Reviews by Twilights1Fan
Summary:

 

Will geeky Edward ever be able to talk to his crush, star volleyball player Bella Swan?  Maybe his online friend can help...

AH one-shot written for the Sport of Love challenge.  Now expanded into a story.  :-)

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Categories: All Human, Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 175278 Read Count: 21016
[Report This] Published: 19 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Twilights1Fan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was so sweet, I really loved that it all came together for them and that it had a happy ever after as well. You did an awesome job., this was a really wonderful story to read. My heart broke for Edward time and time again, but he held out and I'm glad Bella was so determined to make him see that she really loved him...

~Jennifer



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review!  I'm glad you liked the story :-)

 

Summary:

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 He was my forbidden fruit. A man so close, almost too close, yet so far out of reach. He loved me, took care of me, but did not crave me the same way I did him. I wanted everything, yet had nothing. But things were going to change. I could feel it. Mature


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19236 Read Count: 15389
[Report This] Published: 03 Sep 2010 Updated: 03 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Twilights1Fan Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Drifting

I am intrigued, this story sounds like it can be very intense when you finally get it going. I really would love to know when you update and I don't think TWCS has authors alert.  I think it was wonderful that Edward took Bella in, she has been pushed around and tossed around and this was her only real family. I hope things work out for her, you have to admit its a bit racy, isn't he her step brother? I wonder what is going through his mind? Will you be doing any EPOV's? I would love for them to be together, they aren't actually blood related  but she would have to be an adult first. That means he needs to wait until she is over 18 considering he is 9 years older than her, that makes a huge impact on them and where their lives are headed.

My E- Mail is JRAlderton72@aol.com, please let me know if you decide to update this story. I don't want to miss out because I really want to know how this story turns out.

~Jennifer

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324377
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: Twilights1Fan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Our Chance Encounter

Wow So far pretty Awesome I look forward to reading more and have added this to my favs.

~Jennifer

Conventioneers by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 231]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Innocent event coordinator Bella has her sanity challenged when the adult toy show comes to town. How will she cope with a world she's never seen and a man who's very comfortable in it?

 

conventioneers


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Stories I've read
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22548 Read Count: 30227
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Jul 2013
Reviewer: Twilights1Fan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Year One, Day One

I am so looking forward to reading more of this. i love the discription of Mas'es tattoo. I wish there was an image of it to see. I wonder what the drunkin one was and why it would scare her off. i love that he called her his pet. LOL I also love the mystery behind him, I'm hoping we find more out. His shirts are cool and funny too.

I hope you decide to update this story.

~Jennifer

 

Shame by Catastrophia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

It was a union that was never supposed to happen, an affair that took over her life and altered it. Unable to keep him from advancing, can Bella keep her brother-in-law away and save her marriage? Or should she give in on what could possibly be what was always meant to be? Perhaps fate will make the decision for her.

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8627 Read Count: 2814
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 08 Sep 2012
Reviewer: Twilights1Fan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Shame

Hey hun Heres the Review as Promised I have added the story to my favs and you as well although I thought I had you added anyway . LOL

I really enjoyed reading this, the passon between them was intense. I loved that she tried to fight her feelings for him though I know it was impossable to fight what is clearly there embedded in your heart, body and soul.

I was happy for her that she was carrying Edward's child, and as she was i thought he was very unhappy with the news of her pregnancy.

 

I was relieved that Jasper felt okay with eveything that happened and was fine with the disalution of their marriage. A part of me wanted for him to have had relations with alice too so It wasn't so much a total betrayal of their vows on Bellas part but he was loyal to her making me feell even sadder for Jasper. Though he wasn't In love with Bella he did still love her and was faithful to her regardlessof his attrations to someone else. Thank God he didn't hold it against his Brothert and Bella as he could have.  I do like that everyone was civil to each other and the way you had Alice and Jasper both helping to move Bella into Edwards and not leaving it all up only to Edweard and Bella was just the right touch to show their unity that everyone had on moving forward and being happy with each other and all the decisions made in the past and how they will reflect on the future they all will have to face and see every day as a family.

I look forward to reading the futuretake updates. Please let me know if you do add to it. My e mail is JRAlderton72@aol.com and I am also a facebook friend my profile is: Jen Twilightsonefan Pattinson on there...

:O)

~Jennifer