Reviews by Mcox82
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella is 17 and tired of being the 'good girl'. Senior year calls for change. She finds it in the arms of 25 yr old Edward. Consequences for her choices cause a ripple effect that even she could never have been prepared for.

New banner made by: mkystich, thanks bb!

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 71042 Read Count: 116430
[Report This] Published: 08 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2015
Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Aww hell! Its going down now Huh?!! Damn I can't wait for the next chapter. Hope to read it soon :)

Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Loved it! Cant wait to find out who betrayed Bella. Or was he just talking out of his ass? Hmmm Guess we will have to wait and see.

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 429]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53868
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Friends and Foes

Oooh I'm so happy they said it! That means they are gonna get it on now right HAHA Just joking. Kind of. Anyways. I'm so excited about you writing Emmett too. Hes always the fun character and I am so looking forward to his interaction with Bella. So exciting! Keep up the awesome work :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When everything goes wrong at the baseball field what happens to Edward and Bella? Can they survive what happens? What happens when you give your life for the one you love? Is there a heaven? What will Bella do when all her dreams come true and she really gets her Second Chance at her first love?  Cowritten with preciousfairymom80, go check out her stories too!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 102807 Read Count: 55128
[Report This] Published: 14 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Sep 2010
Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 16 Sep 2010 Title: Second Chances

Ok I'm going to admit that I was a little scared by the AN @ the begining but I'm glad I read on. Cant wait for the sequal. I hoped they became vamps... well I hope that I assumed correctly anyways LOL.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing

WOW  This was a really good chapter. I'm glad they talked I just can't wait to read the talk between Carlisle & Bella. I have to admit its weird not reading abt Bella & Edward but this is really good :)

Edward's Clan by Greenaway Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1470]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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**WARNING - THIS STORY CONTAINS VIOLENCE, SEXUAL MATERIAL, OFFENSIVE LANGUAGE AND OTHER CONTENT THAT MAY DISTURB SOME PEOPLE. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED.**

Edward Cullen is the leader of The Clan, a fierce and deadly group of assassins for hire and he knows nothing besides violence and blood. When he meets Bella, he begins to imagine that there might be more for him out there.

A dark journey of love, power and death.


All Human, Cannon Pairings and TEAM EDWARD

Please be warned, this story gets pretty graphic later on.

 

A special thank you to evilangel813 for the awesome banner.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy)
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 234131 Read Count: 195559
[Report This] Published: 23 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2012
Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: All My Daughters For a Son

I hope Bella turns into one BadAss Bitch! That would be awesome. Cant wait to read the rest of the ball :)

Summary:

Bella thinks she has her life figured out. She has the best father and brother but all too soon her life comes shattering down around her. Will Edward be able to help her? E/B, Em/R, J/A AH & NC-17 for lemons.

Banner by Mkystich

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, To Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 70 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 156928 Read Count: 119984
[Report This] Published: 01 Apr 2010 Updated: 11 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 11 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70

I'm sad to see ths story end but it was wrapped up nicely. I love all of your stories tho. I cried in just about all of these chapters they really touched me. thank you for writing this :) Cant wait to read more from you.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 211499
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

OMG I hope you can update soon. I can't wait for the reunion. It'll be a clusterfuck I'm sure but so good :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I hope you enjoy the double chapter this week! Look for Chapter 9 to post in just a little bit!

I just want to remind everyone that the 1000th reviewer on FFnet, as well as the 500th on Twilighted and TWCS, will get to choose the subject(s) for one of the Parachute Outtakes!

<3

Shel

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"Tanya suggested that we rent a hotel room for a week or so to see how things go. If they are good, then she knows a guy who can rent us a house to stay in for the summer." Bella rolled her eyes at the thought of Tanya and her "guys."

Charlie's eyes widened.

"So, you could possibly be gone for the whole summer?" he asked as he swallowed back his anxiety. He hadn't gone more than two weeks without seeing Bella or Jack for the past five years. Even then, most of the time they were only about a two hour drive away. Two and a half months suddenly seemed like an eternity to him.

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Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 30 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

so close! cant wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! I really appreciate you taking the time to read my story! I update every Friday and post teasers on Mondays. In fact, there is delicious little teaser, along with a Pic Tease, up on the Parachute Blog as we speak.

I have taken to calling you, my readers, "Verucas". A good number of you are so demanding and impatient, even though I update every week! It makes me feel so damned loved and I give you this moniker in adoration! You truly give me chills and warm my heart at the same time with every review you leave me! As you can tell from this message, I respond to every single review that is left for me because you guys rock my socks!

Parachute's 1000th reviewer On FFnet was given the option to choose the subject of one of the outtakes and she deferred the choice to my judgement, so I will continue to listen to ideas and then maybe post a poll to see what you guys as a whole would like to see. The 500th reviewers on Twilighted and here will also be extended the same deal, since I want no one to feel left out!

Oh, and one more thing! An awesome Veruca named Phoebe started Parachute a thread on the Twilighted Forum! The link is up on the blog if you need it! In addition, thanks to many of you, Parachute was named as FanFic Addicts Fic of the Month! Super-freaking-yay!

I love you guys something fierce and I hope this next chapter lives up to your expectations of the first Cullen meeting!

XoXo

Shel


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Esme's gaze went back and forth between Bella and Jack. She could clearly see the love that wound between the two of them and a million questions started to swirl around her.

"How?" she asked, as tears started to trickle from her verdant eyes. "What happened? How did you find him? How long have you known we were his family?"  Both she and Carlisle looked at Bella expectantly.

"It's very long story," Bella chuckled, humorlessly. "Let me start at the beginning."

Bella started to tell the Cullen her tale, starting with finding Jack in the alley and taking him to the police station. She didn't get very far. They were interrupted with the sound of the front door opening and a loud voice calling out of the foyer.

"Mom! We're here!"

Bella felt something tighten in her stomach as she prepared to come face to face with Jack's father. Her nerves were at an all-time high and she briefly wondered if Dr. Cullen could prescribe her something to help prevent an ulcer from forming.

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Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

NOOOOOOOOOOOO Dont stop there! AHHHH Cant wait to hear the proposition.... Love this story



Author's Response:

{The next chapter should be up in less than 12 hours!}


Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teases are up on the Blog (kitsushel . blogspot . com) as we speak, so check them out if you'd like! The teaser this week isn't much, but the one on the Blog is more exciting, lol. I've been driving myself crazy trying to get my O/S for the All Hallow's Eve contest finished, so I wouldn't get your hopes up for an early posting this week, sorry! See you guys on Friday!


<3 Shel

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Jack curled up with Bella on the couch opposite of Edward, who was propped up with a ton of pillows. Her hand absentmindedly ran through the boy's hair and he hummed a contented sound. She heard a soft laugh come from Edward and looked up to see that he was smiling adoringly at her and Jack. 

'Is it worth it?' She thought. 'Is potentially falling in love with him worth the heartache I'll feel at the end of the summer?'

His eyes moved up to hers and sent her a brilliant smile that made her breath catch in her throat.

The better question to have asked would have been, if it was even possible to avoid it happening any longer.

Summary:

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Bella and Edward have grown up practically hating each other. Friends and family will force them closer than ever before. Will they try to fight it, or give in? AH/AU OCC. Canon pairing. Rated M for future Lemons.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 22 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 113597 Read Count: 27217
[Report This] Published: 22 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: New Girl

Ok I cried on the last few chapters. So sad to loose someone you are close to. Love the story and can't wait to read more :) 



Author's Response:

I cried while writing them..

Thank you! :)

xx
Gelix

Shake by LFC Hotstuff Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

 

 

Shake is Edward's story, a high school student who has to deal with the daily embarrassment and pain brought about a disorder. All-Human.

 

 



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: One-Shot
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8115 Read Count: 492
[Report This] Published: 20 Oct 2010 Updated: 20 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Aw that was sweet of Bella to give him a chance. I'm not sure about Tourette syndrome and haven't had much experience with it but this story seemed to capture it. Good job on the writting. It was easy to follow and easy to understand and easy to read. LOL Just easy all around LOL Anyways. Keep up the good work :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. That's my writing style, easy in all aspects. lol

I tried to capture the very essence of the disorder and apply it in this story. Glad to hear that I was able to paint a good and accurate picture for you.

Summary:

Bella needs to sober up before going home. A late night stop at Denny's provides her with more than breakfast, thanks to an old crush. E/B


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, One-Shot, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6529 Read Count: 444
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2010 Updated: 22 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Mooning Over My Hammy

OMG that was fucking hilarious. HAHA I laughed the whole way through pretty much but it was hot too. Great job :) Loved it !!!



Author's Response:

thanks so much! :)

Summary:

Alice and Bella are on the trip of a lifetime, spending Halloween in one of the most haunted cities in the world brings scares, laughs and much more than either of them ever expected.

One shot.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward, Jasper/Alice
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11955 Read Count: 1594
[Report This] Published: 26 Oct 2010 Updated: 25 Dec 2010
Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is too cute! I"m really loving it. You should totally continue with this. It will make an awesome story :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Banner by the lovely Madam Akyria

 

 

Five years following the events in New Moon, the Cullens are living in New Hampshire and Edward is finally getting married.  During a wild night out on the town, some of the Cullens run into a happy, more confident Bella.

Jasper/Bella Pairing.  Humor/Romance.  AU/OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 532667 Read Count: 144925
[Report This] Published: 26 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Sep 2011
Reviewer: mdeal82 Signed
Date: 04 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG How often do you update? HAHA Anyways I love this story. I've seen/read several along this plot line but this is just AWESOMENESS all in its own. I just couldn't stop reading it. Now my perverted mind is telling me to say this... how awesome would it be if Jasper & Bella & Edward mated... I'm just going ther for a sec. Just for my perverted mind LOL I love B&E stories and J&B stories come close second. But B&E&J are awesome as well. Ok that was my perverted side LOL I really enjoy your writing and I cant wait til you update again.

<3Impatiently waiting~Michelle

Thanks for writing



Author's Response:

Welcome to the story!  My brain's perverted too, unfortunately Eddie is just a little too prudish to handle Bella--although the imagery is fantastic.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  The Cullens get a new pet next chapter!  XOXO