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Neglected and abused; can Bella find the strength to keep going or will she give in to her darker side.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286221 Read Count: 96619
Date: 05 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Please don't see this as me trying to be rude to you, but Phil's abuse is just into overkill for me. I know that this is your story and you can write it however you want. I'm just speaking for myself when I say that the amount of injuries and where he is inflicting them make it hard to take and hard to believe she could withstand that. Again I respect that it is your story,but I would love to know when such harsh abuse will stop. As an avid reader, realism is important and this is starting to seem to unreal.
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This is a story of a tough as nails, Bella, who can bring a mob boss, Edward, to his knees, but in all the right ways. What happens when these two strong personalities collide in more than one way?
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Family, Mystery, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125775 Read Count: 479034
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
I love this Bella. Your story is really interesting. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Wonderful story. You are a talented team. Thanks for sharing.
Successful Lawyer Edward Cullen and college student Isabella Swan both have very dark and extreme appetites for pleasure. The two meet one afternoon and the attraction is instantaneous. Certain that the other will never accept their personal lifestyle choices, they fight the almost irresistible draw to one another not realizing that they both have more in common than they realize. NC-17 for a very good reason. Multiple partnering, non-canon kind of.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué, Romantic Comedy, Spicy
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 223504 Read Count: 137458
Date: 11 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
This story is so good! It is more than collection of sex scenes. The heart and the way your characters look inward to figure things out,elevates it beyond simple erotica. The scene at the table when the tale about Edward's hair was told actually brought me to tears because I was laughing so hard. I do have question. Is there an "ETA" on when Bella and Edward are going to figure out each other's likes? I have no problem with your multi partner story line. Personally, I'm just tired of the Bella and Paul sex. It feels like they are almost monogamous because they have so much. It could just be my desire to see Bella and Edward happy and together that makes me not want Paul to have that much access to her that he is bending her over the sink first thing in the morning. That should Edward's perogative. LOL! Again this is good story and I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your indepth review. To show my appreciation, I will give you some insight into my intentions for this story. Sooner or later, the truth is going to come out, but I honestly cannot tell you how soon that is going to happen. I know exactly how it's going to come out and how it will all come together, but that will not happen for a while, and I ask that you bear with me. Right now, I am building the foundation of Edward and Bella's romantic relationship in the most traditional of ways. It has to be strong because I feel these two characters deserve nothing less. I'm sure the slow burn is probably driving most of the readers crazy, but it will all be worth the wait. Other situations are going to come up that I hope will intrigue people enough to hang in there. That's all I'll say. Feel free to ask me questions and I will try to answer them without giving anythig away. LOL Thank again for reading!