Reviews by rclaurel3
Work in Progress by araeo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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All-Human. Bella, Edward and the usual suspects are adults living in Seattle. They hit it off after a klutzy accident and Edward awakens Bella's ovaries, who never hesitate to voice their pervy opinion in Bella's head.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255983 Read Count: 37466
[Report This] Published: 03 Feb 2013 Updated: 26 Feb 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Imprint?

Oh that was jut to cute of him to do that for her, I loved the chapter

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Six Degrees of the Girls

great chapter, he wa breaking down with the baby making almost..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Epilogue: The Precious Revealed

Love it!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Best friends since she was ten and he was twelve.  She had a hard home life, his family love and accepted her as their own.  She accepted him and his family for who they were, mafia royalty.  As they grow up, she becomes a dancer, and he gets groomed to take over for his father.  Follow Edward and Bella as they fall in love and take on the world together.  Violence and Lemony goodness.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 61 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 177484 Read Count: 221069
[Report This] Published: 06 Feb 2013 Updated: 09 Dec 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

great chapter, when are they going to see that it is more than jut friendship.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

WOW, that was great

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

go Esme...

Mr. Househusband by ADAdancer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 64]
Summary:

 

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Raising three children wasn’t that easy, especially when your wife is working long hours as a famous television chef. Some may think I have the easiest life, but spending your days cleaning up after children and running errands is anything but that. I was a househusband.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19206 Read Count: 9881
[Report This] Published: 09 Feb 2013 Updated: 27 Aug 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

great chapter, sounds like a fun story. Lets ee what the men get into when the woman are away at woek.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Here is your teaser!

I took off Bella’s shoes, and began to massage her feet. She moaned from the contact. “Mmm, what time are you leaving?” she asked, her eyes closing.

“Shit, I totally forgot about drinks with the guys tonight. I’ll probably leave around eight. I should be back at ten.”

Her head turned. “No, you should spend more time with the guys. You are with the kids all the time.”

“Bella, you act like I don’t see Em and Jasper at all,” I laughed.

She giggled with me. “Not at all. It’s just that you are with the kids all the time. Go have a nice night with the guys. I can handle a night alone with them. It will give me some time away to bond with our children.”

“All right, I will try and stay out late.” I smiled at her.

“Good.” She leaned up and kissed my cheek.

Summary:

You already know how it started. What's next for this struggling musician and the girl who claimed his heart? Continued from my oneshot, be sure to read that first. E/B, All Human. Rated NC-17 for adult themes.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13023 Read Count: 1183
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2013 Updated: 17 Mar 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Please Don't Go

let hope he keeps his promise and the publist is gone from his life or she is going to make trouble

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 3: More Than Words

Oh good a strong Bella

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 1: To Wish Impossible Things

great start...can not wait to see where you take this

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella and Jasper are twins who just moved from England to Beverly Hills and are new to Mason high school. The second that Bella and football Quarterback Edward Cullen meet, it is love at first sight for both of them. They decided there and then that they would be together no matter what. There is only one person who stands in their way. Edward’s girlfriend Tanya. Lemons and language AH


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: YA - High School
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77045 Read Count: 34693
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2013 Updated: 10 Apr 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Well I am sure Tanya will do everything and anything to hurt Bella.. and if she is a daddys girl then he csn make it hard for her father, depending who has more clout Carisle or Mr. Denali

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved It! hate Tanya

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 19 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great Chapter as always, yes please send me a teaser...

Author's Response:

hi.

thanks for the review. Sorry for the fact that it took me so long to get back to you with a teaser.

thanks for your continuing support.

fiona (robsessed73)

This teaser is unbeta'd

I was in the car driving us to the movie theater thinking that I was the luckiest bastard alive to have this beauty on my arm. I was so excited that she agreed to go to the sweethearts dance with me on Valentines day and just seeing her in my Letterman Jacket, gives me a hard on, knowing that she is mine and that she is wearing something that I wore.
I finally pulled up outside the movie theater and turned off the engine before leaning over to give my Bella a sweet but chaste kiss.
"You ready for us to continue our date," I asked sweetly.
She looked up at me while smiling before nodding.
I got out of the car and went to open her car door but she bet me to it.
I wrapped my arms around her before pulling her close and walking up to the ticket counter to buy our tickets for Face Punch.
"I DON'T FUCKING BELIEVE THIS! THIS MUST BE A SICK JOKE," shouted a nasally voice that I hate.
We turned to see Tanya storming towards us, anger and fury flashing violently in her eyes.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great Chapter, I am glad she stood up to Tanya, now lets hope she is strong for what ever happens next..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 23 May 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

No the cops will be all over her

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 11 Apr 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Glad your back

Summary:

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Once a week we spend time together, showing with music and dance everything we can't say with words. How many lessons will it take us to say the only three little words that matter the most? AH, ExB.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17100 Read Count: 1659
[Report This] Published: 17 Mar 2013 Updated: 31 Mar 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Lesson One: Flirting

loved it, sad that she had to leave. maybe she is going to forks.

Author's Response:

Hi there:

Thanks for reading and glad you're liking it so far. You'll see what happened to Bella in the next chapter.

Thanks again and have a great day.

Love, CL82

My Savior by caligirl1014 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 52]
Summary:

Bella lives a hard life with her abusive husband, James. The couple moves to a small town in Texas. There, Bella finds that her green-eyed neighbor saves her in more ways than one. Rated NC-17 for abuse, rape, language, mature themes. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9043 Read Count: 12627
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2013 Updated: 26 Mar 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

well aleast Edward is still outside, maybe he will hear and go in after you and help..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 16 May 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

someone is going to get it...

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Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 24 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - The Song of My Life

Wow I would really love to read this story.. But it broke my heart to read the first two chapters, great writing by the way..so I am going to wait until it is finished then read..

Author's Response:

Hi rclaurel3 - I'm sorry it broke your heart, and totally understand as well as respect your choice to wait until it's completed. Should be wrapping up sooner than I'd like to :). In the meantime, please consider joining my Facebook group: https://www.facebook.com/groups/158767884293997/ or follow me on Twitter @livwtilight4ev1. There's an author blog, http://luvtwilight4eva.blogspot.com/, that you can check out once you've begun reading. Happy Wednesday.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - Seasons in the Sun

Wow I haven't heard that song in years, brought alot of memories to me..I sworn that I wouldn't read till the ending because it was sad, but I broke and it is amazing..

Author's Response:

Hi rclaurel3 - thank you for taking a chance on this story even though you'd stated your desire to wait until it's completed. I'm glad it's bringing back some memories. Please consider joining me at https://www.facebook.com/groups/158767884293997/ and there's a blog where you can meet the characters, listen to the songs, and see what they wore. Go to http://luvtgilight4eva.blogspot.com/?zx=d6ce92d1ad47f1bc

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Don't Nobody Bring Me No Bad News

Damn he was shot, and Bella you have a guy you are going to marry and you tell them Edward is your boyfriend...please make up your mind

Author's Response:

rclaurel3 - thank yor for your review. Sad about Cullen being shot once again. And poor, young Izzy, she's engaged to one man and pregnant for another. But, I think the fact she chooses to lay claim to him, as her 'boyfriend', is telling, don't you. As always, please visit the blog at http://luvtwilight4eva.blogspot.com/p/lookbook-of-songs-of-our-lives.html and please consider joining me on Facebook at https://www.facebook.com/groups/158767884293997/. Thank you again. I'm so glad you've broken your rule and are reading as I post. If you have any questions, please leave them here and I'll be happy to answer as long as it doesn't force me to reveal a spoiler, which I know you wouldn't like, right? LOL. Enjoy your Wednesday.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Knockin' on Heaven's Door

what Tanya is having his baby too....no that just can not happen.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 02 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - A Day in the Life

well to be honest they both were cheating on the patners, her with seth and him with Tanya

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Daddy's Little Girl

damn how many kids did he have with Tanya..

Author's Response:

so, you know the answer is 2 - a set of twins, by now. so sorry for the late response.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 30 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - You and Me and Time

excellent chapter,

Author's Response:

glad you liked it, rclaurel3

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

You know I said I wouldn't read this till it was done, but the writing is so amazing I couldn't stay away and I am glad I didn't.....Carlisle is a real pieace of work and he calls himself a father....Em doesn't have to be his biological son, if he still loves him like a son.

Author's Response:

rclaurel3

 

i am glad you have joined me on this journey. thanks for the review. edward's father is all kinds of things :)

He Didn't Know by msbullcullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 186]
Summary:

Edward and Bella thought they would be together forever. They didn't know that fate would pull them apart. Edward didn't know many things. He didn't know people could be so cruel. He didn't know that one night at work would change his life forever. However, he DID know that he loved Bella with all of his heart and they belonged together. He didn't know how but they would be together.


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35786 Read Count: 41109
[Report This] Published: 24 Mar 2013 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

She seen him with Rose, she should have atleast confronted him and told him about the baby

Author's Response: It was Irina he was hugging. She knows Rose. She was scared and immature. She wanted to protect everyone.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Can not wait for more, love the chapter

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and reading.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 23 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

4 months that is all she has to wait to find out if that was true, personally it doesn't sound like something Edward would say..and be so calious about

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow this is a cluster f***....I hope someone gets Renee for all this B.S. she is spouting

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

excellent story

Kidnap101 by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 626]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has just one mission; to save her childhood best friend from the clutches of Hollywood. She's got her work cut out for her, but she'll do it, even if she has to do things that she really doesn't want to. Written purely for laughs.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 64 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11080 Read Count: 119831
[Report This] Published: 26 Apr 2013 Updated: 04 May 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 May 2013 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57

EXCELLENT!!!!!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 May 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Shit Jacob, kick his ass.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 May 2013 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64

great little story

Summary:

 

Edward has had a guitar in his hands for a long time. He forms a band with a couple of guys from school and plan to move to LA when school is over. Will The Midnight Riders become famous? Or, will they just be a shooting star?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 81615 Read Count: 6274
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2013 Updated: 04 Nov 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Love Bites

Shes pregnant, about 3 months or more...and Kate I knew she was up to something

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Mama Told Me Not To Come

As long as he doesn't string her along, and get the divorce....they may make it..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Feel Like Making Love

excellent chapter, as long as Edward doesn't cheat on Bella I am ok...but what about Kate..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Outtake #1 Mother In Law

Kate is pregnant and wanting to sleep with Edward and then say the baby is his..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Gypsy Woman

can not wait for more

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 16 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Simple Man

Actually she is better off without him and raise her son and find a nice man who will Love her and not through her away like he did.....can not wait for the sequel to see how he redeems himself

Summary: Past Featured Story

I couldn't believe I was doing this. But I had stayed quiet for too long. There was no one in the world for me except for him. It's time to stop a wedding. AH/Edward&Bella


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59051 Read Count: 37693
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2013 Updated: 28 Oct 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 May 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Speak Now

oh yea this should be good..

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I hope you enjoy what is coming next :).

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 May 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two: Fearless

reat chapter, what could have possibly gone wrong to where she left him, then come back 4 yrs later waiting him back.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review :). All of your questions will be answered as the story goes on

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: Come In With The Rain

She was being really selfish about him having to go school in Italy... They could have worked it out its was only a few years..

Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. You are right, definitely selfish :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Four: The Other Side Of The Door

well they love each other, what went wrong... can not wait to find out.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. All will be revealed in due time :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 02 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve: Cold As You

Let him have Tanya, Bella needs to move on and find a man that can love her and treat her good..

Author's Response:

Thank for your review :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

aboaf

 

Bella's life changed all because of a fire and some hot firemen!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 18487 Read Count: 13054
[Report This] Published: 13 Jun 2013 Updated: 15 Oct 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

how did her house catch on fire, if she was burning them on the front lawn.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh yea 3 for 1, where are Rose and Alice..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So this is a story about Bella and all three guys...loved it but will have to back out not my cup of tee...good luck

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 16 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter, I trust you to make it good..

Summary:

Meet Isabella Marie Swan, a twenty year old, struggling college student with a bright future but a dark and painful past.

Meet Edward Anthony Masen Cullen, a convicted Mafioso serving time for his crimes.

Now join Isabella and Edward as actions, circumstances and consequences set them on a collision course. At the end of it all, will the pure and untainted Isabella survive the callous and seductive touch of a man no better than the Devil?

 

It is a dark tale of seduction, passion and lust. Blood will be shed. Lives will be lost. But what do you expect when you Dance with the Devil?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 41255 Read Count: 87105
[Report This] Published: 19 Jun 2013 Updated: 31 Jan 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Shit this is good I can not wait to read more

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 14 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

well I am totally blow away in that one

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow that was some hot stuff their, I love this story

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 10 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

You go Edward hit it were it counts

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Excellent!

La Cantante by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 625]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is a freshman in college studying to be a music teacher. Edward is a pre-med student at the same school but secretly wants to be a musician. They both meet and sparks fly. However, Bella's past may make it difficult. ExB, AH EDITED and REPOSTED!

La Cantante

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 100 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 594750 Read Count: 327893
[Report This] Published: 03 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Apr 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

lets hope she kungfu's his ass

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

cool can't wait

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Someone tore her room apart..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

it's a big ocean and he's a good swimmer he can end up just about anywhere I hope they do catch him I'm glad to hear the injuries aren't too bad

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

He won't die until you put a bullet through his head...Jerk

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Excellente I loved it

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 11 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

I hope Bella is ok.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

I would have went over to the reporters and told them what a dead beat Dad he is....

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 11 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75

His father or Esme flew in.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285479
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 delicious good-night kiss

Loved it, and does Bella have a secret..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 56: Chapter 56 - utter chaos!

I love it Too

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 ~ delicious mushroom ravioli

Loved it, Wow can not wait to read all the details of Kate sexcapes..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 cup cake

I think the child belonged to Renee and Phil..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

can not wait for more.....Loving it

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53~ barbecued sausage & potato salad

excellent chapter

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish

they can fight it, she is Bellas halfsister and that trumps nephews...and since they will be married

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

So when Bella did the background check on Edward she accidentlly found Kate w/Edwards child...and no one new because they didn't go through the pictures till now....canb not wait for him to confront Kate

Author's Response:

You are so good to keep track of it all.  Yes the showdown between Edward and Kate promises to be a doozy.  She's betrayed him three times.  

thanks for your comments and for reading my story.

cheers, 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

loved how they all can together as a family unit...get to hiring the PI, Kate should be in so dire need these days since the professor left.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 - Viva Las Vegas

Loved It

Summary:

Edward arrives a week late to Whitlock University to find his new roommate is not what he expected. At all. ALL Human. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7619 Read Count: 3457
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2013 Updated: 08 Oct 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: It's getting a bit crowded

excellent, I little rough to read, but good

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh that was excellent...can not wait for more

Summary: Past Featured Story

Story cover

The summer of 2005 was the summer that changed Bella Swan's life forever. Sent to Ohio by her mother to attend a school for debutante girls not quite up to par, she meets Edward Masen, an apprentice. But is that really all he is? A story about psychological abuse, redemption, and healing. AH {{REWRITE/Formerly titled The Perfect Partner Program}}

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93131 Read Count: 110634
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2013 Updated: 10 Feb 2019
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 Sep 2014 Title: Shattered Reflections

Oh someone is in trouble...Is Edward using Bella or does he actually care for her

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2014 Title: Shattered Reflections

All I can say is thanks for this chapter...So Renee is the mastermind,,,.but who are her followers
Edward?
Jessica
Liam
Mr.&Mrs.Cullens

can not wait to see the showdown

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2014 Title: Shattered Reflections

I thought Edward was an only child, and why does he want to break her..

Author's Response: I don't think I ever mentioned Edward being an only child...He needs to break her walls so that he can manipulate her into being as her mother thinks she should be

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Nov 2014 Title: Shattered Reflections

You go girl and if he has changed then maybe its worth it

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Date: 18 Dec 2014 Title: Shattered Reflections

Who's baby is it

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2015 Title: Shattered Reflections

Yea but maybe he is back to stay with you till the baby is born, and who is the Baby's Father.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2015 Title: Shattered Reflections

I knew it....he is back for her and the baby

by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed, Read, Read, Read, Read, to read, to read, to read, to read, to read, Tufano79 Stories, Tufano79 Stories, Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 1970 Updated: 01 Jan 1970
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Date: 07 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

How can she say that to him, they were going to kill her...has she completely lost her mind, has he ever showed her she should fear him NO!

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Date: 07 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Damn you killed off Rose and Emmett there was noway to absolve them

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Date: 07 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

looks like a chastity belt, but stylish

Daddy by my mermaid bella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Charlie, Renee, and Bella

"Gag the little b*tch," Laurent suggested and Dimitri found an old bloody rag and shoved it in her mouth and though her screams were muffled they were still potent and still coming."Will you kill her already ?" about to bring the hatchet down she suddenly stopped and we froze." I suck at summaries. Rated M for violence, gore, lemons, language possible incest who knows


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Angst, Family, Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1088 Read Count: 1663
[Report This] Published: 06 Aug 2013 Updated: 27 Oct 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Fun With Friends

well it looks interesting

Author's Response:

good interesting or bad interesting ?

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Squirm

good

Summary: Past Featured Story

BANNER BY: DeeBelle1 fanfic.

SUMMARY:  Bella is in the wrong place at the wrong time.  What happens when Edward, a mob man decides to keep her, rather than kill her when she witnesses a murder he commits?  Will she ever willingly love him?  Will he ever trust her?  Birthday story for WeeKitty.  AH/M

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 40121 Read Count: 98299
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2013 Updated: 18 Oct 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I think she put up with more of his bullshit, then he had with her....

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

He is an uber ASS, I don't see you redeeming him any time soon.....Love Esme and Carlisle though..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yea but I'm sure he has his own gun..and probally a goog shot as the rest...

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 24 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

A little high strong, shit he has no trust in her even after 2 yrs...I think I would rather die then marry his sorry ass..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well he is back to being an asshole....Bella needs to leave his sorry ass.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Well still an Ass I see, but in all fairness I wouldn't want Jake there either

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

probably so he can keep an eye on her, he didn't change that fast....he is too controlling

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

not long, he gives me whiplash...

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Somewhere in life I took a wrong turn and never found my way back. For me there were no second chances, there were no redos...or at least that's what I thought, until I met a girl on a bus who looked just like me...just a little richer. 

Contains Daddyward/Doctorward

Title Change! Once called My Redo Life

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24485 Read Count: 23444
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh Alice nothing slips by her

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Date: 06 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Isadora Meet Isabella

loved it, can not wait to see how this unfolds..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loving this, can not wait for family bonding time

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

So the real Isabella was an empath but noone help her to control her gift, Isadora can freeze and blow up things and she is training with Esme....why did Esme not help Isabella and what will happen when Edward finds out