Reviews by mizzugirl
Summary: Past Featured Story

AH/AU, OOC Bella is a famous actress and Edward is a host of a late night talk show. What do they whisper to each other when they greet each other on stage?


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, Love to drive's Stories to read, Stories Read by CNYBella
Chapters: 35 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126443 Read Count: 90989
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 20 Feb 2012
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 28 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Wow!  I think they got the right kind of revenge against TMZ but they should still go on with a lawsuit.  Most of the time that's what happens, a celeb will file a lawsuit and then it will most likely go into litagation.

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow!  I never thought James would go that far with his role but I guess I was wrong.  I think Bella shouldn't do the movie with Felix.  If she's having so many second thoughts about it then it isn't ment to be.

Until the next Chapter!

Rhonda



Author's Response:

She's not having second thoughts about the role, just worried about her and Edward. Working hard on the next chapter. =0 J

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

World War II Navy Pilot Edward meets shy wallflower Bella at a USO dance and starts to fall in love immediately.  Two weeks and a wedding later, they face separation as Edward ships off to the Eastern Front.  How will Bella handle life back in the states while Edward fights for their country abroad?  Will the letters they exchange be enough to help them get through the painful separation?

Rated NC-17 for the lemony exchanges in the first few chapters and perhaps later on in the story.

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Twilight, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 98833 Read Count: 64099
[Report This] Published: 12 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 Apr 2010
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 14 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Perfect Beginning

I've told ya more than once that I love this story!  I'm really glad your still posting.  I was starting to get worried with all the crap on FFN.  I can't wait to find out how Bella and Edward make it through the war.

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

Glad you found me here for the full flavored version.  There won't be much smut to be had, but there will be a tad here and there. :)  Thanks hon!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Transitions

I think this story is AWESOME!  Ok seriously, I almost cried reading Edwards last letter to Bella.  The names...I think are perfect.  I do hope our hero gets to come home before the baby is born.  I can't wait for the next update! 

Is it Wednesday yet? LOL!

Rhonda :)

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Unpleasant Surprises

Oh my goodness!  If I didn't already hate the Volutri brothers in this story I do now!  Edward is going to have a cow when he finds out about this.  BTW I do love the baby names!  See ya next update!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 16: United Front

That was so great!  I'm glad that Bella is going to have security around the house and stuff, better safe than sorry.  And those dreams!  That is definately a connection she's got with Edward because I'd almost bet that it had already happened to him when she dreamed it.  Okay I hope that made sense cause I just got home from working overnight and I'm tired, but I had to leave you a note and tell ya how much I enjoyed the chapter!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 17: A Pain In The Back

I can't wait for Baby G to be born!  I do hold out hope though that Edward will get home safely soon!  Loved the update and can't wait until Monday!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Welcome Baby Cullen!

Happy  Birthday Gabby Cullen!  Heehee!  loved the chapter and I'm glad you updated tonight because now I don't have to get up early to read the update before work!  LOL!  All that's left now is for Edward to make it home safely to his girls!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Back Home

Gah!  I so wanted Edward to actually be home!  Please bring him home soon to meet his little Gabby.  Okay, I'm done being all emo and crap.. LOL!  I will patiently await next week and the next update to find out what happens next!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 05 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Evil Brown Envelopes

Oh lordy!  I thought I was going to have a panic attack right along with Bella there for a minute.  But thank goodness Edward is ok and now in England.  Hopefully, he'll get to come home soon. 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 21: The Mysteries of Time

I so read this this morning but I couldn't review, so now here I go....

You almost made me have a heart attack while getting ready for work!  LOL!  I know you always give us  a HEA and I'm holding you to it this time.  :)  I do hope Edward is found safe and that he really does get home soon.  I couldn't imagine having a dream like that about my husband.  Anyhoo, loved the update!  Can't wait for the next chapter and all the angst and happiness that I'm sure is upcoming. 

:)

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Safe

That chapter made me so happy!  You have no idea!  LOL!  I'm so glad you posted today....sorry about the real life crap and your ankle, but really happy that you posted today.  So incase no one tells you this...Thanks for the awesomeness that was this chapter and the whole story for that matter...it really made my day!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Birthday Party

I can't wait for Edward to get home!   I just love this story!  Now, I'm off to read the teaser! 

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 24: The Foreign Familiar

Woohoo!  Edwards home!  I think it's time Cherie gets a new brother or sister.  LOL!  At least that's what I'd do...LOL!  Anyhoo, I loved the POV change, it was great to read how Edward really felt coming home and meeting his daughter for the first time.

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 25: A Clean Start

Oh my lordy that was perfect!  I loved every part of that chapter.  It was romantic, and family oriented...just perfect!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 26: It All Comes Together

Aww!  I'm so glad everyone is home now.  But, I'm going to miss this story so much.  I truely do love the girl power written in this story.  See ya, next chapter!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue: Chicago, May 1966

I can't believe its over!  LOL!  Anyway, I totally loved this story from start to finish.  I can't wait for NASCAR Bella, but can you like maybe add in a time where she meets Dale Jr.  That would like be the perfect story in my opinion.  LOL!  Just sayin...LOL!

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

MY best friend is absolutely IN LOVE with Dale JR.  LOL.  I'm going to have to put him in at some point just for her :)  Glad you liked the ending.  I may break down and post the first Breakaway Chapter sometime in the coming week, but I will not be promising regular posts until SF is in the bag.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Taking place in 17th century Europe, Princess Isabella, only daughter of King Charles I of Spain, faces her fate as her arranged marriage to Prince Edward, future King of England, approaches.  The Prince is known for his indiscriminate cavorting with the ladies of his land, leading the Princess to fear that she will suffer the same fate as her mother and many other queens before and since, to be trapped in a loveless marriage to an unfaithful husband.  Will Princess Isabella ever find happiness while bound to the fate of her birth? AH/OC/Eventual Lemons

 

 

Warning: This will be an NC17 story for later chapters.



Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, I Whitlock's read , Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, J's Read and Loved Stories, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 92977 Read Count: 373217
[Report This] Published: 20 Feb 2010 Updated: 20 Jun 2010
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fate of a Princess

I'm so glad you are finally posting this story.  I love it!  I really can't wait to see what else is going to happen to these two.

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

I've got a pretty good archive of chapters built up, so with any luck I can post the two stories quasi consistentyly

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 10 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Bliss

That was sweet and romantic all in one chapter!  I just can't imagine having to let old guys watch or  listen in on my first time, but at least Bella's with her true love.  I do hope the next  chapter has the rest of the wedding night in it...perhaps the boat ride home or honeymoon?  Heehee you know I love the smut....LOL!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Altering Plans

Oh!  I can't believe Charles is so uptight!  At least he wanted to get the English Royalty out of Spain just incase there was a fight, but I think Bella was right and Edward is right to be proud of her.  He's got an increadible woman to spend his life with.

I do love this story!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 18 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Bon Voyage

Loved it!  I can't wait until they get to England and to see how Bella fits into Edwards world.  This is such a great time period and story I can't wait until Monday!  Happy New Moon Release Weekend!

Rhonda

BTW I'm following you on Twitter now so when you see rhondalynn09 you know that's me! 



Author's Response:

I saw that and figured it out right away before you even told me :)  I usually post silly stuff with a few writing updates here for there...but it's fun.  :)

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 11: A Foreign Shore

Wow, Carlisle thinks about everything..  It's good that he's thinking of protecting both Spain and Italy.  As for Edward and Bella....well here's hoping that the next chapter will be interesting.

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 25 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Fantasy Fulfillment

I kind of feel sorry for Edward and Bella.  I mean the walk was great, but to have to be reminded that in only two days they are going to be forced back into another reality because of their titles.  I wish they could just spend more time being Tony and Bella, but then again I have no idea how you plan to write this and I think that they will get time to be together but it's going to be hard for them.  Okay I'm off my soap box now, LOL!  I'm off to read the teasers!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Presentation of Future Queen

Ugh, anytime Tanya is mentioned I know there's going to be trouble!  Anyhoo, I'm glad Bella and Edward came up with thier secret code, I think it will help in the long run.

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 04 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Demands of Duty

Oh!  Edward and Jasper need to be gone for the shortest time possible.  Can't wait until next week! 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 12 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Confidante

Oh how little Bella thinks of herself.  She will definately be Edwards most trusted confidante and Regent if needed.  Edward needs to tell Louis to shove it and get over himself because he's got a hot princess at home that needs attended to.  LOL!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 19 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Deceptively Beautiful

So happy Prince Edward is coming home!  But more importantly.....I do believe I hear the distant pitter patter of little feet coming from the Prince and Princess's chambers.  LOL!  I can't wait!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 22 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 17: The Dog and The Cobra

Tanya got what she deserved!  Ugh, I just don't like her one bit.  I can't wait for Emmett and Rosilie to meet, that's going to be epic.  Ah, is the Prince coming home in the next chapter or are we going to have to wait a while longer?  Just wondering... :P

 

Rhonda

have fun at the zoo this weekend!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 01 May 2010 Title: Chapter 18: The Brewing Storm

Oh Bella is so preggers!  And I have a feeling that the whole Tanya thing isn't over yet.  Oh well, I'm off to read the teasers! 

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

I called it!  I knew Bella was with child, I could just sense it.  LOL!  Now, I can't wait to find out what other drama is going to happen cause I'm feeling like England is going to have to go to war with France and that's not necessarily a good thing.  Until the next chapter!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 10 May 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Banished

Finally Edward took care of Tanya.  I'm glad she's gone! 

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: Chapter 22: A Snake Hiding in the Garden

Oh this is going to be great!  I can't wait for the wrath that is Princess Isabella and the other Cullen women.  Tanya is going down and then straight to the blocks.  I can't wait!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 25 May 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Christmas Eve Surprises

Yea!  Things are finally starting to go right for these two crazy love birds.  LOL!  Oh but I'm sure you've got some more angst in there somewhere.  LOL!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Clandestine Meetings

Ah, the plot thickens!  I'm very courious as to who is behind everything although I still believe Tanya knows more than she's letting on.  Maybe I'm wrong...but I just don't trust Tanya.

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 06 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Manipulation and Punishment

Well...I do hope that all the grief is over for now, but I just can't help but to think something else is going to happen.  i have no idea what you've got planned but I'm sure it's going to be a ride!  LOL!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 09 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Embracing the Crown

So glad that Alice is going to give birth and I hope everything is going to go well.  Now onto the name issue...I've looked up monarchs in this time period (heehee I know I did research for my review!  LOL!)  anyhoo, Edward, George, Phillip, and Charles were all quite popular for males while Elizabeth, Charlotte, Catherine and Mary were all popular for girls.  So, my ideas would be Phillip or Edward for a boy and Catherine or Antoinette for a girl. 

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 17 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 28: The Birth of Two Heirs

I loved the names for the babies!  I'm going to miss Kingward and Queenella!  :(

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 18 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Balancing Duties

Awww!  That was so sweet!  I'm going to miss this story, alas all good things must come to an end!  LOL!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 20 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue

I loved it!  I had hoped that Edward and Bella would have died close together but the way you ended it works too.  I am going to miss this story....so besides the orginal fic what else is in the works?

 

Rhonda

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What happens at Charlie's wedding is hot and unforgettable for Bella Swan. Charlie's best man has her moaning and melting everywhere from her father's living room to the coat closet at the rehearsal dinner. But great no-strings-attached sex suddenly becomes complicated. And what will happen when Bella meets someone else who just happens to be the best man's son?

NC-17 All Human/OOC

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Sorry, but translantions on this fic are NO longer allowed.

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112113 Read Count: 43565
[Report This] Published: 21 Feb 2010 Updated: 21 Apr 2010
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 21 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Busted

this is wierd in a Bella's going to sleep with father and son (or at least that's where I think it's headed) way, but I like it.  I can't wait to find out how Edward comes into the mix.

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

I know it's a little werid to get used to at first, but thank you for giving it a chance! I hope you continue to like where it goes

Lost and Found by nitareality Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Frustrated student Bella has a big problem. She lost BOB and he's being held in the lost and found, in RA Edward's room. Can Allice and Rose help Bella recover her BOB without sacrificing her dignity?

Comic Smut

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6775 Read Count: 1681
[Report This] Published: 24 Feb 2010 Updated: 24 Feb 2010
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 27 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Lost and Found

That was...LOL!  I laughed so hard!  Luckily I never had to deal with something like that in college but I'm sure it's happened somewhere!  LOL!

 

Rhonda

A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 549]
Summary: Past Featured Story

lol

 

2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

 

COMPLETE: Bella returns to Forks to start her life over. Edward's a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for him,the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets.

 

AH/B&E/Download available

 

REPOST: chapters posting daily with original content!

 

lol2

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Love to drive's Stories to read, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories Read by CNYBella, Hushi Taloa's TWCS Fic List, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 167175 Read Count: 167642
[Report This] Published: 28 Feb 2010 Updated: 15 Jul 2012
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 24 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Okay, I need an update!  I'm completely hooked on this story.  LOL!  I can't wait to find out Edwards reaction about the new baby.

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 27 Apr 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Oh my gosh, how could she leave him?  Gah!  Okay now I just have to patiently wait for the HEA that I have no doubts is coming. 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 18 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Oh I can't wait for Edward to finally find out about the baby.  Bella's whole labor and child birth experiance sounds almost like my bff's.  I was her Rose and lets just say a lot of funny things came out of her mouth before she pushed out her munchkin.  LOL!

 

 

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 31 May 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

whoo hoo!  Edward is making the right decision by heading off to find Bella and Charile!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Oh!  I'm so happy they are back together! 

 

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Awww!  That was so sweet!  I'm glad Edward finally got his head out of his ass and fixed things with  Bella!

 

Rhonda

Summary: Past Featured Story

  Guarding Edward

 

A stalker is trying to get close to Edward Masen, a green-eyed 24 year old concert pianist.

 He hires Elite Guardians to keep him safe from the one who is stalking him.

 Bella Cullen is the owner/operator of the company.  

She's also a 110 year old vampire.

  ********

  In the MYSTIC AWARDS:

GUARDING EDWARD WON FIRST RUNNER UP IN THE

CUTE CATEGORY:

Story that makes you feel all warm and fuzzy!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 49 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 200652 Read Count: 30101
[Report This] Published: 11 Mar 2010 Updated: 23 Aug 2010
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Love Letters

Oh my goodness!  I do hope they find out who the stalker is soon!

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading, Rhonda!  And those lovely steaming coffee cups!

Yep, we'll be finding out soon!

Kathie

A Perfect Love by Robicorn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 791]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Dr Edward Cullen is a twenty-six year old single dad who is sexually frustrated until he meets his sister Alice's college roommate Bella Swan. Sparks fly over Thanksgiving weekend. Lemons. Collab with Robinated Cont of 1 shot for Ninapolitins DILF contest

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Brooklyn - to read, luv2write finished reads, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 113225 Read Count: 106344
[Report This] Published: 16 Apr 2010 Updated: 16 Oct 2010
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh crap!  Something is going to happen to Bella and Masen I can see it!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 19 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I love how you showed the emotion Bella's going through especially at the end of the chapter.  The Baby Blues are a horrible thing to have to go through, I had to watch my BFF as she suffered and it sucked!  Edward has a long road ahead of him.

BTW, you didn't do too bad not having a beta

 

Rhonda

Breakaway by A Cullen Wannabe Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 810]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Breakaway Banner

 

Raised by her single father, Isabella Swan grew up in the land of men.  Their favorite pastime when she was younger was to spend the night at the local dirt track, feeling the energy of the cars as they fought for position.  Was it any wonder that eventually she would end up on the track herself?  

Having paid her dues, Isabella (Izzy) Swan has made it to the big leagues, officially racing for a franchise in the NASCAR Sprint Cup Series.  Can she hold her ground against a track full of men who want to see her fail, especially her teammate Cocky Edward Cullen?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites, TBR
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 103816 Read Count: 114432
[Report This] Published: 29 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Sep 2010
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 29 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Breakaway

Love it!  I can't wait for more.  I so love NASCAR!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 03 May 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Connections

So loved that you had Bella win a race in this chapter!  I can't wait for the first female to win a Sprint Cup race.  Heck, I can't wait for the first female Sprint Cup driver! (so rooting for Danica) anyhoo, then this chapter delt with Bristol Motor Speedway and I have awesome pics from this years race.  It just made me so happy!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 05 May 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Attacking Walls

Oh that's horrible!  I know that sounds totally tacky coming from a person who loves to watch NASCAR crashes...but that's horrible.  I can't believe the owners wouldn't allow them to change the throttle.  Ah, I guess that's just another reason to hate Aro.  LOL!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 08 May 2010 Title: Chapter 4: The Edward Shaped Hole

Yeah!  The walls are coming down!  So happy you updated today cause now I get to watch Dale Jr tonight after reading about Driverward.  So totally did a happy dance at just reading how Dale Jr. won the race where Izzy wrecked, that was great! 

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 12 May 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Sweet Awakenings

Loved it! I can't wait until Edward gets Izzy back into the race car.  There's going to be a lot of nerves on her part and I'm sure Edwards going to help calm those down.

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 08 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Schooling Cullen

Total girl power that's what I like!  LOL!  Totally loved the Jr. refrecence too! 

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

LOL...that may have happened after the timeline I'm using, but I found that tidbit about Dale Jr. scouting the V8 drivers over his vacation while researching about road racing and HAD to throw it in!  LOL!  Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 12 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Unexpected Visitor

Yikes!  I'm not sure who this other woman could be,  but I'm thinking maybe an ex girlfriend...or maybe his sister...cousin?  Alien from another planet sent here to destroy Edward and Bella's happiness?  LOL!

Rhonda



Author's Response:

LOL...you crack me up!!!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 15 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Bold Exes and Unearthed Bravado

I knew it!  Ex girlfriend sent from another planet to keep Edward and Bella apart!  LOL! Just kidding!  I can't wait to find out what happens next!

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

lol....Hope you enjoy the ride!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 27 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 13: A Cosmic Event

They finally took that step!  I'm so happy that it finally happened and that Bella is realizing that Edward is not Jacob.  Can't wait until next week!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Sacrificial Lion

yeah Bella won the race!   Boo that Edward might loose his position on the team.  I'm sure that Aro is loving all the free publicity that their romance is giving the team though.  Ah well, until next chapter!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Helpful Wagers

I do have to say that Tanya's intention was quite nice.  That's definately a way to say sorry.  Damn cockblocking Jeff Gordon.  LOL!  Bella just needs to  move in with Edward cause she's already pretty much living with him while on the road anyway.  Ah well, until next chapter!

 

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 17 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Additional Motivation

Bella's being evil...but I like it!  LOL!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: It's Just Business...

I hate the Volutri Bros for what they are trying to start...but the sad truth is that crap happens on a daily basis for high profile relationships. 

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Growth of Understanding

Finally!  Carlisle got the bur out of his ass and realized just how awesome his son is!  The ending makes me happy!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 15 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 22: One Hiding Amongst Them

Love the pay it forward aspect of this chapter.  I just hope it doesn't come back and bite Bella in the ass.  I don't think it will but you never know.

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Waiting on the Edge

Okay as much as I hate to say this because I know this story is about to come to an end but, I need the next chapter please!  LOL!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 30 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Legal Eagle

 I can't wait to find out who hired Ben!  I bet it was Aro!

 

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 01 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 27: The Definition of Bad Timing

Awww!  That was so cute!

 

Rhonda

Summary:

The body of a young girl is found and all signs point to Royce King, convicted serial killer currently serving a life sentence in prison, who has spent the majority of his time in solitary confinement.  FBI agent, Bella Swan and her team are now charged with piecing together this poor unidentified victims' tale, and also ascertaining how it's possible for a murderer to strike from behind bars.

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Criminal Minds Twilight Style, Twilight, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, mamih's favorites
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 25716 Read Count: 15843
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I think I like this idea better than the other one.  This story is going to be awesome and I can't wait to see where your going to take us this time around! 

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

This one is going to take a long time though.  I've been working on this for over a month now and I only have two chapters.  It's taking a lot of planning to try to figure out how to twine everything together and how to slowly release the info.  It takes a lot more out of me to write too.  The other one's just for fun, but this one is serious.  I'm also trying to write it in a way that I might be able to convert it for publishing down the line...possibly...we'll see.  :)

Anyway, glad you like it.  Thanks for the review!

Summary:

For the past eight years, Emmett, Bella, and Edward have been siblings thanks to the marriage of Edward's father to Em and Bella's mom.  Edward and Bella are best friends, but as their world expands to include the world of college, so does the relationship between Bella and Edward.  Will their family survive when Bella realizes she has more than brotherly love for her other brother?

 

 

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Completed Stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Brooklyn - to read, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 73513 Read Count: 106923
[Report This] Published: 10 Sep 2010 Updated: 25 Jan 2011
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 10 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: My Other Brother

Interesting start!  I'm looking forward to reading more.

 

Rhonda

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

i remain

After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77530
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 08 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

I just got around to reading this chapter and I once again give you major props!  The songs you chose were perfect for the whole feeling of the chapter, not to mention that "Bed of Roses" is one of my all time fave's!  

Bravo on another excellent chapter!

 

Rhonda 



Author's Response:

I love that song too.  I'm so glad you like it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 09 Mar 2013 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

I'm so sad to see this story end!  :O(  what a wonderful ride you took us on and I thank you for sharing your words with us!  

 

Until the next story!

 

Rhonda :O)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! You wouldn't believe how much trouble this chapter gave me!

I wanted the epilogue to really be just Edward and Bella--let you know what was going on with the others, but "off page" so to speak.

The current day Masens were who enabled the whole story to happen by saving the desk and passing it on when Bella showed up, so I thought it was only fair to end everything with them knowing that Edward and Bella are together. Edward and Bella basically walking off into the sunset with the Masens looking on.... (Okay--it was cloudy, no sunset, but still.) That was exactly how I wanted to end it.

I'm both thrilled and sorry it's finally finished, but I've got two new stories in the works, and I'm glad to hopefully have a little more time to work on them.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 03 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Loved the twist on Eclipse!  I think adding Charlie into the fight was perfect!  But boo for the cliffhanger!  :O)



Author's Response:

Oh, but cliffhangers are so much fun from this end of the keyboard!  I'm so glad you liked it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 22 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I just can't imagine how Edward is feeling at this point.  I mean he has to be so torn, to turn her or not turn her that is the question.  But the part about IV's, brilliant!  Even SM didn't thing about that way around the treaty.

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

You're one of the very few people to comment on how Edward feels.  I really like that.  Most people comment on Bella, but very few people acknowledge the position Edward is in or how he must feel.  Exactly, To Turn Or Not To Turn, that is the question.  But like Edward is forced to admit, there is only one answer.  Gotta love those loopholes when they work in your favor, right?

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 02 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

I am totally hooked on this story!  I'm so glad it was recomended, I really can't wait for the next update!

 

Rhonda 

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

loved it!  I do hope we're closer to Bella figuring out the tail of two Edwards!  LOL!  And I do think the flower choices were perfect!

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

We're very close.  Just a couple chapters! 

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

that was great!  Obviously, Alice had called and warned Edward about the sun, but Bella's reaction and trying to keep him out of it were priceless!  You once again, in my opinion hit the nail on the head with this chapter.

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

That was definitely what the call from Alice was about.  I don't think she saw that the sun would be out when they came out of the movie earlier because they hadn't decided on a movie--there was the boys choice of the action movie also.  If that movie ran 10 or 15 minutes later than the romantic comedy the girls wanted, they'd have missed the sun completely.  Once they'd decided, she saw it, but by then Edward had turned off his phone.  Bella is fiercely protective of Edward, having failed to protect him once already--in her mind.  That protectiveness will play a major role in the remaining chapters once the truth comes out.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Another awesome chapter!  I can't wait for next weeks update!

On another note:  Good luck with the storm.  As a Floridian who grew up in the Midwest I kinda have an idea of what your about to go through, so I totally understand your worries.  On that note, I think I can only say one thing....Be Safe!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

WOW!  That's really all I can say!  I was never expecting something like a fire at a hotel would make Edward realize that Bella knew the truth.  And Tanya was right, Bella's boyfriend is an idiot!  LOL!  Can't wait to see how Bella takes everything else

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

I knew it would be a fire that forced his hand from day one.  I wanted something that would be just as much of a threat to him as it was to her, which car accidents, thugs, and bears just aren't.  And I knew exactly what I wanted Bella to say, the "You jump, I jump."  I wanted her to show her absolute trust in him.  Edward is being a bit of an idiot, but I really put him through an awful lot.  How much can one poor vampire take in a single afternoon?  As for Bella, she's got the rest of the Cullens around her.  Check out the teaser for chapter 38 and you'll see what I mean!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Oh!  I hate Victioria...she just urks me to no end.  Anyhoo!  I can't wait for Edward to get off his butt and get back to Bella where he belongs.

 

Loved the Chapter!

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

I absolutely love to hate Victoria! 

Don't you worry about Edward.  Bella was willing to give him time because she had the assurances of Tanya and Alice that he would come back to her, but now that there's a threat, that's all flown out the window, and Bella will drag him back herself if she has to. 

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 19 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

That was perfect!  So glad Bella went with the Cullens to get Edward so she could explain everything to him.  I loved the "Emmett Express" and how Edward owes Alice "Big Time" LOL!  Those parts cracked me up!

 

Rhonda 



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it!  I loved the Emmett Express.  There was so much heavy stuff, I wanted a little humor to lighten things up a bit, and Emmett always fits the bill perfectly.  And Alice, I just love Alice.  Thanks for reviewing!  I'm so sorry for not responding to your review sooner.  I'm behind on responding to reviews on all the sites I'm posting on.  I have no real excuse other than life is just really busy right now--of course, there's also the 15 pounds of pure cute sitting next to me in his little bouncer seat and trying to stick his entire fist in his mouth.

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 30 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I really like how you incorporated parts of Eclipse into this story.  It's the same but yet it is completely different.  I like it!  And as far as your thoughts about Bella's feelings toward Renee...I think you hit the nail on the head.  I have always thougtht that with Renee, Bella was kinda like 'outta sight outta mind" toward her safety.

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

I don't think it was as much "outta sight, outta mind" as she's removed from the danger by simply not being there.  Bella gets so caught up in the danger of Victoria that she forgets the everyday dangers out there.  The way they just basically left Renee hanging in canon never sat right with me.  Not to sound cold, but I wanted a clean break. I also really wanted both of them to have to experience what the other did.  Even if Edward can't remember it, he knows he went through it.

 

I'm glad you like it. I wanted to keep all the key elements from the series, but I didn't want to just rewrite them as they already had been written.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

I don't trust this Jacob...just something about him makes me think he's going to try and keep Bella on the reservation.  Anyhoo, congrats on the nomination, I already voted for you, so you have at least one loyal reader vote!  LOL!  

 

Rhonda



Author's Response:

Actually, it's canon Jacob I never trusted.  He kisses Bella against her will, then after finding out she's going to marry Edward, he manipulates her into kissing him again by telling her he's going to go off and get himself killed because she doesn't want him, knowing Edward will hear.

The teaser for chapter 42 is up on Fictionators.  I don't want to give more away, but I will say it was one of my favorite scene's to write.

Thanks for reviewing and thanks SO much for voting!

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 10 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

the phrase "Loved it" just doesn't do this chapter justice!  Seriously, I don't know what else to say but that was so cool!  Loved the way Bella knocked Aro out of Edwards mind and Charlie giving Jane a dose of her own medicine was perfect!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  I really wanted to show just how deep Bella's need to protect Edward was, both from Victoria and Aro.  One of my reviewers compaired Bella to a mosquito.  Victoria didn't consider her a threat, just like we don't consider mosquitos a threat--until they bite us and we get West Nile or Malaria.

I'll get the epilogue up as soon as possible! Thanks for reviewing!

Tick Tock by TrueEnglishRose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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She wanted a baby, but didn't exactly go through the conventional way to have one and now she has to deal with the family, including Edward. Written purely for laughs.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34998 Read Count: 69591
[Report This] Published: 31 May 2012 Updated: 31 May 2012
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 03 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I loved this story!!!!  Serously I laughed so hard at times, it was great!

 

 

Rhonda

Wisp by judo_lin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 871]
Summary: Past Featured Story

wisp

 

Edward wins more than he bargained for at what was supposed to be a friendly poker game. AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Can't wait for an update, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 304154 Read Count: 221078
[Report This] Published: 06 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Nov 2014
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 20 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

ahhh!  Oh I need another update ASAP!  I can't wait to see how Esme and Edward take the "Bad Isabella" comment.  And poor Wisp!  She's got to get better!

 

Rhonda 

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 01 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I hope Pet is curled up with Wisp in her bed watching Peter!  

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 20 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Wow!  I so wasn't expecting the end to this chapter....  another great one and I can't wait for more of Wisp and Pet's adventures with Edward.

Summary:

Can true love make the worst nightmare a beautiful dream? Bella is a troubled sixteen years old who is forced to marry her father's friend, thirty-five years old Edward Masen. Will he be her salvation? Will they find love in this odd situation? AH. Slightly OOC

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 75902 Read Count: 131969
[Report This] Published: 13 Jul 2012 Updated: 02 Nov 2012
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 14 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well my intrest has been tweeked.  I'm looking forward to more of this story!  

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 22 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh, I feel so sorry for the Masen kids!  This story has me so hooked, I can't wait for the next update!

 

Rhonda :O)

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 31 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

LOL!!!!  Poor Jasper!!!!

 

Offbeat by SexylexiCullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 323]
Summary:

He's a cop. She's a student. A missed connection during a traumatic time leaves them both longing, until fate brings them back together again. Romance, humor, slight drama. Canon couples. OOC. AU. This is my version of Copward, and this is a working summary.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Completed Stories
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92614 Read Count: 42684
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2012 Updated: 19 Oct 2012
Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Saved

Awww!  That ending was so sweet!  I think I may love your Copward almost as much as I love the Skip!  LOL!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Cop and Copper

Lexi once again you have me hooked on a story!  I think you should definately continue with Copward....he sounds like a keeper!

 

Rhonda

Reviewer: mizzugirl Signed
Date: 28 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Disorderly

Jacob is an ass.....that is all!  LOL!