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Fifty Shades...Clarity
Book II
A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy
You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.
"I look into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children. He tried to lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust." Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does? This is Book II.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138690
Date: 13 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
I've been checking your blog about every hour waiting for this chapter and you didn't disappoint. I feel like I can breathe again knowing that Christian is back. Where are you going with his nightmares, hmmmmm. I love how you have kept true to the characters and their personalities. Another great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm trying very hard not to veer from the original characters while letting them grow at the same time.
I appreciate the review.
E.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Fifty Shades...Clarity
I write this with tears in my eyes. The last chapter was a shock but this chapter puts everything in perspective. The pain and sadness that they are experiencing with the loss of Sam must have been difficult to write. I'm so touched by your words and always look forward to your next postings. Thank you!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
WOW, what a powerful chapter. That was worth the wait even though poor Sam died. Christian said it best, they can't seem to catch a break. I'm so glad that Elena is out of their lives. Great writing on another wonderful chapter, I can hardly wait until your next post.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to leave a review.
E.
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
Another great chapter. Please keep them coming
Author's Response:
Writing as fast as I can.
Thanks for wanting...more.
E.
Date: 30 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
Thank you for another great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you. More on the way. At least I hope they're good.
Thanks for leaving a review.
E.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Such a sweet chapter after dealing with a horrible loss. Great writing as ususal.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
E.
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
I was so happy today to see another wonderful chapter was posted. I am worried now that you could put Christian in danger and I hope that doesn't happen.
Author's Response:
Me? Put Christian in danger? Christianis always in control.
Thanks for reading.
E
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Fifty Shades...Clarity
What a great surprise on a Saturday to see another chapter. I love the new plot twist and can't wait to see where it's going.
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Loving the newest adventure you are taking us on. Thank you again for another great chapter. I'm checking all the time waiting for the next updates.
Author's Response:
Next update probably Tuesday.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 08 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
OMG this is getting better and better. Please keep Christian and Taylor safe. Can't wait til your next posting. Love it!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
SAFE! Thanks for reading and leaving a commnet.
E.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
OMG what a cliffhanger. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat reading this chapter. I love your writing but write faster. Is Christian in the chair?
Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Thank you for another great chapter. I can't wait to see where this story line is going.
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
I love reading how Christian is with Teddy and Grace. I was smiling thinking how is Christian going to discuss sex with Teddy but the way you did it was prefect and very Christian like. Thanks for making my Saturday start off great.
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
This story keeps having twists and turns and I'm loving every part of it. Great story line with Ana.
Author's Response:
Thank you. thanks for taking time to review.
E.
Date: 23 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
I hope the bitch stays away but I'm sure your story line is going to make it very entertaining. I'm glad that Ana didn't keep Elena a secret from Christian. I love that they are so much in love with one another and so caring with each other. Great writing! Thank you for keeping their love story going.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
You never disappoint, great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
E.
Date: 27 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
Noooooo!!! Don't leave us hanging, what's going on? Was she pushed? Is the baby okay? I'm going to be checking all the time for the next update. What a clift hanger.
Author's Response:
Update on they way.
E.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Awwww.......I feel so sad for Ana but I love how sweet Christian is acting. Having Christian buying the breast pump and pads is just another loving thing that shows he would do anything for Ana. I hope your future chapter keep their relationship in tact because I would hate if anything happen to them as a couple.
Author's Response:
Christian and Ana always together in my books. What is one without the other?
Thanks for following. New book is posted.
E.
Fifty Shades...Full Circle
Book III
A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy
*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*
Thank You.
This story continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and accepting his past have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger? This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.
Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591802
Date: 01 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49
I'm still laughing that Teddy thought his penis would call off. You never know what your kids will talk about at dinner. I think it's great what Ana wants to do to help but I don't think it's going to be an easy task.
Date: 04 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50
That poor little boy. I think it's great that Ana wants to try and help Lorna but it still might be best for Tommy to be taken from her.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74
Dominant Christian and submissive Ana are hot as hell.
Date: 24 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 63
If only I had their stamina. Wow!!!
Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42
What you write about Flynn talking to Ana actually helped me to also understand why Christian would react the way he did. Are you sure your not a therapist? I hope Christian can forgive Ana just like she always has in the past.
Author's Response:
Not a therapist. Thought about it at one time. Hang in there and thanks.
E.
Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77
Loved it!!! Soaring with Christian sounds like a prefect way to start your birthday besides sex with Christian. Did Mia buy Elena's house? Christian seems weird about the whole address.
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Loving the fight between these two. It seemed so Christian like with them fighting and then him trying to make love. Good for Ana keeping her legs closed... Lol..... can't wait to see what's next.
Donna
Author's Response:
They will eventually open. Ana can be stubborn when she takes a notion. She has the man under her thumb.
Thanks for reading.
E.
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41
I'm starting to get mad at Christian. Seriously who does he think he is, all the shit he put Ana through and this takes him over the edge. He loves her, how can he treat Ana so cold. Need more soon please.
Author's Response:
On the way.
E.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
Awaiting the next chapter but this one was also great,. Thank you for capturing their love for each other during good times and bad.
Author's Response:
New chapter just posted.
Thanks again.
E.
Date: 01 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28
Awesome! Cute family time and now a puppy.
Author's Response:
Date: 11 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52
I hope the deal goes without a problem. It seem strange that she didnt want her daughter in laws at lunch. I love how much in love Christian and Ana are in your story. They have their fights but the make ups are fantastic. I'm still laughing over them dry humping like teenagers.
Date: 07 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29
Great chapter, I've been wondering about Virginia. That explains a lot and Christian should know however telling him is another story.
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
What a great family story. it was a day and a life of Ana Grey. Can't wait to see what Christian thinks of the puppy coming for a visit with Ray. Ana is walking a thin line having her secret meeting with Ms Douglas. I doubt Christian is going to be happy.
Author's Response:
Writing Grandma now. He may not be happy at first, but I don't think Ana would ever do anything that wasn't in his best interest. He knows that. But he still may go all Christian on her.
E.
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I am so happy that you are continuing their story. I loved this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you and thanks for following me.
E.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 93: Chapter 93
OMG. I'm reading this with a smile on my face. Between the phone call home to the dinner conversation it's adorable.
Date: 10 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Great chapter and I love them running in the rain, very cute.
Author's Response:
Thanks.
E.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Love it as usual. A sweet family chapter with no drama. Christian and his girls, Ana and Grace. I just love your writing and hope these stories go on for a while. Thank YOU
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Love it! I always look forward to new chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks. It's getting harder to get them churned out. But I keep plugging away.
E.
Date: 21 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Wow you weren't kidding about this chapter, I feel like I need a shower. I love how they are still so into one another and so very much in love. It's a powerful love story with lots of drama and we the readers love every minute of it. Great job on another amazing chapter.
Donna
Date: 27 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Loved it! It does seem kinda silly not working for your own company and working for a competitor but I'm sure you have something in mind with this story line. I love how fresh their love seems to be and how devoted they are to each other.
Author's Response:
Next chapter. Ana explains to him again why she doesn't want to work for him. Loving someone and working for them are two different things,
thanks.
E.
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
It was cute Christian's happiness over his new toy and I laughed with Ana's definition of BBJ. Oh boy Christian should have never cleaned out Sam's room without talking to Ana. The next chapter should be something since you wrote WWIII. I can't wait as long as they make up after the fight.
Author's Response:
They fight with as much passion as they make love. Can't get any better than that. A good fight clears the aair sometimes.
E.
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
You weren't kidding about the make up sex. Great writing!!! The end seems a little scary with it being so late and not sure if its Christian who was dropped off.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
OMG ...drunk Christian who would have thought that. I'm still laughing.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I could feel his pain while writing it. Glad you liked it.
Thanks.
E.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
Awww such a sweet chapter. I was laughing at loud when baby Grace fell and said fuck. Can't wait to see what's up with Elliott.
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
Teddy dances with everyone was so cute. So what is Elliott up too? Is a Grey divorce on the horizon? Love the ending with Ana, they are so playful in love with each other.
Date: 25 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
Another great one! I can sense trouble coming up with maybe a lost phone?
Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
Another great chapter! I can feel a set up for problems coming soon, can't wait to see what you have in mind.
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
I've said this before but WOW that was fantastic!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you again.
E.
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Another amazing chapter, you never disappoint.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much and thanks for reading.
E.
Date: 15 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23
Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you.
E.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24
Another amazing chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you.
E
Date: 23 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Noooooo, he can't be having a heart attack..not Christian. What a mean cliffhanger. Please post next chapter soon..
Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Oh thank God it wasn't a heart attack. The whole scene now seems so funny, great job writing! Birthday or vampire sex, I'm still laughing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I appreciate you taking time to let me know.
E.
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
I just love this story!! Christian was so cute when he was helping Ana get changed. Poor Teddy just wanting to make sure they were okay. The part about Gail seeing his backside was priceless.
Author's Response:
Thanks for following and always leaving a nice comment.
E.
Date: 10 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30
How the hell is she going to tell Christian about Virgina and their talk? He is going to go ape shit over Ana meeting her in the first place and now Leila might make appearance. Who is the girl and the little boy? I'm baffled on that one. Great chapter always leaving me wanting more.
Date: 13 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31
Well you have surprise me again. OMG Leila and Suzannah together again. Christian has got to be going out if his mind right now. Please post quickly this next chapter is going to be great.
Author's Response:
Next chapter Saturday. Christian is about to wet his pants.
E.
Date: 15 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
Great chaper! Ana had to know he would join her after that phone conversation. It was nice how Leila explained herself to Ana in the bathroom. Hot, angry missing you sex to end a chapter, fantastic.
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33
Yay an update. I always look forward to your updates. I'm not sure how Ana has the strength to walk around after a whole night with Christian. Wow!!!
Date: 27 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37
It's never a good idea to leave 2kids and a dog alone. I could just picture that scene when I was reading. Unny chapter with. A surprise ending.
Author's Response:
You're right, but when you gotta' go, you gotta' go.
Thanks for commenting.
E
Date: 30 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38
I always enjoy your stories. Thanks for a great update.
Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39
Thanks for the update. Sounds like a Christian caught Ana in her secret. I can't wait for your next chapter.
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40
Wow!!! I'm speechless. I've never imagined he would act that way with Ana. So cold and heartless. After everything he has done to her and she forgave him each time. Please oh please post again early.
Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44
Thank God!!!!!! My heart was breaking for Ana, I just kept hoping he would show up. First I thought he would see her in the tub and when that didn't happen I thought maybe when she was in his closet. Still no Christian, popping open the champagne and drinking away her sorrows was so sad. Then finally before the night was over he is there, YES he finally did the right thing this week. He is back where he belongs, with the love of his life. I've been waiting for this update and now I can relax.
Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45
Hot, sexy, make up, happy anniversary, I miss you sex, could a chapter get any better. I think not. Great update!!!!!
Author's Response:
That's a lot of sex. Ahhhh.
thanks.
E.
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46
Another amazing chapter. I loved family time and Teddy asking about his penis was great.
Date: 27 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48
Seems like for now life is back to normal. What's Christian going to think of Ana paying the hospital bill?
Date: 07 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51
I have a feeling that Christian and Ana are about to add another little boy to their family. It doesn't seem like Lorna wants help.
Date: 07 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 59
What a bitchLorna is, they are there to help her and she hits on Christian. It was bad enough doing drugs on the plane. Poor little Tommy, his mom is never going to straighten up and unless Christian changes his mind he isn't staying with them either. Thanks for the update.
Date: 05 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 67: Chapter 67
The more Christian talks about Tomny the more I think he is going to stay with them. I'm not one for anal sex but damn girl that was hot.
Date: 02 Jun 2013 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 83
I'm getting nervous that things are going to smoothly. Mrs. Collins seem nice and helpful and I think reassured Ana a bit over getting Tommy. I just feel like something is going to happen to wreak havoc somehow.
Date: 01 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 91: Chapter 91
Nothing like a little fun with the tub jets. I'm surprised Christian was ok with that.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 105: Chapter 105
Please don't have Christian do something stupid again against Ana. I have always been worried over the title of the story. I don't want him with someone else either having sex or just like the last time. It would kill me for this Christian to hurt Ana like that again. I hope I'm really off base on this.
Date: 18 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 100: Chapter 100
Congratulation on 100chapters on another book of the series. Poor little Teddy. Christian was killing me with just a little more time before going to take care of Teddy. I can understand when you are almost there nothing will stop you until you finish. Lol
Date: 16 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 104: Chapter 104
Ana needs to watch out for Colton. I wouldn't trust him. She should have just told Christian about the flowers and not try to hide them. His phone call to Flynn didn't sound good. Ana and Christian sound like they need a session together.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 106: Chapter 106
I'm so glad he wasn't cheating. I want to think he wouldn't do that again but you never know. That took a lot of guts for Ana to go there and possibly catch him if he was. New playroom, more kinky lemons, oh yea!!!