Reviews by rclaurel3
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Go check out my blog for teasers, outfits, pictures and more!
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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29950
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 23 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 5: The Unforeseen Consequences

Love it, oh shit he is alregic to chili...well I hope she can see him soon

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 11: The Crossed Paths

She is in his Country, didn't really like the part about....."Little did he know that he was bound to break that promise more than once". What will he do to break this promise.....enemy's of the prince

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 14: The Real Cinderella

Loving this

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 8: The Google Search

excellent chapter, getting close

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 7: The Royal Duties

awesome...can not wait for him and Bella to meet again

Two Worlds Collide by Ezzy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 253]
Summary:

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Edward Mason is the leader of Mason Corporations. Isabella Swan is set to take over leadership of Swan industries from her ill father Charlie Swan. He wants Swan Industries, she wants Mason Corporations, but their Father's have a different plan for the two to get what they want...how will they take it and how will it all work. SOME CONTENTS ARE FOR THOSE WHO ARE, AT LEAST, 17 AND OVER.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Carlisle/Esme, Emmett/Rose, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Action, Drama, Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 237944 Read Count: 56372
[Report This] Published: 28 Apr 2010 Updated: 17 Oct 2022
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Two Worlds Collide

Thank you

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Introductions

Ok i am going to give this a shot.

Author's Response:

thank you

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 311973
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Drunk Ironing & Snark

what is the difference between Mike touching her and edward....and she is judging Edward by what is said in tabloids..First mistake if she is a writer, she would know you don't believe what you see and hear without it coming from the mans mouth....She has him pegged as a man whore when he could be the opposite of that.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 3: The Snowman & Midnight Mass

he told you that you should not believe what they say about him..and you are still judging him like he is an asshole, which is not fair. Bella and rose need to open their minds.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Kelly Kapowski & The Cougar

way to go Emmett, and good for bella in trying to be atleast friends with him

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159783
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

But can't you see Edward she wants you to hold her, she said her self for 1 year she has been sober and where have you been..

Summary: Past Featured Story

When faced with a betrayal that could tear them apart, Edward and Bella must put their faith in the healing power of love. WARNING: this story deals with rape and its aftermath. Post-Eclipse, AU.

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MT came in at #5 on the top ten stories completed in March 2020 as voted by visitors of www.twifanfictionrecs.com. Thank you!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186548 Read Count: 51167
[Report This] Published: 13 Jan 2011 Updated: 31 Mar 2020
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

If she goes back to Jacob, she more of an idoit then I thought Treated be damned I would not go back to him to be his toy...

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Would you think Edward could sense something happened or smell it...I hope she tells someone and Jacob gets it..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

He doesn't take the hint, that should tell her right there she should stay away from him....just like the book when he didn't get his why he muniplated things.

Summary:

Banner by: the amazing and talented  ivoryhairbela... you rock!

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Isabella Swan has never had an easy life; she's haunted day-in and day-out by the demons of her past.  Believing that she can never trust a man with her heart and definitely not her body after Charlie, her father, and only living relative is killed in the line of duty.  She decides to become a mother by In Vitro Fertilization... Dr. Edward Cullen is a pediatric specialist.  After suffering a tragic loss of his own, Dr. Cullen closed himself off to everyone in the world, including his 7 year old daughter.  Can an extraordinary twist of fate and a rambunctious 7 year old help bring two broken people, who've given up on love, together?

 

Will Isabella finally have a real family of her own?

Beta'd by: Jdonovan09, famaggiolo, and ivoryhairbela... you ladies are amazing and I couldn´t do it without you... even when you bust my chops, Iza!  A million and one thank you´s!!

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DISCLAIMER: I DO NOT OWN TWILIGHT OR ANY OF ITS PHENOMENAL CHARACTERS.  NO COPYRIGHT INFRINGEMENT INTENDED...

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 58003 Read Count: 32318
[Report This] Published: 22 Apr 2011 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

wow that was a strong chapter, what happened to make edward act that way and the words he used were hurt full

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: The Aftermath of a Nightmare...

yes put on your big girl panties and forgive him, he is trying so hard..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 How About a Compromise...

great chapter, they have come a long way hope they cont. to get better together

A Fresh Start by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 588]
Summary:

Bella is a recent divorcee, reeling from the abrupt ending of her marriage. In walks a certain green-eyed stranger. Can he convince her trust and love again? Or will she just ignore his advances? ExB, AU, AH

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 46 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 271752 Read Count: 339357
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2011 Updated: 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 3: The Storm

she needs a few more sessions with the physic in self esteem lessons

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: The Flashback

Wow that poor Man has been through so much heartache, I hope they can mend each other

Love Ink by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 423]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a tragic accident 5 years ago, Edward left. Bella never thought she would see him again, let alone be loved by him; inked by him...

 

Rated NC-17 for language and lemons

*SM owns Twilight

AH/canon pairings

My thanks to Kari, who has contributed to this story enough that she should be listed as a co-author! My sounding board, pre-reader and friend.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 105826 Read Count: 79144
[Report This] Published: 17 May 2011 Updated: 27 Feb 2012
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

great story, but Bella is doing a 180 here.. first she thinks she should tell Edward about the flirting and she should have told the police about the threat she heard in Leah's office. then she stops Edward when he is confronting Jacob and she says to stop the pissing contest why would she say this when Jacob is harrassing her.

Summary:

Bella is a Master's student who is forced to take a freshman class because her counselor "forgot" to make sure she took it. Edward is a last minute teacher added to the class Bella needs to take. The relationship between the two quickly transform to something more than just teacher and student. Photobucket 23-1 Backgrounds_zpsb05b9cc0


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 55188 Read Count: 49800
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2011 Updated: 16 Apr 2017
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 18 May 2015 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

can not wait for more

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Teachers and TA's

great chapter, poor Emmette the weak member of his species.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2013 Title: Teachers and TA's

excellent

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow this is a refreshing story, I have a smile on my face..can not wait to read more

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Excellent......can not wait to read more

A Kingdom Reborn by ammNI Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 539]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Many thanks to FrozenSoldier for creating this fabulous banner: 

A Kingdom Reborn #2

 

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Thanks to Joice84 for the fantastic banner!

Summary: The newly appointed King Edward has failed to produce an heir with his wife of fifteen years. At thirty years old Queen Tanya's chances of ever giving Edward a live son have greatly lessened. Edward's Privy Council have decided on a course of action: Queen Tanya will be asked to revoke the crown and her title as wife of Edward. Edward will then marry another. Many young ladies have been brought to court with the task of catching their king. Duty, Loyalty and Threats will bring England a queen who will change their king. But will it be for the better?

Rating for future content.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 44040 Read Count: 102041
[Report This] Published: 07 Aug 2011 Updated: 14 Nov 2012
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Ruling

Wow....you forgot the tissue warning...beautiful ending

Author's Response:

Whoops! I knew I'd forgotten something. Sorry, my brain isn't fully functional when I take my tablets and I had to take one before writing the author's notes. Thank you for review. I'm glad you liked it, even if it was sad. The engraving is one of the first images that popped into my head when I first came up with this idea. Thank you again for reading and reviewing.

~Anna-Margaret
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Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Visiting

great chapter, I am glad he is changing to be the man and king she could be proud of..,

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Readergoof...she even found a white bikini!  Thank you!

 

A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 57546 Read Count: 31126
[Report This] Published: 20 Aug 2011 Updated: 17 Oct 2011
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Connections

great chapter, it seems like a setup to me Is Edward's family involved with this...

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Ultimate Souvenir

She should have told him first, She might have had a crush on him but never got a chance to meet him or Rachel was around....he is gonna be hurt and lose trust in her and Trust is a hard thing to regain...

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Was It Worth the Price You Pay?

Its what is best for him right now...distance makes the heart grow fonder..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - The End of the Story

atleast they have each other, great story

Taken by loopylou992 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Edward makes one mistake, and soon learns he must pay for it. Forced to lie to his family and Bella, will be manage to survive being Taken?

Rated M for lang & Lemons.

Banner by Ysar

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153918 Read Count: 28170
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2011 Updated: 08 Jun 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Truth Is Out

Loved it..Like I said over in FF..this is an excellent story the courage had to have to fight his way back to his family only to be hurt by his only familky and wife... sorry that the guest over there was so rude towards you

Author's Response:

Thanks again x x x

 

Summary:

For Better or For Worse banner by FrozenSoldier

Edward Cullen has a perfect life. A dream come true career as a superstar shortstop for the Seattle Mariners, true friends, a great house, and most of all, the perfect, loving wife. Can one moment destroy it all? Or will she stick by him for better or for worse?

**Edward & Bella, AH, OOC


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78676 Read Count: 37302
[Report This] Published: 04 Feb 2012 Updated: 23 Jan 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Whispered Words

I love this story...I hope they can get to common ground and will Edward ever regain any ujse of his legs.

Turning Page by Vampgirl79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Summary:

TP

 

*UPDATING in mid/late 2023*

Following her mother's heartbreaking death, Bella moves back to Forks. It's there she reconnects with her father and forms a bond with the next-door neighbor. Is she the one who can heal his wounded heart; or will he hurt her over his fear of falling in love again? 

***1st Place Winner for Favorite Undiscovered FF in 2014* AH/OOC, Olderward/Teenella    

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 62443 Read Count: 11553
[Report This] Published: 12 Apr 2012 Updated: 24 Apr 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Reconnecting and Discoveries

well atleast he hates Tanya for some reason..can not wait to read more..

Author's Response:

Oh yes, Edward for sure despises her and has every right too. Down the road...he will even have more of a reason too! Thanks for the review. I just posted a new chapter today. Hope you enjoy the rest :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Summary:

Edward and Bella overcome death, destruction, drugs, cheating, and everything in between. But can they withstand the possibility of divorce? AH OOC ExB


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30149 Read Count: 14870
[Report This] Published: 07 May 2012 Updated: 27 Aug 2012
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Destruction

Wow she just left him no explantion as to why....

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Banner by Kyndall Viscia

What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Jun 2017
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted

Sorry to her about your mom, I know all to well, I lost my mom when I was 26..I am 50 now.

Tick Tock by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She wanted a baby, but didn't exactly go through the conventional way to have one and now she has to deal with the family, including Edward. Written purely for laughs.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34998 Read Count: 69585
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This story is too good

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

LOVING THIS

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Jul 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I thought he saw her naked when she dropped the towel..a few chapters back

Starlet by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 129]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan: movie star, beloved icon, and little girl lost. Edward Masen: rising star, former bodyguard and afraid of losing everything all over again. She loves him and he loves her but will their love survive drugs, fame and jealousy? AU/AH ExB

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 231110 Read Count: 71655
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 21 Dec 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 23: With this Ring, I Thee Wed

Yes I am happy Charlie stayed and wasn't a total ass.. they are married

Figure Eight by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan is a nationally ranked paired skater with Jacob Black. Edward Masen is beautiful British skater paired with Tanya. However, both of their partners fall into hard times. These two try to navigate their way through life, both on and off the ice.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Twix's List, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 235336 Read Count: 144371
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 11 Aug 2012
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 06 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Nationals and Knees

What an ass good ridance Jake.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 33: Finals and Proposals

Love it, but I am surprised Esme didn't know you would think her son would let her know first.

Black Diamond by Dishie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 622]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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The black diamond slopes of Lake Tahoe are just what Bella needs to start living her life again after a painful breakup left a hole in her heart that work couldn't fill. Will a handsome and charming skier also prove that her heart is ready for love too?    

 Banner by Amandac3 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Sparkledamnu's Must Reads, TBR
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 267782 Read Count: 165795
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 07 Oct 2012
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

am so disappointed in Bella, first off she didn't even stay to ask what it was all about...then she leaves without a word..

Author's Response:

I know ... but in her defense, if I knew my BF's ex was wanting him back and I found my man holding hands with her, trust me, I wouldn't stick around either. But common sense comes afterward oftentimes. Hope you like the story.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 23 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Three months Bella over what he was saying goodbye and hopefully good ridence to her....It should be blla grovaling for Edwards affection...I could see a week or two but 3 months, they she never truly loved him..

Summary:

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Three years later our favorite couple Edward and Isabella are still going strong with their adorable daughters Keiara and Kiah. Life seems to be going perfect for them, but it's all just a calm before a storm. With the brother of an old enemy threatening Edward and his reason for existing, the paparazzi growing to be unbearable, and trouble at Masen Corp once again can Edward and Isabella's relationship withstand and face the Inevitable? Reviews on Fanfic 730

Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the Lemonade stand


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Inevitable, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191649 Read Count: 119928
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Trial and Error

great chapter, I am glad the bastard will go away for a long time..sad about Liz.

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58

for chapter 59....he is going to break her heart if Tanya stays the weekend and she has to leave....I wouldn't be surprised if she ran away when she is at Esme's

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2014 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59

Wow this is an excellent story.

You Came Too Early by Elliania Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 523]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward and Bella married too young and for all the wrong reasons, so no one acted surprised when their marriage crumbled down. Two kids and five years later, events force them to live under the same roof for a while. Will they realize what they lost?

AH. Older, divorced E/B. Daddyward. Angst. HEA.

NC-17 - for language and sweet lemons.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 193638 Read Count: 104496
[Report This] Published: 08 Jun 2012 Updated: 11 Feb 2016
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21- What feels right

well I hope everything works out for the two of them...I hope Bella doesn't play with his emotions and Tanya i the one that got hurt in the long run.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 18 Feb 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29- Going home

Yes she is moving closer to him

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 Feb 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

Excellent Story

Masks by Kallipap Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

There are literal and figurative masks. Everybody wears them. Bella wore one the night her life changed for ever. What will she do when the truth comes out? And how will the man she was set to bring down fit into it?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 15359 Read Count: 1626
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 18 Jan 2014
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

excellent start

Author's Response: Hi! Welcome to the story. Thank you for taking the time to review.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

So was Edward Masen the boy that humiliated her in school.

Author's Response: Almost right. Yes, Edward was the boy who humiliated her, but back then she knew him as Anthony Masen. And it wasn't at school, but during a summer vacation.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3

I was right about Edward though his name was anthony and not Edward....so can they get passed the hurt.

Author's Response: Hi, again! Sorry I didn't reply to your reviews on time! I'm trying to make up for it now. I think that they will get their past everything in the end, because I am an HEA kind of girl. The way there, though ... Well, let's just say that it will be bumpy, and leave it at that.

A Mother´s Advice by maymay74 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 249]
Summary:

Bella met Edward. Then, after a few dates, she got pregnant and married him. But now they re fighting against their family and more people who just don't want them together. Bella feels she's repeating her parents story. Would a package from the past be the help she needs?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 116319 Read Count: 38321
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2016
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Is her dad trying to buy into the company with the help from Carmin?

Author's Response:

Hmm, no. He's just desperate to control Bella, the others just want her out of the way.

Thanks :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 05 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

LOVE IT

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I am so glad they got married, to many people butting into their lives

Author's Response:

YES, BUT THERE'S ALSO A FEW WHO THEY CAN TRUST. THANK YOU FOR READ AND REVIEW :D

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 21 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Loved it, can not wait for the party...

Author's Response:

Thanks, I think you're going to like next chapter :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I am glad we got Edwards POV first, now we know someone is out to get him and Bella..Why do they want them apart so bad to make up some lies about him cheating?

Author's Response:

Oh that's part of the mistery, muahaha. But keep in mind that Lauren was also harrassed, so bad she went to work with Tanya... in London. ;)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Dec 2012 Title: A Mother´s Advice

merry christmas, I will be here waiting

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 06 May 2015 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Loved it

Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

May

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 24 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

No..She is not even letting him answer before she runs

Author's Response:

You're right. We will hear Edward next :)

Thanks.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 08 May 2015 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Kate stole the test.

Author's Response:

Hi! 

You'll see who did it ;)

Sorry for taking my time in posting the recap. I promise it will be posted by this weekend; RL was a bit busy but I finally back to my routine.

May

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 18 Jan 2016 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Where getting close, great chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks, tomorrow the next one will be up :)

Walk by mustlovertp Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 259]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After a betrayal leaves Edward reeling, he decides to change the course of his life. Starting over can be a daunting task. Will he let a certain brown eyed beauty help him find what he's looking for?

Rated NC-17 for adult situations and language           *Banner by Falling Stars*


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110402 Read Count: 49586
[Report This] Published: 15 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Mar 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow that was a great chapter, Hot!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!! xoxox

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

great chapter, can not wait to hear about the bundles of joy arriving

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh please don't leave us hanging, great chapter can not wait to read about the birth of their babies

Summary:

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Driven to Desire Entry: I had the perfect life in New York. Money, a nice house, loving husband. But still, I craved him. He was a man so close yet so forbidden. My own personal demon. My torture. My step-brother; Edward Cullen.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22278 Read Count: 13854
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Oct 2012
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I loved it and I hope you cont. so we can see what happens next..I also hope Charlie isn't dead.

Wild Child by FluffyLiz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 756]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella,  is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod.  Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for?  AH.  Rated M for a reason.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153179
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 29 Oct 2012
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I will see you Wednesday, Edward is on his way.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh she loves him so much..great chapter

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

boy Edward F**k up bad, will these two every get it right.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 17 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Yes he is quite the Ass, I hope he gets his head out of it soon and go get his girl..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I think she is going to wind up getting Edward into bed, he is a married man., when bella finds out she should divorce him and take him for the other half of the company..because these two are running circles around each other, they both can't admit that they love each other

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

So I wonder if Edward is a powerful man that the cops would call him..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

So Edward is mister Duracell love it, can not wait to see what happens..A little sadden that he would let her go so easily

Love is Strange by MarieCarro Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 301]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Bella Swan and Edward Cullen live in the small town of Ligonier in Pennsylvania. They've been best friends since they were six years old, and not much can keep them apart. Bella wants to leave small-town life behind, while Edward is fine with whatever, but that's not the only complication in their relationship. What happens when they fall in love ... with each other?

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 142307 Read Count: 86912
[Report This] Published: 02 Jul 2012 Updated: 08 Jun 2021
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Love is Strange

Why won't she let him explain I know she is hurting but if you love someone that much you can get through it.. but I guess she really doesn't love Edward like she said she does..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Love is Strange

great chapter, when do we get to the proludge and whos baby is it..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Love is Strange

Go Edward find a nice girl, you don't need this Bella. Let her live a life with George....she is the one that broke up with you when you got frunk and the girl mad a pass at you

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Love is Strange

That was beautiful...she is getting there..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 May 2013 Title: Love is Strange

after reading the prolouge again, I am thinking that with all the stress with George to come, that she didn't relize she was pregnant with Edwards baby and was father along then she knew and she has gone into premature labor..maybe i am totally wrong, but can not wait for more.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Love is Strange

Wow someone needs to find George and give him a good ass kicking, and I would be scared having this reaccuring dream that is never a good sign. great chapter

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Love is Strange

Well I personally hope he moves on and finds a nice girl. That yes so wrong way to do things bella

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2013 Title: Love is Strange

Loved It!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2013 Title: Love is Strange

How can they blame this all on Edward, Bella schattered his heart... He doesn't need her..great chapter...

Author's Response:

True :-)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Love is Strange

I know it must be scary for Bella, but she better face reality that it is her daughter.. but I have a feeling it won't go that eaisly, and so times your body doesn't let you know your pregnant, I didn't know I was pregnant till I was almost 6months.

Author's Response:

So you have personal experience then :-)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2013 Title: Love is Strange

great chapter

Author's Response:

Thank you :-D

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2013 Title: Love is Strange

You got drunk when Bella broke your heart and slept with the next woman that came on to you...

Author's Response:

Don't hate on him just yet...Still a lot of things to happen :-)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

OH I don't hate him, Bella was in the wrong here.

Author's Response:

Oh, okay! :-D

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 10 May 2013 Title: Love is Strange

Great chapter, I wish her well in her new life with George.. I hope Edward finds a nice girl... and I hope Bella will leave Edward alone and not flaut her relaionship with G in front of him...and I would hope that his parents wouldn't suggest they come to dinner or anything that would be just wrong, and how can they have open arms for Bella for what she has done to there son..He did nothing wrong it was all her insecurities that lead to this..

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 13 May 2013 Title: Love is Strange

so she gets pregnant with Edwards baby but what causes her to lose it. stress

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 25 Jun 2013 Title: Love is Strange

yes we are at the prolouge, so is she farther along in a pregnancy and she didn't know about it..and who is the father George or Edward.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 09 Jul 2013 Title: Love is Strange

she is getting there...with help from family and friends she will be alright

Author's Response:

Definitely! This is a HEA story after all :-)

Falling by Frogie48 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 81]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is just divorced when she meets Edward in a club. Can he help her heal?

 

Can she get over the past and fall in love with this amazing man?

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 124179 Read Count: 55176
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2012 Updated: 13 Aug 2013
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 01 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

beautiful story, can not wait to read more...sorry about not reviewing all the chapters..

Author's Response:

No problem, I'm just happy that you take the time to review at all!

 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it.

Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

excellent chapter...your doing very good for your first story

Author's Response:

Thank you, this story was a lot of fun to write and flowed so easily.  It is complete on Fanfiction but I am posting it here after having a beta review it.  The one on FF is pretty rough.  I am also writing an original fiction if you want to check it out it's called Love is the Master.

Thanks for the review!

 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

well they are getting to know each other slowly. great chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks, I wanted them to really get to know one another.  So many fan fictions just jump in with Bella and Edward and don't really let their "new" characters fall in love. 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

these two are just to cute great chapter

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  I love when people review as they go!  It is such a buzz to get the little notification that I got a new review!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 29 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

It might not have been phsical abuse, but it was mental abuse andit can way heavy on ones self esteem. great chapter

Author's Response:

Too many people suffer from this same kind of abuse.  Especially teens. 

Thanks!

 

Second Chances by melloncollie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 60]
Summary:

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Edward and Bella parted ways after high school and never spoke again. 5 years later, when Edward dies in a car crash, Bella gets the chance to live out what could have been if she made a different decision 5 years ago. AH, HEA. contains adult themes and language.

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 100196 Read Count: 12206
[Report This] Published: 17 Aug 2012 Updated: 15 Mar 2015
Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 04 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 7: The Zoo

great chapter.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 26 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 9: All I've Ever Needed

Yes she should confide in Edward they are partners.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Keep Me In Your Heart

Sad,but Great chapter