Reviews by tushka
Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Yikes! - love the quick up date (ssh.. don't tell anyone else but your my fav author) - now I'm on pins and needles - you need to update in about an hour - well maybe 2  

Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

your writing is so wonderful - of all the wonderful writers on this site I do so love your stories the most!  Please don't end this series - It makes my day to see you've updated! 

Serenity's Prayer by ladylibre Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 108]
Summary: Past Featured Story

SP

 

When Edward takes Bella into the forest to dump her, her reaction completely surprises him. Will this be the end of B&E or will they find a new path to forever? A canon-based yet very different AU approach to New Moon. Some OOC and OC.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 242771 Read Count: 26820
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2012 Updated: 17 Mar 2014
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 53: DELETED SCENE/ALT POV from the end of CHAPTER 13: VISITING THE CULLENS

really cute!

Summary:

Written for Fandom For Suicide Awareness. A possible futuretake for my character Wisp. Inspired by LyricalKris, who dared me to write angst at Disneyland! Mostly fluff, a little angst. Bella and Edward go on their first vacation.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 18096 Read Count: 2004
[Report This] Published: 21 Nov 2012 Updated: 21 Nov 2012
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my goodness - I've been trapped by your story - I certainly hope that this is the future for Wisp and Edward - real life is just so hard sometimes that I want to believe that they end up "ok"  happy thanksgiving and thanks for this story with the HEA (well as good as it can be!)

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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The job market is bad, and recent college grad Bella's dreams of being a teacher are crumbling away. Edward is a single father and doctor, struggling to raise his seven year old daughter by himself. Fate intervenes, changing them both forever. Drabble fic. Alternating POV's.

bts

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, To Read , luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22851 Read Count: 160913
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2012 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Started your story yesterday morning and LOVED it - so sweet and yummy - thanks!! Looking forward to your updates and best of all they are FAST coming!!! YEAH!!!

Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I really enjoyed your story - sweet and a happy ending!! yeah!!   thanks!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A letter to Santa prompts an intervention Dickens’ style to step in.  After being visited by ghosts separately, both Bella and Edward go on journeys through the other’s past, present and future.

 

They will not make the journey alone. Edward will be joined by the females of his family. While Bella is joined by the Cullen men.

 

Will Edward learn anything? Bella? What about Miss Rose?

 

Charles Dickens’s  A Christmas Carol with a Twilight twist.

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Posted orginally on Fanfiction


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37436 Read Count: 5179
[Report This] Published: 13 Dec 2012 Updated: 21 Dec 2012
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Like it so far! At first blush I immediately thought of Alice but after rereading the story I'm thinking Emmett - can't wait to hit the next button to the right and see what chp 2 brings!   

Summary:

What happens in the months after Ana is released from the hospital after her confrontation with Jack Hyde?  A glimpse into the life of the Greys before and after Teddy's arrival.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey, Anastasia Steele/Other Character, Jose Rodriquez/Anastasia Steele
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 90526 Read Count: 39592
[Report This] Published: 20 Mar 2013 Updated: 07 Apr 2014
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

yeah! easy to read - well written - lots of fun!  looking forward to the ride!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review.  It means so much that you complimented me on the easy read and it being well written. Thanks again!

Summary:

Banner By Ellie Wolf 

An accident on his part leads to Demetri becoming the caregiver to a young human teenager. What will he do when his charge is in danger after a decade of making his life hell? Turn his back and be rid of her, or has what started as an obligation become too important to him to lose? Story told in a series of flashbacks. DPOV/AU/OOC/OS 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Demetri/OC
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8748 Read Count: 592
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2013 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

loved the story - would love to see additional chapters  - thanks!

My Faith in Fate by ggf83 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

 

MFIF

 

Alice spent two years knowing she was going to lose Jasper and twelve years knowing he was with someone else while she was left alone. After all that time, surely she deserves to have her new beginning. When she meets Daniel, she is sure her perfect new life is about to begin. They are drawn together by fate, but sometimes our differences are just too drastic to overcome.

Sequel/Companion Fic to 'My Pereche'. Alice/OC. Dark Themes.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Alice/OC
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12527 Read Count: 754
[Report This] Published: 04 Sep 2013 Updated: 08 Sep 2013
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow - great start and so not the norm!  thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :) I do try to do things that haven't been written a million times before....

Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Pretty sad at the end of this chapter - poor Alice - she tries so hard to do the right thing - looking forward to a happier Alice!  thanks for the great story!



Author's Response:

I'll admit -- Alice is getting a very raw deal in this fic. I don't believe that my words can properly convey just how terrible she is feeling, and for that, I must apologise to her. On the plus side, if I'm making you feel anguished, I'm doing my job right. :)

Thanks so much for reviewing!!

Summary: Past Featured Story

After the loss of his wife, Edward was left with a beautiful baby boy. Soon loneliness grew and he longed for love once more... Cue Bella, a shy woman who he ran into 'quite litteraly' and it was an instant connection.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39826 Read Count: 41491
[Report This] Published: 06 Oct 2013 Updated: 03 Jan 2014
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

cute story and enjoying it - found it this morning and will read it all the way through - only teeny tiny problem is with "A/N" - when I'm reading a story I don't like to be reminded that it is a "story" I want it to flow and not be reminded that I'm reading not "listening in" to thoughts - thanks for the interesting story though!

Summary:

A Halloween-inspired one-shot, starring the Cullen clan and some artfully carved pumpkins. Set shortly before Twilight.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: French
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 717 Read Count: 119
[Report This] Published: 04 Nov 2013 Updated: 04 Nov 2013
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

very nice storyline!

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is a "What if" story-What if Ana said "No" to Christian immediately after seeing the Playroom for the first time. Would they find their way together or live their lives in different worlds?


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance, Spicy
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72556 Read Count: 30609
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2013 Updated: 14 Nov 2014
Reviewer: tushka Signed
Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Taking Chances - Chapter 7

Ohh - didn't see that coming - Little Ana's gonna be pissed I think! can't wait for your update and BYW I knew when I saw your name as the writer this would be good! Thanks for the read!!!

Summary:

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Formally named Our Christmas Tails, this will be the adventures of Kittybells and her Human Bella and Ginger-cat and his Human Edward through the Holidays of 2014. How will the 2 and 4 legged protagonists fare through the coming year as the holidays progress?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19734 Read Count: 6043
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2013 Updated: 24 Dec 2014
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Christmas

very cute story especially for us cat lovers - i always think my kitty knows more than she is letting on!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Yes, cats could rule the world if they thought it was worth their time.  It was really difficult writing from a cat's POV.  But I'll see if I can come up with a new chapter every holiday.  Maybe that would work. 

Thank you for your support.

xo

Dinia

Reviewer: tushka Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Our Holiday Tails - St. Patrick's Day

silly and fun in a very good way - enjoyed it very much!

Reviewer: tushka Signed
Date: 20 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Easter

love this cute story - everyone who has loved a cat knows they are thinking everything you've written about!

Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Christmas

Always loved this story - thank you so much for sharing with us!  Here's to a great year for Kittybells, Ginger-cat, Garrett, Bella, and Edward!

A Soul Darkened by Spudzmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 65]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

nominee

 

I felt something shifting within at a soul deep level. It started with the suspicion that he was planning on ending things with me. The fear of that eventuality had always been with me since the beginning of our odd relationship, and now I felt that it was inevitable. I just knew. X-treme OOC Dark Bella

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Demetri
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Supernatural
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64592 Read Count: 17393
[Report This] Published: 18 Mar 2014 Updated: 30 Apr 2014
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I read this last night and was truly shocked - didn't see it coming - thought this was just a nice "different" story line about Bella - Upon reflection after reading it again this morning I actually think this is probably closer to the truth of how Bella's life would have turned out.  Thanks for the fun ride!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the thoughtful review.  I'm really glad you enjoyed it!  Not everyone appreciated the way I chose to end it.  LOL

Summary:

I was lost to it, to him from the very beginning. I ran from it, that overwhelming intensifying love that most spend their lives seeking. I ran from him


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5305 Read Count: 429
[Report This] Published: 01 May 2014 Updated: 05 May 2014
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 May 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Enjoying your storyline but I do have a request please seperate your paragraphs - it maikes reading so much easier and enjoyable!  Thanks!

Summary:

 

 

Bella swan/Jax Teller. 

Strange things are happening in Charming. Bella's no longer the weak girl she used to be. After finding out her father isn't her father, Bella moves back with her mother to Renees childhood home, Charming, California. How will Bella handle bikers, territorial street wars and anything else the SOA can throw her way? Well, she isn't going to be sitting around looking pretty thats for sure. Its time for Bella to get her hands dirty. SOA style.

 

AU, OOC Bella, Set around Newmoon for Twilight and Pre-season one for SOA. 

 

 

 


Categories: Crossover
Characters: Bella/Jax
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 33485 Read Count: 5163
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2014 Updated: 29 Jan 2016
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Big Betty.

wow - loved the start - missing SON here and willing to give you a chance!  Thanks!!

Trigger Warning by GeezerWench Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

 

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Vicky's got a gun. *trigger warning* Sniper shooting at Newton's Outfitters. Acts of terrorism. Blood. Victoria, Riley Biers.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Action, Drama, One-Shot, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3489 Read Count: 312
[Report This] Published: 28 Dec 2014 Updated: 28 Dec 2014
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Trigger Warning

OMG your so evil!!!!  Loved it - are you considering adding more to this deliciously horrible story??  Would love to see it continued!!!



Author's Response:

"OMG your so evil!!!!"

Thanks!

I have a couple of ideas ... primarily about using a larger weapon. The one I had in mind for this one was a Marlin 30/30. I think maybe a 30.06 next time.

But, for now, it's just a one shot.

thanks for reviewing!

 

Rick - MizzRick - GeezerWench

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

There were so many secrets people carried in their minds.  For this reason I told them the mind often whispered and I didn't hear it unless I listened closely.  I lied.  Lying is part of who I am: A vampire pretending to be human, a mind reader pretending I don't know the things I know, an old lover pretending to be a novice.  When she asked if I'd ever been interested in the beautiful Rosalie--I lied.   

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55884 Read Count: 5448
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2015 Updated: 24 Mar 2015
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 First Love

A new storyline that I've never necountered before - I love it!  Easy to see why Edward would "fall in love" with Esme - she was beautiful and not much older than him, a vampire and available - she seemed to be somewhat interested albeit as a "mother" but 17 year old's develope crushs like this all the time - Can't wait to read more!  Thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and especially thanks for the rating and review!  I loved the way this story is completely different from Twilight, yet it could fit without changing the original.  It was hard for some readers to accept that Edward might have lied to Bella.  But he's a vampire and a mind reader; he has to lie all the time just for survival.  Anyway, I don't want to spoil the read; thanks for giving something new a try.  

Hungry Eyes by BelleMoon Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 34]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner of Bella and Jasper kissing with the title

 

Anyone who tells you that they talk with people whom others can't see is assumed to be insane; not so for Isabella Dwyer, a Spirit Witch. The Dwyers are one of the most powerful families of Spirit Witches left in the world after centuries of witch hunting. While it's uncommon for witches to marry and have children with normal humans, also known as Mundanes, it's very normal for witches to leave their Mundane partner if the child is a witch to protect both child and mundane. This is the case with Bella. Her mother left her mundane father when Bella's abilities began to show.

Bella grew up in Phoenix in a coven of witches with her mother...until five years ago when her mother was killed. Now she is forced to live with her mundane father after a custody battle with the leaders of the coven, the guardians as stated by Renee's will. Upon arriving in Forks things become more strange for Bella than she expected. Her nights are haunted by nightmares, leaving her screaming and confused.

What is this mystery unfolding before her? Could her life really be at stake? What part does the local vampire seethe play?


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper, Edward/Alice
Genre: Fantasy, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 7342 Read Count: 1788
[Report This] Published: 24 May 2015 Updated: 30 Aug 2015
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-- Mundanes

Wow! What a great start!  Can not wait till the ride really gets going ,   love,love,love these first 2 chapters - especially Delphi

Summary:

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She's different, smart, intuitive and best of all she seems to hates Eddie-boy on sight.      


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gone
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2094 Read Count: 796
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2016 Updated: 06 Jun 2016
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I absolutely loved this companion piece - loved the original also! - would be great for an extended storyline!   thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, Love Jasper's POV myself, got some plans for these 2 don't worry xx

AAP

Summary:

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Bella has had enough of being treated like a child. Who the hell does he think he is ... Her father.    


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1853 Read Count: 963
[Report This] Published: 12 Jun 2016 Updated: 12 Jun 2016
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jun 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow - practically did the Alice squeal when I saw another story from you - you are FAST becoming my favorite author! Cute story!! thanks!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, that's really nice of you xx

AAP

Cowboy? by theadosia57 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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Bella is just finishing her Bachelors Degree in Criminology, aged 24 at UNT (University of North Texas). When a certain blond cowboy re-appears in her life.

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Gone
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7207 Read Count: 4791
[Report This] Published: 14 Jul 2016 Updated: 18 Jul 2016
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Midnight Revelations

another great storyline!!!  Thanks for the fun read!!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, you're welcome xx

AAP

Summary:

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The battle with the newborns was about to begin, The Wolves and Vampires were working together to protect Bella, but it was  coming at a price. Eclipse AU Sequel to 'When Did I Become Invisible?' Short Story (4 Chaps) Again published 2 chaps at a time.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Visibility
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6870 Read Count: 3175
[Report This] Published: 29 Jul 2016 Updated: 31 Jul 2016
Reviewer: tushka Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 4: Revenge, Not So Sweet Now Vicky!

fun story - love your fictions!



Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you're enjoying them xx

AAP