Reviews by rclaurel3
Second Chances by melloncollie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
Summary:

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Edward and Bella parted ways after high school and never spoke again. 5 years later, when Edward dies in a car crash, Bella gets the chance to live out what could have been if she made a different decision 5 years ago. AH, HEA. contains adult themes and language.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100196 Read Count: 12206
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 17: Save Me

So I wonder if Edward's time is up and the second chance won't work..He was meant to die.

Summary: Past Featured Story

chemistry

banner made by: ME !!

Bella is in her senior year of high school.  She hated all science until she met Mr. Cullen, her biology teacher.  He is older, she is just 18. Will their chemistry last past the doors of the classroom?

This a B/E story line

I should have been patient and waited for my Beta  she is great !!

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This has been Beta'd by RAH07890


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14159 Read Count: 54576
[Report This] Published: 23 Aug 2012 Updated: 25 Nov 2012
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow great start, I hope you will have regular updating

Author's Response:

Yes I will !! I am going to try  every say as long as that works with my Beta

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I like this little dabble that you have going on, can not wait to read more

All Alone by robsessed73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 785]
Summary: Past Featured Story

All Alone

I am a 16 Year old girl from a small town in Forks. I have a loving family and the greatest twin brother. My life changed forever the day I won a radio contest to attend a film premiere and meet my actor crush, Edward Masen. After spending one night with him my life will never be the same again. Rated M for language and lemons.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145027 Read Count: 167374
[Report This] Published: 25 Aug 2012 Updated: 14 Jun 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26

love it

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I know Bella is 16, but how old is Edward and now we find out he has a fiance, Is he just using Bella as a quick fuck.. great chapter as always can not wait to read more

Author's Response: hi thanks for the review. I love reading them and i'm so happy for the response I get from this story. enjoy the rest of the story here is a teaser for chapter 6 I went out the door and started banging on Jasper's door. He opened up wearing only his boxer shorts. There was a smell of sex coming from the room and I felt like gagging. "Jazz you've got to help me. It's Bella," I said desperatly. He looked at me with a look of anger and worry on his face. You could easily see that he was very protective of her. "What the fuck did you do now. Wait, I better put some clothes on and come out and join you. I wouldn't want to be in your shoes when Alice wakes up," he spat and closed the door.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: All Alone

So she really isn't on the pill and was afraid to tell him, so I am assuming that they will meet back up in LA some time after 3 months. great story also read it on ff.

Author's Response: hi. thanks for your review. I love reading them all. I hope that you continue to enjoy the story. here is a teaser for chapter 5 "Bella, what is wrong? Did you just come from Edward's room?" Jasper got up off the floor and put his arms around me. "What happened darlin," he asked. I started crying and told them both the whole story. Jasper eyes filled with fury when I told them that he was trying to think of a way to leave me so that I would'nt be little miss clingy. He got up and started pacing the room. "That bastard. I know that he is a manwhore but this is a new low even for him. I see the way he treats girls but they are experienced and they usually have a different guy in their bed every night and don't get me started on Tanya Denali. I turned a blind eye before but never again," he yelled angrily.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12

No, I don't want him anywhere near her, he is a dog. thinking about bella and the electricity and taking the bimbo in the copy room is just wrong.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 27

Wow can this two not catch a break

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 28

excellent chapter

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 21 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29

Love it.....

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 30

I'm here, excellent chapter....will these two ever catch a break

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 32

can't wait...loving this

Bases Loaded by JessAndTAT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 327]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Spending summer vacation traveling with the St. Louis Cardinals isn’t every teen girls idea of fun.  What happens when the teen daughter of the team doc falls for one of the players?  Can they find love or will life get in the way?  AH/Cannon and Non-Cannon Pairings/Rated NC-17

Wonderful Banner made by: Stephenie Masen

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 115192 Read Count: 87326
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 01 Dec 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 18 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow great chapter, Jasper is a world class ass..can not wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter.  Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions.  Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once.  As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes.  Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father.  Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day.  (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.)  There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity.  Hope you continue to enjoy it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~

TEASER:   “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.

“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.

“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.

“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.

“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago.  And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first.  Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control.  Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”

“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.

“Mom…”

“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.

“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.

“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

great chapter, can not wait till they see each other when she is 18

Author's Response:

Wow another chapter that has gotten a bunch of awesome reviews almost right away.  Thank you all so much for everything you say.  We’re seriously loving the reaction this story is pulling from our readers.  There are quite a few comments about Carlisle continuing to allow Bella to room with Edward.  At this point Carlisle may have suspicions, but he also knows Bella is safe with Edward.  I think he wants to believe it is all out of ‘familial’ love that Edward looks after Bella.  Even though Bella is seventeen, he doesn’t want her occupying her own room.  Edward seems like the lesser of the evils, and Esme is also there coaching him on how it is okay.  More about Esme’s back story will surface, and you will all get your answers about her view of marriage.  Ben will not sell his story to the press, but that was an awesome idea, and had we not already had an ending for Ben that is even more perfect, we may have used that so KUDOS to TWF24 for the great idea plant.  Ben is a jerk right now, but he will eventually revert back to the nice guy Bella thought he was, but we won’t tell you how, just yet.  As promised here is a bit of a teaser for you on the next chapter...and of course it is a good teaser too, but subject to changes during beta process.

“They’re here!” I yell as I take off running. As I fling open the door Alice is the first person I see. We throw ourselves at each other. “I missed you! We have so much to talk about.”

“I know!” she says as she lets go of me. “I brought your birthday presents too.”

“Presents!” I say excitedly.

“Yeah! We’ll do that when we go hang in your room,” she tells me as Esme grabs me in a hug. My Dad bear hugs me and heads for the kitchen because he’s starving. I love that he feels so at home here. Edward is the last one through the door and I look behind me before I lean in a kiss him quickly. I let him through the door and he pulls me in for a hug.

“I’ve missed you, Baby,” he says kissing my neck.

“I missed you. I love you,” I whisper to him.

“I love you, too,” he says right back without missing a beat.

“Oh my God,” I hear behind us.

I know we are EVIL for leaving it there.  It gives you plenty of time to wonder who it was that was behind them saying OMG... See ya next Wednesday, Kasi (& Jess)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 19 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

oh shit Edward is older then Carlisle.. I must have messed that

Author's Response:

Wow, what another outstanding bunch of reviews we have gotten for this chapter.  Want to address some things to cover a lot of comments and questions.  Yes jasper is a *INSERT YOUR OWN CHOICE WORD HERE*, and as much as Jess and I both really like Jasper as a character as a whole we wanted to make him not a nice guy for once.  As for non-cannon pairings, we have Elizabeth and James, we have Jake as a gay man, and we have a surprise upcoming, but we want to be very clear this is an EDWARD AND BELLA story, therefore they will be together and cannon, well as cannon as they can be, with our changes of age, humanity, and attitudes.  Alice really is pregnant, and Jasper really is the father.  Bella and Edward were keeping their relationship low key and not out in the spotlight, because they are not sure if Liz does or doesn’t remember, and they don’t want to ruin her wedding day.  (Besides, we had Jasper and Alice to make a scene... LOL.)  There will be more time jumps and drama ahead, but fear not we are working on keeping this story a nice mix between drama and hilarity.  Hope you continue to enjoy it.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Kasi (& Jess)~

TEASER:   “Whoa, we aren’t thinking about having a baby right now,” Edward says as I cling to him. I feel like he is going to leave and never come back.

“You shut the fuck up,” Mom says pointing her finger in Edward’s face.

“Mom, stop being so mean! You weren’t this freaked out when I was with Ben,” I say trying to get her to calm down.

“Yeah, well, you weren’t having sex with him! I know the two of you are having sex!” she yells.

“First of all, it is none of your business!” I yell at her. “Second of all I put myself on birth control long ago.  And thirdly I did have sex with Ben, he was unfortunately my first.  Even though I was stupid enough to make him my first, I was smart enough to take care of my own birth control.  Oh and for the record, I always made Ben wear a condom and pull out. I do not want a child right now and as for Edward, he respects that.”

“What the... I’m so mad I can’t even think straight.” Mom stands there and she looks like she is going to cry.

“Mom…”

“No, don’t say a word to me,” she says as my eyes fills with tears.

“Liz, she’s eighteen there is really nothing we can do. Besides, he’s better than Ben,” Dad says as Edward tries to console me.

“He’s older than you are Carlisle!” Mom yells.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh what happened to Alice, did she run away to find Jasper or does she have post-pardom (baby blues)

Author's Response:

Well it seems to be the general consensus that everyone thinks Alice is a nit-wit.  Many of you think that she is run off to be with Jasper.  A few of you think post-partum depression.  There will be lots of answers and clue along the way over the next few chapters.  Things will really roll along here story line wise.  Many of you are thinking that Bella and Edward will end up raising Landon.  I will tell you this much for 100% sure, Bella and Edward will not be raising Landon.  Things are going to be a tad bit sticky here for a little while, but don’t give up on Bella and Edward.  They have some growing pains to get past, and maybe a tantrum or two as well.  The road may get bumpy for a few, but the road will even out, just have faith.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Kasi & Jess~

Teaser:  “Wanna go pick out a Christmas tree with me?” I ask Corin as we walk out of our last final. School is done for the year and I’m so happy.

“I would love to! Can I help you decorate too?” she asks very excitedly.

“Yeah, but we have to go see Edward so we can get more money. He doesn’t have any decorations at the house,” I tell her as her eyes go wide. “That and I haven’t seen him in three days, so it will be a treat in itself.”

“Three days?!” she asks knowing that is not normal for us.

“Yeah, I threw a fit the last time we were together, so who knows if he will even give me more money,” I say remembering the spanking he gave for being a brat. In my defense though, he had it coming, so I took the spanking for the fact that was the most attention I had gotten from in since Thanksgiving.

Alice was to blame because everyone was so worried about her. I even met Garrett, and what a treat that was, and of course he was pissed. I did not want to be on the receiving end of that fight. He said he couldn’t wait to get his hands on Alice, but Esme called dibs. I have never seen Esme so mad before in my life, even my dad who always was able to calm her was having issues.  My dad has been amazing though with Landon, and it brought back memories for me when I was little.  Edward talked about flying out to LA, but he never did. I was thinking of going and finding her, but I knew Edward would never let me go by myself and he didn’t have time to do anything.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

great chapter, He is getting better, so what ever he is working on at work should slow down after the new year, I can relate..in retail its always busy on the holidays then slows down.

Author's Response:

Well I am very sorry for the lateness of this review reply.  WOW things are crazy, after the New Year around here.  Jess and I and our families all had a nice holiday, and new year, so thank you to all of you for not only the well wishes, but also the cheer and happiness you helped spread.   Bella and Edward will have a few rough chapters coming up, and we ask that you all keep in mind that we are a Bella and Edward HEA—kind of gals.  A lot of you  think that Alice is on drugs, dating Jasper, suffering from Post Pardon Depression, or just generally unstable ... well—we promise to have your answers to you within the next few chapters.  The next update will send a few people into a tizzy, however again we ask that you trust us—because the chapter has a lot of reasoning for the future in it for Bella and Edward.  These two are awfully hard headed and sometimes they need to regroup and learn from their own mistakes and choices.  Please keep in mind that Bella is in this relationship 100% consensually and so is Edward.   Thanks for reading and reviewing, Jess and Kasi~

Teaser:  “Bella, I’m home,” I hear Edward yell from downstairs. 

He was telling the truth when he said things would calm down on the work front after the New Year. Now that he had more of a set schedule, he was lazy when he was home. I was going to school, cleaning, and cooking. He was working but that was all. At first I was cool with it because I like to take care of him. I have been asking and asking to go out and do something together, though. He keeps telling me no, so I’m taking matters into my own hands. 

Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One. It’s a dance club for people under twenty-one. Edward could go if he wanted to, but I highly doubt he would. I hear him walking up the stairs just as I finish getting dressed. I have on a pair of tight, low rise jeans and a band shirt that shows off my figure. I know I have a nice body and I think I look hot.

“Where are you going looking like that?” Edward asks as he starts to undress.

“Corin and I are going to Under Twenty-One,” I tell him as he starts to laugh. “Why are you laughing?”

“Because you actually think I’m letting you go there without me,” he says as he throws his dirty clothes in the basket.

“Oh... so you’re going to come with me?” I ask, hopeful that he is really going to go.

“No; I worked all day and we have to be up early because we will have Landon all day tomorrow,” he tells me.

“Yeah, I know. I won’t be out really late,” I say as I head for the bathroom. Edward doesn’t say anything else right away, so I finish doing my makeup and hair.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella met in High School. After graduation they lost contact and went on with their life. Years later they meet again. Both have a lot of secrets.

They’re both unhappy and when they bump in to each other, they start to realize that there is more than just friendship. A/H OC ExB


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 75604 Read Count: 30198
[Report This] Published: 13 Sep 2012 Updated: 27 Mar 2016
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 25: Epilogue

loved that everything worked out and they will have a new edition soon

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Esme Cullen's matchmaking leads to her son Edward dating fledging wedding photographer, Bella Swan. Falling for each other is effortless and soon Bella's career begins to take off. However, not everyone is quite so thrilled about Bella's happiness and success. A continuation of "The Wedding Photographer".


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139889 Read Count: 63249
[Report This] Published: 25 Sep 2012 Updated: 21 Apr 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Brunch

Love the chapter, I ove that they are so open and honest with eachother, can not wait to see what happens next..

Author's Response:

These two are very open and honest with each other.  I wanted to explore a couple who actually communicate! 

Glad you enjoyed it, and I really appreciate the review!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 06 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - Question and Answer

great chapter, I love their interaction..this is such a refreshing story...

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I am really glad you liked their interaction.  These two are fun to write. 

I always aim to write something unique and refreshing, so that's one of the nicest compliments I could get!

Thank you so much for the review.  I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Just the Beginning

great chapter, can not wait for their date night

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I did my best to make the next chapter worth the wait, so I think you'll enjoy it! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward is a famous actor. Bella is his cousin's roommate. They meet, again. He doesn't trust her. She doesn't like him.

 


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15855 Read Count: 7503
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Outtake: The Next Morning-SU4K donation

well I hope everything works out, but there always will be bumps in the road to happiness

Author's Response:

Yes, there will be, that's life. ;-)
Tnx for reading!

You Own Me by bee1982, too_cute_24 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1102]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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You Own Me banner made by the talented Ellen. 

The continuation of Bee1982's  one shot 'One Wild Night'

written with toocute24. 

At the roll of the dice, Edward wins what he has been dreaming of for the last two years. A night with his mob boss's son's girlfriend, sexy pole dancer Isabella Swan. What will happen in one night full of passion and lust?

What dangers will follow after their one wild night


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read, Stories I've read
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22 Read Count: 241001
[Report This] Published: 30 Sep 2012 Updated: 25 Apr 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: You Own Me

I hope Bella remembers what she sees and heard with Jimmy and Alec, I think Alec is trying to frame Edward when it was Alec himself that sold her to Jimmy..I am making a guess that is who the mystery POV, but you could always surprise me.. great chapter

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2013 Title: You Own Me

Loved it, I hope these two can figure some way to be together...and someone needs to off Alec

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Apr 2013 Title: You Own Me

can not wait for the sequel

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2013 Title: You Own Me

James is back for bella, i think..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Mar 2013 Title: You Own Me

great chapter as always, can not wait to read more.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: You Own Me

*Waves hands Me* Wow Alec and James had Angela killed and were are the two girls. I am also glad Aro approved of B&E

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Jan 2013 Title: You Own Me

Alec just found them...

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: You Own Me

Great Chapter as always.. Sad flashback of little Edward. I hope they get there happy ending

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: You Own Me

i think once Edward is fully recovered he is going to wipe Alec out...he will have the means to do so.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Twenty-two-year-old Bella Swan works for Edward Cullen, the thirty-nine-year-old Vice President at Providence Medical Center in Portland.  After years of fighting their attraction to each other, a quick tryst in the break room leads to a thrilling but complicated relationship.  Trying not to get caught by the prying eyes of their entire workplace, they’re forced to hide their relationship and deal with his ex-wife and his sixteen-year-old daughter.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 190983 Read Count: 94835
[Report This] Published: 21 May 2013 Updated: 18 Jun 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - The Shower

great chapter, I love the alone time at his home..

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Glad you enjoyed it.  They're definitely having fun with all of the alone time as well.  :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - The Dining Room

Excellent Chapter, I enjoy reading your story.. I am not good on reviewing every chapter

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! I am glad to hear you're enjoying it.  I understand that you can't always review every chapter.  I do love hearing from you when you are able to though!

Heir Apparent by Gnomea Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 162]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Evilnat

 

noun. An heir apparent is a person who is first in line of succession and cannot be displaced from inheriting, except by a change in the rules of succession. E/B. OOC.    


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: To Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65577 Read Count: 63912
[Report This] Published: 09 Oct 2012 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 May 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

One step forward,two steps back...what is she waiting for, so he had a fudge buddy. He Loves you.

Author's Response:

Don't worry, she's just taking it all in. Everything's gonna be good soon. Thanks.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So where does he know Bella from.. great story

Author's Response:

Bella will make an appearance next chapter, so hopefully your question will be answered.

Thank you for reading. ;)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

For once I think Jessica is a good influence on her, but she can't wait forever to tell him...If he is going to be King then he will have obligations to fill and someone will come along and snatch him up.

Author's Response:

Her fear is making her second guess her feelings but Jess made her see what she might lose again if she let her fear win. Next chapter will be good, I promise. Thanks.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

well I like it! can not wait to read more

Author's Response:

Thank you. =)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well he wants more, but can he handle everything that comes with him. loved the chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks. ;)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Loved it!..can not wait for the ball

Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Loved it!, can not wait for the ball...I hope there is no problem for them, they need a Happy day..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Love it, but Bella can really be way out there in her thinking....Her life will be under a microscope so if she can not handle the pressure she needs to let him go...

Summary:

After a drunken night, Isabella fell pregnant by an unknown man. With her brother's help, she raises her child, but what happen when two little boys with green-eyes show up at her day-care? Will all her questions finally be answered? All-human


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 85507 Read Count: 27006
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2012 Updated: 18 Dec 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

So he became a doctor and he did and illegal act by running the DNA without her consent. great chapter, please don't give up for lack of reviews.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, it made me smile :) The next chapter will be posted soon! (within the next hour!) Don't worry, I'm not going anywhere :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Oh shit daddy is there, I wonder if he will see the resemblance between Dr.Cullen and his graddaughter....great story keep up the good work..

Author's Response:

You'll have to wait and see. He might. Thank you, and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

loved the flashback, kids can be devious

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 23 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

great chapter.. can not wait to see how date night goes

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

what did he do this time or is bella jumping to conclusions.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

He played in the band with Emmett, how does he not know the Swan name and was he that drunk and messed with 18 yr old Bella and got her pregnant.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 14 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

So she was the love of his life, Lets hope when Bella and Edward get together he won't say she is the love he missed out of, It would be a lie, because he knew what he did with Bella and knew there was a possibility that her baby was his...I would never forgive him for that, I would let him in on the child's life but I would not get into a phydical relationship with him

Serenity's Prayer by ladylibre Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

SP

 

When Edward takes Bella into the forest to dump her, her reaction completely surprises him. Will this be the end of B&E or will they find a new path to forever? A canon-based yet very different AU approach to New Moon. Some OOC and OC.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 242771 Read Count: 26820
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2012 Updated: 17 Mar 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The End?

Heavenly

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Turnabout

Loved it, showed him

Summary:

Bella the teen mom. Edward the sexy olderman. How do they meet and can they have more? Lets stalk them and see...

Very little angst and as sweet as i can write!

 

thanks to christagbanners for the banner!


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 35295 Read Count: 95343
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2012 Updated: 15 Nov 2012
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

why is she thinking negatively, Is it not what she wants.

Loose Screws by AgoodWITCH Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 505]
Summary:

When your college degree and $2.25 will get you on a ride on a subway, if you weren’t stuck in the Podunk town of Forks, Bella struggles to figure out her adult life. A job that was a last resort, and a feeling she can’t get rid of lead her down a path she never imagined. Forks Hardware is the beginning of that journey, and it’s easy to see that to work there requires a few loose screws.

 

looseSCREWSbanner


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 86660 Read Count: 173570
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2012 Updated: 31 Mar 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 113: Chapter 113

Wow I hope he makes a full recover, but from the sounds of his injuries it will be a long and rough road ahead...I hope when she tells him about the baby that will help.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

great chapter, can not wait to read more

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

They are working as a team, great story and loved the chapters

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

loved all the update, can not wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 16 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

She may be a good friend, but you have only known her a short while pleae don't move her in your house, take her to the boathouse

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

Great Chapters, can not wait for more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

santa

A letter to Santa prompts an intervention Dickens’ style to step in.  After being visited by ghosts separately, both Bella and Edward go on journeys through the other’s past, present and future.

 

They will not make the journey alone. Edward will be joined by the females of his family. While Bella is joined by the Cullen men.

 

Will Edward learn anything? Bella? What about Miss Rose?

 

Charles Dickens’s  A Christmas Carol with a Twilight twist.

fs

Posted orginally on Fanfiction


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37436 Read Count: 5179
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2012 Updated: 21 Dec 2012
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Alice or Emmett

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Bella's grandma Marie, since Elizabeth visited Bella...

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

Loving this

More Than Life by Tardis19 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mtl

Bestselling author, Edward Cullen is newly divorced and sworn off women until Bella Swan comes into his life and turns everything upside down. However, his ex is still pining after him and will do all she can to get him back. Can Edward and Bella have their happily ever after?

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 85675 Read Count: 43861
[Report This] Published: 22 Dec 2012 Updated: 14 Mar 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 25 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Eward you are so stupid sometimes, thanks for taking the vote away from her. she is hurting just like you.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

mommy's home

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

lovely first chapter...

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I wonder who is calling

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I wonder if its Tanya breaking in, or is someone trying to make him have a meltdown..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great Chapter, so someone is trying to bring his book to life, Tanya and her crazy cousin..figuring maybe they can get some money or mke him seem crazy.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Oh shit someone shot him.

Summary: Past Featured Story

tglc

Perpetually down on her luck, things start to turn around for Bella in the strangest of places. Her new job. At a strip club. When a certain … 'Client' takes an interest in her. But how long will that luck last? Romance/Suspense/Humor. AH. BPOV.

 

Banner Mady By LOT 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Friendship, Humor, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87466 Read Count: 152445
[Report This] Published: 30 Dec 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loved it! me too can not wait for more.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh I can not wait to find out who is watching her......great start

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 31 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh is Edward her secret admirer, can not wait to find out

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great Chapter, so does Edward own the bar or is he just a well known patron.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Does she know that she is his girl, because the way she is acting she doesn't. great chapter

Summary:

The road of life is long and hard, filled with obstacles. The road of stardom is worse. There were many stops along that winding, challenging road, for the one and only, Mr. Edward Cullen.  


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6055 Read Count: 1274
[Report This] Published: 01 Jan 2013 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

then he met and married Bella, can not wait for the rest

Tribute by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3420]
Summary: Past Featured Story

The Few. The Proud. The Strong. Returning Marine Edward Masino has spent the first years of his adult life embodying that motto. But as he moves back to the Brooklyn neighborhood where he grew up, he is introduced to a whole new code of ethics. He quickly learns that some rules cry out to be bent, but there are others that, if broken, will get him killed.

*Drama. Humor. Romance. Hurt. Friendship. Crime, you name it. It's listed Drama/Romance, but there are many facets. EVENTUAL Canon Couples (Rome wasn't built in a day) Edward/Bella.

Beta'd by HollettLA

Banner by CaraNo


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 123 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 200288 Read Count: 717244
[Report This] Published: 11 Jan 2013 Updated: 23 Sep 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 78: Chapter 78

Loving this story!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74

Great Chapters, but I feel as Bella really is to immuture for Edward and to have a baby at this point in life..But you may suprise me.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

loved the chapters, can not wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

great chapter, what is up with Emmett.. and what will happen if he finds out Edward killed Jake will they fight

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93

great chapters, can not wait for more

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

she was just as nervous as he was. not knowing where they stand with each other.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

great chapter.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

He is just confused, first Bella is all after him and know they both are getting there signals cross.they need to be upfront with each other...maybe she is just to young to really be in a relationship

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 14 May 2013 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 87

I love the one on one time, now for some action. I can not wait to see what these two will be up against.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 96: Chapter 96

I have faith, plus they need to talk and work things out..that is life and when you love each other, everything will fall in to place

Summary: Past Featured Story

tig

 

She left him without explanation, now she returns to make things right. Will he give her the chance to explain? Will she be brave enough to face him? This is the story of two families in a feud, which started to end the day a kiss was stolen ten years ago. Written for Katalina.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9888 Read Count: 2769
[Report This] Published: 16 Jan 2013 Updated: 25 Jan 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 16 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: L'unico Che Io Amavo

Loved it, I guess distance does make the heart grow fonder...and the parents where behind it all along well moms.

Butterfly by melloncollie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

 

While on tour and on the way to Seattle, a musician struggles to write a song. While doing so, he recounts the only time he's ever been in love - and the one person that he just can't shake. E/B, All Human, One-Shot. Rated NC-17 for adult themes.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4197 Read Count: 1061
[Report This] Published: 20 Jan 2013 Updated: 20 Jan 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 21 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved it, I am sure you could take this further..I would love to read it

Summary: Past Featured Story

something

Their voices once sang in harmony, but a misunderstanding pulled them apart. Can two broken hearts be healed and sing a new song? AH M for future lemons. E/B A/J Em/R


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51857 Read Count: 32104
[Report This] Published: 22 Jan 2013 Updated: 21 Jul 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

EXCELLENT!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Can not wait to read

Summary: Past Featured Story

ddkc

 

ddkc

Top Banner made by:TeamAllTwilight and book cover banner made by: InkJess Cullen

After graduation, smart mouthed Isabella Swan finds out her father’s set her up in an arranged marriage.  Not wanting to marry Jake and live on the res, she runs. In Chicago, she finds herself jobless—living with Alice.  She seeks a job at a strip club. Edward Cullen calls her a child and tells her no—too bad NO isn’t a word she likes. Birthday story for Silverblossom. AH/ratedM


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, To Read , Stories I've read
Chapters: 317 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57061 Read Count: 1814068
[Report This] Published: 24 Jan 2013 Updated: 11 Apr 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

It would help tone Alice up if she would dance

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

great chapter

The Pull by Janiedoe12 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 313]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella left Edward and everything she knew in Forks ten years ago. She knew he would never leave the MC, but circumstances drew her far away to accomplish her dreams. When Bella returns under somewhat mysterious circumstances, Forks will never be the same. AH. Tattward/Bikerward. Think Twilight meets Sons of Anarchy.

 

**Rec'd on The Lemonade Stand- go check out more recs from the TLS ladies!!**

 

tpull


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91763 Read Count: 60922
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2013 Updated: 22 Dec 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

So Esme is behind everything that happened to these two, can not wait till they finally talk and everything comes out.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 30 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

why should she be upset if he had moved on and has a family with someone else.. She left and abandoned Edward and his family.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

well she has a child, was she married or is the child edwards

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

I thought Esme had something to do with Bella leaving. well I will have to go back and read again. amazing story

Author's Response:

I think what you're thinking of is when Bella mentions the awful things Esme said to her before she left. Esme isn't the reason she left, but her behavior didn't help. There's is a love/hate relationship and more will be revealed as we go!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Janie

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

he is alluding the question, why did she leave him 10yrs ago.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

His not divorcing Vicki, what was said..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

good chapter

Work in Progress by araeo Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wipBanner

 

All-Human. Bella, Edward and the usual suspects are adults living in Seattle. They hit it off after a klutzy accident and Edward awakens Bella's ovaries, who never hesitate to voice their pervy opinion in Bella's head.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255983 Read Count: 37466
[Report This] Published: 03 Feb 2013 Updated: 26 Feb 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Provoking the Precious

loved the chapter, her inner dialouge is so cute.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 32: You Don't Get Lei'd in Hawaii?

Loved it!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 17: What's New, Pussycat?

Love the story..