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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3519]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1568607
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

This is really disgusting.  I may just skip to the end.  I'm sure it's a good story but I think I've just encountered my first Twific that made me vomit.  Poor Bella and everyone else who may be a victim of this life.  The one positive feeling I have is lucky to have not experienced this life.  Sorry I have to flounce.  The writing is good though.  I just can't read anymore.  



Author's Response:

O understand completely. If you decide you want to read it later just skip past ch 11. That's the worst of the graphic.

 

I hope you'll try my other work instead. CAM and FtLOMO are not anything like TPW.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue

I finally finished!  I know I said I'd flounce but I've never done that with a story. I just didn't know how to do it.  I started at the end and made my way back and skipped the gruesome details.  It worked.  I'm glad you gave Bella time to process.  It wouldn't make sense for her to marry Edward before she healed herself.  I think though that a future take with Edward and how he continues to heal as he experiences fatherhood and the challenges of being in a "normal" family might be interesting to explore.  I'm also glad you touched on Esme and the potential to blame her for not doing enough.  You didn't exactly absolve her completely but giving us the perspective that Renee never really "got away" either.  She was enjoying artificial freedom.  They were both imprisoned except one knew she was and the other didn't. Evil Carlisles are always difficult for me because Canon Carlisle's compassion and his search for atonement was so strong and ingrained in the Twi series that it's hard to see that name associated with evil.  It's like when someone uses James or Tanya or Victoria as characters, I can almost hear the dun dun dun in the background.  But all the characters in this story were difficult to process. (I mean, while emotionally I wouldn't want Jasper, Emmett and Edward to be serve jail time because of their part in human traficking, justice still wasn't served.  They got away with it and even ended up benefiting from their crimes.). I can't say I "enjoyed" the story but I do think it's provocative.  I certainly won't forget it. Thanks for sharing and I will check out your other stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving such a thoughtfilled review! The potential to blame Esme for not doing enough was deliberate. In real life there's always someone people will point to for blame saying they could have done more or why didn't they get out. The the problem with that question is that the answer won't make sense to anyone else. Esme didn't leave because Carlisle would have never let her go and take the boys. She weighed her options and felt it was better to stay and do whatever she could to balance Carlisle's evil. In her mind it was better than to live always looking over her shoulder. That's not saying that's the answer for everyone or even 99.9% of battered women. Everyone makes their decisions for their own reasons. It's not up to us to understand. If a woman can get out and get her kids out SHE SHOULD! This was a fictional character making a fictional decision that is made every day in real life by women all over the world from all walks of life. We are not her judge and jury.

Making Carlisle and Charlie the bad guys was important to making my point "Evil is always easier to believe when it's ugly". No one wants to believe that the so called good guy (teacher, preacher, movie star, neighbor or even close friend or family member) can be just as evil and hurtful as the expected monster (James, Tanya, Victoria or even Aro). Read my story Love of My Obsession you'll see me do this again with someone else (not to this graphic extent I promise).

Mic

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

Banner by Mehek18


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 121567
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

This is very interesting.  



Author's Response:

Glad you're liking it so far. I'm working on the next chapter now that the holidays are over. Mic

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Vampire, Edward Masen, craves someone's body more than her blood.  Can he ever see Bella as more than a pleasure giver?  Can Bella ever see Edward as anything other than a monster?

This story is intended for mature readers only (18 and over).   Subject matter could be disturbing to some readers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My All-Time Favorites, Fics to Read, My all time favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 49527 Read Count: 86831
[Report This] Published: 17 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 21 May 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wait, what????  Soooo sneaky.  I love it!  Bella and Edward are restored.  The universe is exactly as it should be.  Whew!

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 358770
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 28 May 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

This has to be the best epilogue I've ever read.  Thanks.  *tears*

Summary: Past Featured Story

A year ago, Isabella Swan was new at school and instantly gained acceptance. Unfortunately, a certain bronze haired new kid isn't so lucky. Hidden friendships slowly build and blossom into more. Will it be social suicide? Rated M for language, will eventually go up.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90319 Read Count: 20648
[Report This] Published: 30 Apr 2010 Updated: 08 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 05 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Loved it!  

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella, the Crowned Princess and soon to be Queen of Dwyer is advised to find a husband so that she can secure her line with an heir.  Viscount Edward Masen comes to the capitol among her suitors with less than noble intentions. As he grows to love his wife, he's forced to deal with those who helped plot to get him on the throne.

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Banner by Rosalynn


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128079 Read Count: 81004
[Report This] Published: 04 Dec 2011 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've started to read this one too in addition on the MatM.  Love your historical fics!  

Tick Tock by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She wanted a baby, but didn't exactly go through the conventional way to have one and now she has to deal with the family, including Edward. Written purely for laughs.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34998 Read Count: 65192
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I read the one-shot on Fanfiction but since you did say you had some of your stories on TWCS, I thought I'd look for the rest in here.  Glad to find it and I thoroughly enjoyed the read! Thanks.

Summary:

BANNER BY: DEEBELLE1  (isn't she awesome?)

 

Edward is a twenty-seven year old Biology teacher at Forks High School. He is responsible for teaching Sex-Ed and sharing information on the prevention of STDs, STIs, and pregnancy. What happens when Mr. Cullen doesn't practice what he preaches? When one of his star students figures out his problem, will she make his life a living hell? See what funny things unfold in this laughter filled disaster! AH/Rated M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6359 Read Count: 3338
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So on!  But yet, responsibly.  

Summary:

Banner by: Le Crepuscule.

 

SUMMARY: Three childhood friends, take their friendship to a higher level. How will things fit together when another person gets added to the mix? Will it be the end, or a brand new beginning? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Edward/Alice
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Femme Slash, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9158 Read Count: 6803
[Report This] Published: 23 Aug 2013 Updated: 23 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hmm.  I appreciate love in all forms.  Poly is not for me, though.  I didnt even get turned on by the poly-lemon but it has nothing to do with the writing.  It's just not what turns me on.  Still a good story, sting interesting.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by: DeebelleOnefic

 

This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways.  What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 434688
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2014 Updated: 13 May 2014
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Bad ass Bella!  I love her.  She's been missing in fanfiction for awhile.  

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

He called her baby.  Awww. 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Hysterical!  She's awesome!!!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I'm thinking the Dora they know before is not the same Dora since Bella's dad died. 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'm soooo engaged in this story!! I love me an uber intelligent, funny and kickass Bella!!!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Love it!! Maybe Masen 8 is the mini-Bella?  

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Nikky and I wrote a oneshot for this Awesome banner that was made
by, Caitlin Beresford in a contest, where it was awarded 3rd place.
Here is the contest info: http://battleofthebannerartist.blogspot.com/

 

 

Bella learns after her mother's death that she is not a legal citizen.  Needing to find a way to stay in the USA, she asks her childhood, best friend's, brother, to be her husband.  What starts as a proposal of need, quickly changes. What happens when those changes cause ripples in the lives of Bella and Edward?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18021 Read Count: 9174
[Report This] Published: 05 Apr 2014 Updated: 05 Apr 2014
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can totally see Alice being a bitch like this.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Seattle pharmacist Bella Swan thinks her chance at a fairy tale love story is†over†when her parents push her towards an arranged marriage. For Doctor Edward Cullen, love was never in the radar. Will the arrangement mean a love-less marriage? Or will love find them along the way? AH, OOC, Canon Couples. Rated mainly for language but may contain adult situations in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 206433 Read Count: 193122
[Report This] Published: 09 Apr 2014 Updated: 15 Feb 2015
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Pixie Inquisition

I was a little skeptical at first but I can see where you're going with this and the story is entertaining so far!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Strike Two

I'm not sure I'm liking this Bella.  She's really short-fused and irrational.  Edward is not much better but at least his first instinct is not to attack her.  In every instance where he said something out of turn it was directed at someone he didn't think was her.  She is a little mean and at times contrary towards him for no reason. 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Itís Happening!

That was awesome!  I was grinning ear to ear during the bridal March.  

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner by FemmeCullen

 

Summary: Edward’s grandfather’s business has been closed because of his investment partner died and his daughter, who he calls the viper, wants more than just money to reopen. The viper makes life hard for the Cullens when Edward refuses her ‘offer.’ When an angry Edward meets another poor little rich girl that needs some tutoring, will she be the one to teach him a thing or two?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69931 Read Count: 80436
[Report This] Published: 20 Jul 2014 Updated: 25 Aug 2014
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

With the amount that they keep giving away they will soon be middle class!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner By: Tiffany Kennedy - thanks for making this banner for us.

After the death of Gabriel Swan and Charlie Swan, the running of Swan's Toys, Trees and Reindeer is left in the hands of a very young Bella Swan. Why don't the majority of the townspeople remember sweet little Bella Swan? Who is this cold hearted woman who is running the Swan Plantation? What will the workers do when the normal two week vacation at Christmas is canceled?

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39677 Read Count: 20204
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2014 Updated: 31 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So Bella is not, in fact, the Wicked Witch.  She's just misunderstood??  

Summary: Past Featured Story

One and Only

 

 

What would it be like to know at first sight your one and only love? What if this was given to you as a gift to be passed down thru your generations? Follow the story of how an Angel from heaven gave this gift to the Clan Cullen in 1314 Scottish Highlands and how the gift is passed thru out the generations to present time. Will the Cullen Men find their One and Only?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: Stories I've read, Read
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 83342 Read Count: 111629
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2015 Updated: 28 Apr 2015
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 History of the Gift

I love that photo of Jamie and Claire!  I'm really digging this plot line.  Can't wait to read the rest!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter #2 Meeting the Clansmen

I though for sure Emmett would violate the rules! 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter #4 Losing What You Love

Oh no!  We didn't kill off the Swans did we?

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Getting Help from Your Friends

They're going LIVE!  How exciting! 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Thanks for a lovely story! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hates Valentine's Day, and everything about it. Her past experiences in love have left her with a jaded view on relationships. After quitting college, she gets a job at a diner, where she makes friends and finds herself in a new job. What happens when the CEO gets under her skin, will she open up to what she really wants from him, or run off and hide?  all human/olderward - w/a smidge of daddykink. 

Banner by the talented Christag Banners.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47353 Read Count: 99793
[Report This] Published: 07 Feb 2015 Updated: 18 Feb 2015
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like a Bella with a little fire. 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

For a full-on sex fest, this was kind of sweet. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Heavy is the head that wears the crown, noble the ill-prepared to turn it down. Bella is no one, a lady's maid at a girl's school until the princess she serves changes her life with a choice she would never make herself. Now she sets off into a world she doesn't know, betrothed to a man who will never know her.

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 45 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 123897 Read Count: 104423
[Report This] Published: 21 Mar 2015 Updated: 26 Dec 2016
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I love love love this story!  They are how Bella and Edward should be - they communicate, she understands him, he protects her but not in a way that shields her from the truth.  Love! 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Wow -epic development.  Poor Carlisle.  He has to recover! 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Interesting alliance.  Great update!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

That was a nice surprise!!!  Alice is back! 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 30 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Big sacrifice being away from their baby for 6 months.  :-(

Summary:

 

BANNER BY: FemmeCullen

SUMMARY:  Little Lucy Swan is turning five and her birthday wish is to sing with hot country star Edward Cullen. When her momma wins tickets to see him in concert, will little Lucy's birthday wish come true?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26153 Read Count: 26323
[Report This] Published: 14 Jun 2015 Updated: 27 Jun 2015
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cavity-inducing!  Let's see Lucy up on stage!!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

They fell in love hard and fast

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Isabella, a young girl of seventeen has the world at her feet, but all that is torn away when her father forces her into an arranged marriage with a stranger. #mobward #bratella

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64912 Read Count: 161781
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2015 Updated: 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

That was awesome!  I devoured every chapter and now onto the next book.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bad boy Jacob Black doesn't return Bella's crush, so she decides to date someone safer: a harmless nerd in her math class named Edward Cullen. Little does she know that he is secretly a powerful and ruthless gang leader enmeshed in a vicious drug war that will put her life—-and all her beliefs—-at risk.. AU, AH, E/B, HEA. Co-authored with Sophia Amador.

 

Banner by Rita01tx

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 65 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6456 Read Count: 87506
[Report This] Published: 15 Nov 2015 Updated: 02 Oct 2016
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Shocking start!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Hedge fund manager Edward Cullen didn't make the Forbes list this year and thinks he's a failure, just like his father and teachers in small-town Forks always told him. Only one person ever believed in him, but he left her behind to chase his fortune in New York City. Can a longtime Seattle holiday tradition bring magic and love back to his life? AU, AH, E/B, HEA. Co-authored with Sophia Amador, who also made the banner. **TOP TEN COMPLETED FICS OF DEC 2015 on TwiFanfictionRecs **

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9047 Read Count: 4989
[Report This] Published: 20 Dec 2015 Updated: 29 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

A fab Christmas love story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews! So happy you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh no!  What happened years ago?

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Carlisle is a meanie in this one!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is my Christmas weekend fic! Oh and is Bella a singer?  I mean, literally, Edwards singer! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Newly divorced Bella goes to Vegas for a work conference. On the advice of friends she lets her hair down and goes out for a night on the town. When she comes back from Vegas, she finds out that what happens in Vegas, doesn't always stay there.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143753 Read Count: 118731
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2016 Updated: 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 07 May 2016 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

It must bum you out that people take time to write disparaging remarks about a story that is obviously meant as fictional entertainment.  It's amazing that they continue reading if they don't like it.  Understandably you feel compelled to respond for the benefit of others who may be reading the comments.  Lots of wasted energy and time.  I'm just happy that you and your collaborators keep writing fun stories for us to escape to.  And for me personally, you seem to be writers who are committed to finishing the stories you publish.  Not that I take offense when some don't, that is their prerogative too.  But you know how it is when you get engrossed in a story that never comes to conclusion. So thanks.  

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 07 May 2016 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Well finally!! Now let's figure out what we will do with evil Emmett. 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 08 May 2016 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I thought that B&E finding out about each other would have been the end but the way this is laid out, there's more stuff here!!  How will Anthony fair?  Emmett needs to get his due and will we have a glimpse of Edward and Bella as a married couple with kids??? More! More!  

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 08 May 2016 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

You have captured the first weeks of motherhood completely!  Love where they are at the moment but I feel like Emmett still owed his due.  

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I've donated my hair 4 times but last year was my last.  Ulta cuts my hair or free and they send it to locks of love.  I would continue but my hair hasn't been growing as fast as when I was younger.  Loving this chapter do far.  Can't wait for Bella to get her groove back! 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Get some B!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Is she pregnant and married? What if Emmett is sterile nf yurns out Rosalie was pregnant by someone else?  Comeuppance indeed!  

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wait!  Who was that doc?  He can't be baby's daddy can he?? And I don't care what other people say, I like the storyline so far even if the Vegas one night thing has been used before.  

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 13 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The whole ring scene was a little confusing for me.  Was she talking to herself?  I was thinking that for most of she was but then the "voice" with the Jack Daniels breath confused me a little bit. 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Edward's disguise is like Clark Kent's.  He puts those glasses on he's a completely different guy!  Bella doesn't even recognize him.  ;-)

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Yay!!!  Long live the Cullens and their brood!  Thanks for sharing this story.  

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 22 May 2016 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Married again!  For real this time.  I love the babies in a suit and thinking of little Anthony in glasses has me smiling. 

Summary:

Prompt: #46: Pleasure/Pain. E/B. Bella is tiny. Like, 5ft tall on a good day. Edward is at least 6'2. The height difference is a turn on for them both. She loves looking up at her big strong man. He loves protecting his little girl. Problem is, Bella's tiny everywhere. Edward has trouble fitting inside her. Maybe there are a few tears. It hurts so good.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12462 Read Count: 6040
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2016 Updated: 12 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Too Busy Being Yours (To Fall For Somebody New)

I thought Addie was short for Adonis.  

Summary:

Bella Swan was dreading going back to her ten year high school reunion, over Valentine’s Day Weekend, for Hillsborough High School. Her time in high school in Tampa, Florida was not high on her list of pleasant experiences. She was quiet, unassuming and secretly in love with Edward Cullen. It was that unrequited love that forced her to move away to Seattle, as far from Tampa as possible. He never knew she existed. Or so she thought.

 

Edward was looking forward to his high school reunion because he was anxious to see the one that got away. Bella Swan was the quiet girl who never really interacted with anyone, but Edward saw that she was something special. But as ruler of the school, he had certain expectations to maintain. It was one of his biggest regrets. His life would have been easier if he had followed his heart. Now, he was a divorced father of two. His ex-wife, Tanya, who was his high school girlfriend, left him for a younger man and abandoned her children.

 

 

Will Bella be happy to see Edward or will she stay hidden amongst her classmates? Will Edward finally break the mold that was expected of him and open up his heart to the beautiful and shy Bella Swan? Will he be able to win back the one that got away?


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9982 Read Count: 973
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2016 Updated: 12 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 31 May 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lovely!  I want to know what happens next.

Summary:

BANNER

Isabella's parents were murdered. Her sister betrayed her and her marriage is on the rocks. Things couldn't get any worse, right? Bratella Mobward - PART TWO - The Ties That Bind


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 26487 Read Count: 54728
[Report This] Published: 28 Mar 2016 Updated: 11 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Uh oh.  Our Bella has a lot of growing up to do.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

This Maggie is going to be trouble.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

They went completely the opposite direction in their relationship. I was expecting her to play her role as a badass Mafia wife.

 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I'm liking that they are starting to think as a team. 

Rogue by Robshandmonkey Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 268]
Summary:

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Meet Masen.

He is not just any thug growing up in a family of organized crime. He is a man who has changed the way families do business.

Masen is in line to be the next "Boss" for his well connected family, and in one night there is a massacre and all his rivals and their families are wiped out leaving no one left behind. The authorities have no clues as to who, why or how someone could pull off a mass murder of this scale. 

Meet Charlie.

A soldier turned businessman who will stop at nothing to give his little girl whatever her heart desires, and what she wants is something no mafia family has ever been able to stake a claim on...the city of Angels.  

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42527 Read Count: 21535
[Report This] Published: 08 May 2016 Updated: 16 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 31 May 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Badass Bella.  I'm digging it already.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Bella fantasizes about an Alpha lover how will take control.  There's no one in this story that fits the bill is there?  

Summary:

 

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AU in 1950s Paris. Celebrated private detective Charlie Swan is hired to investigate wealthy playboy Edward Cullen who is suspected of having an affair with a rich businessman's wife. Charlie's innocent but overly curious daughter Bella gets too involved with the case. Based on the plot of the 1957 Billy Wilder movie "Love in the Afternoon." Drabble. Updates EVERY DAY. AH, HEA.

Banner by Rita01tx. Beta'd by Frannie Walsh.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Historical
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15056 Read Count: 19282
[Report This] Published: 29 Jun 2016 Updated: 09 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Games indeed! 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I hope that he gets to see her play the cello. 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Hmm.  Is this a story about past lives, I wonder?

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

She’s playing a dangerous game.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Charlie totally surprised me!!  

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Beautiful! 



Author's Response:

Wow, I loved reading all your reviews. Thank you so much for taking the time to leave comments on multiple chapters!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wrong answer, Eddo! 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Charlie is going to snitch.  He’s going to discourage Edward’s affection for Bella.  Methinks.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

He’s screwed.  Ms. Bella will mess him up and his formula.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Is she finally busted??? 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Brave, beautiful, silly girlz

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Uh oh.  Bella is gonna get it from Charlie!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Dun dun dun.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Run away Bella!  Don’t go to the dark side.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

He just obliterated her rose colored glasses.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Lol!  I like the little bit of insecurity from Edward.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

He’s going to pretend that Bella is his lover? Fun!

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Poor Bella. :-(

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh dear.  Out little Bella is face to face with Edward’s paramour.  Poor thing. 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Bella to the rescue? 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

How romantic!! 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Denial.  

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I’m guessing the man is Aro? 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

She went too far.  She violated the first rule of effective lying... stay as close to the truth as possible, only changing what is needed to serve the purpose.  

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I’ve just picked this up today.  Sounds very promising already.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 23 Dec 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Bella Bella Bella.  The jig is up!

Chimera by WeeKittyAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1001]
Summary: Past Featured Story

chimera

 

Summary: Bella Swan has lived a sheltered life, and chooses to go to college as far from home as her strict parents will allow. She runs into Edward Cullen, a gorgeous law student. They become friends and one night cross the line of friendship in a way that will alter the life of both of them more than anyone can ever believe. When DNA doesn't tell the same story Bella tells, how will her young life be altered?
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Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 256985 Read Count: 319640
[Report This] Published: 02 Aug 2016 Updated: 30 Mar 2017
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Edward deserves to be unhappy.  His gramps is right. 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow if I know where this is going, Edward is really going to regret those words. 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Charlie is a massive jerk and that the nicest thing I can say.  Bella needs a backbone too.  

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bella seems to be drunk a lot for someone who doesn't drink.  Ha! 

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm sensing a non-Canon Alice.  And she's super mean.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Alice is certifiable and I think I'm beginning to see that the DNA tests from the prologue was rigged.  I'm now rooting for shit to happen so that Edward whom, according to the prologue, sided with his family will eat his words and I hope Bella sticks it to him and all of them!  Ugh!  I wouldn't want it to be for good but he needs to work hard to get close to his son which he practically abandoned. In the meantime, even for just a little bit, I'd like to see sweet Bella adored by a man who would love all of her.  Her son included.  So far there's douchy Jake and clueless Edward.  Not much of a choice.  You can probably tell that I'm struggling with how E reacted from the prologue.

Summary:

Defiance

 

Carlisle Cullen is ruthless Don of the Cullen Crime Family, but his wife Esme doesn't want this life for their son Edward.  Running away and starting a new life and new identity, will they have a happy, safe life or will Carlisle find them?  E&B HEA


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42347 Read Count: 55175
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2017 Updated: 29 Apr 2018
Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Carlisle's Wrath

Wow. Brutal.

Reviewer: Maphie Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2018 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Painting a New Future

I’m dreading what will happen when Carlisle catches up with them.  And I know he will!