Reviews by Solshine
Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138685
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Solshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Fifty Shades...Clarity

You write beautifully and it's YOUR story.... please never start writing for us!  When an author tries to please his/her audience the story in the author's head gets lost and is never as good! It's hearbreaking but they will get through this like they have everything else - it's why we love their story! Besides... if everything was all "happliy ever after" there wouldn't be much to write worth interest, would there? 

Love, Love, LOVE your writing!  That means this story and what you do with it!!! 

Reviewer: Solshine Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

OMG!!  Thank you for not making us wait an eternity!!  Tears in my eyes - sadness for them and elation that Elena is gone!  But.... is she really??? Fabulous-o! 



Author's Response:

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: Solshine Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Dear!  I don't know whether to love you or hate you!  I've been useless for the past three days since learning about your writing from Jane's blog! I will say it took some detective work to find you, though... you should include a linkk to here when you comment. :)

You've got the characters down pat and it's so fascinating to read about life after Fifty Shades.... Love, LOVE, LOVE your writing!!! Please don't stop!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks. I didn't know I was on Jane's blog other than to review her great stuff. Glad you are enjoying this. I post on FanFiction.net as well, but the mature content is posted here as FF will not allow it.

Have you read Fifty shades More? It was the first one. Fifty Sahdes Clarity is the second, then there will probably be a third book.

Another good one to follow is  mkmrider. She is on FF as well as having her own blog.  She has good  stories and  one shots. She has  a good story on Mia and one on Grace. Excellent. 

I couldn't live without Jane's Fifty and Taylor.

Thanks for catching up with me and thanks for reading.

E.

Reviewer: Solshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Awesome chapter!  I'm on the edge of my seat!



Author's Response:

More on the way. Thanks for leaving a review.

e.

Reviewer: Solshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Holy Carp Batman!  The wait for the next chapter is going to be excruciating! Fabulous! Love your writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks you. Love your reading.

E.

Reviewer: Solshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

So sweet!!  It's good to see Kate and Ana having some girlfriend time together!  Poor Kate and Elliott!  Awwww.... Love your writing! 



Author's Response:

Thank you.

E.

Reviewer: Solshine Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Awwwww..... love, love, love this!  The conversation between Teddy and Ana about Sam had me all choked up.  How tender!  And I would LOVE to have seen the clerk if he/she recognized Christian buying that breast pump!  LOL!  



Author's Response:

I know! I'm surprised he hasn't tried to use it as some sort of sex toy. Give him time. He'll figure out a use for it. LOL

Thanks for following.

E

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591732
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: Solshine Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I love it when I find you've added a new chapter!  Your writing is so wonderful and I'm loving the story of their happily ever after!  Thank you!!



Author's Response:

Thank you. I like happily ever after. Thanks for reading and leaving a review.

E.