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Bella falls pregnant by a womanizing Edward and he wants nothing to do with her or the baby. At least he doesn't think he does, but actions speak louder than words. A story about the beauty and pain of love.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126181 Read Count: 251330
[Report This] Published: 16 Jun 2010 Updated: 01 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Tammy's POV

I almost feel sorry for Tammy, she's not very bright and has been  ruthlessly manipulated by Charles!

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I can't imagine how awful that would feel when you've just brought your new baby home. Thank goodness Charles has now realised just how wrong he was about Bella.

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm rereading this and knew it was coming with Charles but it still upset me, such calm assurance of his own superiority.

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Bella was so strong and quick thinking standing up to her boss like that!

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Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Carlisle has shown how much he loves and supports Edward by exposing his own most shameful secret to show that there is hope.

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Alice has had a vision that the new girl at Forks High will change the Cullens' lives.  But Rosalie's sharp eyes catch evidence of abuse on Bella Swan, and she vows to find out just what's going on with the quiet girl.  Eventually she and Edward hatch a plan to keep Bella safe, which might endanger the close-knit ties of the Cullen family.  Possessive Edward and Big Sister Rosalie. Banner by the amazing JavaMasta!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 319577 Read Count: 124856
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2011 Updated: 02 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 02 Mar 2019 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Wonderful story! Thank you for sharing with us.

Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 269]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

 

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 232153 Read Count: 20818
[Report This] Published: 26 Mar 2016 Updated: 27 May 2016
Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: This is My Hell

The tension from Jacob was so intense, he's struggling to keep in control. Poor Edward is devastated. I hope that they can track down Victoria soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you and the tension doesn't ease up soon. It's actually about to get worse. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Revelations

Poor Charlie, he's had his world view altered irrevocably on top of his daughter being brutally attacked. 

Bella is mad!



Author's Response:

Oh yeah - she's pissed! It's going to be lovely. ;) And yes, poor Charlie. :( It's hard to write but vital for him to have his pain recognized.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Learning to Listen

The tension between them was palpable; I love that Bella stayed strong and let him know how much he'd hurt her and how much things need to change between them.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed that Bella stayed strong. She needed not just a backbone, but a voice in this relationship. Just because Edward is "immortal" doesn't mean he should be allowed to make all the decisions.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14:Too Much Testosterone

I'm a little vindictive so I rather enjoyed Edward being told by Charlie that Bella was on a date!



Author's Response:

I'll admit that I enjoyed that part too, if for no other reason than how arrogant was he to think he could just show up and she'd be available? Rude. He'll learn though. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Gunpowder and Lead

Poor Edward's less than elegant descent from the tree was always going to come out into the open!



Author's Response:

Oh it absolutely was, although Bella wasn't going to tell. Edward brought that on all by himself. Served him right, too? ;) You just know the siblings are loving the fact that Edward is struggling a bit with the Badass Bella. Thanks for your continued reviews.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

That ice made things a little heated!



Author's Response:

Funny how that worked out, right? ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Strawberries and Cream

That was such a powerful experience for both of them!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think so. Not only did it empower Bella, but it also proved to Edward that he can restrain himself and trust that Bella knows how much he can handle.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Mistletoe and Message Panty Payback

They really did spend a lovely evening together. I've never heard of the Christmas nail tradition but it's very simple and poignant.



Author's Response:

Thank you! All of the traditions incorporate in the chapter are actually from my own extremely large and diverse family. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Blindsided

I should have guessed that it was all going too well!



Author's Response:

I know, right? Dun dun dun!!!!! But even more "fun" is to come.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Fists and Fur

I always find Charlie's anguish in these situations especially moving. I'm sorry to hear that you're  going through a difficult time my thoughts are with you. Take care.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your thoughts at this difficult time, but we are relieved he is finally at peace and not suffering any longer. It definitely made Charlie's anguish at almost losing Bella more poignant for me. Writing the next few chapters (that are further along than where I've posted)  are proving especially personal for me right now. Promise to update soon.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 07 Apr 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: A Trek, A Tree, and Titty Hard Ons

That was a lovely chapter, I enjoyed Bells joining in with Emmett and his singing although I admit to a moments panic when Bella's gloves slipped off!



Author's Response:

Oh jeez - my heart jumped into my throat when that happened. But I love that is was Jasper that caught her. Jasper, the one that went after her over a paper cut, has come so far in making Bella a part of his family. And let me just add that Emmett is a truly terribly but hilarious singer. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 09 May 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30: Confessions

Poor Charlie is literally reeling with everything that he's had to face today. I'm a little nervous about them all leaving to hunt Victoria.



Author's Response:

I worry about Charlie too. It's been a rough day for him. :( And yes, the hunt is on and will be interesting, especially if the wolves are still in the mix. ;)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Turning Stone into Silly Putty

It's nice to see a playful, cheeky interaction between them!



Author's Response:

I agree completely of course. There needed to be a lot more laughter in their relationship, and I wanted to change the dynamic not just between Edward and Bella, but with the whole family. :)

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Blood Doesn't Make a Mom

Wise words from Esme, she was clearly very moved by Bella's art.



Author's Response:

As an artist, even if it's landscapes and architecture, the drawing did move her deeply. Not just for the talent, but also for the emotional revelation it gave her into Bella's pain that she is still coming to terms with.

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 30 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Reality Check

Edward falling out of the tree tickled me!



Author's Response:

Oh I full on laughed out loud so much that my husband had to come find out what was so funny. It was just out of character for him that it still makes me giggle. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you. 

Much love,

~Lisa

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Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Thin Red Line

I saw this rec'd on Facebook, sorry this is my first review. I understand why Bella is so angry, she has every right to be angry with all of them! 



Author's Response:

Hi there!  Please don't apologize. I'm thrilled you're giving the story a chance and are leaving a review. I appreciate it so much and hope that you continue to enjoy the story and look forward to hearing more from you soon. 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Torture Devices

She chose so well with her packages! 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you think so. Bella may only be human, but she is definitely learning that it doesn't mean she can't be a vital part of the decisions in their relationship. She doesn't plan to be a passive participant any longer. 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Circle the Wagons

Rosalie is as self absorbed as ever, although I don't think that Carlise and Esme realise how much they have hurt Bella as well. 



Author's Response:

Agreed. Rosier just can't see beyond her own feelings most of the time. That will change soon. ;) And you're correct that Carlisle and Essex don't understand the extent of Bella's pain, but that will also change soon. Thank you so much for continuing to read and review. I read and reply to every single one as they mean a lot to me. 

Much love,

~Lisa

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Bitch Slap

I loved how she stood up to Rosalie without flinching! 



Author's Response:

Oooh - me too! I was cheering her on the entire time. And I was proud of her. I think the rest of the family thought she was a bit crazy, but it was fun to watch.

Much love,

~Lisa

Red Light by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 95]
Summary:

Bella is having a bad day that only gets worse when she finds out her marriage of 6 years is over.  Who knew running a red light would be the end of one life and the beginning of another. 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29003 Read Count: 9850
[Report This] Published: 02 May 2017 Updated: 19 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 05 May 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

He didn't wait long to bring his mistress into their home, he's just destroyed any hope of a reconciliation! 

So Help Me God by Della Aarohi Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

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Injured in a war and hardened by betrayal, she knew the moment she saw him that they would never be a family again. There was no forgiveness for her to get especially since he had claimed another.

Main Pairing: Isabella "Bella" Swan/ Edward Anthony Cullen


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10170 Read Count: 1555
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2020 Updated: 04 May 2020
Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 11 May 2020 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

It's a shame that Angela never spoke to Edward about her real thoughts and feelings regarding him enlisting, she just took herself out of the decision making. I'm not excusing her infidelity but, she clearly didn't feel in control of her life or family.

Reviewer: Twiclare Signed
Date: 11 May 2020 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

Poor Bella, Charlie sounds like a pretty pathetic excuse for a parent.