Reviews by Siobhan_Whitlock
Summary:

Sequel to Sex on the Beach. Rated XXX for violence, language and even hotter lemons. I recommend reading Sex on the Beach first. No one likes a cheater. :P


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Bella/Paul
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 108.9
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325974 Read Count: 68252
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 26 Dec 2012
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Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Sex for Breakfast

I must push my view, once again.  *wink*

Tanya- wooden post- rope- wood pile- lighter fluid- matches.

Everything you need to burn the witch and rid her of this story. 

Hate is a strong word, you should not use it unless you mean it.

I. HATE. Tanya.

nuff said.

I hope Paul comes clean to them, it will hurt so much worse if something happens to him and his family finds out when its too late.

I look forward to the next chapters :)



Author's Response:

LOL tanya's demise will come. just...not anytime soon unfortunately. D:

 

tHANKS SO MUCH FOR READING! xoxo

 

Cam

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Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 20: The third birthday

Wow!  What a great chapter!  And I thought at the beginning when you said addition to the family that it would be a puppy!  Thats was so awesome!  And Layla naming him Billy was icing on the cake.

 

Love it!!



Author's Response:

thank you for keeping up with the story here. :D hugs!

 

xoxo

 

Cam

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Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Anniversary

Oh my GAWD could Tanya be anymore of a stupid bitch?!

 

She has some nerve calling Bella a whore.  Tanya isnt even a second thought to Bells anymore!

Tanya.  Rope.  Pole.  Kindling.  Lighter.  Accelerant.

Everything you need to burn that witch!

*giggles*



Author's Response:

glad your still loving it hon! and dont worry. we will get to tanya. ;)

 

hugs!

 

Cam

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Date: 08 May 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: I look to you

So happy the twins are here!!!

Bells goin zombie freaked me out a bit.

I love your Paul and Jake... I am gonna cry thinking about it.

Love this chapter, I hope Sam and Emily stay to their own!


Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! :) hugs!

 

Cam

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Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

The new baby dies?  is that it?

OMG!!!

Holy shit, I cant wait till the next chapter!!!



Author's Response:

I can't tell youuuuuuuuu.

 

But thanks for reading! new chapter soon.

 

xo

 

Cam

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Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: In Memory

I blame Jessica and Angela on losing the baby.

Of course, I blame Tanya the most.  Stupid bitch.

 

Bella could have avoided the fight and maybe had been able to be with the boys when tragedy struck...

 

Burn Tanya at the stake... thats what she deserves.

 

I am very curious whats up with Eddie the Ass though.  I dont believe he feels anything for Bells what so ever.  You dont hurt someone you care for, and he has done that numerous times.

I cant wait to see how this plays out.



Author's Response:

Hey! its not jessica or angela's fault! be nice! O.O

 

thanks for readin hon.

 

big hugs!

 

Cam

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Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 14: A House is not a Home

I hate Tanya...

I cant wait to see Karma bite her and Eddie in the ass.

Eddie is an ass and I hope he regrets his whole life for the nasty little shit that he is.

I wish I could fix everything for Bells and the boys, I want them happy, and I want Paul to quit being a pussy and tell them.  Such a chicken shit.

I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

:D thank you so much for reading.

 

don't worry. karma is coming for them. i promise.

 

hugs!

 

xoxo

 

Cam

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Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Breathe

Oooooohhh!!  Yay for shit hitting the fan, and me standing behind the glass wall watching!!  *cackles*

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Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chemotherapy

Wow, what a really great chapter!

Tanya cannot die fast enough, so her behind bars is a bright spot for me :)

 

Where is Jared's lost camera?  Will we find out?

 

I cannot wait to see what Paul's mother has to say to Bells.  *grins*

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Date: 19 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I am choking here!  This pain in my chest... oh, no, oh god, not Billy!

 

This is going to absolutely devastate Jake.

Who else overheard Tanya and Laurent?  I am anxious to find out, and I hope Edward leaves Tanya.  I hope that she dies... and soon.

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Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Gah!  I am waiting for a couple of things, so it could be either!

Tanya is going to die...

Or Paul is going to spill his secret.

 

Either is preferred :)

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Date: 16 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Dance with my father

I swear Eddie is mentally unstable.  Like walking in to the lions den looking for a bone to chew! 

 

Idjit.

 

lol, love it!

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Date: 31 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Walked Outta heaven

I just want to say I feel for Jessica, but she went a little far.  Mike barely remembers, I think she will understand after she just stops and listens.

 

Oh man, Paul... *offers shoulder for him*  I will be the unseen angel for you to lean on and cry on my shoulder... I have been there, but I didnt wait that long..

 

poor guy...

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Date: 30 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

So they all break up, Bella gets ready to leave with her mom...

 

Jake and Emily want to take Layla...

Sam magically disappeared...

 

Bella wins custody of Layla, moves away, then is a single mom with two russet skinned children.

 

And Tanya sets herself on fire in her cell and Charlie watches while chomping on chips and hugging Terri.

THE END

*giggles*

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Date: 29 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: The Aftermath

Welcome back!  I missed you, I re-read last chapter just 4 days ago cause I missed this!

 

Great come back chapter!  I loved it!  I am anxious to see what the boys are cooking up!  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

What if Edward did not take the dramatic route and wait till noon to step into the sun in Volterra?  What if Alice and Bella were incapable of getting to him in time?  What if he was not the only casualty of bad timing and misread visions?

 

This story takes us down an alternate path than what we followed in New Moon.  The Cullen’s are no longer whole and Bella is so badly damaged that she may be unreachable as she closes herself off to the pain of the outside world.

 

Can a new love save her?  Can his voice pull her from the darkness?

 

This story is rated NC-17 for major angst, suicide and the possibility of far off lemons (who am I kidding?  If you have read any of my stories, you know there will be lemons…but not for a while).

The top banner and this lovely blinkie is brought to you by my banner goddess, MissKingAtYourService.  Check out her blog at misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/.


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 140978 Read Count: 74014
[Report This] Published: 24 Dec 2010 Updated: 10 Apr 2012
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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- The Witches of Alaska

Love this story... love this chapter... hate the Denali sisters.  Kate is cool in the books, especially when she finds her Garrett.

 

Looking forward to the next chapter definitely :)



Author's Response:

LOL!  Yeah, I had to throw those two under the bus.  I never liked them in the books, so it was easy to vilanize them.  Thanks for the love!!!

Till next time

Nickey

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Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- The Kiss That Kills

OK, this chapter caused my chest to tighten.

Ouch, man, just ouch!

I want to take Kate by the back of her head and shove her into the fire pit!

I hope they all find out what happened!



Author's Response:

It made mine tighten too, especially when Bella sent Carlisle away.  Thanks so much for the rating and review!

Till next time

Nickey

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Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- A Change of Heart

Ebil lip lock blocker! *growls*

I love this chapter, except for Kate.... I like her just about as much as an ingrown toenail!

Where is Garrett when you need him?!

 

Alas, I can only await your next chapter to see what occurs next :)  I look forward to it!!!



Author's Response:

LOL.  Yeah, it would be nice if Garrett could wander into the neighborhood.  Then Kate could focus on him instead of Carlisle.  Thanks so much for the rating and review.

Till next time

Nickey

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Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- To New Beginnings

That was hawt!  :)



Author's Response:

LOL, I'm glad you liked it!  Thanks for the rating and review!

Till next time

Nickey

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Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Loving A Vampire 101

So we end with a cliffie?

*sigh*

I loved this chapter, Carlisle blood thirsy and letting loose is hawt ;)

Just the end makes me want more... so much more lol



Author's Response:

And there is so much more to come.  I promise!!!  Thanks for the rating and review.

Till next time

Nickey

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Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Yes

OMG Yes!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO!  Aren't you glad Bella had the same answer?!?  ;)

Thanks for the rating and review.

Till next time

Nickey

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Date: 26 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Land of Wonder

That wasnt just good, that was great!  :)



Author's Response:

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Date: 20 May 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- A Christmas Wish

 I voted for you, you truly do have the best Carlisle out there :)

Congrats on all of your noms, It is well deserved.

I loved this chapter, Emmett did EXACTLY what I thought he would, except bursting through their bedroom door and interrupting *giggles*

 

I cant wait to read more :)  I am looking forward to Bellas change!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!!!  I am totally blown away by being nominated.  If I win any of the catagories, I don't think I will be able to stand myself. ;)

Emmett is such a big kid at heart.  We all need a little Emmett in our lives.

Thanks for the rating and review.

Till next time

Nickey

PS.  Sorry my response to your last review did not come through.  My system security on my new pc is attacking everything I post on TWCS.  Not sure why.  But for now I am using my dino-laptop till I figure it out. ;)

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Date: 27 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Sex, Lingerie and the City

Happy Birthday!  Thank you for giving us a gift on your birthday :)

I laughed out loud through most of this chapter, crying in a couple of spots as well :)

I really want to see Carlisle's reaction to the lollipops :)  *giggles*



Author's Response:

LOL.  Oh don't you worry.  I am working on that as we speak. ;)

Thanks for the love!  And if you would like to vote for AVitD for the Avant Garde Awards, here is the link.

https://spreadsheets.google.com/spreadsheet/viewform?formkey=dElVTUw0Sk5HUUpLYjR2VXpEdTE1SHc6MQ&theme=0AX42CRMsmRFbUy0yMjdiMTQ4Yi0zZjUwLTQ5NTUtOGVmNC05ODNlZTUxYTViYzA&ifq

Till next time

Nickey

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Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- Unwelcome Visitors

I voted for you in category you are in, you deserve everyone of them for this artwork!!

I am not a big fan of cliffies, they are the evil of the darkside of fiction

*spits on Cliffie*

Cliffie and I are arch enemies...

I cannot wait with any sort of patience to see what happens next!

 



Author's Response:

{Hiding behind Emmett} I am so guilty of this cliffie.  I could have made this and the next chapter all one, but I REALLY wanted to split them up and this seemed like the best place {please don't hurt me}.

I swear I will not keep you waiting long.  Thanks for the rating, review and votes!!! 

Till next time

Nickey

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Date: 16 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- A Change of Plans

*holds breath in anticipatoin*

 

Great Chapter, I am without words atm.

wow.



Author's Response:

OMG!  Please breathe!  I can't write that fast.  LOL.  But I am trying to finish the chapter today and get it to my betas and pre-readers tomorrow.  Thanks for the rating and review.

Till next time

Nickey

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Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Extreme Makeover Vampire Edition

Beg not, dear one.  The votes have been yours the entire time :)

Love this chapter, I love how she got her memories to flow.

 

I would love to see some shenannigans for Newbie Bells that involve a sneaky Jasper and a Mischevious Emmett.  *cackles*

 

I cant wait to see the extent of her power!  That shield sounds AWESOME!  Now we need to test it out on someone...



Author's Response:

Oh sweetie, thanks so much for the votes.  Though it seems it wasn't meant to be.  Oh well.

Thanks for the R&R and the ideas.  I love the thought of playing around with Jasper, Emmett and Bella.  They seem like a terrible trio when it comes to getting into trouble.

Sorry for not responding earlier, but my brain pulled an epic fail on me.  But I am back and the next chapter should be up soon.

Till then

Nickey

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Date: 28 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Loopholes and Sharing Something New

Still here, yes  :)

 

Loved this chapter, love the shared meal thing, so hawt!

Cant wait to see the vindication against the Harpies!  *snickers*



Author's Response:

Harpies are on deck for the next chapter.  I am writing it as we speak and hope to get some time to really dive in this weekend.

Thanks for sticking with me and the R&R.

Till next time

Nickey

Summary:

afitr

 

Bella wakes up the day after her fateful birthday party only to find Alice perched on her bed. Ever wonder if things might have turned out differently for Bella and Edward if Alice and Rosalie had interfered? "Seduce him, Bella!" Guided by Bella’s inner strength and determination, Edward must face both his human past and his vampiric future.  Where will his decisions take their relationship? New Moon with a twist.

 

Thanks to coleen561 for the Awesome banner and editing advice!


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 165429 Read Count: 41852
[Report This] Published: 27 Dec 2010 Updated: 18 Jun 2012
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Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Honeymoon's Over!

OMG that was hot!  :)  I missed the family, I am glad they are back, especially Em.  *giggles*

 

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Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: An Understanding

Great chapter!  I didnt mind having the sexy time before the talk, they needed something to help them stay calm, and that was the perfect outlet ;)  lol

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Date: 07 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Snarling and Growling

Oh wow, holy shit!

Run, Edward, run! *in best Forret Gump imitation*



Author's Response:

To the tune of na,na,na,na, VAMP-MAN! Will he make it in time? You'll find out on Thursday!

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Date: 16 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Outtake: Anatomy of a Zipper

lol, that was hawt and naughty!!!  Love it!

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Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: A Simple Man

OMG!!!!  Tissue warning with this chapter!!!!

Emmett's words are so humble they literally have me a blubbering mess.

*wipes eyes again to see the screen*

I just caught up with this story.  I love it, I am going to pimp it, definitely.

I love Emmett, he is the big brother EVERYONE wants.

nuff said.

Now, Eddie, get your ass in that house and claim your woman.

Bells, get over it and accept.  Your mother is your mother.  YOU ARE NOT HER!



Author's Response:

Oh thank you SO much for your wonderful review! Yes, Emmett may not be the most articulate of men, but he is the most straightforward. I LOVE his honesty and directness. I cannot WAIT for him to return to our story. I promise all of you Emmett lovers will not be diappointed (he will have his very own outake!).

I think Edward got the message...chapter 11 will be posted Thursday!

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Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Guilty as Charged

We still use Tally Whacker in the East... well, in Ohio anyhow.

I laughed so damn hard during this entire chapter!  Love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment! This was probably my favorite chapter to write...I love Edward's inner monologue...he makes me laugh too!

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Date: 31 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Dinner and a Movie

Oh my!  I loved that part them getting caught making out!  HA!

I love this story *swoons*

I look forward to more of your work!  Especially the next chapter I miss the Cullens :)

*puts you on author alert*

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Date: 25 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Bursting the Bubble

*gigglesnorts*  HAA HAA HAA!!!

Edward has detention!!!!  *cracks up*

LOVE IT!!



Author's Response:

Well...he deserved it! But I promised him I wouldn't say why!

Thanks for your review! xo

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Date: 09 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Count Down

OMG a haircut, love it!  Our little Eddie is growing up!

 

I love Caveward too, no hating on it here :) 

 

I cannot wait for the next chapter, but I am going to be sad to see this story go  *sbos*

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Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23:Forever part one

I cant believe we are at this point already!  I feel like I have been with these kids since the beginning :)

I love how you have written this, its beautiful :)

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

She thought he was everything; He thought she hung the moon. Now, Bella and Edward face their toughest challenge in a race against time. Will love be enough? AH & NC-17 Cannon Pairings.

wlb


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories to read, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 133949 Read Count: 159783
[Report This] Published: 08 Jan 2011 Updated: 10 Mar 2014
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

This is my favorite fic, I have told you that before  ;)

 

And that was amazing!  She got shot?  Oh no!

 

I am gonna worry!

 

Great update BB  :)

 

*hugs*

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Date: 11 May 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Does Edward realize that was their first kiss in months?  I think he needs to be made aware of that if not. 

 

Great chapter!

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Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

BB, what?.....

 

I stare at the words, not comprehending what is written across the screen.

 

Did she?  Did she just?...

 

Did Esme just become MORE of the dog shit on a kids shoe?!

 

Oh, I cannot WAIT for this one to be explained...  I have an urge to backhand Esme in the next story I see her in!

*huffs and stomps off*

 

;)  Loved it, BB  *hugs*

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Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

*chuckles*  Evil?  You?  Nah, its just when the cliffies drag you to the dark side...

 

Great chapter!  I was on the edge of my pillow when they were getting into position!  Whoa!

 

Love it, BB!  :)

*hugs*

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

*cries*

 

Well at least I know he finds her... thank god for that!

 

Now, for the shitstorm in the present... fuuuuuuuuuck!

 

*hugs*

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Date: 23 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I swear I started salivating when I saw this update in my email!  )

 

I thought this chapter was GREAT!  Very emotional!  I cried right along with Ed, as I always do with your stories.  They always touch me, BB.

 

Loved it!  I hope you arent letting stress get to you.  Writing is your passion, and readers are privileged to read your work.  You write for yourself, it is up to you alone to decide to share it with the audience. Never let anyone tell you different.

*hugs*

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Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh wow, I would hate to be the object of concentration in a room full of angry parents... yikes!  Poor ED!

 

Awesome chapter BB!!!

*hugs*

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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

So THIS monstrosity is the cliffie you mentioned on the boards?!?!

 

Dangit BB!!!  *hugs you hard*

 

Cliffie are Evil, like shiny space penguin armies!  *flashes back to Neopet days*

 

*snickers at own stupidity*

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Date: 08 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

GASP!!!!!

 

OMG, great beginning BB!!!!!

I cant to see this one play out! :)

 

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

BB, I am trying real hard to hold myself together so that I dont become too impatient...

but holy cow, this is a scary one!

The flashback was beautiful, but the present makes me want to cry.

Love it BB, I cant wait to read more of this story!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 15 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

GAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Time to go vote like crazy!!!!

I am definitely sticking by you on this one BB!!  I love this story, I love the way it is written, I look forward to the updates on it :)

Good Luck in the Twinklings!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sweetie:)

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Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Holy crap!!!  That was scary, and now you leave us with a gun to her forehead?!  Eesh, my blood pressure is through the roof now!

:)

Love it BB!

*hugs*

*runs over to fanfictionaddiction and registers*  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh, my GOD!!!

Who is this freaked out man?!?!?!

Poor Bells :(

BB, this story gonna have a HEA?  *gives puppy eyes*

*hugs*



Author's Response:

What's your defintion of a HEA????

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Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OMG!  *sobs*

The present is nerve wracking!  Eddie shouldnt have been such an ass.  taking for granted what you have as a privelage... he is finding that out first hand that he is a douche.

And for the flashback... nice :)  maybe he should remember how it all started, then maybe he will appreciate it more.

This is some tense shit BB!!!  ;)

Of course, I love it!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sweetie:)

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Date: 12 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

OK, great chapter, had to have their firsties, of course!!

WHO walked up to Ed and Alie and them that would cause Eddie to curse at them like that?

Cliffies are evil...  *growls at you*

*gets smacked on the nose with a rolled up newspaper by Peter*

Sorry for growling BB.

I am really looking forward to the next chapter!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sweeite:)

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Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OH GAWD!   So, you are going to let us suffer again until we find who Edward snapped at at the end of last chapter?!  Ugh...

*goes into teenage drama fit*

OMG! like, my life is, like, so freakin OVER~!  I needed to totally know who was like getting yelled at, like, you know, by Eddie, hotness personified!  Anyways, like, now I dont know and I cant go on, like, ever!

*slaps self*

Yikes, hopefully I have retained some dignity.  Enough to say~  Well done on this chapter BB!  I had to raise an eyebrow at Ma and Pa Cullen,  but you have a plan and reason for everything, so I cant wait for the next chapter!

*hugs*



Author's Response: Hehe, thanks:)

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Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Whoa, where did Bella get that brass set of cajunas??  Holy Shitballs!

I love this story BB!!

*hugs*

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Date: 13 May 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh holy hell and shit!  Kicking Bella doesnt bode well for that ass...

*sharpens fangs with werewolf knife*

Peter and I will toss his ass in a pit of newborns!

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Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow, who do I hate more?  That is a toughie!

 

Well, I would have to say Dwyer at the moment.  Carlisle isnt my favorite person at the moment and Esme is drunk, bad on her, so I will say Dwyer for now  :)

 

Love the chapter though, I cannot wait til they snipe Dwyer through the window *snickers*

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Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

*clenches eyes shut having faith in you*

love, you BB.  I dont get to say that enough to you lately, I am in a rough place...  I will try harder, especially on FB.

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

wow

love it, BB

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Date: 27 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow!  This was a great chapter!  So they had problems in the beginning... everyone does! 

I cant wait to see what happened to make it this bad so far in the future...

 

Love it, BB!!!

 

*hugs*

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Date: 16 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Well, I can see why you needed protection from the masses, but never fear I am still here!!

 

*snickers at cheesy line*

 

Great chapter though, Edward is going out of his mind, I feel for him, no matter what they were going through.

 

WTF is Carlisle and Esme doing there?!  Freakin meddlers!

 

Love it, BB!!!  *hugs*

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Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh!  Whoa!  From hitting her head from overreacting to BAM being brought back from the light... Whoa BB, thats deep!

 

I love it!!!!

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Thank you for this BB.  I loved it.

 

*hugs*

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Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Oh man I dont even want to stop the tears  :)

 

Love it BB!

Summary:

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With just weeks before the wedding, Bella and Edward's lives will be forever altered by one unwanted event. One event will change everything for everyone. Can witnessing one thing really ruin the lives of so many? Slash/Poly and everything in between.

with a lot pushing I mean helping from my friends I started this dark tale. It will not be what you think, So hold on to your booties its a bumpy ride with a lot of twists. Don't believe everything you read.


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13496 Read Count: 4100
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2011 Updated: 11 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy Shit!  No!

:(



Author's Response:

Trust me kepp reading. Have faith in me and you will be rewarded. I promise. Thanks for reading it! Nails233

Summary:

Sequel to Fighting for Love: Edward and Bella are at UCLA. On their own for the first time, will they be able to handle everything that is thrown at them? Will their past come back to haunt them? Canon coupling, NC-17 and AH.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 WIP Reads, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Fighterward, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 136048 Read Count: 81565
[Report This] Published: 19 Mar 2011 Updated: 11 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMFG!!!  This is definitely a surprise sequel that I did NOT see coming!!  :)  I LOVE IT!

 

I effin luv you BB!

*big bear hug*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

But it was a great chapter!

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Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Ok, so you know what to do with bitchy chapters, right BB?

BITCH SLAP THEM!!!  *giggles*

Thats Pete's all-cure -  a bitch slap a day keeps the blockage away :)

Love this one BB :)  FFL  was an all time fav of mine lol

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

*hugglesquishies you*

I know life can be insane, but you can always find escape here, with us, your fans :)

This was a great update!  I cant believe they actually told everyone about what happened.  That shocked the proverbial shit right outta me!

I had to grab onto Peter's arm so I didnt shock myself right out of my chair! *giggles*

Love it, BB!!  I just want them to hug it out!

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

*doubles over in hysterics*  Carlisle cracks me up STILL!!

 

I see what I missed being an only child for so long!  I would have loved to pick the shit out of an older brother!!  :)

Love it BB!!  I know you have been working hard, and I just want you to know I appreciate it all

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

*hugs you hard*

Loved the update babe!  Carlisle is gonna kick some lazy asses!!!  :)

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

*breathes a peaceful sigh*  Ahhhh!

 

BB, when I posted on FB today, I had no idea I would get this gift!  My favorite story posted, and I was giggling like a school girl!

Great chapter!  I think the kids are coming around, and as much as it pains me to say, I am gonna miss Carlisle in training! *snorts*

I flove ya hard, BB!! Great chapter!!

*hugs*

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Date: 05 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

*squeals with glee over favorite couple*

Oh these kids are the greatest!  And I totally would have punched Ben too!  ;)

 

Love it, BB!!

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Those voices can be annoying, eh?  lol

 

Loved the chapter BB!!!  I am excited to see how these matches go..   I have a feeling Tia is gonna get hurt.  I cant wait!!  :)

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Yaaaaaaaay!!  I LOVE this story, BB!!!!!!  *does a jig*

 

Ok, this chapter was great showing us the aftermath.  I feel so bad for Ben and Tia, they didnt deserve that, and poor Bella!  I know how she feels!  Feel like if you dont keep winning, you arent worth anyones time...

 

Edward is doing great though!  I cant wait to see Em, Carlisle and Jas's reaction to what happened  :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ugh, not Charlie and Renee... *huffs*

 

Great chapter BB!  I know Alice doesnt mean and ill will to Bella about taking over her room, but it still stung for Bells, I can see that.

I cant wait to see how Bella deals with whats been going on, she can let it go in Forks, it really is a safe place for her to release.

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Merry Christmas BB!!!!  Thank you for this Christmas present, I love it!!

*hugs*

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Date: 02 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Happy New Years BB!!!!  Thank you for my gift *points above*

 

*hugs*

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Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

If Tanya IS there... I hope she goes home missing some fucking teeth!  Ugh, what a bitch...

 

Great chapter BB!!! Loved it!

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2013 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

*gasp*  Liam punked out?!

 

Or did he get bribed?  Hmm...

 

Great chapter BB!!

Summary:

Bella moves to New York after a tragic accident tears her world apart. Lost and loney, she can't understand why the Cullen's and the Hale's want to be her friend. REWORKED and EDITED. NC-17 and AH.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 68569 Read Count: 79426
[Report This] Published: 23 Mar 2011 Updated: 14 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ok, this story does sound familiar...

I think I did read it!

*smacks forehead*

Ouch!  That hurt, I have Carlisle's ring on... *rubs knot*

I cant wait til the next chapter though :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I know why it feels awkward... because they dont belong in Forks anymore.

Forks is no longer her home, they are both just visitors there.

Thats how I felt when I read it.  Just sayin'   *shrugs*

I love it BB!

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh wow!!  Intense chapter!  Newton and Mallory are going to be problems... yikes for Bells and Ed!

Love it BB!!

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Ruh Roh Raggy!  Yipes! *snickers*

 

Look out, its Esme!

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Second posting, first time reading for me though :)

Im so excited!!!  :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

*starts to walk off to go vote*

I like nail's story the third wife...

Love the chapter BB, I wish I could take away the assholes like Mike myself!

*cracks knuckles*

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

HAHAHAHA Hells Yeah!  You go Bells!!  ":_

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Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Gosh I just want to grab her and hug her!

So much sadness

Love it BB!

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Warning heard *salutes you*

I figured all couldnt stay rainbows and roses  :(

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh wow... touchy!!

Poor Ed, I really dont think he was making fun of her.

I cant wait til the next chapter :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

She loves him... he loves her... and they both dont have a clue :(

poor kids.

*hugs*

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Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Love it  :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Aww I got all excited and stuff  *sniffles and wipes away tear*

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*applauds you*

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This chapter was beautiful.  The washing of the hair, you made that FEEL intimate as I read it.  I love it BB

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I love this BB!!!!

Happy Easter!  :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Very emotionally charged... but I wouldnt have it any other way BB!!!

I loved this chapter, she really needed to feel that connection that was instantly there with all of them.

Love it!!!

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

*kneels beside your leg and rests my head on your knee*

 

Its ok, BB, we all enjoy your work, no matter how long it takes to get it out to us.  We flove you!

 

This was a greak breakthrough for Bella, she is actually talking about her past with someone.  :)

^hugs^

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ok, BB, I am definitely anxious to see whats new on her canvas ;)

 

Racy and romantic I betcha!  *gigglesnorts*

 

I will have to tell you soon of how it went when I met Jackson Rathbone recently.

Lets just say we butted heads immediately!  It was horrific and thrilling!

I want to strangle him!  Such an ass with a dry humor...*cackles*

Soon, BB... *hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

*hugs you tightly*