Reviews by Sfuentes77
Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138685
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Sfuentes77 Signed
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Really hard for anyone to go through something like that.  There is something that Ana said that is bothering me.  I don't know if you have ever lost a child, but it is one of the worst things anyone can say to you.  "it was God's plan" or "things just happen the way they are supposed to". I'm not offended because I've heard even worse than that. Just a heads up.  Good chapter though.



Author's Response:

' I just have to trust that things happen the way they are supposed to happen. Doesn’t help any.'

I had Ana think it to herself, not someone else say it to her. That would be condescending. I think she was grasping at trying to find a reason for it, when there isn't one, and she knows it.  She did say that it doesn't help. I would never have someone else trivialize it by having someone say it to her. I'm sorry if it offended. I'm on the same page with you.

E.

Reviewer: Sfuentes77 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Unbelievable Chapter!  Wow really good!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

E.