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New teacher and aspiring writer, Bella Swan, moves to Seattle. She finds fan-fiction-creation-inspiration in the enigmatic and surly playboy who lives in the upscale condo across from hers. As her newest on-line story develops, so does a correspondence with a mysterious reader/reviewer of that story. Is it a co-worker? Is it the hothead playboy? It's a case of art imitating life and life imitating art. A fan-fic story within a fan-fic story with all the canon usuals. Lemons, laughs and love.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 71 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 501628 Read Count: 131145
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: The Hot Seat & Rising Temperatures
Sawooon! I think I just had a heart attack! I need emtward stat! I got chills reading that end it was so good. Best ff I have ever read! You make me laugh and you make me nearly pee my pants in excitement! I can't wait for more! Now if you'll excuse me I have to go mop up a puddle. ;)
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: The Last Lap of the Night
I was wondering where you were! Totally worth the wait! I thought she passed out at first. I was like dayum girl how will you ever get past first base?! Lol.
Date: 24 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54: Beyond a Shadow of a Doubt
Excellent! This is a delicate issue but I just want it to be that night! Right frikkin now and maybe softcore this time but the next time? HOT AND DIRTY. Did you love that last sentence as much as I did?
Date: 08 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55: Mood Swings and Whiplash
I don't know what to say but if I was a man... I'd be grabbing the lotion and Kleenex. If this was American Pie, it'd be a sock... but, alas, it will just have to wait.
Twilight AU. After a horrific car accident leaves Bella in a catatonic state, she's transferred to Forks Hospital under the care of Carlisle. What happens when Edward is faced with the lifeless girl in the bed and an undeniable pull begins? Can he bring her back from the hold her mind has on her, or will she be forever lost to the abyss? E&B, AU, Canon pairings.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 131 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 65741 Read Count: 411877
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 95: Chapter 95
I have been reading this for hours! I just found the story! Oh Bella Bella Bella! Of course he wants to see you! He wants to ravage you with his love! He's dying to be near you! :D
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 98: Chapter 98
He's going to show her him. Again! He hasn't sparkled for her yet.
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 99: Chapter 99
I would vomit. Lol. What is wrong with this girl?! If a hot Edward Cullen wants to kiss you you go with it! You don't even think about anything but kissing him... and maybe tearing his clothes off. Who am I kidding? You rape that man if need be! Lol
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100
If Edward Cullen is on all fours hovering over you you dont ask questions or require answers! You take that man and you do things to him that are wonderful and probably illegal in some countries! Or you try to anyway!
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What do you do when your biological clock is ticking? Uh? You hit up your best friend's brother for 'donations'.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, To Read (Geddy), Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50937 Read Count: 421235
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
Getting hot and heavy in the barn. Oh dear lord help me. I might spontaneously combust! I'm imagining shirtless cowboys slick with sweat. I need a moment. ;)
Date: 12 Oct 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
Awwe! That's too cute! Great chapter! I'm glad you're back to this story!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
I laugh so hard when I read your new chapters. He pukes on her doesn't he?! Wasn't there a trash can in this hillbilly bathroom?! I think I actually feel a little sick.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
Eww. I've never been thrown up on. Its always been the opposite. If she's pregnant then I will be shocked.
Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
Why in the hell are you making it sound like she's leaving permanently? She isn't. She wouldn't and won't! I will do the impossible and drag her fictional ass back there!
Date: 31 May 2013 Title: Sperm Donor Wanted
Now that they haven't seen eachother in two weeks can we PLEASE give Edward and Bella some face time?! Maybe they can practice for their third child... and no one will throw up. :)
Bella Swan rose to fame starring in the hit Disney Channel series 'Girl Next Door'. Now that she's finally legal, she's ready to lose the sweetheart image. What better way to start than to get a tattoo? E/B Olderward/Tattward - Drabblish
Now available on Blogger - http://hotbubblegumfic.blogspot.com/
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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 66 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45471 Read Count: 312760
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Chapter 64
They need to christen that damn trailer now! Dear lord I hate waiting. But I will. For a story this good the anticipation is worth it. :) thank you very much
Edward and Bella, kidnapped and forced to play out a sick man's fantasy where every decision has a consequence. Will Edward and Bella be able to admit their love after the trials they endure? ExB AxJ. Language,lemons, sexual violence,unconventional.
Thank you to JA Mash for the banner.
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, Dumbi's Most Wanted
Chapters: 89 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 453698 Read Count: 923118
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh my gosh I am so going to report this even though you gave us multiple warnings about the graphic nature of this story! Lol. Do you have a schedule for when you post? Just wanna know when i'm going to need alone time!
Date: 21 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I am imagining vivid torture scenes with Aro and James. I can't wait til they get what they deserve.
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Hell yes! It is a small victory but it is ours! My only worry is that now James really has it out for Edward and Bella. He should punish Victoria for getting snarky and spilling ths beans! I really wanted Aro to cane him!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35
I believe in a thing called love! Just listen to the rhythm of your heart! LOL. This chapter was really sweet!
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36
Gah! The timing was perfect. James could have caused tearing. He's supposed to be a doctor and he didn't think about that? Then Aro would definitely know!
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
That was fuck hot! I wanted some tongue action though.
Author's Response:
lol.. hadn't thought of that when I wrote it sorry :(
Date: 10 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Damn cliffhangers! Please dont let it be James or dimitri! Please please please! Some oral with Edward is what we need! :)
Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
This story is great! It's an extreme relief to read a story with good grammar and spelling. I'm rooting for Wisp to be able to speak her mind freely. I still don't get why Garrett had to be old though. I just figured that it was because old people seem less threatening? I was pissed to hear you were plagiarized! Who would do something like that? Try to take credit for someone else's hard work? It's annoying. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! I love what you've done so far!
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
I love what you did with this chapter! Having it in wisp's point of view was brilliant! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please dont make me wait so long!
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Her name! Thanks for putting this out sooner! When I read this I actually feel like I'm reading a book. You write so well! I can't waitress for more progress from wisp.
Edward is head of the Cullen Family and has loved Bella from afar.When her fiance is caught cheating with his, can he get her to unlock her heart to him, or will the families enemy's keep them apart. AH/M for language and lemons. Canon couples.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Completed Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43531 Read Count: 107117
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20
Oh my gosh! Please tell me it wasn't someone they killed! I cannot believe you left us hanging like that. This story is like a curvy mountain road in the middle of the night! GAH! This is driving me crazy!
After a betrayal leaves Edward reeling, he decides to change the course of his life. Starting over can be a daunting task. Will he let a certain brown eyed beauty help him find what he's looking for?
Rated NC-17 for adult situations and language *Banner by Falling Stars*
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 110402 Read Count: 49586
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I seriously hope that's the end of it! I don't want her to get raped! I also see an unplanned pregnancy in the future! I hope I'm right! They would be so happy about it after they got past the shock! Great chapter! I hate that it will be ending soon!
Author's Response:
I don't think that I'd ever write a rape into a fic, unless it was a flashback or something. Not my style. As for anything else, we'll have to wait and see. I'm working on Ch 14 right now ;) Thanks so much! xoxox
Date: 19 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I knew it! When will this divorce go through?! His ex is so going to come slither back and try to weasel her way into Edward's life. And I hope Bella kicks her ass right back out! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Divorce: soon :) Kate will make another appearance, though. Thank you for reading! xoxox
Date: 05 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
You're right. Vaginal ultrasounds aren't fun
Ugh. I cringe thinking about it. I love how attentive Edward is being. It makes me mushy inside. :) happy days!
Author's Response:
Yeah, he is awesome. I love him :) Thank you for reading! xoxox
Date: 29 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Excuse my language but you rocked this shit! I've followed this story from the beginning and I loved it immediately. This chapter made me tear up more than once. Great job! That was the perfect ending.
Fifty Shades...More
Book I
A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy
Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.
This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.
NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.
If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145605
Date: 28 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
I've been reading this story all day and I think it's great! I only have a couple issues with this chapter. My first is that when you had Ana talk to Grace you have Grace make Linc out to be a good guy when we know that he beat the crap out of his wife and was responsible for Ana's hospital stay. And the only other thing was that he calls the boat yar and not yare. But I really like your series and I will continue to read it. I like the plot you've set up!
Author's Response:
Hey, thanks for reading and leaving a review. I always appreciate comments. Many times readers catch things that I don't. Didn't mean for Linc to come off as a good guy. Don't really know too much about him. I've always sort of been neutral on him, since his character wasn't explored very much. I might have beat the crap out of Elena, myself. lol. You'll see what I mean if you read book 2. Thanks for catching yare, but I do believe the actual spelling is yare. Thanks for noticing and letting me know. I do try to go back and correct any mistakes. By the time I put these things up, I've read them 50 times and still catch mistakes after they are posted.
Thanks again for reading and leaving a comment. I appreciate all of them.
E.
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Just months away from inheriting a fortune and the family business, 17 year old orphan, Bella, is out of control – a wild child with a platinum card and a killer bod. Can Edward, as her legal guardian and CEO of Swan Publishing, rein her in and prevent her from ruining everything he’s worked for? AH. Rated M for a reason.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, G8or Favor8s Read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 212285 Read Count: 153181
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Poor Bella. I couldn't help just imagining if I was in that situation. I would have said something. But you can ask pretty much anyone, I a little on the bitchy side. I just wanted him to admit that he was an idiot and apologize profusely so that they could get to the steamy sex. Edward shoud have talked on the drive back. She really couldn't do anything but listen! Great chapter! Looking forward to seeing how he redeems himself. I hope it includes plenty of grovelling!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
He's buying condoms! Lol. This is crazy! I love this story! It always surprises me.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
What a complete prick. That was his goodbye? He lays her one last time then escapes before she wakes up?! What a class A jerk!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Loved this chapter! I think we've all been where bella is. Wanting something we can't have. And also her pride. Gah! They are crazy for eachother!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
I love this story! And I don't know if this makes me a person with questionable morals but i'm sure that some of this anger will disappear when they relieve some sexual tension. Lol
Author's Response:
LOL - well your morals may be questionable, but they are ones which I share! No relief in sight just yet, but not too much longer to wait.
Thanks so much for reading and, especially, for reviewing - it really is much appreciated.
Liz
Date: 04 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Dayum! Loved sexy time! Rina is totally a spy for Tanya. That bitch is going to cause problems! Bella totally said she loved him so much! How cute!
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
I don't think Bella will fall for it. Edward is way too gullible.
Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.
Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028744
Date: 11 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 124: Chapter 124
Dear lord this is dirty! You have a way with words! ;) I just read all of this particular fic of yours . I was just reading IR but then you posted that preview in the Wreck Room and I had to check it out! I'm glad I did!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125
I never skip an author's note! They are all so witty! Now this candle stick business has me intrigued. Whatever will Sir have her do with it? Hehe ;)
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 141: Chapter 141
I personally find it weird. It makes me think of the stereotypical teenage movie where the boy steals girl's underwear and gets off on it.
This is my sequel to my first 50 Shades story (I am so cool, I make my own sequels).... The kids are 6 and 4. Ana is 28 and Christian is 34. This story contains characters from my first story. The original was moved from Fanfiction.net
This is rated NC-17 for language and sexual content
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29860 Read Count: 44098
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Epilogue: The Big 4-0
I have to admit that I was a little dissatisfied with the ending, but in all it was a good series!
Fifty Shades...Clarity
Book II
A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy
You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.
"I look into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children. He tried to lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust." Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does? This is Book II.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138644
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Great chapter! The new maid is so going to try for Christian. She's also gunna get a beat down from Ana! Well, that's my prediction anyway. Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Next one coming up.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
Your story is great. I love that you covered k and r insurance. I have to admit that I didn't know what that was. You thought of everything! Post more soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and leaving a comment.
E.
Olivia Spade thought she'd lost the love of her life at 16, but ten years later Sebastian Grady returns. Everything is different, he is different, and nothing will be the same. Can they accept that the hands of fate have tied them together again? Can Olivia get past her fears that he will leave her like he did then? What happens when other factors enter their lives bent on tearing them apart?
Fate is strong, but is it strong enough?
Categories: Erotica, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25802 Read Count: 9800
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - A Connection Reborn
Please add another chapter! This story is so intriguing! Please!
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Spoon You Surprise
I had to set the fan on high for that one! I live in Avon, IN. It's pretty great to read a story set so close to home!
When Levi Daniels comes to speak to Ember Collins' roommate about a case. Sparks fly instantly and they waste no time getting to know each other. Levi is looking for more than a sub and Ember seems to be exactly what he wants. She is new to being submissive and wants to learn as much as she can from the sexy older Dom.
When feelings start to emerge can they hold it together? Will Levi be able to balance his love for Ember with the Dom that she needs? Can Ember understand that love and submission can go hand in hand? What happens when another Dom shows an interest in the couple?
Follow these two through their adventures and see where they will take it. How long will it take for them to learn that Love is the Master?
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Dominance and submission
Series: Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 101977 Read Count: 24754
Date: 03 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: There's a first time for everything.
Great story! The plot is interesting and you could go anywhere with it! Looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying it!
Date: 11 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Great chapter! I like that it was him that had to step out of his comfort zone.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I really wanted to push him further because he is the one having the hardest time adjusting to the relationship side of the D/s relationship. I favorited your story so I can start reading! Great summary, by the way!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Something to talk about.
What it Levi broke a scene to tell her he loves her. You'd never think the Dom would be so overcome he breaks his own scene.
Author's Response:
That's a good idea because Levi has been struggling with his need to protect her and to give her what she wants and needs.
Thanks!!!!
Date: 24 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Thanks for watching.
I've always wanted to do that at a drive in. Not have someone watch though. I dont think I'm that brave. Levi needs to get over his fear and tell her!
Author's Response:
I hear ya! I am a closet exhibitionist! LOL! He'll get there!
Date: 27 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 – Just say it!
It was okay! I like how it shocked them both. Lol!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! My husband said this chapter sucked but he's a guy and doesn't do Lovey dovey stuff! I am batteling a bit of writer's block so hopefully I can get my groove back and make the next chapter better!
Short Story.
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3239 Read Count: 30999
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Oh yes! I love that you threw in a son he hadn't mentioned! I noted that it was also longer, which was awesome. Thank you for the bold too. I will say this, if she's not angry about this then I'll be surprised. He didn't mention a son and she's left high and dry. I would be murderous. Great chapter. Can't wait for the next one! :)
Author's Response:
I aim to please!
Thanks for your kind words and as for anger, I haven't decided yet!
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I knew from the first couple sentences that this story would be good. You've got amazing talent. I definitely want more chapters. :)
Author's Response:
What lovely words! More chapters there will be, I'm just not sure when. I'm currently resonstructing 'Desert Diamond' at the behest of a publisher. It's way different to what's posted here and I really need to get it finished before my head explodes!
Bear with me, please! And thanks for commenting.
Date: 08 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Very good! Thank you for the new post! I'd been waiting eagerly. Now I'm just awaiting the next one! :)
Author's Response:
You're welcome! I'll endeavour to get the next one out in a timely manner, just mulling over inspiration. This was only meant to be a few smutty chapters about a one night stand, so I'm open to hearing where you might like this to go. Or not. Just thinking out loud. I'll stop waffling now...thanks for commenting!
Date: 16 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Sorry for the silence. In eight chapters I got one review on my story so you're doing a lot better than me! This chapter was great! I wish you had more time for longer chapters though. I feel like each one is a teaser! I like that you put it in bold. It easier to read.
Author's Response:
It suck arse, doesn't it? Plenty of people seem to be reading, but few seem to have opinions :(
The bold and italisized font were results of a computer spaz, but I'lm sure I can use bold from now on, thanks for the heads up.
Thanks for reading & commenting. I really have no idea where this story is going and the chapters sort of dictate the flow as and when, including the length. I usually like to write, leave it for a while, then go back and amend but the last two have been off the cuff; written and posted at the same time. You're right, they are sort of teasers but its not intentional, maybe more subliminal as I'm supposed to be concentrating on something else right now! Or when you say teaser do you mean you feel there should be more action...more smut?
i like these conversations.....lol!
I'll be sure to read and comment now that I know you're a fellow angsty writer!
Date: 16 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Very good chapter and definitely worth the wait. She's old enough that him having a kid shouldn't really freak her out and be an issue. I'm glad she allowed him to explain and I love his explanation. It's very good to see more emotion out of him. Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for your thoughts and comments; as usual, I very much appreciate your input. Not to mention I'm a slut for praise :)
Comments really do make the difference, to me at least. Its all very well writing for yourself, but validation from others....puts lead in my pencil? A spring in my fingers? I'm sure you know what I mean.
To love, to honor and to cherish are the vows that most people take. My vows were to serve, to obey and to submit.......I am a sub.
Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Fifty Shades Trilogy, Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, The Vampire Diaries/The Originals, Original Fiction, Drama, Mystery, Romance
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 46421 Read Count: 6594
Date: 25 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
I like the story so far but I have so reservations. It'll be interesting to see where you take your characters.
All-Human. Bella, Edward and the usual suspects are adults living in Seattle. They hit it off after a klutzy accident and Edward awakens Bella's ovaries, who never hesitate to voice their pervy opinion in Bella's head.
Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 255983 Read Count: 37466
Date: 01 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Futuretake: A Thanksgiving in Progress
"Sometimes it's when you think your manuscript is perfected that you get in trouble. A curve ball comes your way, and you've got to adapt...because life is a work in progress."
That's probably the most beautiful thing I've read. Love this story. I found myself laughing out loud with almost every chapter. It earned more than a few odd looks from my family. Thanks for a great read. :)