Reviews by rclaurel3
Summary:

Bella was destined to be Edward's mate. Alice had seen it so it had to be true and come to pass. What if Edward wanted it to be her choice and not Alice's? Edward stalkerishly follows Bella to college hoping to become her friend and maybe more. *Read the Prologue before you decide to hate and pass on the story. 

 


Cannon Characters. ExB, EmXR, AXJ, and EsxC.    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13754 Read Count: 88579
[Report This] Published: 19 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Feb 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am in.

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading!

 

Jennyflower

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281021
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I am loving this story, Tanya is going to get it...can not wait for the next installment

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Emotional ending, loved it..Emmett always the voice of reason..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am in...can not wait to see where this goes....Tanya as the Trophy Wife and Bella as the Mistress....

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

unpack...because Edward wants you there, and I don't think anything Tanya says will change that

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Loved family time and he is moving in little by little....and Look out Edward is going to bring the smack down to everyone that had wronged him while he was in the hosiptal.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I kind of feel bad for Tanya in this, yes she married him because she had a crush and thought that once married she would have him, put for him to flaut another woman right in her face is family is there...I for one would not be able to take it, I would consult with a lawyer to see if I could get out of the marriage...instead of being made a fool of in front of his family.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oh Edward is not going to be happy, she is bleeding and he wasn't there...but I am glad Emmett showed up

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OH he loves her, now get rid of Tanya and everything will be good.,.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Yes he found a way out, lets hope he will be satisfied with Bella and not do the same thing to her as he did with his wife.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow I knew something like this would happen and a baby too..Oh Edward is going to be so pissed off at Tanya when he wakes up

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I'm not liking this Bella at all, This was supposedly the man she loved and was rushing to see her and say the I love You and when he is down from a car accident and the wife stops her she walks away to sell her book about her affair with the married man and make money, she is no better if she would have taken the 3 million at the end of the year per arrangement.. He atleast thought of her when he first woke up...She is not the only victim here, he is also..3 years of his sons life he has messed....would she have told Edward about Levi if he never found them

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Can not wait to red more

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

she didn't remember telling Mike her name was Elena Chambers.

How to Forget by Shadow Masen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 177]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Where do you go if you don't know who you are, and what if you find you don't want to remember?  Edward finds himself in Forks under suspicious circumstances, can Bella help him discover who he truly is?  BxE AH  NC-17 for lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131184 Read Count: 54712
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2013 Updated: 16 Dec 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Well that was a shocker, here I thought mob or assissin..but an FBI agent and now he is back in Chicago will he remember his time with Bella.. Love to here his POV on this

Author's Response:

Nope, he's one of the good guys!  And yes, he's in for a bit of a rude awakening in Chicago.  Poor Edward.  EPOV up next!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wow can not wait to read more

Author's Response:

Thank you!  :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

You know I was thinking maybe he was part of the mafia or an assassin maybe...or he could have been an innocent, wrong place wrong time

Author's Response:

Both of these are definitely possibilities.  We'll find out eventually!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 11 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

The man has alot on his mind, he doesn't know who is after him and I am sure he doesn't want Bella to get hurt, I hope he doesn't leave

Author's Response:

Yes, he certainly has alot to think about, doensn't he?  And he wants to keep Bella from getting hurt. 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

can not wait for more, and has the prologue happened already or is the woman Bella and who are the men after him

Author's Response:

Yes, the prologue has already happened--those are the events that landed him in the hospital at the beginning of the story.  The woman is NOT Bella, but we will find out who she is eventually!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

well if someone is looking for him, won;t they be able to trace the records for the GED and applying for a college course, yes I am one of those waiting for the shoe to drop...great chapter can not wait for more, I love this keep up the good work..

Author's Response:

Considering that he has a different last name now, I would say no.  ;)  There are a lot of "other shoe" people--you're far from alone!  Glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

YESSSSSSSSSS PLEASE

Author's Response:

Will do!  :D

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Great Chapter....I hope he gets in touch with Bella soon..

Author's Response:

Thanks!  It'll happen--I promise!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

Why hasn't she called him, I can understand her being hurt but Edward is not the one that was awake and talking to her...did her father not give her the message.

Author's Response:

Yes, Charlie does give her the message, but she has her reasons for what's she's doing, as you'll find out in the next chapter.  As she told us earlier, sometimes love is doing what you think it right for the other person, even if it breaks your heart.

Puzzle of my Heart by Payton79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 245]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella leads a promiscuous life: no relationships, no last names, no numbers. After meeting a certain green-eyed man, she begins to break her carefully set up rules. In a steamy friendship both their pasts and insecurities will be revealed. Will Bella give in to love? And what will happen when the past catches up to her? A story about lust, love and trust. AH, rated NC-17 for a reason

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122361 Read Count: 106077
[Report This] Published: 08 Oct 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Box

Thank you...enjoying your story

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Revelations

So why would he want something to do with Bella when he clearly knows she does not do comments...

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review. I'm not sure but I think you mean commitment or relationships instead of comments. If you do, trying not to give too much away, I can say that Edward senses Bella is afraid of opening up to anyone, and he's a patient man who knows what he wants and has an idea of how to get it. For Bella his revelation means that he's not looking for something serious either. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Silke

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 23 - A Ghost From the Past

Well I am glad she got this closure from Jacob, but to be friends I don't think they should and I also don't think Edward will like that idea...plus he gave a piss poor excuse for his behavior.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, Bella can finalyl leave the BS with Jacob behind her. I'm sorry Jake's explanation wasn't enough for your. I tried to have him explain as best as I could. Well, Edward will be suprised to say the least. You'll learn all about his reaction next week. Hope to see you then.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 27 - The Shit Hits the Fan

he only saw her and Jake kissing and in the moment she was trapped in Jakes lips Edward saw and I bet Jake saw him too...I think Edward needs to leave Bella for a little while and let her get over her insecurities.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Jake didn't do anyhting to intentionally break up Bella and Edward. Edward was hurt and wanted to hurt her back. But he'll explain that way better himself next chapter ;). See you then.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 31 - Mail Delivery

So I'm taking it that she went to the airport and Rose or Emmett picked her up and she is upstairs in the bedroom waiting to surprise him..

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I won't reveal to much here and now but they will celebrate New Year's together. See you Sunday.

Summary: Past Featured Story

A change in the past makes an early intervention necessary for the Cullens. This story is complete and I will upload one or two chapters each week.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253021 Read Count: 132213
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2013 Updated: 06 Oct 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yea I guess it would be a bit much to see these people 9yrs later and they still looked the same.

Author's Response: Especially Alice. Bella needs to know though, they need her help.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Wow Bella is alittle ungrateful, yes she likes her old clothes but she is married to Edward now and doesnt she want to dress like him..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Phil is the nephew of one of Bellas closest friend, know he will meet Renee in the future and Bella will move to forks.

Author's Response: Well worked out, but I'm a little more twisted than that:)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow I like the way you are telling the story, puts more POVs besides Bellas only narration.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think you miss a lot from just one PoV, it's a pity SM never finished Midnight Sun so we could see more back story! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yea, I read it on her website...you understood more when you read how conflicted he was with his emotions.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

wow that poor girl, made me sad for her...Renee I would like to slap around and tell her to wake up..

Author's Response: I'd just like to slap her:D

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

In this day and age a cell phone is a good thing to have....Alice was only looking at her best interest of having one, just in case she broke down or anything..

Author's Response: As usual though Alice went overboard. I'm sure Bella would have been happier with a Nokia 3310 (and it would probably last longer with her track record of accidents) than a top of the line smart phone! Alice just can't help interfering!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Edward

Author's Response: Indeed.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 24 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I love Emmett, good advice there will there be a baby in this story

Author's Response: No, sorry no baby

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Wow is she a bit dramatic...

If Only by Vampgirl79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 45]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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*UPDATING in mid/late 2023*

"Come over, I need you. Now." As always, I go to her. Except this time, it may be the last. I love her deeply, but I don't know if I can do this anymore. Each goodbye is harder than the last one. I want more than just being hers behind closed doors. If only we could truly be together; if only we were meant to be. 

AH/OOC, Told in EPOV


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 17231 Read Count: 7973
[Report This] Published: 17 Oct 2013 Updated: 13 Feb 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Almost Is Never Enough

I am enjoying this story, can not wait to read more and find out why Bella is really staying with riley

Author's Response:

Im so glad you are enjoying it hun! Even though Im aware its a tough read, I thank you for hanging in there with me. I'm glad you are looking forward to finding out why Bella is staying with Riley, you all will have answers soon :) Thanks so much for reading and for reviewing!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Dream That Will Never Come True

wow after reading some reviews I guess I was wrong....so Bella is married to someone else and Edward is in love with her

Author's Response:

Hi rclaurel! Great to hear from you. Thanks so much for giving this new fic of mine a shot! Yes, Bella is married to someone else and Edward is very much in love with her. You will find out a little more about them in the next chapter. I will be posting chap 2 very soon. Thank you for reading and reviewing ;)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Temptation

WOW, she is cheating on her husband and wants Edward to be her play thing when she wants....I am not liking this Bella....He has a life too and a girlfriend but I guess Bella doesn't really care if Irina gets hurt as long as she gets what she wants.,..If she is not happy at home then why did she stay with her husband or marry him when she clearly wants Edward and no one else can have him..

Author's Response:

Hi Rclaurel, great to hear from you! Yeah, it does seem that way that's what Bella is like isn't it? Oh boy, I guess I painted her in a pretty bad light, lol. Im sorry you dont like her yet. I get why but all I can say is, she was aroused and obviously not in her right frame of mind, obviously not thinking with her head, during that call. May I say, dont be too quick to judge Bella just yet. I know she is looking that way. But believe me, she does know the error of her ways, of what her and Edward are doing and she does care. You will find out why she is torn over leaving her husband soon. Sometimes it isnt so simple as people say it is. Anyhow, thanks so much for reading and revieiwng, I appreciate it! ~Leslie

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Remembering The Past

Well I don't consider it cheating when Bella broke it off with him....

Author's Response:

Hi Rclaurel, thanks for the review! Im confused as to what you said though, sorry :( I appreciate you reading though! ~Leslie

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Goodbye's and Promises

I think Edward needs to stay away from Bella and put his all into the relationship with Irina...and Bella really needs to growup and stop playing with his emotions

Author's Response:

Hi Rclaurel! Thanks for a very honest review and though it makes me sad you feel this way I respect it and I totally get where you are coming from. if I was reading this fic written by someone else, I would prob feel the same, lol. I hope you will still stick on this journey with me and maybe you will eventually change your mind about Edward not being with Bella, or you may not like what happens near the end, lol. I do get where your coming from, especially with Bella, she does need to stop playing around with Edward's heart. She really isnt meaning to. I know it doesnt seem that way but she doesnt mean to hurt him. Thanks for reading, I appreciate it!

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - My First F#$k Up

well in his offense, she was with another man and she is the one who left

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

A pediatric oncology department is the last place you expect to find: the child you want to adopt, a childhood television star borne famous singer turned love of your life, a selfless guy and his polar opposite or see someone you become attached to die.  This is a road that Dr. Edward Cullen finds himself on, how will it all unfold?

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73863 Read Count: 33741
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2013 Updated: 19 Nov 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

loving it, Rose is piece of work but she is a good friend

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

can not wait to read more..So Isaand Bella are the same person

Author's Response:

Second chapter posts today.  Yes Isa and Bella are one in the same.  Nikky, Jess & Kasi~

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 25 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love the Chapter, I hope Bella can adopt her and make her happy for as long as she has left...So for character death I couldn't persuade you for it to be Jacob and not Riley, Bree or Angela..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

loving it, can't wait for more

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 06 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yes, I new someone would think of the clause...marry him Bella.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh what do the test results say...

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

First time was great, such a sad chapter..On the up side Jacob is an ASS...to wish a child dead he needs a good beat down or public humilation.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

what happened, I hope she is not getting sick.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

No, I am glad those nurses will be dealt with.,..It was dangerous to let Jacob into her isolation room..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Thank you for writing this amazing story..

A Long Journey by ken48255 Rated: NC-17 [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Bella is offered a scholarship to a boarding school in England in 1992. This is a journey that covers 20 years as Bella and Edward deal with betrayal, distance, and unexpected events.. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25226 Read Count: 1596
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2013 Updated: 04 Oct 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prelude

I am in for the story

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: In the beginning there was a letter

So it begins...England here we come

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Bella's life, Edward's life

You lost me here, has she been at school for 3 years already...and didn't she meet Alice when she first arrived

Author's Response:

Good question - she got placed in a different grade then Bella so their paths didn't cross until they were roomates. Not to mention that her brother was a complete prick to her so Bella didn't really have a desire to meet his family.   Thanks for the reviews - hope you like this!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: You got Senioritis - find something constructive to do...

Oh this is not going to end well at first, he will be using her.....can not wait to see how this unfolds to where she winds up with him 20yrs later

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: 17 Candles and a conscience is born...

What was he going to say to her, Is he playing her..

Author's Response:

He wanted to tell her the truth but he was chickening out.  

Playing the Part by kyla713 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 40]
Summary:

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Edward feels trapped in the life he lives, and can find no way out. When he meets fellow stage actress, Bella Swan, the part he plays off the stage begins to slip. And everything begins to change.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64425 Read Count: 10197
[Report This] Published: 30 Oct 2013 Updated: 30 Oct 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really don't blame him for straying...his wife is a nasty piece of trash....she doesn't want him so know one else can have him..

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

(Banner by Mina)

 

A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142597
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Yes I would like more please..

Author's Response:

Thank you! xx Dee

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

maybe he likes your voice

Author's Response:

He did like her voice...Bella was just slow in realizing that.

 

xx Dee

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two

Loving it!

Author's Response:

Thank makes me smile. Thank you!

xx Dee

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven

Well in Alice's defense she is his PA and Jasper is manager....but as a sister she was out of line

Mismatched Love by WeeAndJess Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 234]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary: 

Zany Bella is the maid of honor of her sister’s wedding. She has to deal with Charlie, her soon to be brother in law and his uptight rich family who don't like her. To top it all off, Charlie's brother Edward is back and they seemed to be pushed together in everything they do. They are a mismatched pair that can't seem to tell each other how they feel.

BANNER BY Deebelle1


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 67590 Read Count: 40439
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2013 Updated: 21 Jan 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is Alec a girl

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Well with her doing stuff like that. Know wonder Edward doesn't touch her again.....Yes they may be friends but you are at Edwards house parading men around

A Stolen Life by jlove34 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

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"Destiny is a name often given in retrospect to choices that had dramatic consequences."

— J.K. Rowling


In the process of returning to Forks, Washington, Edward came across a car whose passenger held a familiar, silent mind. Curious by the phenomenon, he followed them and inadvertently witnessed a horrific accident. Compelled by curiosity, Edward found himself immersed in the blood that he'd so desperately tried to shield himself from four years earlier. Overwhelmed by his vampire nature, he allowed the beast within free rein and savored the alluring liquid.

Consumed by the shame of drinking her blood, Edward brought the girl home to his father and hoped Carlisle would save her life, knowing deep in his heart that she was beyond modern medicine. After much deliberation, Edward accepted the inevitable and changed her himself, nearly killing her in the process. With the treaty in shambles and forgiveness hanging in the balance, could Edward forgive himself for imposing such a fate upon a dying girl? Could Bella forgive a vampire who whisked her away from her family and her friends?

~Edward and Bella~


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20954 Read Count: 1993
[Report This] Published: 27 Nov 2013 Updated: 20 Dec 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Death Becomes Her

I loved it so far...can not wait to read more

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far. Thanks for taking the time to review! Have a good night!!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-The Sands of Time

He's going to change her, well I hope she doesn't freak out to much once she is awakened....I really don't know how I would react to this myself..great chapter can not wait to read more

Author's Response:

Well, it's definitely interesting when she wakes up. I know I'd freak out! Thanks for reviewing! Have a good night!-Jamie

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Accident

Ok since I forgot to review chapter 1...so how many where in the car..Jake, Bella and ?.....so it would seem Bella's mind is blank to him and she asked him to do the right thing....her right and his right might be two different things.

Author's Response:

There were 3 people in the car. Bella was in the back, without a seatbelt. Yeah, you are so right about what she meant.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Chaos

well I hope her transformation goes well..

Author's Response:

Well, eventually it'll be alright. I just uploaded that chapter, so you'll be able to find out! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-The Rubber Band Effect

Well that went well didn't it. lol...I hope Carlisle or Edward can calm her down,before she hurts herself or a human..great story enjoy reading it

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'll upload again tonight. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-The Merits of Light and Dark

Loved all the POVs....can not wait to read more...I didn't know she has a kid

Author's Response:

Yep, she had a life before she "died". That's going to make things difficult when she remembers who she is/was. Plus, the father isn't going to be all that happy, either. Thanks for reviewing.-Jamie

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Beasts a Plenty

Carlisle and Edward have so splanning to do....oops didn't know her boyfriend was a shapeshifter and she will remember her child...is the child a shapeshifter too.

Author's Response:

Yep, she and one of the Quileutes had a kid, and no, the kid is only 3, so no shapeshifting going one. Since the kid is only half Quileute, I haven't decided weither or not it'll be a shifter. And yes, Carlisle/Edward will have a bit of explaining to do. Thanks for reviewing!! -Jamie Anna

Summary:

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"In three words I can sum up

everything I've learned in life:

it goes on"

Robert Frost


Five yrs ago, following Charlie's brutal murder & the Cullen's departure, Bella fled Forks, hoping to forget. That had been the plan, at least. However,when an innocent trip turned dangerous, she realized she hadn't buried her past as deeply as she thought. The supernatural world hadn't finished with her yet. In fact, she was the perfect weapon in an age old war.

*Note: Stephanie Meyer's vampire and supernatural parameter's are altered to fit my story—mostly regarding Bella's (eventual) supernatural parameters. I've labeled it NC-17 for explicit sexual content, language, character death, and physical violence.

~Edward/Bella~

(Previously named "Once Upon an Unfortunate September" and posted on Twilighted.)


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69899 Read Count: 5408
[Report This] Published: 27 Nov 2013 Updated: 05 Mar 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Bella

great so far, Is this a Jasper/Bella or will Bella/Edward be

Author's Response:

This is a Bella/Edward fic. Jasper may not be her love interest, but he'll be an extremely important person in her life. Thanks for taking the time to review! Have a good night.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Dinner at the Blacks'

So is Jasper there, will he tell her why Edward did what he did as to protect her....I can see why he left her in new moon but he went about it the wrong way..

Author's Response:

Oh, yeah. She'll find out why. Though she's not gonna be happy. Thanks for reviewing!

Summary:

everythingIneeded_zps20a89799

 

Bella had been lucky to land the job as the nanny to Esme and Carlisle's two girls, but when Carlisle's younger brother arrives in New York in need of a fresh start and some help with his own brood, Bella's world is quickly turned upside down. It was just supposed to be a job, but they quickly became everything she needed. 

 

Check out Edward's POV, Everything I Wanted.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99082 Read Count: 87253
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Apr 2018
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Now she is going to tell him about the skeletons of her past, why hasn't she told him sooner, I smell trouble.

Innocent sinners by Kallipap Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Hardships make the heart grow cold. Pain and suffering leads a person to build walls to protect themselves. Bella knows that, all too well. What will it take for her to give life another chance and learn to enjoy living? Will the warm eyes of a man help her heal? What if those eyes were the reason she fell into the rabbit hole in the first place? AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9926 Read Count: 861
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Jan 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Why is Edward with Victoria, she seems like a bitch..

Author's Response: Hi! It's great to hear from you again! Thank you for reviewing! Edward never saw this face of Victoria before, just like James never showed the monster he hid inside. It was reserved for Bella. She seems to bring the beast out of the siblings, doesn't she? See you next Friday. Love, Kallie

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Can not wait to read more, Excellent start...mystery at the begining who was Edward to her before she married James.

Author's Response: Hi, rclaurel3! Thank you for taking the time to review! I'm really glad you liked my new story. And yes, the mystery part was intentional. It is something I like and use one way or another in my stories. Now, I promised a preview from the next chapter when I didn't know that PM's were disabled. To avoid writing the same thing twice, please go to my reply on the first review and you will find the excerpt. Thanks again for the support and I hope to hear from you again. See you next week. Love, Kallie xo

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Well Edward still seems to care, Bella must have had a rough life with James...I hope James left everything to Bella and Vicky gets nothing...

Author's Response: Hello! Thanks for reviewing. Next chapter will reveal some things, but not all ... There's a lot of this story yet. See you next Friday.

He Said, She Said by araeo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Boy meets Girl and sweeps her right off her feet – which just happen to be slightly slutty when it comes to a certain tall, dark (and slightly gingered) piece of walking sex, who decides to pursue her without mercy. A fluffy novelette about a girl who does something questionably stupid, yet lucks out incredibly by finding her Mr. Right. All human. Utter nonsense.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17953 Read Count: 23905
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2013 Updated: 19 Jan 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it! will there be more

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

loved it

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Summary: He's a coldhearted businessman who's set in his ways. He wants perfection, but doesn't see it from anyone, ever. What if he tastes the other life, will he go back and if he does will he change? AH/Rated M

Amazing banner by Deebelle1 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36855 Read Count: 9819
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2013 Updated: 13 Jan 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 24 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow this was an amazing journey can not wait to read the epilogue

Summary: Past Featured Story

long way

 

She is brilliant and beautiful, and well respected at a very young age in her field, but she is all alone. No family. No friends outside of work. He is alone by choice, punishing himself for the sins of his past, but he has family to give him strength. Will a chance encounter, and a daily trip out of her way lead her to the family and place of belonging she so craves? AH/AU MA

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45215 Read Count: 23741
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2013 Updated: 13 Apr 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I just read this all the way through and you left me hanging LOL....can not wait for more

Author's Response:

Sorry! I know it's very near the end. 

probably two more chapters. Next one

will go up as soon as I get it back from

Sunflower. Hopefully (knock on wood)

that'll be this evening.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Love the ring

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Great Chapter, My prayers are with you..

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review, and thank you more for the prayers. 
I accept those anytime! ;) 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Edward have been friends for as long as they could remember. They grew up together and now, live in the same apartment, ‘saving’ money on rent. Bella was just dumped by her boyfriend, Paul and Edward had been single for a long time. 

One night, Edward drunkenly tells Bella that he’s horny and lonely. They ended up having sex. 

Awkward morning after follows…

Out of everyone they’d been with, Edward and Bella admit that they are really compatible with each other, but a relationship between the two just can’t work. They are almost like family. So, they decide to become friends with benefits…

What happens when one realizes that they want more??

FWB

Banner by Chandrakanta! Thank you girlie!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Read & Enjoyed, TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 151 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177969 Read Count: 983117
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2013 Updated: 28 Jun 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 May 2014 Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 115

I can relate to Bella, be there done it and been it....and lows self esteem...but a strong and kind man came in to my life and have felt safe and loved for 20yrs now....I just love your story

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66

well he isn't in a relationship with Bella because she doesn't want him that way so I say go for Edward you might be happy with Heidi

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 06 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72

she is so stubburn and she will lose the best thing.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 65: Chapter 65

Bella needs to talk to Edward and lay it all out that she does not want a relationship and he should find a nice woman to love him back, then she probably will be jealous if that happens no more fantastic sex.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love adorable Edward, I hoe she says yes

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

the kiss could lead to good things

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

why can't she sleep on the couch, after all it is Edward's arents house and his room...Bella should get his room and rose get the guest

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

toss her out like yesterdays trash.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

He shouldn't because someone is going to end up hurt, she doesn't want him the way he wants to be with a woman....he's a shy guy and didn't go on a lot of dates, so she is using him to scratch the itch....I hope he counters her arrangement

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Why is Bella so against being in a real relationship

Author's Response:

She just got out of a three year relationship with Paul, the hipster douche canoe. She wants to be Bella. Not someone's girlfriend. Yes, she's being slightly selfish but...Edward's willing. 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Love it

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

she is going to lose a good thing, Don't shut him out because of a bad relationship...one apple to spoil the whole bunch girl.....I just had to say it LOL

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 129: Chapter 129

Bella....she wants to let a rapist stay free...I can not believe she was defending him, oh yes I can, On my last review I said she must still have feelings for him...

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 131

I hope she loves him back..