Reviews by rclaurel3
40 Something by phillips Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 267]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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This is about a older Edward and Bella 40 somethings. The story starts with a very unhappy Bella and her husband Jacob . Edward and Bella have yet to meet so bare with me for a while.

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward/Jacob
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 52 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 70470 Read Count: 57329
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 13 Nov 2014
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Date: 23 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 38

I think she seriously needs to speak with a shrink...

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Date: 08 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 48

I wouldn't go down with out a fight, pick something up and hit her with it..

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Date: 05 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 32

Tanya got off to easy, I hope this doesn't come back to bite Bella in the ASS...Tanya attacked her first

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Date: 26 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 42

I am glad someone finally told him to stop being a dick

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Date: 25 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 41

Edward you need counseling buddy, can you not read between the lines, So he has to sleep with someone to be sure that he is just friends with Bella just terrific and then what after he sleeps with Jane he will want Bella....I would so No to him when he came calling.....because you stack a claim on Bella in front of another man, then you flaunt another women in front of Bella's face...just say NO bella

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Date: 20 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 18

Did not see that....Edward kick Tanya and Kate out, with this shame of a marriage, your only hurting your little girl in the process..

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Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow I did not see him dying, he got off to easy.....I wonder who will come out from this..

Author's Response:

This is just the begining for poor Bella. Thanks for the review.

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Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19

Boy he is an ASS...he wife cheats on him and he is going to make her life easy for when she dies.....she should have thought about that before she cheated..

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Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I would have walked the other way and right out of the life.....he is to controlling

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Date: 01 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

well he's an ass to begin with now she want to leave him she couldn't because he would say he just recovered from a heart attack you can't leave me also cheating on her what has been goes to a bar stay there till early hours of the morning and doesn't want her to go

Author's Response:

You could be right the next chapter will shed more light on things. Thanks for review. 

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Date: 03 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

He probably had a mistress and other children or he was a gambler..

Author's Response:

You maybe right she will find out either next chapter if not one after.

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Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Damn a cliffy...LOL...can not wait for more

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Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well I can see where she is bitter, but to lump all men in to the category is not wise....no man is the same.

Author's Response:

The problem is she only has Jacob to compare men and relationships too. I think it will take a lot to trust a man again or to put herself out there to start another relationship. Thanks for review.

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Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow having to live like that is understandable, The first step is to realize what is wrong, which she has now lets see the New and Improved Isabella....Take charge of life again.....Stand up Tall and Proud of yourself and show those bastards...

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Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: 40 Something

Edward has arrived I presume

Author's Response:

Yes he has but he will be her councellor so it will be professional no emotional involvment at least not for the immediate future. If at all. Thanks for review

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Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 12

Oh it is also happening to Edward....I do hope that they build some sort of friendship if you are not going to make them get together

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Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 13

As long the is in her name they can't do shit...

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Date: 14 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 17

she is cheating, follow her when she leaves tomorrow....then bamm caught and leave her with nothing.

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Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 20

Well Edward even has his parents snowed about his own marriage

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Date: 27 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 24

and Kate will have no rights to Angela, but she really doesn't care about the child either....good for you Edward kick her Ass to the curb

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Date: 30 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 25

What has he no self respect, In no way does he have to cater to Tanya and Kate...make Tanya go to Kate's house a couple nights a week

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Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 26

I still think Edward is an ASS for letting that bitch in his house, she might try to kill him before Tanya dies...and Is it really true that Tanya is dying or is it a trick..

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Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 27

Oh wait till Tanya hears about Angela's new friend, love kids

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Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 28

That is because Kate is always there and she is jealous of Angela getting attention from Tanya

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Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 33

Thats just great...now Tanya thinks she loves Edward and he will have to stay by her side and pretend to be in Love for how much time she has left and Bella just has to sit back and watch them plus also watch their daughter...Kate is going to be a problem for Bella, while Edward is watching over Tanya and Bella has no one to watch out for her....Loving this story

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 34

Now crazy Kate is after Bella, poor Bella can not catch a break anywhere...first her cheating husband and her awful Son and sister in law

Author's Response:

Your right. Kate was obsessed with Tanya and is looking to blame anyone. It doesn't matter to Kate if Tanya attacked Bella first. All that matters to Kate, is that she was cheated out of being with Tanya at the end. Also she thinks Tanya may have had longer had she not hit her head when Bella pushed her. She won't listen to reason, she has all ready made her mind up it's Bella's fault. Bella gets over one hurdle and then something else happens. Thanks for review.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 35

Wow she is one psycho bitch, please Tanya has been cheating on Edward all this time with you Kate while he sat back and watched.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 36

He needs a good ASS whooping, never hit your momma boy.

Summary:

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Bella is a Drama Student in UCLA. Edward Cullen is an up and coming actor. When these two meet on the set of his new movie, sparks begin to fly. What does this mean for their current boyfriend and girlfriend back home? E/B pairing eventually. Rated M for Language and Lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 56387 Read Count: 34698
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2014 Updated: 09 Dec 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

But you let Jacob walk all over you..

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Date: 23 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

loved it cannot wait to see more read more I know tanya is going to be a problem later on but what is up with Rose why wouldn't she be happy that her brother is happy and we still haven't heard from Jacob yet oh sure and you'll be fireworks down the road

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Thanksgiving part 2

bye bye Jakey poo.....Hello Hot Stuff

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Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Will the first date did not go all that well, I hope Bella can be a strong one thru this shit storm that is about to happen.

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Date: 20 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well how did she get there so fast from Paris....And her being a model should know that what you see in papers are have truths...

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Date: 03 Jun 2015 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

loved it, can not wait till they make a press release...

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I am thinking that it is not jacob. And that it may be Tanya

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well I wouldn't stay in that house, her and Alice can get a motel room....because Tanya and Rose will still be there glaring

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 31 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is this a Bella and Jacob story or Bella and Edward...

Author's Response: I'm sorry, I thought I made it clear in the summary that this was a Bella and Edward story. It will start off with Edward and Bella been with other partners, for instant, Bella is with Jacob and Edward is with Tanya but Bella and Edward will be getting together further down the line and remember, I believe in a happily ever after.

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Date: 06 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

[b]Bells, you have as much chance of getting this opportunity as anyone else. Remember, no matter what I am so proud of you. No matter what, you will always be my girl," he said kissing my cheek.[/b]

I bet he will regret saying tht

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Supposedly these two people are so in Love with their significant other, how in the world are Bella and Edward to fall in Love or Lust..

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Date: 02 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Never like Jake it was his way or nothing and to wish she died should his true feelings in the book.....love the story now lets see Bella and Edward meet and what about Tanya the love of his life.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Why would you want to put Bella and Edward together, they seem somewhat happy with the girlfriend/boyfriend that they have. Just because Bella is tutoring under Edward doesn'tean they have to hookup

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Date: 23 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Well Edward keeps saying that Tanya is the one he is going to marry, so why doesn't he leave Bella alone and stick to Tanya...I feel sorry for Tanya she has done nothing wrong, the one with the improper thoughts is Edward

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Date: 11 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I can understand Tanya, she is his girlfriend but Rose she just wanted to cause trouble. If I was Edward he should take everyone and go to a Hotel and see how miss Rose and Tanya feel

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

YESSSSSSSSSSS, Ding Dong the Witch is gone

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Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Loved it....I would like to see a preview of the next chapter..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Damn I thought Rosalie was going to be on Bella's side then BAM the bitch true colors come out..

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Date: 09 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Authors note

Ok. See you in the new year.

Summary:

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When looking through a peephole, life can pass you by and not everything is as it seems.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9850 Read Count: 1633
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2014 Updated: 04 Aug 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loving this

The Twilight cliff by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Tanya is a lonely girl, working on her confidence and trying to move on with her life, she thinks she found her future with a new man. Bella and Edward moved to make a fresh start in a new enviroment. Will they get it? AH OCC EXB

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21001 Read Count: 6731
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

the house is haunted and Tanya is the cousin or Jake..

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I wish I could say something, but all I can do is to promise to post soon. :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 10 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Esme is one sick woman..doesn't she know if she hurts Bella Edward would never forgive her

Author's Response:

She's very self centered.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

May

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Oh shit she is going to hurt Bella, well the surprise is that Rose is there also

Author's Response:

Hi!

You have to consider Esme is a devious mom. ;)

Thanks for erading and commenting.

May

Summary:

Title says it all:   Making It Right: Alternative Ending to True Blood Finale


Categories: Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Alternate Universe
Characters: Eric/Sookie
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2847 Read Count: 357
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2014 Updated: 26 Aug 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Please, He only cared for Sookie not Loved only when he had amnesia did he think he loved her, he got what he deserved to sit upon his thrown and look miserable...and she got her happy ending, a family and to be alive..

Author's Response:

Well, that's your opinion and your entitled to it.  But my little shipper heart always preferred Eric and Sookie.  

Summary:

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When an amazing opportunity finally comes up to have everything they want, will they take it? Can they remain professional for the sake of success? Celebrating never felt so good.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 56096 Read Count: 22641
[Report This] Published: 29 Aug 2014 Updated: 28 Aug 2018
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Decisions, Decisions

Love it....can not wait to see where you take this baby

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~URGENT!

excellent chapter

Summary:

Edward and Bella run separate gun for hire groups, but are thrust together after the Swans move back to Chicago. The parents rekindle relationships and the new generation learn to share, but what will happen when their most threatening foe sees that together they pose an even bigger threat? Will Edward and Bella escape the Hunters in one piece? Rated M for violence & sexy goodness.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Humor, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16930 Read Count: 2851
[Report This] Published: 04 Sep 2014 Updated: 13 Sep 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 7: The Brady Bunch

I love his point of view, can not wait for more

Author's Response:

I appreciate you letting me know and thanks so much! Enjoy!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 14 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Pretty With A Pistol

Wow they will make a great team together...and the others are matched as well...

Author's Response:

I like to think so. :)

Baby Girl Grey by LizLemon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

The Untold Story of when the Grey's had a daughter


Categories: Canon, Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Elliot Grey/Kate Kavanagh
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Romantic Comedy
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22961 Read Count: 9226
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Sep 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Hints

How is she married before Christian' knows about the second pregnancy, I thought when he found out she was pregnant a second time then they would get married

Summary:

Christian and Ana have a chance encounter that will change the course of their lives forever.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Alternate Universe
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dangerous Liasons, Pure Romance, Rich & Notorious
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52365 Read Count: 15899
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2014 Updated: 07 Sep 2014
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Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

LOving this.....

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

she is stupid, and she deserves Luc

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

when was she pregnant the first time...maybe I am confusing my self with the present and 3 years later

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Now I understand, loved the chapter that was sweet of her..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Loved it....wish there was more

Summary:

Bella decides to move in with Charlie, when she realizes that her mom is missing her husband Phil. Once Bella moves and settles in with Charlie on the first night she begins to have weird dreams of the supernatural and a goddess, telling her the stories of the supernatural. Council meetings, vampires, werewolves, witches, warlocks, and many more… The goddess leaves Bella a gift the night before she starts school. “Yeah, a council meeting, things changed Bells. Forks, isn’t the same anymore.” AU


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Adventure, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Humor, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi, Supernatural, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Action-Adventure, Happily Ever After, Supernatural, YA - High School
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12393 Read Count: 2081
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2014 Updated: 25 Nov 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

loved it, can not wait for more

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Excellent, I wonder what powers she has and will Edward and his family show themselves soon

Why I love him by Sexything2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bella and Edward have been happily married for ten years now. What happen in they're marriage that would make Edward sleep with Tanya. What will Bella do when she find out she pregnant?    

only 21 and older

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2473 Read Count: 3829
[Report This] Published: 07 Sep 2014 Updated: 08 Sep 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes I would kick both their Asses out of my house

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2014 Title: Why I love him

I hope she doesn't come back..He wants his cake and to eat it too.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Going on horrible dates was something that Bella always did well at. Nothing made her happier then to see the back of a man as he fled to get away from her. She was having so much fun until she ended up on a date with the most chauvinistic man in New York. How could one date have gone so wrong? Now her little tricks maybe the reason she is forced to stay with a man she loathes.    

THANK YOU TO IPSITA CHAUDHURI FOR HER AMAZING BANNER!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81908 Read Count: 36614
[Report This] Published: 11 Sep 2014 Updated: 19 Dec 2018
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow he is an undercover FBI agent...Bella needs to put her big girl pants on and listen to the fine gentleman

Summary:

Bella is leery of falling in love. She soon learns that life is filled with countless forms and degrees of emotions. There is love, loss, healing, and everything in between. BxE. Canon couples. AH-OOC. HEAVY ANGST in later chapters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10590 Read Count: 3211
[Report This] Published: 15 Sep 2014 Updated: 24 Nov 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am in can not wait to read

Summary:

lci

 

Desperate times call for desperate measures, but how far would you go to escape? How can three men help three girls out of their sticky situations, or help them into them for that matter? Canon, non-canon, everything goes. You have been warned. ExB

 

This will be the only warning given for this story: This story is based on a porn site. There will be plenty of sex. Mixed couples, slash, HET, bi, anal. Basically, anything goes. If you are easily offended, please do not continue.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 86216 Read Count: 192180
[Report This] Published: 29 Sep 2014 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I love the Connection they all seem to have with each other..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Loving this

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

He picks Bella, so is E&E Edward and Emmett

Author's Response:

Yep. :) xxx

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love it

Author's Response:

Thanks hun :) xx

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I don't know how all this sharing each others male friends will effect them later, but I am enjoying reading this.

Summary:

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While out for a night with the girls, Bella gets a text that sends her running home. A Texts From Last Night Contest entry.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6073 Read Count: 3403
[Report This] Published: 04 Oct 2014 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Running Home

Loved it

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The Pop Religion tour has paired sexy pop star, Issa Swan, with the leading Christian rock band Pure Religion. After watching sexy but chaste lead singer Edward Cullen perform night after night and really getting to know him, she can't take it anymore. Tonight, she intends to make him hers.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122122 Read Count: 16292
[Report This] Published: 15 Oct 2014 Updated: 30 Nov 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Ocean Waves

excellent chapter can't wait to read more about this too and the rest

Author's Response:

Thanks! Time to pick up the pace and get to what you're waiting for, it's coming soon :)Thanks so much for reviewing, we cherish every single one :)

Fyre

This has Alice and Rose written all over it.

I get up and head down the hall yelling at them both to get their a*** up. Of course Jasper and Edward get up with the noise, too.

"What have you done?" I say through gritted teeth, looking at Alice.

"What?" she asks, trying to look innocent.

"It seems one of the girls ..."

"Jessica," Jake supplies.

"Jessica ... has received a card directing her to the nearest clinic to get tested for an STD," I say, giving her a raised brow. 

She just smirks.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Not So Thankful

Wow her parents are out there, they should always support their daughter...Atleast she is out there making a living and not being a bum.

Author's Response:

Her paresnts are terrible. I can't imagine as a parent myself ever acting like that. Sadly it isn't as rare as one would think. Some people should never have had children. Thankfully Bella has great friends and now a sweet country boy in her corner. Thank you so much for staying with us and for reviewing. We appreciate it so much! XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Moving Forward

Well if anyone is going to get to Charlie it is Edward, and what is up with Alice she rather lose Jasper because he won't sleep with her if they ain't married, Rose seems to have turned around and Emmett still wants to be with her knowing that she has slept with other men.

Author's Response:

Yep, that's a fact. Edward had some things to say and hopefully Charlie will listen. Alice has issues with the no sex tilmarriage and Jasper will not budge on his vow, so until they can agree it just won't work. Maybe something will make her see the light soon ;) Emmett finally manned up and claimed his gorl and no, he does not care one bit that she isn't a virgin. Thanks so much for leaving your thoughts, Merry Christmas! Here's your teaser for 20...

Fyre

My mother scoffs. "Mr. Cullen, I'm sure she has you thinking she's amazing right now, and if what I hear about you is true then I'm sure it was easy to be lured in when you are as innocent as you are. But we know our daughter well."


Edward crosses his arms over his chest, and I can tell he's getting angry. "I'm not sure you do, Mrs. Swan. I don't think ya know her at all. I don't think you can see past your own bitterness at whatever has you hatin' life so much to see anythin'. For sure not your beautiful daughter."


My mother laughs. "That's very sweet. It's cute you're so protective. I can tell you really love her. That actually makes me feel bad for you since I know she's just going to screw you over."


Edward opens his mouth to say something when suddenly my father's hand slams down on the table, rattling all the glasses and silverware.    

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Edward and the Teeny Weeny

Jessica and Lauren will never learn....can not wait to see what happens when they go home for Thanksgiving

Author's Response:

They really won't. Lol. I'm so thrilled that you're excited. Hopefully you'll be pleased. *mwah*

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Bella Meet Edward

Yes, and she is pure of heart....why is she putting herself down, she is doing something that she loves and why can't she be with Edward she is still a virgin....I don't know about Alice and Rose since they are not virgins....It would go against the vow Jasper and Emmett made so I can not wait to see where you take them for those couples to get together.

Author's Response:

She is pure of heart and Edward sees that. Thank you so much for reviewing all the chapters. We hope you continue to enjoy the story and where we take these characters. Hopefully we will see you Saturday. :)

Lissa

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Edward Meet Bella

Wow so Bella is still a Virgin but what about Rose and Alice.....I already can guess Jessica and Lauren are not.

Author's Response:

Ah yes, Bella is still a virgin. As for Rose and Alice no they aren't. And definitely not Jessica and Lauren either. There is a One Shot this fic came from. We entered in a contest and won public vote. I will try to get it posted soon here. But be warned IMO it is a spoiler of a major plot point as it takes place on the very last night of the tour. 

Fyre

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Bella

can not wait till they tour together, and sparks might fly

Author's Response:

It's Edward and Bella so you just know spark will fly. Lol. Sparks and clothing eventually. ;) Thanks for reading. We appreciate all our readers and every single review. XOXO

Lissa

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 16 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Edward

Love it...can not wait to read more

Author's Response:

Hi! We're so glad you've found and reviewed our fic. As of now we've caught up with our posting schedule. Chapters 1-4 are posted and you can expect a new chapter every Saturday until it is complete. Thanks so much for leaving us areviews, it means so much to hear what others think :)

Fyre

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The Beginning

Jessica called Edward Bella's boyfriend..So there going to elope and not have sex or tell anyone till the tour is over.

Author's Response:

Edward definitely plans to stick to his vow... but just how long can he keep it and Bella honor it without something happening. ;) Thank you so much for reviewing. And thanks for reading and following our tale. Here is a tiny sneak peek into the next chapter. XOXO
Lissa

I tell 'em that I'm in love with Bella and that I'm lucky enough to have her love me back. Emmett's happy for me, but Jasper's a little skeptical.

"Man, you sure this is the path you wanna take with a woman?" he asks me.

"Whacha mean?" I ask him back, 'cause I don't know where he's going with this.

"I mean, are you sure you wanna end up with a woman who's been with other men?"

I don't know how to respond to that. I mean, of course she hasn't, but that's Bella's business. It's not my place to talk about her sex life, or lack thereof, with my brothers. So I go with evasion.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Goodbye and Hello

I love them, Carlisle is judgmental and he doesn't even know Bella

Author's Response:

Carlisle definitely doesn\'t seem to be practicing what he preaches, but hopefully he will come around. Thanks so much for continuing this journey with us and Edward and Bella. And thank you for reviewing! Here is a teaser for next week\'s chapter. XOXO
Lissa

\"Edward, what did your parents say? I mean, you had to tell them, right?\"

He rubs the back of his neck and looks down. I know then I\'m not going to like what he\'s going to tell me.

\"I, uh, I didn\'t tell \'em what I was doin\',\" he says quietly, but I definitely hear him.

\"Where do they think you are? Surely they asked where you were going.\"

He\'s still looking down. Apparently he finds my table very interesting. \"Uh, I may have told \'em I had some stuff to do in Atlanta.\"

I get up and grab the plates. \"Are you, um, are you embarrassed to tell them about me?\"

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Dearly Beloved

Yes they are MARRIED!

Author's Response:

They are!!! Time to face everybody else soon ;) Next two chapters will be coming soon!! Thanks so much for leaving us a review, we love reading every single one!

Fyre

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 02 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Big Changes

YESSSSSSSSS

Author's Response:

I know! *Squee* This is the chapter that started it all so we have been so excited to post it. Now we get to see how everyone handles it. Thanks so much for reading and for your review. Here's a little teaser for chapter 15. ;) XOXO
Lissa

“Do we needa call a doctor?” I ask him.

“Nah, she just fainted.” He turns to look at me. “What were you thinkin’?”

“What do you mean what was I thinkin’?” I ask, because seriously, they’re the ones showing up at my hotel room in the middle of the night.

He stands up and to his full height. “I mean, what were you thinkin’ announcin’ somethin’ like that without no warnin’? I’m disappointed in you, son.”

Before I can respond there’s another knock at the door. I glance over to Bella and she motions that she’s got it.
 
I look back to my dad. “What do ya mean, warnin’? You’re the one showin’ up at my hotel door, on my wedding night no less, without any warnin’!” I done raised my voice a little toward the end there. But this is crap. He’s lucky I answered at all.

“Your wedding night?” Emmett asks. I glance over and the whole crew’s standing there looking a little dumbfounded.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Bring on the Sharks

Well that went better then I expected, lets hope Rose and Alice can get with the program and forgive Bella

Author's Response:

Yep, Esme surprised us! All girls chapter coming up, the boys will follow. Let's hope the girls don't go too rough on her. Thanks sooooo much for your words. The reviews for chapter 14 were so unexpected and such a pleasant surprise. We will be sticking firm for next Wed though ;) Here's a small teaser to keep you til then though...


Fyre

Finally, Mrs. Cullen puts her menu away and turns to Edward and me. "Son, will you please fill us in on what happened? How the two of you came to be married?"

Edward looks at me and smiles, and then he turns to his mama. "Sure ..."

Mr. Cullen interrupts, "Yes, Edward. Please tell us how you came to marry Miss Issa here when we weren't even made aware that you two were datin'. It seems we have a lot of catchin' up to do."

Edward frowns at his dad. "Well, I was tryin' to tell ya how I came to marry Bella,"-he makes sure to stress my real name-"before ya interrupted." 

"By all means, please continue then," Mr. Cullen says as he makes a go ahead motion with his hand.    

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 A Day at the Spa

Excellent Chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. We appreciate your review and that you are enjoying the story enough to continue reading. :) XOXO

Lissa

 

Here is a teaser for the next chapter...

 

Ten minutes into the ride and no one has uttered a word. The silence is almost worse than the tongue lashing I'm sure Emmett is dying to let loose of.

Finally, Jasper breaks the silence. He holds his hand out to me for a shake and says, "Congratulations, Edward. I'm happy for you and Bella."

"Congratulations? Congratulations!" Emmett yells out, turning to look at us like we're crazy. "How can you congratulate him on sneakin' off into the night and gettin' married?" He looks to Jasper.

"It wasn't sneakin' off into the night. It was durin' the day. Quit bein' such a drama queen," I bite out.

"Now hold up"—Jasper holds his hands up—"Bella's already like family to me. They didn't do anythin' to me by gettin' married. Yeah, I'm a little hurt not to be invited, but I trust Edward to know what he's doin'."

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Trouble In Paradise?

Christmas Day or Night would be a lovely treat...

Author's Response:

Okay. Thank you so much for letting us know your thoughts. Also thank you for reading. I hope you have a great holiday. XOXO

Lissa

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A/U AH - Three Witch sisters move from Salem, MA to Houston TX where they rent to own the ancestral home of one Edward Cullen. For some reason Edward has a dream about a dark haired beauty that he has yet to meet. Does Bella already have Edward under her spell? What mayhem will the Witch Sisters bring into the lives of Edward, his family and his friends?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47434 Read Count: 30293
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2014 Updated: 22 Oct 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Found you......I loved it

Author's Response:

I'm glad you did!  I'm very happy that you enjoyed it.  Hope to hear from you more.

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Summary:

pr

 

The Pop Religion tour has paired sexy pop star, Issa Swan, with the leading Christian rock band Pure Religion. After watching sexy but chaste lead singer Edward Cullen perform night after night and really getting to know him, she can't take it anymore. Tonight, she intends to make him hers.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6112 Read Count: 552
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2014 Updated: 25 Oct 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Pop Religion OneShot

They got married so where along the tour and saved themselves for after the last show

Author's Response:

Yes they did. Now you have to keep reading the fic to see how that all went down ;) Thank you so much for continuing to read and review every time we post a new chapter and now the O/S too. We love hearing your comments and thoughts along the way. 

 

Fyre

Summary:

Edward is from old money. Bella is not.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33054 Read Count: 32552
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2014 Updated: 26 Dec 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Can not wait to read more

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am in for the next journey

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I am so proud of Bella..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I can see where this is going , Bella will just happen to be at the same place and think Edward moved on

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I knew not to trust her, and how did she get in the apartment and I am sure she will be the first to tell Bella

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh Vic's little plan backfired

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I am so glad you didn't go the route of Bella seeing and getting mad before she knew what happened

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

maybe he wants to ask Bella to marry him, I knew I shouldn't trust Vic..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OH please tell me Bella isn't going to go off on Edward for something he had no control over...