural... basically a lemon cart, almost always NSFW. Billed as a crossover because stories may contain elements from both the books and show. Always Eric/Sookie, but may have other characters if the mood strikes. Multi-chapter stories may stem from things in here, who knows? Rated NC-17 for language and content.

 


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18343 Read Count: 2645
[Report This] Published: 30 Sep 2013 Updated: 02 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved it!

Summary:

This is a continuation based off the first chapter of "À la carte", titled "Basement Blunder". Please read that prior to this. What happens now after spending the night in Eric's secret room below Fangtasia? Rated NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 28300 Read Count: 5097
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2013 Updated: 03 Sep 2015
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 04 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Nooo!  It can't be over!  I love these two.  They will come back to haunt you and beg you to continue...oh wait..maybe that's me coming to haunt you to beg for more.  Either way,you won't be able to resist the compulsion. Might as well as resign yourself to it now, you're being glamoured.

thanks for the beautiful story 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Sookie tries to use her fae magic to save Godric. But something goes terribly wrong, and they are hurtled back in time 2000 years. Learn about Godric's past, and join him as he falls in love with the woman who gave him a new beginning.    

Lots of Godric POV and old world feel to it.

 

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood
Characters: Sookie/Godric
Genre: Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TB
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57100 Read Count: 6022
[Report This] Published: 03 Jan 2015 Updated: 16 Jul 2015
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Ch 1: Re-Awakened

Beautiful story.  Thank you. Would love to read their adventures together

Blood Master by Wonwordful Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 374]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner

Banner by IpsitaC77

Beta: EdwardsFirstKiss

COMPLETE. When Bella asked the ruby-eyed vampire to end her life, she never expected him to 'kidnap' her instead. Who is he, and where is he taking her? A crazy adventure begins, unravelling unprecedented secrets. World travel. AU/OOC. NC17 for strong language, some violence and mild BDSM.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Dominance and submission, Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131671 Read Count: 94016
[Report This] Published: 26 Dec 2015 Updated: 23 Jan 2017
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 34 - Peace and Pieces

I believe this is my favorite interpretation of Edward.  A perfect blend of pragmatic, crazy and loving. Thanks for sharing your talent 



Author's Response:

Thank you, your comment made my day :D I'm so glad you like Edward's personality :) Hope you'll keep enjoying the chapters to come!

Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Kidnap

Glad to hear there may be outtakes.  If I didn't mention it before, I must reiterate this is by far my favorite interpretation of 'Bella and Edward'. The trust, care and humor truly makes the reader believe the pair can overcome anything and are honorable in their endeavors. 

I will miss them  thank you

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words. :) :) <3

Cowboy? by theadosia57 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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Bella is just finishing her Bachelors Degree in Criminology, aged 24 at UNT (University of North Texas). When a certain blond cowboy re-appears in her life.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gone
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7207 Read Count: 4807
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2016 Updated: 18 Jul 2016
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 6: My Major, My Eternity

Re-reading all your stories. You really hit your stride with this story and with this interpretation of these two characters story and 'family's evolution. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

Yes, that's the one that made me realise I could write Jasper easily xx

Alexis

The Trunk by California Kat Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary: Past Featured Story

the trunk

Being thrown into the trunk by Debbie Pelt forced Sookie to the realization that there was no longer any time for her to put off answering the hard questions in her life.  But will she have the opportunity to enact the epiphanies she makes while waiting for Bill to "wake up" in the trunk?  And what of Eric? Will feeling Sookie's terror make him more or less regretful about the feelings he hates having?

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Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Canon
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Trunk Trilogy
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 62522 Read Count: 5120
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2017 Updated: 27 Nov 2017
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Rip It Up

I think this is turning into one of my favorite stories!  The using of the flight conversation is inspired and very effective.  These two can help each other so much and their current openness toward each other is the catalyst to make it happen. 

 

Summary:

 

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Summary: At eighteen Edward was sent to prison for a crime he didn’t commit. It’s now six years later, and he has been released four years early. His bail conditions have been set. He has to find somewhere to live and get a full-time job, both things he has found in a small sleepy town. All he wants to do is keep out of everyone's way and move on with his life. Will this sleepy town of Forks, Washington let him, especially when they find out why he was in prison?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 229926 Read Count: 52301
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2018 Updated: 16 Nov 2019
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love this story. I am a recent reader of ‘Twilight’ character fanfics and glad I found this story.  It really has a lot going for it in showing how the right support and caring can have a positive effect on the healing process for our protagonists.  Thanks for the great story. 

Summary:

MDTMDR

Forks Washington, Chief of Police, Charlie Swan has just made one of the hardest choices of his life and now he's beyond pissed off.

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Contests & Competitions
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8174 Read Count: 1185
[Report This] Published: 02 Oct 2018 Updated: 28 May 2019
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 1: God Damn Them

Wonderful, enjoy your stories.

good update for Fate, also



Author's Response:

Thanks,

glad you're liking them all xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 1: God Damn Them

Great story,  begging to be continued!



Author's Response:

Thanks & Hi,

yes it will be, I'm working on it amongst other things xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2018 Title: Chapter 1: God Damn Them

Wonderful, enjoy your stories.

good update for Fate, also



Author's Response:

Thanks, 

Will be continued I promise xx

Alexis

Summary:

DYTWLIS

PLEASE READ 'SUNSHINE' BY MSSDARE FIRST BEFORE READING THIS, SO YOU GET THE CONTEXT OF MY OUTTAKE. (On FFN)

They just walked away thinking we'd do nothing! They don't know us at all do they? Twilight AU

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4317 Read Count: 694
[Report This] Published: 10 Nov 2018 Updated: 10 Nov 2018
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Suns Up

Awesome final fill in for a large unresolved hole for these characters from the original story.  Their actions in Sunshine made sense as they were both so traumatized that they needed each other to heal.  Your ending fit into the original great story like a very satisfying big puzzle piece that had fallen under the couch. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

 that's the nicest way to descibe an outtake thank you so much xx

Alexis

Summary:

Fool Me Once

Summary:  I awake to my Father knocking on my door. He's alive? What did he say? First day of school, how is that possible? Thank God that's possible, this time I won't be fooled!

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55814 Read Count: 13627
[Report This] Published: 01 Jun 2019 Updated: 31 Aug 2019
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2019 Title: Chapter 1: See You In My Dreams, Not!

One request - -could  this story please go on forever?



Author's Response:

Thanks,

If only, but sadly not possible. Glad you like it xx

Alexis

Summary:

ATTT

 

This is my extended imagination running wild on the basis of Twilight. You know how it starts, but in this tale Edward is a more possessive and a bit violent because be I am obsessed with a darker, and dominant Edward. Not always the gentleman. Warning! OOC, AU, Etc...

 

Thanks to  SnoopyLover60, who asked to have this story back, BitterHarpy for helping keep me crusing along and guiding me and EdwardsFirstKiss who helped make me readable... Love ya, darlins!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35547 Read Count: 13729
[Report This] Published: 12 Jul 2019 Updated: 21 Nov 2021
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 5: The Haunted Hunter

Loving this story, and I'm not usually an Edward fan!

Be Careful by theadosia57 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

BC

When a very human girl decides to live with her father, nobody expected the results! She gets pulled into a world that has no right showing itself to her, unfortunately, some think themselves above the laws of supernatural's and men alike!

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8626 Read Count: 803
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2019 Updated: 07 Sep 2019
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Always Check The Body

Love your stories!   This is one on particular I would love to see a continuation with Bella and Jasper and basically the Whitlock.   The premise os the relationship of the Quiliuttes and the ingnorance of Carlisle as the basis of the is a nice twist.  Thanks for sharing your talent



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So happy you enjoyed it, but alsa that's all their will e of that one xx

Alexis

Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2022 Title: Chapter 1: Always Check The Body

Re-reading and thoroughly enjoyed the story and concept. It's probably the only story I've read that I don't want to pull out a Zippo and light Alice up.  Even when she's not portrayed with evil intent, she still drives me crazy.  

 

Thanks for the story and the unique build of the relationship of B/J. Love to see how it develops. 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

so very happy you enjoyed it xx

Alexis

Summary:

Emmett

 

 

Summary: In my world, there is loyalty among brothers, honor among thieves. But when considered one of the deadliest human beings alive, what suicidal prick would fuck with your twin? I’ll tell you who. Edward. Masen. Cullen.

 


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2136 Read Count: 206
[Report This] Published: 02 Mar 2020 Updated: 02 Mar 2020
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Bramare: An Emmett Outtake

Have you seen Kellam Lutz on FBI Most Wanted?  Yeah fits right in with this story

Summary:

R&R

 

Bella arrives in Forks, 20 years after the Cullens leave, for Charlie's funeral. The mansion is up for sale at long last and she gets roped into being part of the cleaning crew by Charlie's estate agent widow, Amanda. How is it she finds what no one else ever saw or heard?

 

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gelesen
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40458 Read Count: 8274
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2020 Updated: 22 Aug 2020
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Hiding In Plain Sight

YUMMY!💀😎💀



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you like the start xx

Alexis

Summary:

IOOH

  I can't take any more of this. Nothing's changed, nothing will, so New Orleans here I come! Twilight/The Originals x-over Bella/Elijah 

 

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer and The Originals and its characters to J. Plec. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU. Thanks to Idreamofeddy, for Peter just knowing shit!


Categories: Crossover
Characters: Bella/Elijah
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 96715 Read Count: 11852
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2021 Updated: 11 Dec 2021
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2021 Title: Chapter 1: It's Still A Cage, Even When You Can't See The Bars!

Awesome story.  I’ve been putting off reading this to wait for more to be completed..sort of savoring and anticipation.  After reading a few other authors, I couldn’t stand It anymore and had to succumb and catch up on the events in the latest chapters.

I know very little about the vampire diaries and the originals stories and lore.  So, I felt like Bella (and the rest of the Cullens due to Carlisle’s lack of communication) in learning about this part of their world in this story.  Your way of making the information flow and avoiding long tedious explanations is wonderful    Thanks for another great story.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you decided to give it a go xx

Alexis

Summary:

ISBLIK

Summary:  I didn't mean to look; I didn't mean to watch him. But I can't tear my eyes away! Jasper/Bella

 

DISCLAIMER: Twilight and its characters belong to S. Meyer. Otherwise, the rest is my musings on an AU.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47021 Read Count: 6315
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2021 Updated: 05 Mar 2022
Reviewer: Motomary Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2022 Title: Chapter 12: End Of The Road, Or Is It The Start

What the hell? 

 I stopped reading this after the first chapter with the idea of waiting until it was completed. (Because I know you can be counted on to not leave us hanging)

What a pleasant surprise when I did come back to it. Great story and characters !

 

Thanks so much for the story, I needed that!



Author's Response:

Thanks,

So glad you enjoyed it. I really enjoyed writing the shower scene lol xx

Alexis