Reviews by Anan8808
Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.

 

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145698
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Well what can I say.  This was a great story. it was well thought out the twists and turs were suprising and you stayed true tot love story between the main characters. Thank you for writing this.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Sorry I'm late responding to you. Still churning out book 3. 

E.

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591761
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I truly appreciate your style of writing. You show the ups and downs of a typical marriage. You have transformed these characters from two dimensional characters into a full well  rounded "people". I like the fact that they have these two children and you can sense the stress they are feeling around the dinner table. Christian's inability to see pass his fifty shades. And Ana's slow decent into depression over the loss of her child and her loss of herself. I love your work. Please Keep it up!!! I am so loong forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

E.

Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is by far is one of the better chapters in the series. You can feel the past few weeks of stress that they have been through as a couple as well as individual wash over them. You have really breathed new life into these charaters and made them your own. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love this chapter. Keep them comming.



Author's Response:

Thanks. Working on it.

E

Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Question is there a special place in Hell for Elena? I know  the charaters are fictional but they way you wrote what Christian was feeling I could feel him becoming that scared teenager who was over his head in a bad situaiton with evil. I love your writing. Please keep it up. Do you have any original stuff i could see?



Author's Response:

I think its El Hell. Poor litttle old Christian. He's been through it.

E.

Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.



Author's Response:

Just posted.

Thanks for wanting more.

E.

Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Has Elliott returned to his whore-ish ways? Is he cheating on Kate? I need an update soon.

Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That was very well written, I truly enjoyed it. However, I would like the Virgina story line to be farther along than it has been. There seems to be so much filler before the meat of the story. All in all a good story but sometimes it really drangs. 



Author's Response:

Sorry. I have so may readers that like the family time with no drama. I try to put in something for everyone.  I'm writing grandma now. It won't be too long. 

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

That was some good kinky fuckery. Loved it. As always very well written. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking time to leave the nice review. And thanks for reading.

E.

Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

If i were Ana I would pull Susanna to the side and let her know the game she is playing with and blow up her whole game.



Author's Response:

I'm sure Nrs. Grey will come out on top. After all She has Christian.

E.

Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

OMG he knows.



Author's Response:

Yes. He knows. It's coming.

Thanks

Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Oh God I goona Cry. 

Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed
Date: 19 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I was waiting without baited breath and you did not disappoint.  Thank you for such a well written and developed story.  If you wete to end this today it would not be a disappointment.  You deliver tim and time again. 

Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

Why do I have this feeling that Ana is going be crying after this whole ordeal.  I can see her heart breaking all over again similar to when Sam died. 

Phoebe's Wedding by LizLemon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

A big secret comes to light the night before Phoebe's Wedding that changes everything...


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44944 Read Count: 20852
[Report This] Published: 19 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Anan8808 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Crap hitting the fan

I love this story. It was so well written and tought out; you have given me an ending that I am truly happy with. Keep up the good work.