I like this, and I was so disappointed that there wasn't another chapter to read. God, Renee is terrible - she reminds me of Mrs Bennet *involuntary shudder*

Hope you post soon.

I can't believe Edward didn't intervene when Bella and Renee were fighting, especially when she slapped her. It makes him seem none too trustworthy, and I'm interested to know what his plan is. Hopefully this'll make you writer faster ;) I like your story.

Don't know where you're taking this, but "Cult! Cult! Cult!" keeps running through my head. Bella is so fucked.

It would've been nice to see more development. I understand this is fanfic, but this is very rushed. I went back and read through it and I found Renee's character unrealistic. I know you needed to create a bad environment for her to make the decision to leave, but the way you did it...it felt lazy to me. It was very one dimensional.

I think I'll still keep reading, but only to find out what Edward's and Carlisle's motives are.

I just put a face mask on when I began to read this chapter. I had to hardest time keeping my face straight as it was drying. Crookshanks was hilarious. So funny.

I have a question, though. How are they in the same common room? 

It took me a while to figure out why Draco was answering her without her saying anything, but then I remembered he practiced occlumency or legilimency, right? Is that what that was?

Looking forward to the next chapter. And I agree, your chapters are real chapters. Size...or length isn't supposed to matter, right? Sorry, I couldn't help myself, the opportunity was just too perfect to let it pass ;)

Gah! You are evil.

What a first time for Hermione. But what are they going to do about the sex being unprotected? Do they do a spell or something?

I liked your style of writing. It was more sophisticated that I thought it would be, and made reading this a lot more enjoyable. I liked that Bella was the vampire and Edward was her prey. It was an interesting power flip between the two.

If someone can't stand by what they say by posting an anonymous comment then you shouldn't even listen to it. Coward's criticism. 

And as creepy as your stories are, I like them. I would never want to be in the situation Hermione finds herself in but I can't help but find them fascinating. It's so weird. Like as humans, we really can't help but ogle at horrible things. Something that comes to mind at the moment is the public executions of medieval times. Not that that has anything to do with Hermione and Draco.

Can't wait for your next post. And I know it's drabblefic, but I always get to the end and I just want more!

How weird would it be to have cold jizz inside you?

30 chapters? Yes, please! I just love what your doing with this. So different from your other stuff; it has the same elements that you work with, but there's a different quality to it at the same time. I like the mind-reading thing. I wonder what will happen when that develops.

That is so sweet, packing up her lunch for her.

Yaaaay! I loved this story. I was beyond surprised to find an email about it. OMG. So fucking good! The only thing that was weird for me was the way Bella talks sometimes. It's too wordy and smart, like how she "yearns" for Edward. It just didn't fit for me.

I await the next installment eagerly :)

P.S. I just had phone sex with my boyfriend too. It felt so weird to read a scene of it 10 minutes afterwards.

Wow... *fans self*

If that's what you can do with a little dry humping, then I cannot wait until the big event. I'm gonna go see BOB for a while ;)

I've never seen or head someone other than me use "finicky". Ah! I loved seeing that. I also loved this chapter. Daddy Vinnie has some great stuff on his blog, and I like that you used him as inspiration for Garrett. 

Oh, Garrett. Thank god for him. I was so pissed at Edward. I understand why he did what he did, but I was reading it and I was like, Oh no! You fucking bastard, Edward! I felt so, so sorry for Isa. That would've been horrible to go two weeks without hearing from her Daddy. I think I would've fared much worse than her. Oh, that'd be devastating. 

Such a good chapter! :) There was one thing I wanted to make you aware of but I can't for the life of me remember it, so it obviously wasn't very important.

Look forward to the next chapter :)

It was a pretty good chapter. I liked how well the scene was written, all aspects of it. But the language when Edward and Bella talk is too formal at times, making it seem very forced and false.

I love this story so much. It's seriously the best fanfic--maybe even best story--I've read that properly displays what a healthy D/s relationship is. Thank you! Someone is finally getting it right; I'm so sick of the Top/Dom character not doing his duty in caring for their bottom/sub.

Excellent chapter! I love getting the email for this :)

I couldn't send you a private message since it was disabled; don't worry, I totally understand that. I'd be happy to answer any questions you have in regards to your story--to the best of my ability of course. You should be able to send me a message through my profile on here.

I really liked this. Nice to see good writing on here -- phew!

I hope that Bella will be able to talk to him about the "duality" and that it's that which upsets her. I feel like Edvard is quite oblivious---and out of no fault of his own.

Ah! I love this so much. Definitely a real favourite find and I can count those fics on one hand---still with left over fingers.

I patiently await your next chapter since you write quite long ones and the quality is much higher than preeeetty much all fics floating around on here---if it weren't, I'd want this tomorrow...but then I wouldn't be reading it :)