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Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time.
One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex.
Awkward morning after follows…
Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…
What happens when one realizes that they want more??
Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983316
When his bitterness is the only thing controlling his present, will he ever be able to find happiness in his future? At some point, Bella was everything that Edward has ever wanted. With her past and his, will they ever be able to let go and take a second chance in life? Rated NC-17 for langague and scenes.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12698 Read Count: 1474
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
That was a sad chapter can not wait to read more
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
So Bella is his mistress. If she wants to hate someone it should be James not Victoria she seems to generally care for bella
Author's Response:
well, you know what they say about jelousy...
Thanks for reading <3
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
well she is going after another womans husband
Author's Response:
i know that, and you know that..
for her, he's the only one she's ever loved, and he's never loved her back.. she wants him, and she hate his wife for having him while she doesn't have anything at all.. got it?
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
His needs to go home to his mommy and heal himself....parents are usually always there when you need them...
Author's Response:
well, i second that!
let's see what happens next ^_^
thanks for stopping by <3
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Bella meets Edward and sparks fly. She thinks he's a charming businessman, but he's not. He's in the Mafia. How will she handle it when she finds out? Will an innocent girl like her be able to survive in his world? Darkward / Mobward / Possessiveward
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2817 Read Count: 185508
Date: 21 Mar 2014 Title: Relentless
Is she bypolar, she wants him and she doesn't want to be in an abusive relationship, where did he absure her himself...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. LOL she not bipolar, just a little confused. But once he extends the leash and gives her some freedom things are going to settle down and she is going to come into her own.
Date: 16 Feb 2014 Title: Relentless
Oh someone is going to be pissed, Eleazar has gone to far
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Edward is going to be seriously pissed off x
Date: 27 Feb 2014 Title: Relentless
Yes at least he has something to go on.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Yes, he knows who has here and has an idea where to find her, let's hope he can pull it off x x
Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Relentless
He found her..
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. x x
Date: 10 Jun 2014 Title: Relentless
car bomb...I hope Garrett is ok
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! The next chapter is with my beta. x x
Yeah, car bomb :(
Date: 21 Jun 2014 Title: Relentless
loved the chapter, can not wait to read more and find out what the deal with Charlie is and if they find Cauis
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. The next chapter is with my beta.
Date: 04 Aug 2014 Title: Relentless
She has lost what ever brains she had... Your with Edward why are you letting another man or woman touch you intimately
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! The next chapter of Relentless is with my beta and should be back soon. x x
Date: 09 Sep 2014 Title: Relentless
Wow didn't see the doctor telling her to stay away from him, I wonder if it will help them...
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. The next chapter is with my beta x x
Edward is a successful Hollywood actor whose life is controlled by people who think of him as a commodity and he is on the edge of a breakdown. When he loses Bella, the girl he loves, because of other peoples' greed and his own stupidity he walks away from his life and responsibilities, straight into the path of a strange and trusting woman to whom he spills his soul. A story with mature themes - NC17 for loving moments and language.
Banner by Cared Cullen
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88652 Read Count: 9556
Date: 09 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue 2
Wow I just loved this story, You have made James a good guy, most write him evil...well I can see why kate is helping people in need..she is a true Guardian Angel
Author's Response:
Hi,
Thanks for your kind comments and yes, James turned out OK in the end, mind you I'm sure dollar signs were going through his head when he helped Edward, but it was about time he had a bit of good press.
I'll be uploading my second story tonight - I hope you enjoy that too. It's not as romantic as TC - but it has it's moments (ahem)!
Thanks again for reviewing, for a new author it is greatly appreciated.
Best wishes,
Joan
Isabella Black lost her husband in the cruelest way possible. He wasted
away and was ravaged by the evil, silent killer, cancer. Five months after his initial diagnosis, he died, leaving Bella with their two young children, John, seven and Grace, five. A year after his death, Bella packs up her home in Phoenix and drives back to Forks, Washington to be closer to her family. Will she finally find a way to pick up the pieces with the help of her family, friends and a green-eyed cop?
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read, Bella 84's To Be Read List, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255357 Read Count: 101885
Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
very emotional chapter, I watched my sister in law raise 5 kids when my brother died of cancer at 45yrs...God bless your friend to be strong..
Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
Loved the date, perfect for their new relationship
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The devil is charming, sweet and manipulative and he always get's what he wants no matter the cost. A dark story of love. ON HOLD UNTIL AUG 2016.
And StillDreaming85
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Horror, Romance
Language: English, French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58663 Read Count: 52216
Date: 17 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
wow I really love this story, she can bring him back to the light or maybe he can bring her to his side.....which will win
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
well it got a little bit more serious, almost to the point where he was taking what he wanted with her saying NO!..well they always said never trust the Devil.
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Holy shit what kind of powers does he have, freezing people with the ablity to talk and putting someone to sleep by just blowing on them and saying sleep....
Date: 08 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ooh Demons this should be very interesting.. can not wait for more
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
I would run as far away from him as possibly, plus he has many women he plays with now....
Date: 28 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Death is what she deserves
A chance discovery in the forest near Forks starts a series of events that could prove cataclysmic, not just for the people involved but for the whole human population. A story of love, passion, murder and mystery and rated NC-17 for the passionate (lemony) bits. A Twilight/CSI story that will hopefully keep you on the edge of your sofa! Recommended on Rob Attack, TLS & ADF.
Banner by Cared Cullen
Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Crossover
Characters: Edward/OC
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104459 Read Count: 7638
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
Loved it....I don't think I have ever read a Bravo.....This story was intriquing and only took me two nights to read it....can not wait for your next story
Author's Response:
Hi again,
My God - you read quickyly ! Thanks so much again for reviewing and I'm glad you enjoyed this one as well. My next story won't be up for quite a while as I am just about to start it and I don't publish until it's complete.
Best wishes,
Joan xx
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I will be here when its done.....yes I stayed up till 3 each morning..
Author's Response:
Good heavens! - I'll make a note to let you know when the next one is ready to go. I was away over New Year and got caught up in a story and when I turned the laptop off discovered it was 4am - I have never done that before (or since). Lucky I didn't have to get up early next day. Reading is very addictive!
Joan xx
Why was the house on the Sound put on the market? Christian learns the reason, with profound ramifications for him and his family.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Supernatural, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52319 Read Count: 4675
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Who Are You?
maybe Linc didn't die and ell is trying to warn Christian..
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Revelation
so his mom is warning him, about his Dad
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Lady Gaga
maybe he sees your dead mother aka grandma
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 8: We Can Work It Out
alittle alone time is always nice
Date: 03 May 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Of Human Bondage
Wow I love this story, I read MOTU but never read the fifty shades of Grey....so I will always put B&E as A&C..but that is just me....maybe it will be different if I ever see the movie.
Be gentle, be sweet, speak of womanly things, but above all else give your king everything he desires, Lady Isabella Swan of Devonshire does none of these things..."
"It was the reign of life, it was the reign of death, of love, of hate, of gold, of dust, it was the era of kings, it was the era of the common man, of truth, of deception, of war, of peace. It was the Reign of Edward and Isabella. #Kingward #Royalward"
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107093 Read Count: 109440
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I love all your stories and can not wait to read this one....I have seen the show on T.V and will love to see what you do.
Now that all the lies have been exposed will Bella and Edward be able to survive?
Sequel to Dark Velvet
Banner by AnaRodFranco
Beta'd by Kim Ginsberg & Sjdavis84.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 88581 Read Count: 97745
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
WOW just wow, is it a set up by Marcus...to many coincidences
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
not really a good plan to make her fall in love with him again,I hope they can work through this he has a lot of explaining to do
Two years. That's all I had. Two years to leave, explore the human world without the confines of Voltera's walls constantly reminding me of my impending doom. Two years were what I was given, two years to explore what's out there for me, before having to make the most life altering decision I would ever be faced with. Or so I thought.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8440 Read Count: 980
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Holy Shit I love this Bella and can not wait for her to meet the cullens
Author's Response:
ikr! i love her too ^_^
thanks for stopping by <3
OOC. AH. Charlie was one of the few things that connected Edward and Bella. She loathed him while he worshipped the ground he walked on. It was this connection that would turn their lives upside down.
Banner by Vivi En
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Rich & Notorious
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16898 Read Count: 4692
Date: 25 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Thy Will be done
So they aren't his bioloical children only Bella
Author's Response:
You'll have your answers in the next chapters. Thanks.
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 4: The Poison
well I wouldn't just give the money back, she can do so much good with it.. get her self finacially set then give it to charitys, homeless shelters...the marriage thing she can work around marry him and sleep in seperate bedrooms, but the guy is fine let him scratch the inch every once in a while
Neglected and abused; can Bella find the strength to keep going or will she give in to her darker side.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 62 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286221 Read Count: 96533
Date: 05 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
What ever happened to her mother and stepfather, and didn't Charlie's will leave anything to Bella..or the police pension
Date: 15 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
SHE PROBABLY HAS BACK LABOR AND SHE SHOULD BE GOING TO THE HOSPITAL, NOT SURE WHY HER DOCTOR DIDN'T SEE SHE WAS IN LABOR.
Date: 09 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Well Tanya didn't even know it was his Birthday..
Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Finally she is at peace, at least for right now..
Date: 03 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I wonder if her father left the house to her and Her Mom and Phil aren't saying anything and know they have come to find her because it has something to do with an inheritance her father left her
Her grandmother taught her to believe in fairy tales. She was told that one day her Prince Charming would come to save her. But after years of abuse, Bella has nearly given up all hope, until the day the Cullens moved to Forks. Twilight AU, mating connection story.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126196 Read Count: 58049
Date: 13 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 Negotiations
Yes, charlie is an ass
Date: 04 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Revelations and Discoveries
I think you nailed on the head with this one, and all the other ones especially Kate....These are all the question that went through my mind when I read the books and seen the movies...why did they never ask one of the Denials about sex...they mix with humans....and also with Jasper why did a household full of exspecially smart people not figure out that Jasper is a empath and he feals everyone even blood lust.
Date: 04 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 Mated!
well atleast they did it right in the movie on their second incounter..Movie
“Bella, I’m going to give you some privacy. I won’t go far, but I won’t listen either. I know you don’t want an audience, no matter which way you decide to go.”
Three years after his mysterious disappearance, Edward’s final words to Bella still haunt her every waking moment. For her parents, Bella tries to put the past behind her and start a new life but one phone call shatters her fragile new world. Bella must then choose between her new life and the potential heartache of her past.
All canon pairings. NO CHARACTER DEATH. This is an Edward and Bella story.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Mysteries & Thrillers
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4103 Read Count: 364
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Life After Forks
That is how the story should have been told minus the Edward dying part.
I was accident prone. Everyone new that, my mother, my father, my friends, and even my neighbors. The whole town knew I was accident prone. Of course that has everything to do with my current situation. I have an education degree, working for the man I love as his nanny to his twins Alexander and Renesmee. Accidentally in love with a family I couldn’t call my own.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1350 Read Count: 2323
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I thought they were twins, Alex is 3 and renessme is 1
Date: 21 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
excellent, can not wait to read more
An unexpected event threw Isabella into Edward's arms. Love, devotion and family loyalty keep her there.
Sequel to Unexpected.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 30328 Read Count: 4932
Date: 02 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Photographs
Love it, and do they have anymore kids because they were talking as in more than just Matteo
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Back to School
Love it and loved hearing from Matteo
Author's Response:
Hello! Thanks so much!
What happens when Bella is attacked and her mob family find out she's pregnant? How does a protective family act when one of their own is attacked? No one knows for certain, the only thing they do know is they will kill anyone in their way to protecting her.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5222 Read Count: 100405
Date: 26 Aug 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
I hope she is alright..
Date: 09 Jan 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
Hope everything goes ok at the Dinner
Date: 16 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 6: 2: Parental Truths
LOVED IT, SEE YOU WHEN YOU COME BACK
Date: 06 Nov 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
Damn he put his own daughter through hell and back
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
well she is being stubborn, he wants to marry her.,
Author's Response:
She has so many years of hurt in her from her past. she doesn't know what a good thing she has infront of her.
Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
Love it can not wait for the wedding, I hope it goes off without a hitch
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
Well I hope she is happy about the renewl vows....can not wait
Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
well get married at the house quick.....they are coming for her....why are they taking forever to marry with this treat he should have taking her to the justice of the peace
Author's Response:
It may seem like forever but its only been just over two weeks since the anoncement of the pregnancy but so much has happened in that period of time. the best is about to come
Date: 23 May 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
she is married now he can't take her, and I am sure all the men in that room won't let it happen
Date: 08 Aug 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
Oh sweet Torture begins
Date: 04 Jan 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
Well they are not going to be happy after that, especially Carlisle
Date: 15 Sep 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
I hope Bella and the babies are ok
Date: 16 Nov 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
Can not wait for the excitement at the Wedding with a very pregnant Bella
Date: 22 Nov 2014 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
they aren't taking any chances with the birth of the babies
Date: 23 Feb 2015 Title: Family Secrets (out takes)
Can not wait for the wedding, I hope they get through it without any problems
Detective Cullen has been married to his job for a very long time, and he doesn’t ever plan to change. Bella Swan the overweight girl who gets used and tossed aside is his favorite waitress. Can they make more out of this than friendship with benefits, or will she send him away when she decides she wants more?
(The use of the word steaks vs. stakes is a play on words - just FYI)
Banner by: Deebelle OneFic.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 38822 Read Count: 159728
Date: 12 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Loving it, will Jake and Leah be returning anytime soon
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I think she will step back for a few and get her mind together, I don't think she was far enough along for her to know, plus she could have been depressed and never seen the hint of pregnancy.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
How is Jake going to respond to the pregnancy
Isabella Swan has her eyes on the prize. Unfortunately that means she has to steal from the most feared Mobster around, Edward Cullen. Isabella is about to find out just how possessive Edward is over his things. Mobward, Possessiveward, and a little bit of Domward. Lemons AH.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11652 Read Count: 12646
Bella always worked hard and thought things through before acting on them. She always thought she was a good person with morals. Unlike her mother who had none and only thought of herself. But she began to question her believes In what was right and wrong, when she met a married Edward Cullen.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68789 Read Count: 84699
Date: 08 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 18
well things are going to get tricky now
Date: 08 May 2014 Title: The other woman
Where does this chapter fit in.. The last chapter was an espy and they had two children, in chapter 65. She is at the Cullen's for the first time and Alice and rose are going to her apartment
Date: 18 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 31
I still don't agree with Bella about keeping the baby a secret from Edward..
Date: 19 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 33
Carlisle is really lose in the head, he is going to hurt bella or the baby and Edward will be pissed
Date: 30 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 43
Well it takes two to tango, and she knew he was married, she really didn't give him a chance to speak once the Tanya situation happen and she left town.
Date: 08 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 17
Just don't be there when she comes back, she might seduce you and get pregnant to trap you further.
Author's Response:
Next chapter just posted. Hope you like it.
Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
boy she is a self center bitch.
Author's Response:
Yes she is .Thanks for reading it
Date: 07 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 16
I am waiting for the show down
Date: 05 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
oh shit, they went for it..,.why not wait till he is seperated or divorced
Author's Response:
Edward thinks he's wasted 3 years already.Bella's happy he's only married on paper,and Tanya won't let him go without a fight. So they could have been waiting along time. Plus I think once they started there was no turning back. Hope you liked it, and thanks for the review.
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 61: Chapter 62
How the hell did she get in the house..
Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
well I guess the apple doesn't fall far from the tree with mother and daughterI hope ur plan backfires and Bella is the other woman that's okay she gets her man
Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
well I hope he goes home and try to rekindle what he had in his marriage, but that would be boring and how would Bella become the othe woman which never end good....because most man will not divorce the wife.
Author's Response:
That's so true but who wants to read about a faithfull husband. Thanks for the review i was really scared to view it. It's my first story and your my first review.
Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
UH OH...this can't be good....
Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Wow ungrateful much is she, she doesn't work and goes to the spa and gets facials...golddigger
Author's Response:
Well when you read chapter 6 you will learn alittle bit more about her. she's certainly spoiled and pampered and doesn't see the real world, and she does like spending his money
Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I like that he came to the conclusion that his marriage was not all that it should be, before he pressued Bella. And I like that Bella through in the end the hint that there is noone waiting for her at home...
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 19
I knew she would fake a pregnancy
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 20
Our we sure Edward is the father
Date: 09 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 21
Oh shit, she is pregnant too...but if Tanyas baby is not Edwards wont he feel real stupid....and Bella you knew going into this relationship.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 22
Tanya knows Bella is pregnant, and she will go away and find Bella and take hers.
Date: 10 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 24
I knew it, she is going kidnap Bellas baby and pass off as her own.
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 29
What is up with Carlisle, are he and Victoria getting it on..or Tanya
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 30
I just knew Carlisle was messing with one of the ladies
Date: 20 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 34
I hope she calls Edward and not Rose