Reviews by Siobhan_Whitlock
Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

tc

Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 204586
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I still dont feel sorry for Lauren.

But I can at least consider tolerating her

for Alex's sake.

I love family time with these four.  Its turly beautiful BB!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

That went better than expected.  Bella needs time I suppose.

Thank the stars she has Edward and Anthony.

*hugs*

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

lol, i never dreamed halloween would be so hard on a room mom...

thank goodness I refused when I was asked!!  YIKES!

Love it BB!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I was the sucker that said yes :(

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Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

LOL!!!!  I love it!!

Poor Charlie... he needs to go take some cooking classes...

and meet a woman there to feed him!

*cracks up at self*

*hugs*



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

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Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Beautiful ending to a wonderful chapter.

These kids and dance clubs...  I just dont get it.

I used to be a fun kid, I went dancing.

But never did I see dancing like that.

Except the year Dirty Dancing came out.  *waves face with folder*

Those were some 'hot' memories on the dance floor.  LOL!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

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Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

*wipes away the tears that blur the scenery*

That was so scary and so sweet at the same time.

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!

Love it BB, I am glad that your semester is almost over!

You can always tell your Creative Writing professor to find your writing here. He could use it as examples of Superb writing! :)

*hugs*

 



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks:)

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Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I squealed myself hoarse when I saw this update!

:)

Things will get better, Bells will quit being stubborn as soon as she sees the puppy dog eyes from her three men lol

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Yay!!!

B and E alone time... I cant WAIT!!!

*giggles*

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Awww!  You should definitely post a pic of the pillow cases if you can, on your profile :)

That is so sweet!

And the end of this beautiful chapter is fuck hawt!

*pops self in potty mouth*

*giggles insanely at that*

Love it BB!!!  I love this story ALMOST as much as FFL ;)

*hugs*

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Date: 18 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

*points at self*

I voted!!! *squeals*

I love this chapter!  The family dynamic is so natural for them!  They were meant to be a family.

Now, if Lauren starts shit....

She will find her self on the outside again...

and possibly a Nomad meal also.  *evil grin*

I look forward to the next update, no matter which story you bless us with :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

lmao, Hungry Nomads ;) Thank you!!!

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Date: 08 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Um, well...

*wipes eyes furiously to see clearly*

That was effin beautiful BB!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Beautiful  :)

Aside from Lauren's asshole attack  *snickers*

Love it BB!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

*wipes eyes*

"Dad, did you fart?"...

The infamous line that will be keeping me laughing hysterically for DAYS,BB!!  DAYS!!!!!!!!!!

Great stuff, I am the happiest when I see your updates  *blushes*

*hugs*



Author's Response:

lol, I laughed so hard writing that part.

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Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

I heart you so hard too BB!!!!!

And E's POV on this was absolutely beautiful.  I am crying tears of joy right now!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Ah, I see that you have broken through the darkness of 'cliffies' to give us this lovely chapter with such a beautifiul ending!

 

Totally HAWT chapter btw!  ;)  lol

I was clenching my fists on this one!  GAWD Peter needs to come home!

Love it BB!!!

*hugs*

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Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

omg, from Brody's letter to what Didyme did, my tears have soaked my shirt through.

Beautiful, BB.

*hugs*

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Date: 13 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Wow, Bella just kind of lost it there, a little, eh?

Poor girl!

Aro was very straight forward, I would have been in the same state of mind too.

Thank goodness for the love of a family to help you get through the hard times.

Love it BB!!

*hugs*

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Date: 27 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Once again I have tears streaming down my cheeks.

I love it BB, that was a great Christmas Eve.  I love Charlie... even though he is being bad :)

*hugs*

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Date: 16 May 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Love this chapter BB!!!!!!  It was so touching, I cried immediately!

Dont fret about it dear, we all love you and your writing and as I always say, your devoted followers will be so patient so no need to apologize :)

*hugs*

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Date: 03 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

*wipes tears away for the millionth time*

 

Ugh!  Its a wonder i could read at all with all the moisture in my eyes!

Love it, BB!!!

*wipes nose on sleeve*

*hugs*

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Date: 04 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

*gasps out*  Holy shit, BB!!!

*looks at you incredulously* Are you fucking serious right now?!

 

*snickers*  Im just playing on the drama, darlin' ;) You know I love it!

*hugs*

Summary: Past Featured Story

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banner by lvtwight09

 

When Bella was three, she was found abandonned outside of a hospital in LA. She was placed with Carlisle, Esme, and their twin boys, Emmett and Jasper. What happens when they move to Forks? NC-17&AH Cannon pairing.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 60 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 186533 Read Count: 268824
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 03 Sep 2014
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Date: 20 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

*wipes eyes*  Wow, BB, that was a GREAT chapter!

Poor Bella, I want to wrap my fingers around Mrs Newtons neck and squeeze...

Bitch.

Ok, I will chill....  someday.  :)

*hugs*

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Date: 14 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

*wipes away frustration tears*

Love it BB!!!  I feel for her... if not with her...

 

*hugs*

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Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I love this one :)

Annoying older brothers... poor Bells.  lol

But at least she has a family.

See ya next update BB!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

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Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

*thinks*

Maybe someone kidnapped her, then thought about it, and then dropped her off so they didnt have to be seen?  Just a thought ;)

Anyhow, loved the update.  Whats up with Angela??

See ya next update BB!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Interesting theory:) I guess we'll have to see, huh?

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

*tries to pry eyelids open*

jeesh, I am exhausted! *shakes head*

I loved this chapter.  What is up with Garrett though? Hmmm....

I have a feeling Emmett and Jasper are going to cause a problem in the future.

See ya next chapter :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

I heard this rumor on the street that when you are tired, you should go to bed... I think it's crazy talk but I thought I would share it with you :) Love you, Honey!

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

*steam rolls out of ears*

Angela is gonna get an ASS whoopin'  here in about two shakes...

ITS NOT BELLA'S FAULT!!!  Little shit needs to learn some manners.

I never really disliked Angela... till now *growls*

See ya next chappie BB!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

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Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow.  My head is reeling with that mind fuckery right there.

I REALLY want to punch Renee Swan right in the fucking mouth.

They had the Cullens, essentially including their missing daughter, treated like common criminals.

WTF?!?!

Yeah, thats really the way to win a girl's heart.  *grumbles* Asshats

Loved the update BB!  Oh!  Peter said to tell you that yes, you heard right.  He does bight.  But its the kind of bite that leaves you beggin' for more.

*waggles eyebrows*  I know I do!

Charlotte does too. *grins like a cheshire cat*

See ya next update BB!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

I knew I loved Peter for a reason:)

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Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

*marks calender for voting date*

This chapter... my GAWD, if Renee fucking Swan could see what her flighty, overbearing actions have done not only to the family, but especially to those children, maybe she could at least come out with a public apology.  She has lived in this small town long enough to understand small town politics and logistics.. Admit you made a fucking mistake already. *Grrrr*

Anywhoo BB, I will see you next update :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks, sugar:)

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Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

*gives you a stern look while pointing at face*

Do I look, *makes circle around face with pointing finger* like I give a flying DONKEY SHIT patty if Charlie and Renee are hurting?!?!

Peter pats me on the arm.

"Calm down now sweet cheeks, its not BB's fault the Swans dont know how to act."

I scoff at his words.

"Peter, I know its not BB's fault, she just writes it, she doesnt really know where the story is going.  I am not blaming her for the idiotic Swan parents." I sigh, "I'm sorry to come off rude BB, they grate me the wrong way."

Peter takes my hand to lead me out the door.  "Come on darlin', we have plans this evening."

All hostility instantly dissapates from my person at his touch.

Ok BB, I am really anxious to see how this plays out, I am afraid Bells is gonna be hurt and noone but E is gonna see it until its too late.

Poor Girl.

See ya next update BB!!!
*hugs*



Author's Response:

OMG, I am laughing my ass off right now. Thank God Peter calmed you done, sugar!

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Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

BB, I am glad Peter is here too.  WW3 could have started because of my mouth if he wasnt here to tell me to tone it down. *snickers*

Peter cackles in the background

 

ANYWHOOO~ Ok, so B had to go back to school.  Hmfph, school is overrated.

"Says the college graduate who promotes education after high school on a daily basis." Snorts Peter as he comes into the room.

"Zip it Sparkles!"  I snap at him as he settles in the chair beside me.

Peter chuckles "Yes, I do, but you love the parts that sparkle, don't ya, sweet cheeks?"

I sigh dreamily "Aah, yes, I do love that disco stick Sweet Pete."  I turn away trying to hide my laugh.

It doesn't work.

Peter lifts me up quicker than I can blink and runs us out past the trees behind our home.  You can hear Charlotte's cackle all the way.

"No Peter, don't!"  I scream out as I am flying through the air.  My sound is only cut off as I submerge underwater in the lake located in our back field.

I can still hear Peter's belly laugh as I pout under water.

~E~

Anyhow, Peter and I are making a trip, you know, in AWK.  Mike will be a missing persons case within days. *smirk*

We have quite a few hungry nomads, surprisingly enough.  I guess there is some kind of "vamp" hype sweeping across the nation and they have to hide alot more these days.  *quirks eyebrow*

Anywhooo, as for this chapter here.  Same shit, different chapter.  Charlie and Renee Swan blow boar balls.

Frequently.

'nuff said.

 

See ya next update BB!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

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Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh My God... I just want to curl around those kids and protect them from everything!

Especially from the BBS Swans!

Love it BB!!!

See ya next time!!  :)

*hugs*

*runs off to vote*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Man... damned if you do, damned if you don't.

Effin' Swans *grumbles profanities under breath*

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

*wipes tears away*

Poor Edward!  :(

Well, he is just trying to give Bella another perspective, not exactly trying to tell her which way to go.

Poor girl is gonna explode!

Lotsa Love BB!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

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Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Ah Dad time, then Ed time... Love it

*sigh* C'est l'amoure *bats eyelashes and swoons*

*hugs*

 



Author's Response: Thanks:)

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Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I knew it, I just fucking KNEW IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn Swans!

I should just throw a kick ball and nail Coach Swan right in the nads!

Renee Swan can get flighty and fly right off a cliff!!!

Angela Swan just needs her ass beat severly by some bigger kids.

Emmett and Jasper Cullen need to be grounded and have a stern talking to.

Poor Bella.  Jesus, can you imagine going through that as a teenager?  Being pulled all different directions and getting flack from each person for doing what you thought was right.

Imagine being 17 and being through all that Bella has been.

Its time to lay some smack down, and Edward is just the person to do it.

 

*hugs*



Author's Response: LMAO, thank you for the review, I really enjoy all of yours more than you will ever know. They make me smile and laugh:)

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Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I just wanted to say Happy Thanksgiving BB!

And thank you for your beautiful writing!

And sorry I forgot to rate Ch. 16 on AWK.  But, as always, a totall over 10! :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Happy Thanksgiving to you, too!

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Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Well look who pulled their heads out of their asses!!!

Jebezus!  Took alost killing the poor girl to see they were tearing her apart.

Lub lub lub it BB!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

OMG  I love Ed and Liz Masen!

I want them as MY PARENTS!

 

Loved the update BB!!!

Its still sad thinking of Elli...

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OMG, I want Ed and Liz to be my parents!!!

Wait... I have already said that, havent I?

*clears throat*

Love it, BB!!!  I hope she find a therapist that lets her hit a punching bag *winks*

 

Thank you VERY much for the FFL update *blushes*

*hugs*



Author's Response:

lol, Thank you:)

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Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh man, that whole chapter makes my heart hurt...

I just want to hug them!  Hug them all!!!

Love it BB@@@

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Merry Christmas to you as well dear.  :)

I was so excited when I saw this update I thought I was going to vibrate right out of my chair!

I think I broke one of the wheels off bouncing so much...

Em needs to understand what he said about killed Bells.

Literally.

Looking forward to more of course as always.

Love it BB!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 06 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

I think my heart literally jumped in my chest when I saw the update notice for this BB.  My goodness, I am still having trouble breathing from being so excited to see this!  :)

And what a wonderful update it is!!!

You can feel the t3ension, and see so clearly her struggles now.  I love this story so much.... but not as much as FFL ;)  lol

I also wanted to say that I love TOD, that is going to be a VERY good story :)

Love it, so Love it BB!!!!!

*extra big hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sweeite:)

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Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Wow....... oh my goodness!

Poor Bells!

Who is this faceless man?  He has me scared out of my whits!

Thank you SO MUCH for another update to my #2 favorite story :)

*giggles*

Yeah, I love your stories :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:) He's the man who took Bella, the carjacker:)

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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Yes, heavy indeed dear.

But beautiful none the less.

She and the boys really needed to get some things off their chests.  Hey, its a start... right?

Love it, BB!!!  I was ecstatic to see this story update!  I squealed and scared the cat and she fell off my desk at the sudden noise  *sheepish grin*

See you next update BB!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sweetie:)

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Date: 02 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

GAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!  I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!  *hugs you in a Emmett Bear hug*

This story brightened my day, I am not even shitting you in the least!

I read it, then slowed myself down and read it again.  THANK YOU!

Emmett and Jazz are trying, I think. They really need to talk to someone too, this is hurting them too.  I hurts to think you are losing your sister.

Carlisle showed what an amazing man he is by apologizing to Edward, that was a brilliant part of this chapter.

Altogether this chapter rocked.  Thanks BB, you are THE BEST!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Oh, I bet I understand!! I have needed the fluff, too!!

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Date: 14 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

*wipes tears away*

That was a beautiful chapter BB.  Hopefully these kids can put their shit together now and get help from one another and for each other.  Kids can only deal with so much on their own.  Its time the professionals stepped in and handle the rest  :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Oh I want to deck that little bitch right in the mouth...

*writes self in story*

~&~

Siobhan walks up to the porch staring at Angela like she grew three heads.

"Your little mouth just got you in the fucking dog house you little bitch!" Siobhan sneers at Angela.

"What are you gonna do about it?" Angela quips as Siobhan takes a step up to face her.  Angela has no time to even flinch as Siobhan draws back her fist and connects with Angela's jaw.

"That, smart ass."  Siobhan mumbles as she turns on her heels and walks away.

Angela falls to the ground, speechless, while holding her gaping jaw.

~&~

ok, I feel better now :)

Loved this update BB!!  Its been so long for this story!  I miss all of them so much :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

*gasping for air* Thank you:)

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Ah, the steps toward healing.....

One of those steps should be Angela getting her ass kicked and a huge dose of reality.  Like her parents threatening to send her off to boarding school or something.

Mean little witch!  *growls*

loved the update BB.  I missed it, I am glad I got to read alot of your writing tonight :)

*hugs*

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Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh BB, you and these cliffies.... they have taken you to the dark side!

*cries*

 

I am so excited to get an update to this today, you have no idea.  RL threw me a hell of a curve ball today, and this... BB, you just dont know how much I love your writing.  You reach me... like nothing else.


I am off to read TC now :)

*hugs*

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Date: 29 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Awesome chapter BB!!!  I think Bella got at least some good answers from Renee.

I cant wait to see what goes on next!  Especially with the break through with Emmett.

*hugs*

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Date: 10 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

She was trying to get away from the pain that was suffocating her.

I would have jumped in too.

Love it BB!

*hugs*

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Date: 23 May 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

And I appreciate you more than you will ever know BB...

*hugs*

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Date: 26 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Goodness sakes alive!  Thank goodness for Edward...

 

Now... I want that chocolate thingy that Charlie and Garrett had.  Give up the goods sister!  Where can I get one?

*gives puppy eyes and hugs you tight*

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Date: 18 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Oh god, my chest...

 

*collapses into Peters arms*

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Date: 20 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

*chokes on a sob*

Oh God...

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Date: 21 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Im glad they are okay, I still cried the whole chapter though.

Love it, BB!!!

 

*hugs*

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Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

She is trying, its hard to let go of that!  It took me 30 years and I still havent let go of it all...

 

Love this chapter BB!  I just want to grab her and hug her forever!

 

*hugs*

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Date: 29 Dec 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Holy shit!  Things just went from bad to DefCon OH Fuck!

 

I want to reach out to her so bad!  I've been there!  Ugh, lets hug it out girl!

 

Love it, BB!

 

*hugs*

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Date: 15 Feb 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

It was just right, sugar  ;)  I loved it, darlin'

 

*hugs*

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Date: 21 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Wow!!  Great update!  I will always love this story  :)

Bella is getting better, and we can see it!  I love it!  I hope that Garrett makes a great choice too!

 

Love it, BB!!  *hugs*

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Date: 31 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

God I love these kids!  This chapter was absolutely AWESOME BB!!

I cant wait to see Edwards reaction the her music  :)

 

*hugs*

Innocence by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 202]
Summary: Past Featured Story

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When you find yourself needing who you know you shouldn't want, do you turn away from him or embrace him? Now being continued. AH & NC-17

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 117172 Read Count: 89094
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2010 Updated: 28 Nov 2014
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I was surprised!!  Awesome BB!!

I loved it :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

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Date: 31 May 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, talk about talons on Esme!!  Cheese and Rice!

This is getting worse, its going to kill Bella...

Oh, BB, I cant wait to see what happens next, seriously!

 

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks, SWeetie!

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Date: 01 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Holy cow!!  That was hot BB!!!

 

*pants and fans self*

 

*hugs*

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Date: 12 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

The chapter cut off?

 

Man I feel for her so much!  Poor girl!



Author's Response:

I don't know what happened witht the chapter, but I've fixed it.

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Date: 02 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Sometimes I can see it, but with this Charlie and Esme, together  *shiverws*

 

Fantastic chapter.

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Date: 21 Apr 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Yay I got a kindle for Easter so I can finally review again!!  Love this chapter!!  I can't wait to see what Charlie does. :)

 

Love it BB!  

 

*hugs*

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

 

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when she is kidnapped and sold to a vampire. She is unfortunately the object of the most ruthless, out of control, vampire‘s affection. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured her personal hell? Will the one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires or will she become the victim of their most sinister instincts? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and blood play, Extreme Dark-ward, and murder.

Alternate version of the original story, Living Amongst Vampires. By IBELONGTOAVAMPIRE.

L.A.H, is co-written by Thaigher Lillie

Tkegl...Thank you!

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Horror, Sci-Fi
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 89094 Read Count: 129729
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2010 Updated: 10 Oct 2014
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Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Gauntlet part 1

Oh hell...

Jasper is a shrewd bitch!  Love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much =) we're happy you like!

~Jells

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Bella's life was irrevocably changed by the vampires who left her behind. Alone in the world now, she finds herself drawn to another. Fighting for her life has changed her and now, the new family she has found will change her as well...


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125187 Read Count: 71698
[Report This] Published: 23 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 May 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh man!!  I loved this chapter!

I think Carlisle has mind control.  Or maybe its the most obvious and Eddie has it.

Whatever, they cannot even fathom what they got themselves into with fucking with Bells!

And Seth!!!  OMG, that was awesome :)  I look forward to the next chapter :)

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Date: 17 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!!!!!!

Contingent... *falls over trying to breathe between guffaws*

 

They have no idea... this is gonna be great!

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Date: 18 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Shit, I wish Peter could have predicted the Alice shit...

well, damn.

 

*mischevious grin*

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Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG that was awesome!!!!!!!!

I love this chapter!  Although your evil cliffy is my enemy -_-

Who did she launch?

I cant wait to find out :)

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Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh I hope Bells blows a mating gasket soon!  Like someone hitting on Peter at the bar.

 

I see the word MINE floating through her conscience in the near future hopefully :)



Author's Response:

Things will come to head, but not nessecarily in a way that everyone will expect...

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Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

OMFG!!  Cliffie from Hades, thats what that is!!!

Oh my dear, I am beyond hooked, you didnt need to hang us in suspense that way...

*chuckles darkly*

I cannot wait to see what happens next. 

Yes, Bells will figure it out, she is smart, she will see what she needs...

That being Peter :)



Author's Response:

I know, I know. I really hated to do it, but I will post the next chap soon. I won't keep you waiting for too long!

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Date: 13 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

wow! That was awesome!

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Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

AAAHHHHHH!  Sweet niblets!

C'mon Bells!  For Fricks swake, give into it, feel it.

Peter is the good guy here!!

Man I love this story :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

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Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Holy Horse Shit!!!

Its gettin deeper in here!

Awesome chapter!  I knew Jasper would be in it eventually :)

I cant wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

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Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Awesome sauce!!

I love Garrett's POV!  Bells is protecting what is hers... Love it!

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Its ok, I loved the chapter anyway, no matter how short.

Oh I am so giddy, I cant wait!!  :)

Bells is gonna toast that bastard!  *grins wickedly*



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

OMG, what a great chapter!  And always noble Jazz.  Poor guy, but hey, its a Cullen thing.

I am SO EXCITED about what is going to happen next!  So many possibilities!

Yay!

I am looking forward to what comes next :)

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Date: 24 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I heard about the freak snow storm for Cali.

Sorry...

I have been buried in snow for weeks here in Ohio, so I feel for you for sure.

Awesome update, I cant wait to see who these unknowns are.

 



Author's Response:

Eh, for where I live, it wasn't really a freak snow storm. We get a several snowfalls each winter. This one just came a little later than usual. :)

I've got about 6 inches on my back deck at this point...

Thanks for reviewing! Stay dry and warm!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Holy hell!

That. Was. Hawt!

Well worth the wait :)

I look forward to the morning after lol  ;)

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Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Holy Hot Hell~!

That was uber sexy!  Gawd, sey times with Peter... *swoon*

Garrett is askin' for an ass whoopin'

*snickers*  I cant wait till he gets it :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OMG, I was there when she started writing that fic! The Vampire in the Basement is a cool awesome fic for sure!!!  Everyone should read it :)  I caught the reference right off lol  :)

I cant wait to see what happens to these two goons GO PETER!  :)

I cant wait till your next chapter, this story is so awesome!

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Date: 07 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh man, I would love to see Bella's beast through Pete's eyes... can we?  aAn outtake or something?  That would be so AWESOME! :)

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Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

lol, love it!  That was hilarious  :)

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Date: 01 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

OMG OMG OMG!!!  I cant wait to see their reaction!!!

I am really looking forward to this reunion!!  :)

 

Great chapter!

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Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Yay!  The boys are back in town!!  Awesome sauce!!  :)

I love it!

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Date: 23 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

OH my god, that is FREAKY!!!  So awesome, dear.  I love this story.

 

I cannot wait until Alice gets whats coming to her.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

OK, THATS their cabin?!?!  HOly shit!  Thats awesome!

 

And that was an absolutely GREAT chapter :)  I missed this story alot

*sniff*

OK, Im good!  I cant wait for more :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OH wow!  Love it!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Ah great chapter!  Who knew that Marcus was a cool cat??  Awesome!

Summary:

Sequel to Sex on the Beach. Rated XXX for violence, language and even hotter lemons. I recommend reading Sex on the Beach first. No one likes a cheater. :P


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Bella/Paul
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 108.9
Chapters: 40 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 325974 Read Count: 68252
[Report This] Published: 02 Dec 2010 Updated: 26 Dec 2012
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Time of Dying

Great chapter!  THe build up is great!  Emily's words spooked me a bit.

And where is that last camera?!?!

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Date: 11 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ok, so now that Tanya knows Bella didnt adopt Nathan, will she leave B alone?

I sure as fuck hope so, and I hope Austin rats her out!

Kiss her little perfect life goodbye cause Karma is a bitch! 

 



Author's Response:

LOL she'll leave Bella alone. :) Cant say anything about Austin tho.

 

hugs!

 

Cam

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Family

Wow, started off just as awesome as SOTB1 did.

Sweet, I cant wait till Tanya burns at the stake, or gets hit by a semi truck.

I have very morbid thoughts on how to get rid of that witch.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 4: There goes my baby

*reluctantly leaves love*

 

You laugh at me as I read your Chapter 6 spoiler.... harsh, man, harsh.

I will say this:

I love this chapter... lemony goodness is always wonderful.

And my usual; Tanya->a wooden stake->some rope->a lighter

No need for lighter fluid, the venom shit she spews out of her lips is enough to set the flames ablazen.

 

Im just sayin'.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading. :D hugs!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Silence

*gets choked up*

I remember your warnings...

Oh god...

Loved the chapter. 

It would have been better with Tanya tied to a stake...

burning away from the world... and this story!

*sighs wistfully at Tanya's demise*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Jealousy

I am here to leave you love for this wonderful chapter.  When do we get the results of Paul's test?

Oh!  And burn Tanya.... at the stake... and duct tape her mouth please.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading. no worries. tanya will get hers. LOL xoxoxo

 

paul's test results will take a long time. so be prepared.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hey!  Im leavin love!!  Great chapter, I just wish Paul would tell them already.  I dont want them to lose him. *sniff*

OH!

And also...

I want Tanya to go back in time and be burnt at the stake during the Salem witch trials...

They have a bonfire with her name on it.

I really hate her...



Author's Response:

u arent the only one hehe. :) thanks for  reading hon! big hugs!

 

 Cam