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Hi Everybody!
I am a simple french girl. Nothing remotely interesting =D After a long time I finally found the courage to start a Story.
I am an ardent twilight Fan. And when I say Twilight I limite myself at the books. I know must of you will hate me now but the movies are really bad, in my opinion anyway.( Plus I just can't see Robert P. and that since Harry Potter. So yeah sorry to the fans).
My Oméga (I don't like the word beta... It's Ugly) is Amaryllis-Amy! She is talented and write mating stories... I know heaven... Go check her page ! http:/ / www.fanfiction.net /u / 3822327 /
Three years later our favorite couple Edward and Isabella are still going strong with their adorable daughters Keiara and Kiah. Life seems to be going perfect for them, but it's all just a calm before a storm. With the brother of an old enemy threatening Edward and his reason for existing, the paparazzi growing to be unbearable, and trouble at Masen Corp once again can Edward and Isabella's relationship withstand and face the Inevitable? Reviews on Fanfic 730
Nominated twice for Fic of the Week on the Lemonade stand
Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: The Inevitable, G8or Favor8s Read, Kuu Faves, Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future , Kit's Must Reads!
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 191649 Read Count: 119928
Date: 19 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: My love My life
Hey! I've been following you since FF and I have to say that I still love your writting as much as before =D!
But I just wanted to tell you about the french you're using =) I don't reproach you anything but since I'm french myself I just want to help.
"you own me" = je t'appartiens/ tu me détiens (but the first is better)
"my little love"= mon petit amour (you traduct little as "not much" thats why you have "peu")
and you keep on using "vous" but they are married and a married couple will never use "vous" it's too formal so you have too use "Tu"!
Voila! Hope I helped