Reviews by jbe86
Summary:

Isabella Whitlock and Breaking Dawn have started their tour. Will crazed fans, a stalker, and who knows what else break them apart? E&B, J&A, Em&R NC-17 for lemons, language, and who knows what.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156016 Read Count: 38483
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Atlanta

now we're about to encounter horny bella mixed with PISSED Off Bella. god the makeup sex is going to be AWESOME. Not to mention her kicking that girl's ass. lol I can't wait thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 29 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Tallahassee

I think Bella's hormones are kicking in fulltime with the way she yelled at Paul and then Renee and Charlie. poor guys don't know what hit them. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Baton Rouge

YES I definately agree with Bella. We are all going to be loving Second trimester hormones especially if they keep that up. :D I can't wait for more. that was hot. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Little Rock

aww Edward just needed his baby's mama. lol I loved that part. that was sweet. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 01 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Oklahoma City

oooh something's wrong with bella. :( poor thing. I love that he took care of her all the way even with her being a bitch. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 02 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Dallas

god that girl had me crying almost all the way through. from them not believing her to her nightmares to the bathtub to the little girl at the end. those moments had me crying like a baby. I know wimpy but true. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

It had me in tears too when writing it, espicailly since it is something so close to me.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Houston

Its baby making time in the house of Cullen. lol I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 24: San Antonio

wow you just keep giving us more and more don't you? lol I loved it. two sex scenes in one chapter. you are a goddess. lol keep up the amazing work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you. The updates will start slowing down now that I am caught up to what I have on FF.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Lubbock

wow they are horny bitches aren't they? lol I love it. I can't wait for more updates. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Phoenix

yeah for Dunkin Doughnuts and yeah for peanut butter. lol I can't wait for more. I hope bella has another day of increased horniness just so Edward can eat his words about thanking god that bella is into cravings and not so much sex anymore. those poor guys. lol keep up the amazing work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 27: San Diego

wow, just wow on the sex. lol that chapter was great. I'm so glad you updated and I can't wait till she has the baby and it becomes their cock blocker. lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

lol, Thanks;)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Los Angeles

that's not it right? :( I want to see the baby. I can't wait to see the baby and then (it won't be long) after sex with Bella and Edward. lol I can't wait. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Nope, we have a few chapters to go before I am done with them:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Home Sweet Home

that was a hot comeback and YES To the finger in the ass. LMAO that was too awesome. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Shopping, Shelves, and Sandwiches

First for the soundtrack I too love Let's get lost then followed by Jonathan Low. As for this chapter I love how emotional bella is with all the hormones. she can go from crying to being mad to crying again. too cool how you depict that. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Jonathan Low is a good one too!! Honestly, I love the whole soundtrack. I have all three soundtracks in one playlist....Just amazing music!

Pregnancy is such a crazy thing! Hormones are insane!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Hormones, Grammies, and Baby

aww that last part got me a lot weepy. lol I love that they one their grammies and I thought for sure that she was the one going to be in labor not Kate but oh well. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

It got to me too! Thanks:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Hurry, Baby, Hurry

GOD you had me crying that whole chapter. it was so beautiful and I thought for sure Edward wasn't going to make it. I'm so happy he did. and then Charlie at the end had me crying so soon after I calmed down. lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

I sobbed like a baby through the entire chapter! I swear I went through nearly an entire box of tissues!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Baby, one more time!

So no more tour? not even a sequel? oh well it ended great. my perverted self would have loved one last lemon but that was cute none the less. lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:) You never know when I might decide to do another one...just saying...

Married to the Enemy by Gelix Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1706]
Summary: Past Featured Story

m2te

After a night of celebration in Vegas, Bella finds herself married to the man who made her life a living hell for seven years. Follow her as she finds true love where she least expected it!

AU/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future lemons.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Misstoria's Stories to Read, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 315953 Read Count: 297715
[Report This] Published: 14 May 2010 Updated: 28 Jan 2011
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue nr 1

NO BRING ON THE SEQUEL!!! lol I meant you can bet I'm going to be there. no saying bye to those love birds. lol thanks again and the whole thing with Edward and Emily's eye color is too freaking cute. :D thanks see ya next year :D



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Time goes by

Whichever day you choose to update I'm there. lol I can't wait for another chapter. I am in LOVE with the fact that bella is letting Edward touch and tease her more. this is great. keep up the awesome work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 15 May 2010 Title: Married to the Enemy

Bella should have told him where he could shove his did he have to do everything. lol and tripped him on the bus, stupid jerk. hopefully he gets better (which he will) :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Purple Nurple

wow I hope its not Alice unless she has a scratchy beard lol. I can't wait for more. I love that Edward had a crush on her that's why he was mean to her. very kindergarten. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 19 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Cullen

Go Alice. that woman is amazing and I can't wait for the drive back. Please be lots of teasing. lol I can't wait. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 23 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Road trip

I think Bella can give him a chance AND make him work for it at the same time. don't go easy on him Bella girl, make him work for the sex. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you!

He will definitely have to work hard to win her over :)

Thank you for your review!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Husband and Wife

what about the 1-100 people? do we get a exclusive look too? lol I hope son because I can't wait. I'm loving the whole nickname of baby and I'm super excited to find out what Bella's tattoo means to her. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 27 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Husband and Wife

what about the 1-100 people? do we get a exclusive look too? lol I hope son because I can't wait. I'm loving the whole nickname of baby and I'm super excited to find out what Bella's tattoo means to her. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 6: The Wedding

aww freaking aww. that dance was sweet and Bella is finally starting to warm up to him. they are too cute. keep up the amazing work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you! : )

There will be more on Wednesday!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Breakdown

:( well that was a sad update. poor Bella. that's probably why she doesn't want to go to Jake's wedding. poor thing. :( keep up the great work though. you're doing a great job. :) thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Goodbye

wow that is shocking. I thought she was saying by to Emily and now she's jumping? I am in just shocked. that's all I can say. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

I'm not telling, you'll have to read it on Wednesday! ;)

Thank you!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Past

wow, that was so full of news. From Emily's story to Bella's first kiss, to Sam and Bella. I'm really curious as to what Bella's gift is though so hurry up and update....please? lol thanks so much again bye



Author's Response:

I know, maybe it was too much? But things needed to be said and done so we can move on!

I will hurry up with the update, so many of you are curious about the gift. But if you think really, really hard, maybe you can guess what it is? ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Birthday

aww Edward was too cute when he's jealous. lol I loved it. I'm kind of sad that Bella could be so short with Edward and his jealousy when he obviously loves her. poor guy can't catch a break. :D keep up the awesome work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Yeah, he was : )

Bella will be easy on him when she has cooled off a bit.

Thanks,

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Unknown

First off, how to lose a guy in 10 days. lol second I'm waiting till the morning of the 30th to see Eclipse when it comes out instead of the midnight premiere. Third this chapter was great. I love the dry humping and boob fondalage. lol I can't wait for more. and then you leave it like that? totally not cool. lol thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Leaving on a jet plane

awww that was sad. I was getting teary eyed when Bella was asking about his boxers. that poor girl. and obvioulsy you included look after my heart, I've left it there with you so that's a given. lol thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Goals

that poor guy. he's expecting an answer and not getting one. :( I love where this is going. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you, and he'll hear it very soon, I promise!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: I love you

its probably because you cockblock us, you meanie! lol no I don't know why but I'm still here so that's counting for something right? lol I love this story and I LOVE that Edward didn't know who Aunt Flo was. :) I thought for sure that Bella was going to say yes to Edward's fingers but instead she said doesn't mean she can't play with him. LOVE IT. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Yeah, that does definitely count! :)

I'll pick up right where I finished in the last chapter, and the sex will happen within the next three chapters! I promise :)

Thanks!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: The Date

COCKBLOCKER! lol no I'm kidding. I can't wait till Wednesday. they're going to finally do it. lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Haha, SORRY! It's only two more days and then I'll post it, so it's not very far away!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Together

Poor Bella and now she has a cold. poor thing. as for the line, TITANIC! I can't wait for more. hopefully that's all it is, is a cold. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Secrets

I'm here and that make up sex was AWESOME! lol the line was also from Top Gun right? keep up the amazing work. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Thanksgiving

Bella is too cute when she's drunk and I love how you have from Edward's pov too just like a man. She asked for a hotdog but I didn't know why when it was right there she could easily have gotten it herself. too funny. lol I loved that chapter and have fun on your trip. I'll be on Twitter waiting for your trip info. :D thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 27: I forgive you

The Quote first off is from Remember Me! God how I LOVED That movie. as for her forgiving Edward, no I don't think it was too soon. as long as she DOES forgive him, it doesn't really matter if it was 3 minutes or 3 decades. In my opinion though. I love this story. its soo great and I love the Quotes. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 06 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: The Letter

lol bella is too awesome and the quote I think is from Miss Congeniality, right? :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye P.s. falling asleep on Edward's cock? is that girl insane? lol

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 31: New Body

YAHOO, I got a quote right finally. I thought I was losing my touch. lol the quote is from 10 things I hate about you with the conversation between Emmett and Edward. :D ok question also, don't laugh but what does it mean to stork someone's ass? you said that and I thought it was funny but now I'm curious. I've never heard that before. As for this chapter, it was sweet and then HOT at the end. very sexy sexcatary look. lol I also loved Emmett and Rosalie. too good thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 09 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Plans

YES BABY CULLEN! that would be awesome and A walk to Remember is the movie the line is from. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Christmas

ohh no baby? but those home kits can be wrong right? :D I don't really know what Bella's thinking about the annulment but I'm so happy they're engaged to be "remarried" lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

They can, yeah. The question is just if their test was wrong ;)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 23: New Year's Eve

awww they are too cute and I think bella is pregnant. She has all the signs. the quote I THINK is from Katy Perry's Hot and Cold: You change your mind like a girl changes clothes. :D thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Honeymoon

Im thinking that quote (maybe) is from Bridget Jones's diary but not really sure. :D also you totally suck with leaving us on a cliffy like that. i can't wait to find out what's wrong with her. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A visit to the Hospital

okay that was funny and I was totally laughing at the line, I'm Emmett and I'm addicted to porn and masturbate constantly which is from sorority boys isn't it? lol I can't wait for more. I knew she was pregnant. just knew it. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Heartbeats

aww Baby Cullen. :) too cute. I love that Bella put Jake in his place and I actually did like the very first doctor's appointment. very informative. :D The quote is from: THE NOTEBOOK!!! thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Grandparents

Okay I suck that quote is a stumper, I don't know what it is but do I get a preview? :D lol I can't wait to read more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Sorry, but that would be unfair if I gave you one..Check the Facebook-page on Saturday and you'll get a small teaser!

Thank you! :)

xx

Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 06 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Blossoming Flower

god again I didn't get the quote.:( that sucks but the chapter was sweet. especially with the fighting and making up. call me a perv but when does Bella's hormones kick in. that I can't wait for. lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you! Better luck next time! :)

The story isn't going to be about sex, but there will be some sexy times ahead! :)

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Surprise

No I haven't heard about the new story, what's it about? I was soo into this story I never even got the teaser. :( that stinks. I can't wait for more. this is so good and I think Edward liked the boob thing a little too much. lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

It's about Edward and Bella who has grown up practically hating each other, and their parents who are best friends forces them together. After an accident, they are forced together by their friends as well. The parents will push even harder. The only question is whether or not they will succeed.
I suck at summaries, but that is the basic at least. You should check it out on Wednesday :)

Thanks,

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Babysitting

aww their first night alone with Lily. too precious. lol I absolutely loved that bella got freaked out over having sex with a baby in the house. poor Edward. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) I'm glad you liked it!

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Stood up

I think that Bella shouldn't have anything to worry about. she's way overthinking this whole Emily thing. Rose and Alice will love her even still. I got a little weepy with Bella when she told Emily to stop kicking her. I have no idea what she's going through but I can imagine. and then Edward stood her up. yeah she needed a good cry. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you!
Yeah, I got some tears in my eyes as I wrote that part..

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: A mother's touch

aww he is too sweet. At least Bella can go to sleep now. lol the quote was from New Moon and it wasn't cheesy but soo true. lol keep up the great work. I loved the sneaking around like teenagers. too cute. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Best birthday ever

Aww Poor Bella. she's scared out of her mind over her tummy moving. lol I love it and the quote is from Sweet Home Alabama. Love that movie. thanks again so much. bye for now

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Scared of something beautiful

YEA Daddyward!! I liked that chapter. Poor Edward got cockblocked twice! I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Starting of a new life

Aww they're married! YEAH!! and the baby's coming. Even bigger YEAH!!! I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Emily Grace Cullen

Well I wanted his hair and her eyes but since she has Bella's hair, I want Edward's eyes. :D lol I loved that chapter. it was too sweet. Edward was so caring and sweet. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Coming Home

how about LEMONY?? lol no I'm kidding. I know Bella's probably super sore so its going to be awhile before then but one can hope right? lol and Alice well Alice is upset because she doesn't have a baby of course. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye p.s. please expand on Edward's thoughts of wondering what Bella's breastmilk taste like. that would be a great great outtake or lemon. :D thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: On our own

aww they are too cute. thanks for that chapter. we got daddy/daughter time mixed with mommy/daddy hot sexy time. lol love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Halfway to fifty

why on earth would you read a story and ask repeatedly how many chapters you had left? who cares. read and enjoy. this story is amazing especially with Edward's vulgar potty mouth mixed with daddyness. too cute. keep up the great work. thanks again bye p.s. the best line: you pumped your tits? lol too funny thanks bye



Author's Response:

I don't know, you have to ask the ones who asked ^^

Thank you so much! :D

xx
Gelix

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Therapy

Congrats on getting a job! I'm so proud of you! feel better? not so nervous? good lol poor Bella. James was the dick in that flashback not poor Edward btw is James going to make a reappearance in later chapter? just wondering. I'm so happy for the sequel. EEK!! lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Alone Time

Boo to getting up at 4 oclock. lol but YEA on this chapter. :D I loved it. Hot HOT welcome back to marriage sex and both Edward and Bella being missing parents. what's not to love? keep up the great work and I can't wait till the sequel. :D thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 46: S: First day in school

I'll be here! that chapter was cute not to mention hot as hell. I love how everytime Bella tells her something she says Daddy? bc she wants his say too. lol and I know all about that pacifer thing. My little sister had hers until she was 4. She would not get rid of it to save her life. I can't wait for another chapter thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 47: S: A Shocking Surprise

YEA!! Another baby! I have to say though I can't wait for the reunion especially to see how Edward treats Bella among all the people who helped him make fun of her. I know it will be different bc he's in love with her but I still can't wait to see. :D I love how Patient Edward is with grouchy Bella. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: S: High School Reunion

Aww a baby boy, car sex and a little bit of a spoiled girl. lol perfect chapter. I love the real life stuff thrown in. too cute. I can't wait for more but I'm really sad to see this story go. :( keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: S: Father's Day

That works FINE for me! lol and aww! Emily is too precious. I loved that she was thinking they were going to replace her and that they reassured her. that's too cute. poor thing. keep up the awesome work. can't wait till they're back to being all Edward/Bella snugglies. :D thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: S: Epilogue

AWW!! that ended nicely. really. I'm glad it ended like that. it was sweet and Emily got her date with Jarod. :D too cute. I'm sad to see this go but glad there might be outtakes and who knows maybe more stories that I will read from you in the future. :D thanks again soo much

Dream to Reality by mehek18 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dream

Summary - All Human. Edward turns sixteen. Emmett forces him to go to a strip club for his birthday. Bella is dared to be a strip dancer for the night. What will happen to two virgins when they meet? De-virginizing Edward, never entered contest but now is longer than one shot.

This banner is made by my very close friend in this fandom - Chynnadoll36

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2117759/chynnadoll36

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15046 Read Count: 5835
[Report This] Published: 27 May 2010 Updated: 16 Jul 2010
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 30 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow that girl just reeks of confidence. Go Bella! lol I love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

WOW!!! that was HOT HOT HOT! sorry for the caps but it was. I'm so glad you updated. those two are too cute together with just learning and all. too sweet. i love it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

well we know they're going to go through with it so don't leave us hanging. lol that bit by bit play was hotter than hell though. I love that they eased slowly into the names. too sweet. keep up the great work. thanks so much again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

AWW that was a mean ending but in some weird way I liked it. thanks again bye

My Boys by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 634]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan hasn't seen her boys, Emmett, Jasper, and Edward Cullen, in over thirteen years. Just when they find each other again, an outside threat nearly tears them apart. B/E, A/J,R/EM. NC-17 for lemons and language.

Banner by Mkystich

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115498 Read Count: 144904
[Report This] Published: 11 Jun 2010 Updated: 31 Jul 2010
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

aww that chapter was cute. and this story is going so well. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

aww as long as you have family, that's all you need. :) I love how Jake is a big douche and is saying that he's not guilty even though they have 6 or 7 witnesses saying he did. too funny. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I feel the worst for Edward because he had to sit and watch what was happening to Bella and not do anything about it. that's bound to drive someone crazy. that poor guy. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

aww they are all too sweet. I love it. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

poor Bella. that girl is miserable. and poor Emmett for getting snapped at like that but she warned him. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

well for winging it you are doing an awesome job. :) I like it so far. I'm sad there's no more lemons but completely understandable. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:) The lemons will be coming(hehe) back soon, I promise.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I liked that chapter and Jacob is so funny just throwing out questions. Were you drinking? Are you and Rosalie gay? lol that was too funny and Bella's response to sleeping with Edward was awesome. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

lol, Thanks:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

First off that whole thing with Billy, as morbid as it sounds was hilarious as hell. I loved those lies and then the whole story line between Jake and Billy was disturbing but good for the story. keep up the great work. I can't believe they died so easily though. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thanks ;)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

well it was great. I loved James and Laurant especially with them being gay. lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 13 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

oooh the shit is going to hit the fan now. that girl better not blame Edward when obviously she heard what Jessica said, that two timing HOOCHIE! lol I can't wait to find out how Bella puts her in her place. PLEASE let her show Jessica who Edward belongs to. :D this is going so great. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

you meanie! lol okay I trust there's a reason for keeping us waiting so long so I'll forgive you now. lol thanks for the great work. keep it up. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

lol, thank you for trusting me! I promise the next chapter will be worth it, I hope ;)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 15 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

its about time that ho was set in her place. I can't wait till they both are fully 'recovered' so the lemons will be back. :D I know I'm a perv. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

lol that was cute. I love the conversation they were having in the "middle of the battlefield". lol I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

poor Jane and poor Laurant. i love the teamwork between Rose and Bella thought. that was nice. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

aww that conversation between Edward Bella, Natalie and Hazel was sweet. I loved that and then the first time, again. that was hot. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

oooh Rosalie has MONEY! and CLASS! poor emmett. lol I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 20 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

wow the focus from Edward and Bella to Rosalie and Emmett was shocking but so good. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Well all of them? at the same time? that's the way to do it. lol I can't wait for more. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

lol I bet Jasper is thinking Alice had something going with some teacher. lol. sorry :) i can't wait. this is getting good. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Next up is Edward's pov right? ;) that chapter was sad but informational. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Couple more of Alice's POV's then we go to Edward. I promise it will be worth it!

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

aww that almost had me crying. :( I love that Alice is just like Bella in Charlie and Renee's eyes. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

wow that was shocking. lol I love that there's a sequel though. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Yeah I bet she did. lol I loved their game. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

aww they were soo nervous. that's too cute. Also WAY TO GO CHARLIE, getting his freak on. lol I loved it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Edward's was sweet and got me a little teary eyed. lol thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

aww Edward's made me cry but I liked this one too. :) thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

lol I love that there wasn't any drama and that everyone said yes. not one of those girls said no, I mean not that they should. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

To The Extreme by dont_run Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 258]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

He's a cocky and arrogant dare devil. Bella's mind knows she should stay away from him. To bad her body doesn't agree. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78446 Read Count: 29924
[Report This] Published: 20 Jun 2010 Updated: 12 Nov 2012
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

um YEAH? you should definately make this a story. I can see this going places but would this remain T or would it go up to maybe a M rating? just curious. I would read it anyway. :) thanks again bye



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review. If I do expand it, it will go to an M or NC-17 rating.

Exclusively by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

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WINNER - TEXTS FROM LAST NIGHT CONTEST - hosted on Fanfiction.net

 

Edward was a sexual predator. The bars and clubs of Manhattan were his hunting ground. Would he let the ultimate prize slip through his fingers?


Categories: Alternate Universe, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22733 Read Count: 2971
[Report This] Published: 18 Jul 2010 Updated: 31 May 2011
Reviewer: jbe86 Signed
Date: 19 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Exclusively Bella's POV

Edward's bc he's so possessive its hot as hell. lol that's it? I would like an epilogue but then again I would love more chapters too so whichever way, I'm there. :D thanks again bye



Author's Response:

It's been ages, but I've posted the Epilogue...I hope you enjoy :)

http://www.thewriterscoffeeshop.com/library/viewstory.php?sid=2617

Luv BBxx