Penname: Siobhan_Whitlock [Contact] Real name: Cherish
Member Since: 13 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
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I read Twilight Fan fics constantly.  I have read and reviewed over 11,000 in just this past year.  I plan on reading alot more.  I have been addicted to our Twilight montage of characters ever since I came by a waiting line for Eclipse at our local book store.  Hooked ever since I was.  Then I was on Twilight chat and found out about the amazing and wonderful world of Fan Ficiton.  Oh my, there are no words for my addiciton.  Lets just say I love Jasper/Bella stories the most, I have no qualms about triads or polymory, and I wish more than anything that vampires were real, I lived in Ireland, I was changed by Siobhan herself and that a version of a Whitlock brother was my mate.  There are no vampires that compare to Jasper and Peter Whitlock.  Nuff' said.


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The Moment by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 33523
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ah, and possessiveward rears his messy bronze-haired head!  Bout damn time!  lol ;)

I want to squeeze my hands around Tanya's neck until her head pops off, like an unwanted zit on a pre-pubecent boy's face.  Seriously, could she be more of a nosey ditzy bitch?!  I suppose that is possible, but not without a definite chance to behead her during or right after she opens her Voltswagon mouth.  That thing on her face has more miles on it that a VW bus from flower child days.

HO *cough*

See you next update!!  I am eagerly anticipating the continuation of this discussion!  *gives wide dimpled grin*



Author's Response:

W.O.W!!! Thank you....I am laughing quite hard at the Voltswagon mouth comment ;)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oooooh, man, I am so eager to hear what happened with t he wolves for real.  its was a WTF?! moment, and I want the Africa story :)

*huggles you*  Thank you, BTW, for the Author Resp. on LTTP.  I am deeply honored and you wrote me to a tee.  Thats exactly what I would have been like, then busted out the brass ball-busters :)  *cackles*

See ya next update!  *runs to put on pair of boxing gloves* ;)



Author's Response:

lol, you're welcome:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

AAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  OMGOMGOMG  I LOVE IT!!!

Don't knock your vampire writing skills, you are DA BOMB with no matter what you write :)

 

Of, course, you know, I love it :)  I cant wait to hear the back story on it!!!

 

*bounces in chair*



Author's Response:

Hehe, you never did answer my question about when you are going to write something.

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Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Holy butt-scratching bear Batman!  A twist!  *le gasp*

What in the sam haitis is Elly doing there?!  This is great!  So suspenseful.

*shivers me timbers*

Well, at least E and B are getting to know each other.  That was what I hoping for.

Oh!!!  Does this mean the Africa flashback is coming?!

If I build it, will they come?  *snickers*

Yes, I have finally fell completely off my rocker, but the voices are telling me I am just fine.

See you next update BB!!  All the little people are counting on it!

 

 



Author's Response:

lol, yes, Africa is coming:) Say hi to the little people for me!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Um, ok.  I will leave my review here now.

*clears throat*

OH MY GAWD!!!   I LOVE this vamp fic darlin'!!!  You are bringing it to us readers splendidly, and I'm not talking the sugar splendid either! ;)

 

So, do we get a back story next chapter???  I cant wait, I am so excited!!  :)

*bounces uncontrollably*

See you next update BB!!! 

*hugs you till you turn blue the zips off in a flash of brilliant green*



Author's Response:

A few more chapters before we get into the backstory of Bella, Jasper, and what they've done:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

SQUEEEEE!!!!!

*shatters the front room windows*

WHAT is this power? This feeling?  Is it like my darling Peter's ability?

*mentally winces at calling it an 'ability'*

Oh My GAWD, something is coming!  What is it?!  I cant wait to find out :)

The progression is coming through perfectly, dont change a thing  *hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I will explain, my dear. I promise!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Not rubbish AT ALL!!!  I love it!

I cant wait to see what happened in Africa.  That is going to be an exciting tale :)

And whats the deal with them staying with the Cullens?  Are the just wanting a reason to start a fight?  Come to think of it... yeah, probably. 

*rolls up newspaper*  Time to whoop me some pups!

*huggles* Looking forward to the next update :)



Author's Response:

Thank ya kindly!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

*falls out of chair laughing*

That has to be, the most fucked-up first kiss between those two that could have ever been imagined XD

PERFECT!!!  lol

I am literally laughing so hard I have tears running down my face and blurred my vision.  Funny stuff right there.

 

I love your twist on Jazz's story, that was a new one to me!!  So.... since Peter is mentioned, we will get to see him and he 'know-it-all ass, right?

Yay!! lol

See ya next time BB!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, Peter will be making his appearance but not for awhile:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

The only vampire able to end the world?!  HOLY SHIT!!

How awesome is that??!!  Sweet@  I cant wait to see if Elly can get a read on her, I just know it is going to be amazing  :)

I am a little frightened for Tanya.  Her slutty ways will get her killed, I just know it.  I think her pyre is in her future if she lays one finger on Jazz or E.  Dont you agree?  lol

See ya next time 'round BB!!!!  *hugs*



Author's Response:

Yep, Bella's a bitchy badass:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Ok, Elly got a bit of a reprieval, but he's still an ass  -_-

So, wow, thats alot for one girl.... yeah.

I loved it, of course, as usual, I am eagerly awaiting your next update darlin'

 

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Yep, Elly isn't all bad...just a smidge of an ass!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

*thinks while tapping chin*

Well.... can I chase the puppies and beat them with a newspaper for being so stupid?  Can I, can I, pllllleeeeeaaaaasssssee?!

*gives you the 'Shrek- puss in boots' face*

If they come back and seek revenge on Bella, they obviously have brain damage.  I mean, WTF, stupid mutts. *grumbles*

 

I am seriously in love with this story BB, seriously.  Even though there is no Peter... yet. *winks*  I love this story, you are writing it into perfection, I am enjoying it emmensely.  I am eager to see what happens next :)

*huggles*



Author's Response:

Thank you, doll. Yes, you can  chase the puppies but watch that they don't go humping your leg now. :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

*continues to chase the puppies with rolled up newspaper*

Sam makes a u-turn and latches onto my leg.  He begins to vigorously vibrate against my shin.

"Argh!  You nasty mutt!  Get off!"  Sam dodges my swats at him.

"I'm trying to get off, so stop swinging at me!"  His vibrations get rougher.

I nearly lose my lunch at that point and take a wide swat at him, knocking him sideways off my leg.

Thanks for the warning BB   ;)

I enjoyed this chapter, the seemingly one-on-one with Esme, that led to Brother-to-sister chat, followed reverently by the oncoming ass-whoopin' by brother dearest on them nasty doggies.  beautiful :)

Now, whats this about a prophecy??  Intriguing!  I love it!

See ya next update BB!!  *hugs*



Author's Response:

I think Sam needs to visit the vet ;)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I really agree, Sam needs to go to the Vet.  *calls vet to schedule neutering*

I did enjoy this chapter.  The dogs dont have very good brain functions, they are a bit slow, so getting the full prophecy out of them is like talking to an infant and harder than pulling teeth.  Dumb dogs.

And as for the end of the chapter... Yowza!!  Hot tomales, yee haw!

Now, as for the clifflie, I wonder if it was Carlisle or Jasper?  Hmmm....

 

Loved it BB, see ya next update!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I wish that stress wasnt on Bella  :(  Dumb dogs!  *grumbles*

The vet called... Sam is just coming out of the anesthesia. *giggles*

 

I cant wait to see what happens next!!  :)



Author's Response:

*snorts* thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!

 

Ok, I am not going to be able to relax until I know what happened and what they saw.

Omg, you are a literary genius.  I cant tell you that enough BB!

I eagerly will be waiting for the next update!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I can tell you that it is interesting:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Holy shit, dodged a big bullet there!  To misinterpret why E looked away could have been disasterous.  Thank the Gods that he is just as stubborn as she is.

*giggles*

OK, to answer your questions- Yes, I absolutely dispise Aro.He is greedy and greed makes your stupid.

Next, I think that Marcus and Caius did get the raw end of the deal, and damn the guard for letting Aro do it.  They were supposed to protect ALL THREE KINGS, not just the deranged one.  I will miss Marcus a great deal.

And as for the drama queen, HELL YES!  She is causing all of this soap opera worthy shit, and its just not fair to the Cullens, or the Denalis.  Poor Esme, Carmen and Eleazar, they are stuck into this drama, they dont deserve it really.

See ya next update BB!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I have to say, this chapter turned out quite nicely :)

You Rock, dear BB!!!!

Sweet ass lemonade as well, if I must say so... and I must, I absolutely must *giggles*

See ya nexy update BB!!

 

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

*dabs eyes to clear tears*

*tries to catch breath*

BB... I cannot express how much this chapter meant to me.

*starts to cry happy tears again*

Peter... and I...

im the same chapter...

Thank you BB, thank you so much!!! *clears throat and gets down to business*

Oh my goodness, I hope she can do this without killing everyone!!!

Poor Bella.  She finally gets laid then BAM!

Aro get jealous and wants some.

Creepy old fart!

 



Author's Response:

Just don't let Charlotte catch you. I hear she is a real bitch ;)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow! I cant believe that!!  Aro was so stupid.

He should have known better. 

Im trembling slightly BB, I really cant wait til theres more :)

*hugs*

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Wow, touch and go for a minute.  She is so powerful.  At least the Volturi are gone

*sighs with relief*

Awesome!  Loved it!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

OMG, beautiful BB!!!  They really needed that.  She and Carlisle can let go of the past and concentrate on the future.  Wonderfully written dear.

 

I missed you yesterday!!  *hugs*



Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OMG  *blinks rapidly to clear tears*

I loveyou so much BB.  This story is pure perfection.  Out of all of your stories I have read (which is all but 2 now) this is my favorite.

So beautiful.  There isnt a dry eye reading this story, I guarantee it.

Love it, love you BB!!!!

*tackleglomphugglesquishies you*



Author's Response:

Thank you:) It was certainly different and it was a challenge but I enjoyed it alot!

Summary:

Isabella Swan visits the wrong side of La Push Beach. Jacob and Paul have something lemony to say about it. But when their little three-some games continue, and feelings are caught, what couple is left standing? Rated XXX. My first threesome.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jacob, Bella/Paul
Genre: Erotica
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 108.9
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166105 Read Count: 93768
[Report This] Published: 24 Oct 2010 Updated: 19 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Sex on the Beach Outtake 4

Loved the update.

I am afraid of the sequel though.

Unless it shows Tanya burning at the stake.

Then I will peruse it.

I really really really dont want this 4some to dissapate.



Author's Response:

:D thanks for reading hon! and dont be afraid. its just a little drama.

 

hehehe

 

xo

 

Cam

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Drama, Love and Lationships

Wow.  Awesome, the boys are back!  Now, get them home!!

 

I want Tanya to die... slowly and painfully.  I really hate her. -_-



Author's Response:

:D thanks for reading hon.

Aww we can't lose tanya yet! she's our little villan! lol

 

hugs!

 

Cam

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Never Gonna Be Alone

Loved the last chapter.  I love that she chose both, you are in the right about that.  I am a big fan of the Triad fics :)

I still wish Tanya would fall off a cliff or just dissappear... I really hate her.

*growls*

Loved it!!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

 

lol tanya can't disappear yet.

 

big hugs

 

CAM

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Sex on the Beach Outtake 1

I loved this outtake.  I hope Paul reaalizes now he is needed and wanted and wont take off again.

 

I want to wait till the sequel for the paternity.  It will bring more anticipation for the sequel and I want that more than wanting to know paternity.  I want to see Tanya have Karma bight her in the ass.

Yes, I am evil... but only when it comes to Tanya and Victoria.



Author's Response:

LOL thanks for the review hon.

 

xoxo

 

Cam

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Sex on the Beach Outtake 2

I enjoyed this chapter greatly!

I cant wait to read the epilogue!  I am excited for the sequel :)

Infatuation by stellabella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 431]
Summary:

18 year old Edward meets Bella shortly before her 15th birthday and can't get her off his mind. Convinced that she is too young and that a guy like him doesn't deserve someone as pure as her, he tries to keep his distance. Shortly before Bella turns 18 they meet again. Will Edward be able to stay away? And is Bella really as innocent as he thinks?

Story rated NC-17 for sexual content, age play, language. Slightly Domward. EPOV.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63304 Read Count: 99827
[Report This] Published: 07 Nov 2010 Updated: 22 May 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Leap

oh wow, so hawt :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 May 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Sensation

OMGosh, finally~!

*giggles*  That was great :)



Author's Response:

Thank you =) I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 May 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Control

Ugh... I hate cliffies :(

Love the chapter, anything that includes a Mr Marcus lol

I cant wait to see who attacked Eddie!

*smacks self for sounding like airhead Tanya*



Author's Response:

I apologize for the cliffie!!!

But I hope you'll find that the (sadly the final) chapter I've just posted was worth it! Did you guess right who the attacker was? Thanks for reading =)!!!

PS: There's a little bit more of Mr Marcus in it! ;)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Formation

My gawd, that weas fucking beautiful *wipes away tear*

A perfect playtime. *sigh*

All We Knew by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 371]
Summary:

Bella Swan returns home after ten years and a bad marriage. Will she be able to find herself? What if her past catches up to her? AH & NC-17 for language and possible lemons. B/E, A/J,R/EM

 

awk


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 143567 Read Count: 108675
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 14 Apr 2012
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Damn, that was just nasty of Bells.

Poor Angela.  Poor Garrett.  Poor Ed.

She need a spanking!  Bad Bells!

lol

Love it BB!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

lol, She's just hormional. Plus, if my hubby did that, I would probably be a little pissed too!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Holy shit balls batman!  WTF?!

That was a very tense chapter!  Poor Peter, he was just trying to help :)

Gotta love Peter!

This story rocks, and its a tense time now, I am eagerly looking forward to the nest chapter :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Started out kinda hard, but ended with a frickin hilarious bang!!

Charlie, poor guy, having someone like Lauren pining after him...

eeew, just... ew.

 

*pushes 1 on cell for speed dial*

"Hey darlin'." crooned through the earpiece giving me a shiver.

"Hey, Peter.  Head on out there, I am sure you will find that low life piece of trash woman at her house."  I spat out with vigor.

"On my way sweetie, Charlotte said to make sure you turn the heating blankets on, you won't be puttin' your britches back on all day if she gets her way."  I could here the smile in Peter's voice as he informed me of what was to come when he and Char got home.

Home.  It only feels that way with them here.  I smile widely at that thought.

"Ok, sugar, from the lack of response I figure you are picturing what she is gonna do to you when we get there."  Peter chuckles breaking me out of my daydream.

I clear my throat and shake my head to clear the haze.  "Thanks for that, Petey, I have something positive to look forward to, other than the ceasing of existance of the vile creature that is Karen Newton.  Don't get any on ya, babe!"

Peter lets out a short belly laugh before he replies "Baby, I will swim back to you so that all you will smell on me is freashwater.  Later, darlin'."

I sigh in longing "Later Pete, kiss Char for me, I'll be waiting."

"I know you will sweetie."

I close my eyes and sink back into my daydream as I snap my phone closed.

~

 

I am in love with every one of your stories BB, I cannot deny it. 

I cannot wait to see what happens next!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Sugar, when are you going to write your own story!! You totally need to!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Well, I think Eddie should get her a ring like the next day, then they hop a plane to Vegas and elope.

Then the baby can be big news in itself. :)

Love the chapter BB!!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow...

Loved it BB

*hugs*



Author's Response: Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Damn, that shit is scary.

I feel so much for Bells.  Its not fair to her.  That bastard.

*growls*

I cant wait to see what happens next :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Tough chapter for her.  Wow, that was intense.

Loved it BB!!  See ya next update!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I think that this story is coming along greatly.  I do hope that something develops between E and B sooner rather than later.  They can help each other, be each others shoulder to cry on or body to lean on.

I do want to see B get this guilt off her chest though, so she can breathe again.

See ya next update BB!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

THank you:) It's kind of a slow burn, but not at the same time. I hope it comes across that way as the chapters progress:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

BB, I love where this is going :)

At least some air got cleared tonight!

I am anxious to see the purpose of Emmett being single? *ponders*

*gets sidetracked by something shiny*

Uh... huh?

Anyways... See ya next update BB!!!!
*hugs*



Author's Response:

lol, girl, you crack me up!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

GAAAAAHHHHHHHH BB!!!!!!  WTF was up with that cliffie?!?!?!

*grumbles under breath*

Ok, I really liked this chapter.  She was feeling a bit better.

But now... who knows whats gonna happen...

Oh yeah...

YOU DO!!

*growls*

SMACK!

"Ouch!  Peter, whatd'ya do that for?!"  *rubs rearend*

Peter snickers "Well sweet cheeks, ya have no reason to growl at BB, she knows what she is doin' darlin'.  Now apologize or I will not let ya read for a week." Peter mischeviously smirks and tries to hide a chuckle unsuccessfully.

My eyes grow wide at that.  I let out a hugs sigh and answer.

"Sorry BB for getting upset.  I know you have a reason for leaving it there."  I mumble our staring at my shoes like they are the most interesting thing existing.

"Good job darlin', now lets go watch a movie"  Peter grabs my hand and we head to the living room to watch The Last Airbender.

 

Great update BB!!!  See ya at the next one!!  ;)

*hugs*



Author's Response: I waited seven whole chapters before leaving a cliffie. THat might be a record for me.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

*wipes tears away*

I cannot believe that she has to go and face that monster again.

DAMNITOL!!

*starts to shake with rage*

I could really find the time to go make him dissappear for good.  *ponders making Mike a missing person case*

See ya next update BB!!! :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Hmm, perhaps, Petey is available.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Ooooh!  A peek at the inner workings of Charlie Swan?!

He is diabolical!! 

*shifty eyes*

*whispers* But you didn't hear that from me...

*ducks down and starts crawling away humming Mission Impossible*

LOL  :)

Loved it BB, See ya next time!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

*rolls around on the floor laughing* Oh, sugar, Charlie is diabolical!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I EXTREMELY enjoyed a look into Papa Swan's head!!

Strap on the six-shooters pops, There's a bad man to hunt down!!

*pictures Charlie Swan in leather chaps, a ten gallon hat, and six shooters, getting ready to draw*

*falls over laughing so hard breathing is impossible*

*snorts loudly to breath*

That is such a funny picture!!

Loved it!  See you next update!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I hope you do more in his POV too! :)

Hehee... Mike won't make it too far if he does get off, which I hope for my own sanity he doesn't. *quirks eyebrow*

"Don't get cocky cupcake, BB know what she is doing."  Peter chastized me as he walked over to the computer desk.

"I know Petey, but it just... I don't know!  GRRR!  What an ass!  Royally Peter!  He doesn't belong on this earth anymore!"  My voice getting louder towards the end of my rant.

"Don't you worry none darlin', he won't get anywhere"  Peter winked with a smug smile plastered across his face.

I sighed "I guess you're right Peter."  I bowed my head in submission to the realities and facts.

~

I am really getting into this story BB!!  I love it!

See ya next update!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Trust in Peter, Sugar. He knows I won't let a dirtbag like Mike off.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

*marks The Newtons down for dinner.... for Peter and his nomad friends*

3 for 1 boys!  dinner time y'all!! *cackles evilly*

*hugs*



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:) Tell Peter to make it hurt:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

God I want the defense to fall on its face SO BAD!!

God bless a good James! *hugs you for that*

You are THE ONLY author I read that has good James'.  Bless your heart :)

*giggles*

*hugs*

 



Author's Response:

Well, James can't be a dick all the time.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

*stares blankly at the screen*

Well.... That couldn't have gone better *smirks*

*rubs Peter's shoulders*

Its just about dinnertime honey :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

And the 'truth' will set you FREE!!!

Enjoy Hell you Bastard!!!

*Peter licked his lips*

"He was just a little too tangy for my taste."  Peter declares as he takes a seat beside me.

"I bet his mother won't taste any better, buthis father should taste alright." I declared turing to see him using a paper clip as a toothpick.

"I don't doubt that at all sugar." Peter smiles and throws his arm over my shoulders.

"Well, I hope the nomads you sent over there like spicy, Mrs. Newton is a spitfire.  They will have heartburn, I guarantee it." I state with finality.

Peter snickers "Got that shit right baby."  He kisses me on the cheek.

"Eww!  No, Peter, gross!  Go scrub your mouth, I don't want that nasty piece of shit's smell on me.  Ergh!"

Peter struts off laughing loudly "HA!  Don't you worry none darlin', I cleaned myself off before I got here."

I glare back "I don't care, go wash!"

He turns towards the bathroom chuckling all the way.

~

Yay BB!!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Tell Peter I said many thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I have this feeling... its like I just know...

Karen Newton is going to be found in a ditch alongside of the road somewhere.

Beaten with a tire iron...

and her throat cut...

to make it look like she bled out.

Just to make sure noone notices the lack of blood content.

*snickers*

Bitch.

Hey, I'm just sayin'.

Loved the chapter BB, At least she can open up a little more now, all thanks to Edward.

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Beautiful BB :)

I am off to shop!  I need a hat for the winter...

preferably grey.... with a Crest or something on it...

to match my gloves lol

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Well, good luck:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!

You go girl!! Yes!!!

*parties like its 1979*

Uh, I mean... wait... what year is it again??

*giggles*

Loved it BB!!!!

*picks you up and cyber-spins you in a circle bear hug*



Author's Response:

*falls down dizzy* Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

LOL, Charlie is cute!

Man!!  Rose is a firecracker! lol

Love is in the air...

everywhere I look around...

*swoons*

*hugs*



Author's Response:

lol, I heart Charlie:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

GASP!

CHARLIE!!!!  DADDY!!!!!

*breaks down in sobs*

please, BB, please let Charlie be safe!!

Great writing BB!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

OMG they said I love you!!!!

Such cute kids :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Family bonding is a beautiful thing, especially after a tragedy.

I wonder what Tyler has found out?!

I have a feeling I am going to have some nomad dinners coming up probably!

*snickers*

*hugs*



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

This chapter was, to put it simply, fuckhot!

Sweet jiblits BB!!!  I need a cold shower now!

Peter and Charlotte are in Chicago at the moment...

*grumbles about inconvenient timing*

Now if I was to write an actual story BB, then my fuckawesome reviews would be shorter!

*pouts*

But, I will think about it :)  And I will let you know first, for sure :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

I would take shorter reviews, even if I would miss the fuck out of them, to see you writing something of your own. Perhaps, something with Peter and Charlotte....

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

*tries to hide giggles but fails miserably*

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

send some love to Peter and Charlotte BB!!

*snorts*

Thats priceless!

I love that Bella is getting her friends back!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

*takes a deep breath*

Gotta love sweetward, right?  :)

Sweetmett too lol

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

No need to apologize dear.  We are your devoted readers, and we understand that family comes first.

I loved this chapter, Em and Ro, and then Charlie and Bells. 

Beautiful BB.

*hugs you tight*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wow, heavy and sweet!

Love it BB!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh wow!!

Hot blooded, check it and see,

Got a fever of one hundred three!

Well... that was... great :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Awwww!  OMG so adorable!

Love it BB!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Morning naughtiness and some bonding with sister- from-another-mister.

 

Great chapter. I cant wait to see what happens next!

*hugs*

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Hmmm, fuck like bunnies... she is on antibiotics... no condom...

YES!!!!!  FUCKIN A BB!!!!!!! 

*starts to twirl around and dance all over the office*

I see a baby in the future...

Oh Em GEE!!!!

lol

*hugs*



Author's Response:

lmao!!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

*looks down at doodles and the small BBQ stain on my green shirt*

I think Eddie will say that he is excited and he is going to pick her up and twirl her around, and then she is going to puke on his shoes!

*giggles*

*looks back up at your with big doe eyes and smile sweetly*

*hugs*



Author's Response:

I knew you had some BBQ!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Oh Em GEE BB, That was effin beautiful!!!

*wipes away happy tears*

I just want to hug them!

Oh, they babies are getting married and having a baby of their own! *sniff*

I loved this chapter BB!  Especially protective Dr Bear Char....

*swoon*

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Well, Bells was being a bit snippy, but I dont blame her.

Its great she is standing up for herself :)

Awesome!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Don't you love hormones:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

The Tazmanian Terror that is Alice!

Gotta love her :)

I hope Bells feels better very soon.  I am worried what the sickness is doing to her and the baby's health.

love it BB!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks, hon:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Beautiful chapter BB!!

Everything is going to be ok :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

What the MFF?!?!?!?!?!?!

Oh no she didnt!

Oh I cant WAIT to see what happens next!

*sits and eagerly anticipates Jessica's demise*



Author's Response:

Her did...

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

OMG I hope Jess gets run over by a bus...

*dreams of her demise*

Loved the whole thing BB, sweet jeebus!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

A girls night out... for a pregnant girl?

Oh dear... the cats comin out of the bag now :P  lol



Author's Response:

Even Pregnant girls need a night out:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

I was absolutely thrilled when I saw the update for this story BB!!!

I enjoyed their girls night out, they had just enough fun to ease a bit of stress.

And it is so cool that Rose and Emmett are there, at the point they can talk about marriage.

Their wedding is going to be wonderful!

Love it!  I cant wait to vote for you!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

*sneezes*

Ugh, you know how to take away the aches and pains of being sick :)

I loved this chapter and I cant wait to see what happens when the others find out about the twins, you have me dear.

*cocks head to the side trying to figure it out looking like a confused puppy*

*hugs*



Author's Response:

thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

*hugs*

Loved it!

I am scared of Jessica though... crazy floozy can cause trouble...



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sweets:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Oh I loved that!   Em's proposal was beautiful  :)

 

I love it BB!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

OMG, I have a nook :)  I know what you mean!!  *giggles*

Great chapter!  What a surprise!!!  Yee Haw!!!!

I didnt see that one coming!  No wonder Charlote was trying to hide back her smile and laughter lol.

Love it, BB!!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Don't you love it! Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

*grabs you in a fierce bear hug*

 

Oh, you want us to believe you are all mean and stuff, especially with these evil cliffies and such.  But you're not!  You fluffy and cuddly!  I just want to squeeze you!

*squeezes*

I loved this chapter, and I am looking forward to the next even more!  :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

OMG!  Freaking great BB!!!!!

Bethy and Luke, beautiful :)

*hugs*

Summary: Past Featured Story

Single mom, Bella, and single dad, Edward, meet as their boys start school. Their boys become fast friends but will Edward and Bella? Or will they become more than friends? AH&NC-17 for language and possible lemons.

tc

Banner by busymommy

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Finished, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Chances Saga, My favs past present and future , to read
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145690 Read Count: 191589
[Report This] Published: 11 Nov 2010 Updated: 04 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

*wipes at eyes... again*

 

Thanks for the tissue warning that I either did not see or ignored when I saw this update.

 

I never follow directions anyway, so I will just settle on giving you shit about the tissue warning...

It is needed for this whopper  ;)

Love it, BB!!! 

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh wow, I never knew a story could hit so close to home.  I guess its like it more because its an AH story, and because your characters are so deep

I love your writing so much BB!!!  I look forward to more :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

*hugs*

I love it!!

When I went shopping for my son the first time I was lost.  I only played Baksetball, Volleyball and Softball.  When it came to gearing up for soccer I was in a whole new ball park.

The salesman loaded me down with socks, shoes, ball, boy straps (easy to get kicked in soccer he said) and ankle braces.  I walked out of that store with two huge bags of stuff.

It was frightening. lol

See ya next update BB!!  :)



Author's Response:

My boys play football...I understand!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OMG that was GREAT interaction between those four  :)

I love this story!

See ya next update *winjs* lol

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I will review forever so you are encouraged to write more and more :)

I love your stories!

I will see you next chapter :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you, doll:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OMG BB!!!!!  This story is tugging on my heart strings so hard!!!

I LOVE IT!!!

*looks at you underneath eyelashes*

Is Peter gonna be here?  *gives you the puppies and pout*

*ahem*

Anywhoo!  Loved it BB!!  I understand Bells POV about Lauren.  I dont like her anyway. *sneers*

As for Sarah's family, screw them!  They wanted to kill Anthony!  Asshats *growls*

See ya next update BB!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

So far, Peter is not in it yet.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

*cracks up laughing*

Talk about the epitome of AWKWARD!!  *grins*

I just love me some goofball oaf Emmett!

Love it BB!!  See ya next chapter!! 

*hugs*

*runs back into living room to finish movie with Peter*  ;)



Author's Response:

Don't get to close. I heard he bites ;)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Best believe I will be over there voting on the 20th :)

Oh, Peter said to tell you that the sentiment is mutual ;)

I really like this chapter.  I am anxious to get over to All We Knew.  I have been dying to see who came in with Charlie.

See ya next chap. BB

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks, honey:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

*freeze frames E and B and runs in between them*

IT'S NOT ROCKET SCIENCE Y'ALL!!!  MAN MEETS WOMAN!

*grabs their hands and interlocks their fingers together*

THEY GET TOGETHER!  EASY PEASY Y'ALL!!!

Ok, so maybe not so much....

but, I can hope the best for them :)

Loved it BB, see ya next update!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

ROTFLMAO!!!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I very wonderful chapter BB.

Beautiful.  It was exactly what Bella needed.

The girls are good for her.

Love it!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

*gets up to go cry in corner*

*stops to review*

That was beautiful BB...

*turns to go to corner*

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

*reviews to definitely keep you happy*  ;)

Always showing some love for you darlin'!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Beautiful!

Yay!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

*sighs dreamily*

Once again, in the world of the Cullen clan and Bella, EVERYONE sees what those two stubborn blockheads can't... They are a match made in heaven.

*giggles*

Esme is a sneaky cheeky monkey, eh? lol, that was mom-awesomeness.

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

OMG!  Yay!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OMG that was beautiful BB!!!

So cute... I love it!

*hugs*



Author's Response: Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Yay, awesome!!

Take some pointers from the little ones, dears!

*smiles fondly at Ed and B*

Loved it BB!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

*giggles uncontrolably*

OMG, out of the mouths of babes!  :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

OMG, beautiful!!

BB, I love it!

You can't help but love these kids!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

You having fun with this story, makes it so much better for us having fun with it too!!!

I love it!

 

Even though you DID leave a cliffie.

*grumbles*

I hope she doesnt ruin what the kids are just getting around to figuring out.

*imagines taking out Lauren*

Love it, BB!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)