Reviews by MiraBella
Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211508
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: MiraBella Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Omg this is it! So close to the prologue, please hurry with the next chapter! This story is so captivating :D

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak. 

I added a separate story called "Parachute Outtakes" as a place to keep everything together! There's an outtake of the new car purchase and Jack's 8th birthday up right now! Check it out! Feel free to leave any suggestions for future outtakes in your reviews over there! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review because you guys rock my socks!

Also, as another head's up, Parachute's 1000th reviewer will get to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and maybe a little something else. It's the best way that I can think to to thank you guys for all of your love and support!

<3

Shel


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Charlie cast his line out into the lake, watching Jack out of the corner of his eye. It was obvious that the boy had a lot on his mind. 

"Well, kid," Charlie started, "you look like you need someone to talk to. That's why we're out here. Nothing like the peace and tranquility of fishing to help clear your mind. I come out here a lot more now that you and your mom moved into your own place." 

Charlie noticed that Jack flinched a little when he mentioned Bella. Jack sighed and continued to gaze out over the water. 

"Will she?" he asked. Charlie raised an eyebrow.

"Will she what?"

"Will she still be my mom if we go to Chicago to meet my family?" 

When Jack turned towards him, Charlie's heart broke at how the boy's eyes were filled with sadness. He cleared the emotion out of his throat.

"Of course she will. Bella will love you and consider you her son until the day she dies. One thing you gotta learn about us Swan's, Jack, is that when we love, we love forever, just like the actual birds. You'll always be a part of our hearts." 

Charlie blinked back tears as Jack let his drip down his face.

"I don't want to leave you or mom, Pops. Please don't let them keep me!" he cried.


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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is a bestselling author who lives in seclusion.  Edward is a has-been actor with no penny on his name.  When Bella picked up a homeless Edward on the beach, she is determined to get him back into acting.  Edward is doing his best not to get into Bella's pants... and also help her get out of her shell.

 

All things Twilight belongs to Stephenie Meyer.  The rest of the story belongs to me.

Thanks, TKegl for the awesome banner!  

 

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Thank you, SoapyMayhem for this awesome banner!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67093 Read Count: 19867
[Report This] Published: 29 Dec 2010 Updated: 31 Jan 2011
Reviewer: MiraBella Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh i feel for Tanya even if i don't want to! 

Btw, did Edward suddenly change his name or...? Haha very good chapter though! Cant wait for the next!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment and pointing out the gaffe.  You know it. ;-)  I would give Tanya her redemption.  She has to especially since she never knew love.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Thanks to AcrosstheSkyinStars for the amazing banner.

 

After getting lost in the woods on a camping trip, Bella finds a man who is living a different life. Can two such different worlds mesh when communication is nearly impossible? 

(There are no werewolves or vampires in this fic)


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68305 Read Count: 68253
[Report This] Published: 02 Apr 2011 Updated: 07 Jan 2012
Reviewer: MiraBella Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Awh oh my god the progress that Edward has made is amazing! I'm so happy for him and Bella as well :')

Summary:

Bella has moved back to Forks following a traumatic year. She is placed into temporary foster care with the Cullen's and meets Edward who is also battling his own demons. Life isn't a fairy tale; or maybe it is! Rated M for language AH E&B

This story is on hiatus. I'm sorry to any readers who are waiting for a new chapter, but I really want to concentrate on my other story 'Wrecked with Bella'. I may come back to OUaSN, but I don't want to make any promises I might not keep.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 135285 Read Count: 5141
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2011 Updated: 29 Dec 2011
Reviewer: MiraBella Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Charlie's House

Wow, i'm really loving this story! Great Job! :D



Author's Response:

Hi MiraBella

I'm glad that you're enjoying the story.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Regards

JKazzie

Summary: Past Featured Story


In August of 1931, almost two years after the disastrous stock market crash on Wall Street, Bella's wealthy family suddenly find themselves broke and homeless in New York City. She is sent to live on her birth father's struggling farm in Oklahoma and soon the pampered, well-to-do city girl is forced to face life as a poor country bumpkin. The transition will not be easy for the overindulged sixteen year old. To make matters worse, choking dust storms, a dangerous drought and the hiring of a handsome but hardheaded homeless man will complicate Bella's life even further.

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 105878 Read Count: 23903
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2011 Updated: 30 Jul 2013
Reviewer: MiraBella Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Woah okay im intrigued haha great start!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing.  I'm glad you like it :)