Reviews by FinnMac
Hope Springs by justginger Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1133]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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"Where would you go if you are trying to start a new life but you had nowhere to go and no one to care?  Bella Swan has been alone for most of her life, she is young and she is scared, but now she has another life to protect.  She is heading for a new country - a new life and then she ends up in HOPE SPRINGS.  Her life intertwines with all the eccentric characters in this little piece of heaven in Vermont and just like that - she will never be the same.  She meets the Sherriff, the truck driver, the semi-retired doctor, the lawyer, the farmer, and the new best friends, but it is the new young doctor in town that turns her life upside down.  Is he as stuck up as he seems or does he have a wild side?  Is Bella as tough and as jaded as she seems?  Will she run, or will she allow the people in this town to teach her to hope, to dream, and to love?"

NEW BANNER BY YSAR!! (ISN'T IT AWESOME??)

HOPE SPRINGS

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, To Read (Geddy), Kuu Faves, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Read
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 432038 Read Count: 218319
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2011 Updated: 24 Dec 2012
Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Meet Bella 'Van'

Internet Explorer never let me review at TWCS, but I figured out that I can with Safari. I'm going back to re-read and review all your chapters because this story deserves it!

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - MEET THE CULLEN'S

What a great family, and from the picture you posted, WHAT A GREAT HOUSE!

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Everone's affected by poor Bella. Nice chapter.

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 16 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

So Bella got the grand tour. Great chapter.

Summary: Past Featured Story

papi

 

Every political figure has their skeletons and this Senator just likes to play Daddy. Enter the call girl, a woman who gives men exactly what they want. "I would give him what he wanted and what he didn't even know he wanted; then, hook, line, sinker, he would be mine." Daddykink! Mature. ExB

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 215117 Read Count: 412095
[Report This] Published: 03 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Aug 2012
Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Way to go! Enjoyed it all the way.

As for suggestions for outtakes...I would have thought they would have run into an ex-customer of Bella's?

Summary: Past Featured Story

It was just a long weekend in Vegas, so how did eighteen year old high school senior Bella Swan end up married to thirty one year old movie exec, Edward Cullen? This is the story of their awkward life. 

Me and Mr Cullen Banner


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Can't wait for an update, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 118398 Read Count: 324416
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2013
Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - His Life

It was nice to see Maggie turned away so handily, but I have a feeling she'll be baaaack!

Amazed by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 570]
Summary:

amazed

 

They come from two different backgrounds and lifestyles, one simple, one fabulous, yet both know what it means to suffer.

Can they face the future together and learn to let go of their demons?

Can they find what it is to be Amazed?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 122 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29805 Read Count: 206053
[Report This] Published: 09 Jun 2012 Updated: 19 Aug 2012
Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yuck, Eddie, you're a mess!

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

And I repeat, Yuck!

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That's not some healthy time off.

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Pathetic, Eddie, just pathetic!

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Too much fame. Too much money. I hate when life sucks like that. Poor Eddie. Maybe Bella will come around and cheer him up? Or make it worse? 

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh goodie, here's Bella. Don't make it easy for him!

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Here comes Alice....

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I think Eddie needs a little help with his plan.

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Even the thought of his grandma doesn't stop him? Tsk, tsk.

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ego.

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh Eddie, you sweet talker, you.

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

So far his one redeeming virtue: he loves his mom!

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Snob.

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Well, I don't know Eddie, you're just too good to leave, right?

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Uh, what IS going on?

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

WTF?

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Go Bella! Go Bella! Go Bella!

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Huh?!

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

*whispers* go bella, go bella, go bella *sniff*

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Scared of Jasper?

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Go get her Alice!

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Somebody go find Bella!

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Who's this?

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

What now?

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh wow.

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This is such a well-paced story.

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I wonder what's between Esme and Bella? They seemed to have a silent accord of some sort.

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Eddie's beginning to learn a lesson. That's nice.

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Jeez! The old red truck must have met an 18-wheeler!!

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Not helping Carlisle!

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Come on Eddie, make it not about you.

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

What happened?

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Now what?

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Wow, did Bella talk about Alice to Ali-Mae?

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Awwww, Ali's so cute!

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Not a good sight to see.

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

When!

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Dealing with serious illness is stressful. Will Edward break?

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Poor Charlie!

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Alice always knows too much.

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I wonder what Alice has up her sleeve.

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Helicopter? Nice!

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Oh noooo. I'd hate to have them see that.

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Bella's pride may have something to say about that!

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

You go Jasper.

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Find your inner child, Eddie.

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Is she turning the corner?

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Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

This is going to be such a shock for Bella.

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Where are they? I thought they were at the hotel near the hospital?

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

This is the first we've heard of Dillon, and who's Sasha?

Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Bonding experience?

Summary:

 

She's a rockstar and he's a musician. Let's take a peek at a morning of their life. EXB Mature. Olderward. Written for Fandom4JuvenileDiabetes


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4060 Read Count: 6231
[Report This] Published: 25 Jun 2012 Updated: 25 Jun 2012
Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 07 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I sure wish I had a "Daddy! He he he.

Summary:

 

Bits and Pieces of WYP that didn't quite fit into the story and i loved too much to throw away.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12198 Read Count: 12066
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 11 Aug 2012
Reviewer: FinnMac Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That was fun li'l blow job!!!