Reviews by Veronique24
Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159782
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 08 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Great chapter!

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Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Great chapter!

I thought it before but never raise the question... could Rene be Evan's mom? If so that would make him Bella's half brother to gain family in any way I'm sure would mean the world to her.

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Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Amazing start!

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Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love it!

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Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great chapter!

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Date: 13 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

All I kept thinking when I was reading about Garrett pass is, how can no one see? Bit then again if you don't want to see you wont.

Great chapter!

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Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Great chapter!

 

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Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Great chapter! 

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Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

Loved your story!

Summary:

Edward is a single parent of a five year old daughter who is just trying to maintain. Bella is a teacher replacing little Ally's teacher. Edward finds that his life is more connected to Bella than he ever thought.
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Categories: Canon Pairings, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 47107 Read Count: 44756
[Report This] Published: 23 Jul 2011 Updated: 28 Jul 2017
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Date: 07 Apr 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loving your story!

A Ilha do Amor by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 777]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan, reeling from the unceremonious ending of her engagement on her wedding day, heads on her honeymoon minus ONE groom. Edward Cullen, is 'sleeping' his way through the guests at the resort on Isle Esme. They meet on the island off the coast of Brazil but will they find love on a ilha do amor? The island of love?

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Stories I've Already read, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Bella's Must Reads!, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , TBR, Tufano79 Stories
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325748 Read Count: 299817
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2012 Updated: 29 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: The End of an Era

Love it! 

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Successful and powerful in business, Edward keeps his personal relationships shallow.  He doesn't believe anyone can love him just for him.  Then he meets young Isabella sweet baker  who seems too good to be true. Bella is strong, kind and determined. Fiercely independent will she let Edward help her to achieve more than just having the best croissant recipe in town?  Will he risk being hurt and let her bake her way into his heart?  Wrapped in buttery goodness with bursts of spice this is a recipe for sweet loving, getting over the bitterness of the past and developing a taste for a sweet future.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Dumbeline's WIP to read list
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 251529 Read Count: 285242
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Dec 2014
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Date: 01 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 ~ humble pie

Great chapter! 

I laughed so hard when I read that Jacob was a reverend. 

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Date: 02 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 ~ voila!

Great chapter! 

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Date: 02 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 my secret recipe

Love it! 

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Date: 02 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - no soft cheese, no fish

Great chapter! 

I'm thinking that this nephew really wants money...

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Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh sh*t!

Great chapter. 

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Date: 03 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 ~ extra strawberries and chocolate sauce

Love it! 

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Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 ~ delicious mushroom ravioli

Great chapter! 

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Date: 04 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 - chocolate chip cookies

Loving your story! 

Great chapter. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334118
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter as always! Love it when Renee went overboard and the comment by Esme.



Author's Response:

Wow, I dropped the ball, normally I have the review reply all written out before now.  So all Nikky has to do is send it to all the reviewers at FFN, and I do TWCS and I post one in the comments FicPad.  I dropped the ball this week.  Between personal stuff and the holidays and other drama things, I just flat out missed the bus.  I am so sorry for the delay in you getting this from us.  There were not a lot of questions at all, but you all seem to LOVE Esme, and how could we blame you.  I FLOVE her myself.  This is short but sweet, but hey you’re going to get an extra long teaser …   Thanks everyone for reading and reviewing.  Nikky and Kasi~

TEASER:  As Bella’s face pales, I look to see who she’s looking at.  I see Sue walking in with a crying Leah clutching her arm.  When I turn my head I catch James rolling his eyes at the display that Leah is putting on.

“I will go back and take my seat, I hope you like my last surprise,” James says getting up and walking away.  I watch him trying to work out what he’s talking about, but chatting brings my eyes to the dock. I watch as two officers bring in Paul and Jacob.  I frown at them seeing that their heads seem to have been shaved and they both have those scalp molding scarfs on their heads.

“Please rise for the Honorable Judge Varner,” the court bailiff speaks out loud before anyone can say anything. 

The judge enters the room and sits in his chair, and tells us to be seated as he calls the court to order.  The judge reads over some paperwork and looks up at the defendant's table. 

“This is a court room, remove those head scarves,” the judge says bluntly.

I kiss Bella’s head, but the loud gasps make me turn my head.  I look around the room seeing everyone’s looking at Paul and Jacob.  As they move around at the reactions, I can see they have ‘rapist’ tattooed across their foreheads.

I turn to look at James who is smirking away.

“What did you do to him?” Leah screams as she stands up making her way toward Bella and I.

“Young woman, sit down!  No, in fact get out of my court room and don’t come back until you put some clothing on.  Bailiff remove this person, and do not let her back in here unless she’s dressed more appropriately.”

Leah’s mouth drops open as she looks at the judge with rage in her eyes. Two of the eight bailiffs in the room escort her out of the room with Sue running out of the room behind them.

I smile a little and turn back to pay attention to the judge.

“Are the defendants, still pleading not guilty?” the judge asks.

“Ernest Berty, for the defense, your honor,” the defense attorney stands and says.  “I’m representing both Mr. Lahote and Mr. Black and they both plead not guilty.  At this time, your honor, we are petitioning the court to have the trial moved due to bias and news coverage in this matter.”

“Well Mr. Berty, since both your clients are facing charges in four states including the great state of Washington, I doubt you’ll find anyone who hasn’t currently heard something of the case.  You have had your chance to question and discredit members of the jury, so therefore your request is not applicable.  Your request to move the hearing is denied, and further more future stalling tactics such as this will not happen in this court.”

I chuckle silently as the defense attorney tucks his tail and sits down.  The judge has the bailiff bring in the jury and they are seated.  We listen as both sides give their opening arguments.  I’m glad that as soon as the opening arguments are done, the judge breaks for lunch.

“How are you feeling, Love?” I ask Bella, as I lean close to her ear so our conversation is private.

“I’m all right, but I think I may head home soon, if that’s okay?”

I kiss her head.  “Of course it is, my love.”

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow! I don't know where to start... amazing story... I just couldn't stop reading once I started!My heart goes out to Bella and to anyone in her situation. What I wouldn't give to slap Renee silly right about now.Can't wait to read how Bella reacts to Renee final comment/question.

Author's Response:

Well without a doubt I think it is a clean sweep, everyone wants to either: kill, beat or maim Renee.  Nikky and I both want to thank you all for telling us all of this.  To us it means more knowing we were able to evoke those kinds of feelings in our readers, than any of you can know. 
There have been a few people laying threats about bring charges or else I will walk from the story.  I want to address that by saying, Bella is not as weak as she used to be, and trust that the cards will fall exactly as they should.  Renee’s story is set in stone for us, and we will not deviate from how we planned it.  Neither of us wants to say, Renee will go to jail and Renee will suffer this and that way ... What we want is for this story to unfold as it was and is intended to do so.  All we can say is trust in us enough to know that we will not let a story go with things unfinished. 
Now we do need to address the several comments about how Edward needed to step up and be the Dom and take control at the hospital and how Renee wouldn’t have been allowed to do what she did.  Sadly if a person is an adult and is unmarried and doesn’t have a power of attorney signed over to someone else, medical choices fall to your nearest blood relative.  Edward trying to control things would’ve most likely gotten him removed from the premises, and we’re sure you’ll appreciate how well he brings out the Dom soon.  Some questioned if the hospital would’ve kept Renee out being it was her fault, but unless the police were involved the hospital is in a hard situation. 
Finally we want to say again that we will continue to post every Sunday night/Monday morning, until the story is fully written.  Once the story is fully finished we will post twice a week until it is completely posted.  Thank you so very much for reading our story, reviewing our story and loving our story so much.
Nikky & Kasi~

Teaser: 
“I love you Mom, and want you in my life,” Bella says.

I feel my heart start to race, but I hold back the yelp that wants to come out. I’ll beg her if I have to; I need her in my life. I can’t live without this girl. She may’ve only been in my life over a short period of time, but she has quickly become everything to me.

“And I hope one day you can forgive me,” Bella says looking to me as she speaks. “But I need Edward more, a lot more. I know that I will never be enough for you or for him, no matter what I do. I know that Edward deserves so much more than what I can give him.” 

I shake my head and walk in. “Not true,” I say with a smile.

“But, here’s the thing, he’s a good man, Mom. He has such a big heart and he would never hurt me physically in any way. When—and I know it will be when—he leaves me, he will make sure that I am still okay. He makes me happy. He makes me want to live.  He’s the reason I’m still alive.” Bella’s eyes fall to my feet.

“Don’t start that silliness again, Isabella.” Renee starts chastising my girl. 

I walk right up to Renee and glare at her. “Quit treating her like a pet; she’s your daughter.”

“Say your goodbyes, Isabella. You’re coming home with Phil and me.”

Bella shakes her head. “No! I can’t and won’t leave with you. I love you Mom and I will be here when you forgive me, but I’m staying with Edward, if he’ll still have me.”

I move quickly to Bella and look into her eyes. “You’re more than enough for me. You’re so much more than I ever dreamed of. I’ll always have a place for you in my life.” I lean my forehead against Bella's.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Love it!

So happy for Edward and Bella! Glad that Seth is out of that house he seams like a good kid.

Can't wait to read what comes next!



Author's Response:

Wow, you all just blow us away with the response for each and every chapter, so on behalf of Nikky and I, THANK YOU ALL so very much.  There are a lot of questions about what all happened to the evil witches at the college, well that is coming to you soon.  There really weren’t any questions asked that we could answer without giving away the ending of what they all have coming.  We are currently working on chapter 22, but it’s going well and there should be no waiting for it to post, it should post on time.  Most of the story wraps up in 21 and 22, but there will still be chapter 23 and for sure chapter 24 and maybe a chapter 25.  The ending is almost writing its self and it all is going really smoothly.  We hope you enjoy the way this wraps up.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you all like this teaser ... Nikky & Kasi~

 

TEASER: 

I get out of my car and walk toward the club. I can’t help but walk with a skip in my step, knowing very soon my girl will be meeting me here.

“Edward,” someone calls from behind me. I turn around and my mouth drops open.  Standing there is a much disheveled-looking Tanya. I look down at her as she rambles on, but I don’t listen. She’s wearing dingy, yellow slacks that are at least two sizes too big. The gray t-shirt she is wearing has what looks like coffee stains all over it. Partially covering her crusty, dirty looking shirt is a rather ugly purple, ripped-up, fake leather jacket. Her hair is very frizzy and looks like a huge afro on top of her head. To top it all off, she has no makeup on and looks ghastly pale. I hold back my laugh and just look at her.

“Are you listening to me? I said, ‘Do you see this?’ Look at me, please, you need to let me have my life back,” she whines out at me. “I need proper clothes, and a salon.  Alistair would freak if he saw how horrid this is. Please help before I have to have it all cut off,” Tanya says as she pulls at her hair.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great chapter!

Wonder who Phil is bringing?

Karma can be a bi**h sometimes! Loved what Jessica and company got done to them.



Author's Response:

WOW ... what great reviews we got.  There is still redemption to come, and Karma is a dish best served cold and wet in some cases.  To settle all bad thoughts, Phil would never invite Renee or Tanya to Bella and Edward’s wedding.  Some suggested Vicky, but Vicky and James sort of have a love/hate/power-struggle of their own.  He hasn’t quite told us yet, but Vicky is more of the Domme, than submissive and James just doesn’t come across like a switch to me.  Nikky and I will give James and Vicky both closure before the end, we promise.   Some of our favorite reviews made comments about not wanting to ever piss us off, because our thoughts scare them—have to say this had us both laughing.  I’ve always said that Nikky is one of the most diabolical minded people ever, and I was once told that I am good at writing three things: crazy/dysfunctional, fighting and f*ck*ng.  With that said, there wasn’t a lot of questions we could touch on too much, but we hope after reading the next couple of chapters you’ll understand why.  Thank you as always for being such a loyal reader and for taking the time to leave us a message/review/comment—they all mean the world to us.
Nikky & Kasi~

TEASER:  “Do you think we should ask what we are having?” Bella asks looking at me.

I kiss her head.  “Do you want to know?”

“Why are you answering my question with a question?”

“You think I’m answering your question with a question, but yet you do it, too.”

I chuckle and Bella frowns rolling her eyes. I quickly flick her leg and shake my finger, no, to her.

“I am happy either way, so you can choose if we know or not,” Bella huffs and then smirks at me. “Master, your girl would like you to take control and tell your girl what you want to do.”

I tilt my head at her. “Firstly, don’t switch into Dom and Sub time without my approval.  Second of all, I think we should wait, I like being surprised.”

Bella nods at me. “Thank you,” she says while kissing my cheek.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Great chapter!

So much happened... thankful that they have some peace of mind for now.

Harry... could he haved walked in on Charlie and Leah in a compromising situation? Maybe!?



Author's Response:

We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply.  I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it.  Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta.  Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time.  Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours.  Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out.  Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate.  There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete.  Kasi~

TEASER:  Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth.  Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.

Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.

Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.  

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great chapter! 



Author's Response:

Thank you all for reading and reviewing.  We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said.  Thank you again for everything.  Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation.  Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post.  Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January.  We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect.  We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic.  We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us.  We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page.  The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings.  Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment. 
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked.  I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~

Teaser:  I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office.  We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections.  “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.

“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots.  Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say.  I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.

Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”

“But he’s only two months and still small.”

I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.

“I know, believe me, I know.  Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”

Bella nods and lets out a sigh.

“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her. 

Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.

“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever.  They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.

I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.

“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted.  But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public.  Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”

My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.

“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up.  At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.

“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear.  First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing.  So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for.  If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”

My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words.  I start to get up to head over to her.

A Healing Touch by tufano79 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Roughly six months after Bella and Edward meet at Cook County Hospital, their relationship is moving along and life couldn’t be better. However, one frightened child, two parents, one doctor and one nurse are presented with an illness that baffles them all. What will happen and will our favorite doctor and nurse be able to figure out the medical mystery before it’s too late?

Written for Fandom4LLS

Outtake for A Prescription for Love 

A Healing Touch


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella 84's To Be Read List, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9012 Read Count: 3442
[Report This] Published: 04 Aug 2013 Updated: 04 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the outake... you made me cry... so beautiful!

You Will Be Mine by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

mine

 

Banner by Ellie Wolf

 

The Volturi doesn't give second chances. They also don't take no for an answer. OOC, AU. All normal disclaimers apply.    


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Demetri
Genre: Action, Adventure, Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55858 Read Count: 55561
[Report This] Published: 13 Aug 2013 Updated: 03 Aug 2017
Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2016 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loving your story! It's a joy to read and I can't wait to have another chapter to do so.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Aug 2016 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Amazing story! Looking forward to reading what comes next. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner

 

Somewhere in life I took a wrong turn and never found my way back. For me there were no second chances, there were no redos...or at least that's what I thought, until I met a girl on a bus who looked just like me...just a little richer. 

Contains Daddyward/Doctorward

Title Change! Once called My Redo Life

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24485 Read Count: 23437
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Loving your new story... well it's new to me!

Looking forward to reading more.

When I Pretend by Kittyinaz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

 

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When I Pretend: Blood is spilled, and instead of James losing his life, a mate is found and the world is in a world of hurt.  The God of War is about to give lessons on why leaving him and his alone is a good idea.

Rated M for a reason folks.

Many thanks to thewriteashley for taking up the reigns on Betaing this.  Again, this is your reviews making this a reality.

Disclaimer for the story contained under this heading: Stephenie Myers own Twilight.  Not me.

For more information, check out my website: http://kittyinaz.wordpress.com/


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13511 Read Count: 8192
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2013 Updated: 25 Oct 2013
Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Sep 2016 Title: Chapter 5: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

Amazing story! Can't wait to read what comes next and get some answers to the why of things.

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

(Banner by Mina)

 

A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142507
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
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Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Ten

Loving your story! Just couldn't stop reading once I started.

More please!

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Date: 07 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Eleven

Great chapter!

Can't beleive Alice... wonder what else she digged up on Bella and her family?

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Date: 13 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen

Love it!

She will have to watch out for Victoria and co, but I'm sure Bella will come out on top if/with any problems they can create.

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Date: 13 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Twelve

Great chapter!

Loved how Bella stood up for herself

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Date: 20 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen

Great chapter!

So happy that both families could look pass Thanksgiving and come together.

Side note: Kerrie Robert's version of O Holy Night is amazing!

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Date: 22 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter Fifteen

Great chapter! 

Al buying his own coffee... it could happen you never know. 

Can't stand hire Alice and Jssper are with Bella a good reality check would be good for them. 

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Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter Nineteen

Go Bella!

Great chapter. 

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Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Two

Great chapter! 

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Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Love it! 

Very fitting where he proosed.

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Date: 29 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Not really surprised with Alice but didn't think that's what she was doing. Great chapter! 

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Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty

Love it!

That sounds like a perfect setting for a wedding. 

Summary:

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"In three words I can sum up

everything I've learned in life:

it goes on"

Robert Frost


Five yrs ago, following Charlie's brutal murder & the Cullen's departure, Bella fled Forks, hoping to forget. That had been the plan, at least. However,when an innocent trip turned dangerous, she realized she hadn't buried her past as deeply as she thought. The supernatural world hadn't finished with her yet. In fact, she was the perfect weapon in an age old war.

*Note: Stephanie Meyer's vampire and supernatural parameter's are altered to fit my story—mostly regarding Bella's (eventual) supernatural parameters. I've labeled it NC-17 for explicit sexual content, language, character death, and physical violence.

~Edward/Bella~

(Previously named "Once Upon an Unfortunate September" and posted on Twilighted.)


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69899 Read Count: 5408
[Report This] Published: 27 Nov 2013 Updated: 05 Mar 2015
Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-The Boy I Once Loved

Great chapter!

Chapter 6 looks to be very promissing in the F you Cullen catagory, can't wait!



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's a good chapter. You'll definitely enjoy it. Thanks for reviewing. I'll update again tonight-Jamie

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8-Osculum Proditione Mortiferum Est.

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review!- Jamie

Summary:

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Bella had been lucky to land the job as the nanny to Esme and Carlisle's two girls, but when Carlisle's younger brother arrives in New York in need of a fresh start and some help with his own brood, Bella's world is quickly turned upside down. It was just supposed to be a job, but they quickly became everything she needed. 

 

Check out Edward's POV, Everything I Wanted.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 99082 Read Count: 87251
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Apr 2018
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Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great chapter!

Wonder if they will last till January or if they will get discovered before then?!

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Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Can't be easy being in a secret relationship. 

Great chapter!

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Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great start! Can't wait to read what comes next.

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Date: 19 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter!

I adore how Bella took charge with Rosalie.

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Date: 29 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I adore reading both POV!

Great chapter.

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Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Loved it!

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Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Great chapter, very touching at the end.

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Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter, I think that Bella might be a little bit more ready then Edward thinks.

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Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Loved it!

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Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter!

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Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I was thinking that Rosalie went from being a pain to nice way to quickly.

Love the chapter!

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Date: 10 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter!

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Date: 24 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chatper!

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A failed marriage and long divorce left Edward with a lot on his hands. Moving his kids closer to his family in New York was the fresh start he needed so that his family could thrive. Not knowing how he would juggle work and caring for his kids, he jumped at the chance to hire his brother's nanny to care for his own kids. But the moment Bella walked into his house everything changed. She started out as the nanny, but she quickly became everything he wanted.  

 

Bella's POV of this story is posted as Everything I Needed.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 101886 Read Count: 89341
[Report This] Published: 28 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Apr 2018
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Date: 31 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Love it!

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Date: 07 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter!

Edward isn't in an easy situation but maybe - like he said - he could work a little harder. 

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Date: 05 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Looking foward to reading more.

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Date: 19 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love it!

How long will he be able to stay away...

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Date: 19 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter!

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Date: 29 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Love it! Can't wait to read more.

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Date: 24 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Love it!

Can't wait to go and read Bella's pov

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Date: 30 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love it!

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Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Great chapter!

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Date: 26 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Love it!

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Date: 09 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter!

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The Sequel to Swan Lakes Ranch. The Cullens are on the ranch and ready to help out. Bella comes to terms with her husband’s death, can she find a cure for her broken heart in Edward? Will Edward’s past haunt him? Will their relationship be ripped apart before it has a chance to grow? AH B/E M Romance/Drama

 

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Disclaimer: I don't own these characters, Stephanie Meyers does. However, I do own this plot and story-line.  I also own my own original characters.

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, products, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

 

Author’s Note: This is a continuation of my story Swan Lakes Ranch. I would advise you read that story first as they go together and there are things you will not understand in LTLA without reading SLR. 

Also, if you are looking for a story full of lemons, this is not the story for you. 

I’m warning you now, there will be character deaths in this story.

Enjoy!

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Swan Lakes Ranch Series
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 107330 Read Count: 40163
[Report This] Published: 06 Dec 2013 Updated: 16 Jul 2014
Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Something New

Love it! 

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Date: 25 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Learning the Ropes

Great chapter! 

I'm as concern as Jasper with that hay barn...

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Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue & Chapter 1: Settlin'

Can't wait to read more!

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Date: 13 Dec 2013 Title: Learning To Love Again

Great chapter!

Theyre going to have a full day tomorrow with all they need to buy!

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Date: 21 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Monumental Shoppin’

Love it!

Ya I wouldn't want to be the one unloading, it's easy when your purchasing it's "small" qantaties at a time, but then you get home you open the trailler and your: yeah ok where to start...

Looking foward to next week!

Happy Christmas!

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Date: 28 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Heavin’ the Haul

Love it! Edward and Cassie where so cute. 

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Date: 04 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: A Day of Rest

Loved it!

I just adore your story. 

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Date: 11 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Meetin’ of the Minds

Great chapter! I could picture it all in my head... it would be an amazing day.

 

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Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Takin’ Care of Business

Love it! Especially Edwards reaction at the Bank of America.

Happy to read that you're feeling better after your surgery. 

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Date: 26 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: While the Cats Are Away

Love it! 

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Date: 28 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: The Mice Will Play

So  many question with each statement from Jane!

Great chapter.

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Date: 29 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Rising From the Ashes

Great chapter! 

It's amazing how strong Bella is.

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Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Wild Hearts and Dreams

Great first date!

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Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Get Your Feet Wet

Love it!

It looked like quite the day, no wonder Edward was tired.

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Date: 02 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Sunny Days

Great chapter!

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Date: 27 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Burn It to the Ground

Great chapter! 

Even though you mentioned character death's I didn't think that Bella would get in the crossfire. 

More please. 

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Date: 22 May 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Disco for the Cure

Love it!

It sounded like a great night.

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Date: 09 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Who’s Your Turkey?

Love it, looked to be a picture perfect thanksgiving. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Their families hated each other.  They had competed with each other all through high school. But now they were stuck on a plane sitting next to each as they head home for the holidays. Merry Christmas everyone!

Thanks Fallingsnow for the lovely banner. 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Pure Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7704 Read Count: 19942
[Report This] Published: 15 Dec 2013 Updated: 30 Dec 2013
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Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ I'll be home

It has picked my interest, can't wait to read more!

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Date: 20 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 ~ i got this baby

Love it from start to finish!

Happy christmas to you and yours!

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Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue - Happy New Year

Loved it.

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Emmett the bad boy who is involved in a life ruled by money drugs and guns meets the beautiful and snarky Bella and both of their lives change forever

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 141212 Read Count: 32803
[Report This] Published: 18 Dec 2013 Updated: 13 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loving your story! Can't wait to read what happen to Cullen.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it. This story is my baby and I have had an amazing time writing it!! Thank you for taking the time to review. It means the world to me.

~Sin

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Summary: He's a coldhearted businessman who's set in his ways. He wants perfection, but doesn't see it from anyone, ever. What if he tastes the other life, will he go back and if he does will he change? AH/Rated M

Amazing banner by Deebelle1 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36855 Read Count: 9815
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2013 Updated: 13 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 24 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

It was a joy to read!

Mistletoe Cowboy by jlove34 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 54]
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Post NM: It's Christmas Eve and Peter is off to the Cullens' to spend the holidays. Stopping off in Georgia, our favorite soldier runs into his mate while hunting. Sadly, she isn't all that pleased to make his acquaintance. Will Bella accompany Peter to Christmas once she learns of his family's identity? (1st and sixth chapters mentions self harm. Non-graphic)

*~Peter/Bella~*


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 27408 Read Count: 5993
[Report This] Published: 25 Dec 2013 Updated: 26 Dec 2014
Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Prelude to a Mate

Great start! 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Thanks! - JA

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Date: 31 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- The Name's Peter Whitlock, Ma'am

What an amazing chapter! Can't wait to read more. 

Wonder how Peter will react when he find out that all this started with/because of the Cullen's ie his brother?!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I'm currently working on the next, though I'm unsure when I'll be done.

Peter is gonna be more than a little upset. But Bella will be even more so. Thanks for reviewing.-JA

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Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-Anger Breeds New Friends

Great chapter!

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Date: 05 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6-Dreamscapes

Love it!

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Date: 06 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-Season's Greetin's

Great chapter! Can't wait to read the reaction they will have when they all learn of her story! For some reason espacially Rosalie's...

Summary: Past Featured Story

long way

 

She is brilliant and beautiful, and well respected at a very young age in her field, but she is all alone. No family. No friends outside of work. He is alone by choice, punishing himself for the sins of his past, but he has family to give him strength. Will a chance encounter, and a daily trip out of her way lead her to the family and place of belonging she so craves? AH/AU MA

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 45215 Read Count: 23741
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2013 Updated: 13 Apr 2014
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Date: 29 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I'm hook to your story, I just couldn't stop reading! Cant wait to read what comes next.

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Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Awww he is jsut to cute for words.!

Great chapter loved it.

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Date: 02 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Yes! They finaly get they're kiss. 

Great chapter. 

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Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Love it!

Beautiful dress.



Author's Response:

I agree with you on that dress! I sawwit and was like... Why couldn't that have been
designed back when I was getting married?! LOL I'm glad you are enjoying the story.

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Date: 31 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you.