Penname: Siobhan_Whitlock [Contact] Real name: Cherish
Member Since: 13 Feb 2010
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I read Twilight Fan fics constantly.  I have read and reviewed over 11,000 in just this past year.  I plan on reading alot more.  I have been addicted to our Twilight montage of characters ever since I came by a waiting line for Eclipse at our local book store.  Hooked ever since I was.  Then I was on Twilight chat and found out about the amazing and wonderful world of Fan Ficiton.  Oh my, there are no words for my addiciton.  Lets just say I love Jasper/Bella stories the most, I have no qualms about triads or polymory, and I wish more than anything that vampires were real, I lived in Ireland, I was changed by Siobhan herself and that a version of a Whitlock brother was my mate.  There are no vampires that compare to Jasper and Peter Whitlock.  Nuff' said.


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Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella is found six years after she was kidnapped. Can her friends and family save her from the pain? DEALS WITH DARK SUBJUCT MATTER AND GRAPHIC ABUSE. NC-17 for language, violence, and just about everything esle you can imagine. Read with caution.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, butterflybetty stories to read , I Whitlock's read , G8or Favor8s Read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, to read
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 114196 Read Count: 126021
[Report This] Published: 23 Sep 2010 Updated: 06 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Awesome chapter, I love breakthroughs!!!  :)

 

I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!

 

*tries to go back into daydream of Peter...riding a horse...bareback...*

*swoon*

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Man, I am gonna miss Garrett and Kate...

and... *gets choked up*

...and Peterrr....*breaks into uncontrollable loud sobs*

 

Ok, ok.  Love it, she is getting better, and it is showing.  I love the strength she is already showing. :)

I am anxious to see what happens next!!  :)



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

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Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Holy shit!  So thats what they really thought?  Fuck them!

*pulls Jazz and Ro into a bear hug*

These kids are better off without their negativity.  Please tell me karma bited them in the ass for this later... please.  *clenches eyes shut and wishes*

 

Great update, alot came out of this chapter that needed to.  I am so very hooked on this story, I look forward to more :)

*huggles*



Author's Response:

Thank you, doll:)

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Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

OMG yes!!!  I am glad she is taking E with her!!  I am so glad we are well on the way to recovery!!!  *turns on applause light*

 

I dont know about the room... this is gonna be hard... yikes!

*crowd gasps*

See you next chapter!  *turns on applause light again*

~end scene~  *gigglesnorts*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

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Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, this story is really intense!  I love reading your stories, I have about read every one of them *blushes*

But I'm not some wierd stalker or anything, I swear! I just really like your stories :)



Author's Response:

As long as you aren't a wierd stalker ;) Lol, thank you:)

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Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thank goodness for Emmett!  I just want to scoop her up and take away the pain! 



Author's Response:

Me too:(

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Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Emmett is without a doubt, the most picture perfect big brother in the world!  I love is POV.  It gives us that outside look of what it was like after she was found that is just perfect :)  I love it!



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THank you:)

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Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

wow, big moment there!  I love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Huge moment!

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Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh wow... here we go!

This is great, such a great way to keep the suspense up :)  I love it!



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Thank you:)

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Date: 03 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Love it~!

 

I dont think it was too soon, he was all she had for 6 years, even if it was only in thought, he gave her strength to live to come home.  I think its written perfectly :)

 

Besides, now that the declarations are out there, we can concentrate on everything else, which I am eagerly awaiting  LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Holy shit, that was intense.  I love it.

I really enjoyed E's pov, I think you wrote him perfectly :)  Of course, you always do!



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Thank you:)

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Wow, intense!  That was an awful dream.  Poor B.

 

Thank goodness for 6 awesome parents and 5 super sibling/friends!

 

Great chapter

:)



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Thank you:)

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

*starts to vibrate in seat*

*starts to breathe faster in short panting breaths*

OH.

MY.

GAWD!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG ITS PETER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  *starts to cry happy tears*

 

Ok, I am in love with this chapter, and he got at Mallory right off the bat, SWEET!

 

*grabs you up in a bear hug and twirls you in circles*  Thank You!



Author's Response:

lol, you're welcome! I love Peter:)

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Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Yikes!  What the hell was Mike thinking??  Idiot *grumbles under breath*

 

Awesome chapter, I cant wait to see Peter next... I mean.. Uh.. I cant wait to see what happens next!  *blushes tomato red*



Author's Response:

lol *snort*  YOu are so cute:)

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Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

A major step to healing is next, and I am eagerly anticipating that step for her.

 

And I hope she presses charges.  If they bully Bella they could bully anyone.  Next time their victim may not survive.  I really hate Bullies.

 

Great chapter, I am excited for the next chapter, as always :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow!  I love it!

 

Um, what is Carlisle up to??

 

I am excited to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Beautiful!  The road to recovery is a hard one.  I love the way you have all three families united as one to help her. :)



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Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Wow, you got that right, SERIOUSLY intense chapter.  Wow.

With all of them together the healing is going to be ten fold, alot of support goes a long way.

Beautiful.

See ya next update! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Some parents just dont understand.  SHe went through hell for six years while their kids cried for a week or so.

Ppppfffffhhhht *rolls eyes*  Morons. -_-

 

Love the update, I cant wait til she gets better and starts kicking ass.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

*ties rope and bull whip to hip*

*lights the torches and hands them off to everyone*

 

I think its time for a lynchin' and a hangin'. *draws in a southern twang*

 

Now this was intense!  I love it!  I really cant wait to see what happens next!

 

*builds a brick wall behind us to prevent any further steps backwards*



Author's Response:

Thank you for making me giggle. I needed that and I love your review!!

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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

*gasps out all the air in my lungs*  Holy SHIT!

So THATS what Carlisle was up to..... damitol! And I just knew.......

 

Peter *swoon*

was more than just a history teacher!  *bats eyelashes and eyes glaze over*

 

And whattya know!  Ol' Garrett comes into the picture, the voice of reason, of course!  He has a way with words, dont ya think? :)

See ya next update!!  *runs off to Forks HS to stalk Peter*



Author's Response:

My Peter always is more than just a pretty face:)

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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

True, she needs that anger.... but it still hurts.  Wow, my chest is still clenching.

 

Loved this chapter, Garrett is awesome.  But not as awesome as Peter *swoon*

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Holy crap WOW!!!!  *trembles*

That was intense!

Loved it :)



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

*runs over to hug her*  Damitol!

Poor girl!



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Thank you:)

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Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wow!!  Awesome pov!  Its good to hear what Garrett has to say.

Love it!

 



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Thank you:)

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Very nice  :)  I think you did the right thing, it was something that B needed to know before letting go completely.



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Thank you:)

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow, intense chapter, loved it!!

 

There is gonna be some major drama at school, isnt here. 

WTF is with letting Lauren and Jessica back in?!  I hope there is a reason they are back, or else they are gonna be a nomad's dinner and dessert if I have anything to do with it.

*jumps on cell and calls AU Peter*

It rang twice before a chuckle resonated through the line into my ear. "Hey beautiful.  So, you need a nomad that is close the the Olympic Penninsula eh?  Well, I think I have just the lucky, or unlucky for the taste matter, raomer for the job." He cackled once more before saying he would take care of it on his end.

I grinned from ear to ear as I replied, "You always have my back Pete.  Thanks again for doing this for me.  These chicks need to become statistics sooner rather than later"

Peter full out belly laughed.  "It seems I am rubbin' off on you a bit there darlin'."

"That you are, Peter dear, but it is not a bad thing at all.  I will see you soon hopefully."  I sighed in longing.

"Darlin', you will see me sooner than you think. Till then sweet cheeks." That was all I heard before the line went dead.

*giggles*  See you next update BB!!!!



Author's Response:

DAmn, I can barely type with as hard as I am laughing right now!! That was freaking perfect!!

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Oh crap...  that went all kinds of wrong... yikes!

 

*runs over and envelopes Peter in a bear hug*

Hush now, its not your fault Peter *glares at Garrett*

 

Well, We kinda knew it wasnt gonna be all rainbows and unicorns.

I cant wait to see where you take us next.  :)



Author's Response:

lol, thanks :)

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Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Ah... Thats my que :)

*pushes Pete's speed dial*

"Is there something you need to tell me there darlin'?" He says after only one ring.

"Yes, ButterflyBetty says 'Hey!' She asked me to tell you.  Is that what you meant?" I answer.

I can hear the smile in his voice as he relies "Well, thats not quite right, didn't she ask to say 'hey' to 'Sweet Pete'? Context can mean alot there sweet cheeks."

"Oh sorry, didn't know I had to be so literal"  I snark.  "Anyway Pete, I think the next headline of the Forks Examiner is gonna read 'No Leads On Missing Teen Girls, Authorities Stumped'.  What do ya think?"

Peter chuckles "Well sweet cheeks, I think that sounds just about right, I already made the call."

"Thanks Peter, I love that ability of yours." I inwardly chuckle knowing what is coming next.

Peter snorts "Its not a damned ability, its a curse!  I just know shit, some of the time.  Its a pain in the ass really."

I can't hold it any more and bust out laughing "Oh Petey, I know how to get your gizzard!"

He chuckles darkly "Oh darlin', you are in for it now." Then the line goes dead.

Oh shit....

*takes off on a dead run to hide in the nearest crowd*

 

Loved it BB, I am glad B got to assert herself in fron tof some of her peers, the all needed that.  See you next time!!

 



Author's Response:

Ok, when in the hell are you going to write your own story  because I would love to read it!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

*is stunned speechless*

Umm...

*clears throat* Well now...I...Uh...well, its like...I mean... SHIT!

*grumbles under breath* I still think they should come up missing...

I feel no sympathy for those girls what so freaking ever!

I have faith :)  There still gonna get it ;)



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

*shrugs shoulders*  I am really not much of a writer.  So I enjoy reading what others write and watching their stories come to life in my imagination.

I dont know if I will ever write my own story, but if I do, you will be the first to know ;)

It will definitely involve me (Siobhan)...

and Peter, of course... *figets in seat a little*

so , it will be AU and non-canon of course. 

Now, about your update.  :)  I LOVE IT!!

I think it was excellent for all of them to go through the relaxation methods.  It also did good for the adults to see Bells spar with Garrett to see she could defend herself now, she was healing.

If they had not witnessed that, I really dont think Renee would have let go as easily as she did.

I cant wait to see what you have planned for the clan next!  :)

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Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

*stares at the screen frozen in shock and jaw on the floor*

Holy SHITballs!  That came out of left field!  Poor Garrett!!

*cell phone starts to ring*

I'm... too sexy for my cat,

Too sexy for my cat...

Oh pussy... oh pussy cat...

"Hi Peter.  I take it you knew about this?"  I ask in an authorative tone.

"By the time my spidey senses were tinglin' they had already found him.  I dispatched a group of midwest nomads to meet you in Chicago." Reter answered, sounding forlorned.  "If I only could have had the feeling earlier..."

I stop his train of thought right there.  "Peter, honey, you cannot dwell on the coulda, woulda, shoulda's.  Just be thankful that you can help now and he will survive.  You just think of a positive outcome and be there for him."  Tears fall relentlessly down my cheeks by the end of my rant.

"You're right sugar.  Will you be ok?" Peter asks in a soft tone.

I choke back the sobs threatening to break through.  "Yeah, I am just worried and pissed, you know?  I'll be fine."

Peter takes a deep breath and I mimic his action.

"Alright then sweet cheeks, I have some other business to attend to.  You get some rest and BB will let us know whats going on in the next update.  G'nite darlin'." 

"I will see you in my dreams Sweet Pete.  G'nite." 

Great chapter, love the twist!  I cannot wait to see what is going to go down in Chicago!  I am so excited!!   *hugglesquishies you *

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Peter is right, we can't blame ourselves...

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

OH!!!!  Thats perfect!!!  Bella will truly be able to have a piece of payback!!!! 

That is SO FREAKIN COOL!!!!!!!

 

OMG, I am so excited to see what happens next!  Sweet Twist my dear :)



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

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Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

There is alot in there!  Tia is gonna be 'Bellafide' and she in gonna lose her attitude r4eal quick  *smirk*

Love it!  See ya next time!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Wow!  Emotional overload for our family here!  I love how you wrote this chapter.  Organized chaos, simply put.  Very well written.

Now, we have psycho Tia?  Holy shit, now what?! lol

Bella is gonna be bad ass from now on, this is such an awesome story :)

See ya next update BB  *hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks, doll!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

*hugs*

Huge and very emotional.  I cried with them all!

I loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

*wipes the trail of tears off cheeks*

This was a very, VERY emotional chapter!  Oh my, the feeling of exposure, knowing others not only know, but have seen what Bella went through, it makes me feel dirty.  I feel what is portrayed in your writing.  Poor Bella.  Crap, she needs a damn break!

*clenches fists*

Why cant they just leave her alone!

*clears throat*

Ok, well now, I am really getting into this story.  I have told you before, your stories make us readers feel like we are part of them, feeling like its right there happening and we are watching it unfold for real.  You are amazing, I can never tell you that enough. *hugglesquishies you*

I make a kick ass Prosecutor, a real ball-buster! *snickers*

Oh Alec is gonna get it, hard, after I get done with him.  Wait until men in the clink get news of what he has done.  Child abusers, especially rapists, dont live long after being put away.  They get what they did done to them.  In the clink, cons dont look too kindly on child rapists and abusers and take care of them quickly.Abusing a child in any way is a death warrant in jail.  Hasta Luego Alec! *chuckles darkly*



Author's Response:

I put so much of myself in all my stories, but especially in this one. It's one thing for Bella to know that they know what they did to her but for her to know that they've seen it, is...just something completely different. I sobbed like a baby while rereading it yesterday and I've read it all a hundred times. Yes, you make a kick ass prosecutor!! I though of you as I was rereading that part:)

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Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Wow, that was HUGE moment!!  But I agree with you, they were very ready for that to happen.  Will and Cat dont deserve such a loving family.  Karme will come back and bite them in the ass.  :)

Beautiful.  'nuff said  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

*hurriedly hides Wil and Cat voodoo dolls behind the couch*

Well!  This was a wonderful and insughtful chapter. *cleares throat*

I felt empowered with the strength shown in afronting the prisoners.  Thats touching and I for one felt that it strengthened the familial bond.  GO CHARLIE!!!  :)

Things are looking up for our family here.  Its beautiful.

*hugs* Thanks BB!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Get a couple pokes in for me ;)

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Awesome, Kate and Garrett can call Charlie dad, thats totally awesome  :)

 

I love it.  I look forward to the continuation of this in the next chapter.

 

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

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Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Its a good thing Lauren and Jessica's parents are being proactive.  They can get the help they need quickly.

Enjoyed this update alot.  I look forward to the next  :)



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Thank you:)

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Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

I feel for Angela.  She has no idea why Jessica and Lauren were like that in the first place.

I agree with her.

I still feel like they should become dinner for a couple of nomads.

Im just sayin'... *shrugs*

Loved the update, see ya next one!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

THanks:)

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Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I cant believe we are so close to the end...  *sniffles*

This was a great bonding chapter, they really needed that, B and Charlie.

I look forward to the next update and finding out what E has up his sleeve :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*gets gobsmacked in the face*

That was out of left field, and I LOVED IT!!!!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Epilogue

Wow.

*applause*

*hugs*



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Thank you:)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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When Edward moves to Forks with his sister, Esme, he is immediately drawn to the mysterous Bella Cullen. Will he be able to break through her tough girl act? Will she let him? Usual pairings, AH, NC-17 for language and possible lemons in later chapters.

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, Fighterward, to read
Chapters: 53 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 131302 Read Count: 128036
[Report This] Published: 26 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Feb 2011
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Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Well that will make a drunk made sober in a split second!  Whoa...

Seriously intense.

I read alot of fan fiction, on 4 different sights, and I know I am reading fiction.  Your stories, however, make me feel like they are real, like right there.  Its amazing to come across such amazing work, and I am glad I came across you. 

I seriously want to call the Italian Mafia and have them put the Cullens and the Masens under protection!  I am for real afraid of Aro.  My brain is trying to tell me its fiction, but the panic in my chest wont listen.

It takes a genius writer to do that.  So thank you for being such an amazing author.  *hugs*

See you next update!!



Author's Response:

Aw *wipes tears away* thank you:)

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Date: 30 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Wow, that was about 50 shades of fucked up there.  Classic FUBAR!!

 

I am glad Aro is gone *swipes clammy forehead*  That sick bastard had me worried!

Loved the update, especially Nolan getting his ass kicked!  Yee Haw Em-Effers!

See ya soon!  *hugs*



Author's Response:

Definate FUBAR!

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Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I really enjoyed this chapter!!!  *feels pulse quicken with excitement*

 

They are champion boxers, I am pulling for them!  Bells and Eddie FTW!!

 

*makes fake roaring crowd sound*  heehee

I think they will win their championship matches, they are superb fighters :)

*giggles and tackleglomphugglesquishies you*  XD



Author's Response:

You always make my laugh and smile when I read your reviews. THank you for that!

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Date: 05 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh my gosh!!!!!!  *sobs uncontrolllably*

Thats AWFUL!  She was scared out of her mind, they had no right to try and keep her hospitalized!  Dirty court system. *grumbles*

 

I really like how you wrote her story.  What a tragedy!

 

Excellent chapter, keep up the good work.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ooh!  I love it!

I can't wait to read more :)



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Thank you:)

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Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh wow!  lol, awesome :)  I knew she would be involved with the gym somehow.  That is so cool.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 29 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

LOL, fantastic!!!  That was great!  I am confused by all their reactions, Carlisle, Emmett and Jasper, but that will be explained though, Im sure.  You never leave us hanging for too long :)



Author's Response:

Yes, it will all be explained. I promise and thank you:)

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Date: 30 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh wow!!!  The age gaps just go to show that their parents had a healthy intimate life :)

And I cannot WAIT to see what you have in store for us on this one, I am anxiously awaiting the reveal :)

 

Ok, what is Lauren Mallory's problem??  Bitch needs slapped, thats for damned sure.  *plots Mallory's demise*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oops, Eddie did a big uh-oh *giggles*

 

Awesome though, next time I want Lauren to go down :)



Author's Response:

lol, thanks :)

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Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Oh my gosh, that was spectacular!  I love this chapter :)

 

He was all B needed.  E is going to help her through this!  Yay!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:) It was a very emotionally charged chapter. Walls were broken and trust was gained.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Hahahaha!!!!!  Carlisle the hard ass!!  B is gonna kick his ass in the ring *smirk*  Never mess with a girl's bike!



Author's Response:

I know, right?

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Date: 04 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Whoa!  Ouch, she thinks she killed them?!  Thats a total WTF moment there!

 

Loved the chapter, Now we see that E and B have more in common than we originally thought.  Keeps us readers on our toes :)  lol

 

I cant wait to read more!  I am anxiously awaiting when they go to the gym for their workout/training.  Is Carlisle going to be in the ring?  I see a red vision-hazed knockout in his immediate future. heehee  He is just begging for and ass kicking with his snappy mouth.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 06 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

*gasp*  Who is it?!?!

 

Is it Jacob?  Is it Peter? *swoon*

 

Duh duh DUH!!!!  *suspensful music shrills through the air*

Love it :)



Author's Response:

Neither!!! Muahahahahahaha

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Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Holy dramatic inserted word Batman!  That came out of nowhere!!  Awesome :)

 

Totally shocked by the Charlie and Renee bit.  Wow :)  I love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I am full of surprises!

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Date: 08 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

*gigglesnorts*  Car...Carlisle got... got PUNCHED!!  *doubles over in hysterics*

 

I feel bad for the bruised jaw that Em got *snickers* but Carlisle having a black eye is the perfect ending to a Mastercard priceless commercial!!

 

Renee and Charlie need to just leave.  I dont like them, they are giving off bad ju-ju vibes.  They are the cause for such a break down in B to begin with I think.

*tacklehugglesquishies you* Love the update!  I cant wait to see what that semi-cliffie leads to! *waggles eyebrows*



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I enjoyed this chapter emmensely!  Gotta love a little elevator action *giggles*

I cant wait to see the first tournament!!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

HOLY CRAP!!!!!  Thats a heck of a cliffie there!

*hugglesquishies you*  Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh man!!!  That was awesome BB!!!!!!  I am definitely gonna be on the edge of my seat waiting for more matches, you wrote those full of excitement!!! :)

 

What is up with 180Renee?  *snickers at nickname*  Is she Ice Queen, or lovey sister?  Ugh...  *rolls eyes at Renee*  Why is Charlie so bored all the time??  He reminds me of Marcus *cackles*

 

See you next update!!  *waves frantically then turns and trips on shoe laces*

 

THUNK!

*lifts up hand shakilly*  Im Ok!!



Author's Response:

lmao, thanks:) hope you didn't hurt yourself.

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Date: 13 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

LOL!!!!!  I love it!!  THe matches were awesome :)  I was scared for a minute with that last guy.

I cant wait for the interrogation, this is gonna be hilarious!  B and E are very smart, thus smart asses.  Em and Jazz are gonna blow their stacks! lol

 

I enjoyed this chapter immensely!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I enjoyed this chapter alot!  Ren is showing a softer side (thank goodness)  and what a shocker with Charlie, right?!  That was a totally awesome HOLY SHITE moment :)

 

See you next chapter!!  *hugglesquishies you*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Oh shoot!  I didnt even think about that!  Its easy to forget they are still dealing with high school when we are having so much fun reading about the tournament or their boxing in general.

I really enjoyed this chapter, I am gonna miss the boxing. 

I may have graduated 15 years ago, but I STILL loathe high school!  *snickers*

 



Author's Response:

Me too!!

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh my Gawd......  If Bella doesnt kick her ass, Im gonna!

*cracks knuckles*

 

I enjoyed this chapter very much.  E and B have similar humors lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Heehee, you had my lynch mob at 'headline'.  *smirks*

 

So, yeah, I guess this Lauren and her herd of bitch-ass cows need to go down alot quicker than the others. *flips open cell*

The phone didn't even finish a full ring.  "Well, well, darlin'.  Looks like You need my NomadsRUs skills sooner."  I swoon as he chuckles.

Well Sweet Pete, I am in need of one pronto."

I hear a quick intake of breath. "Darlin', I love it when you call me that."  A purr resonates over the line, causing my girly bits to tingle.

"I have you taken care of already hun.  They are waiting for the word go right on the outskirts of Hoquiam.  All they need is a call."

I squeal internally "Oh honey, you know what I need always."

He snorts "Did you ever doubt it?  They will be taken out at the word of your BB, then I will see you soon.  See you in your dreams sweet cheeks."

We gave our quick goodbyes and hang up.  I swoon a little.

*gigglesnorts*

Just say the word BB, and the Plastic Pack will be no more :)



Author's Response:

This was so funny that I made my hubby come read it. Thanks for the giggles:) Tell Sweet Pete that I said, hey.

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Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

*falls out of chair laughing*

Oh...*gasp*my... *snort*Gawd!!!  Got caught by daddy dearest!!!!

PRICELESS!!! *begins laughing uncontrollably again*

This chapter was great, this IS a new Bells, and I like her... alot!

Lauren and Jessica are gonna come up missing soon *shifty eyes*

And I won't know anything about it... *uses the force to convince you*

I am looking forward to the interaction between E, B and E's parents.



Author's Response:

Did you just try to jedi mind trick me????

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Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

WHEW!!  Ma and Pop Masen aren't so bad, thank goodness!

 

Karen Newton needs a imperfect nose job now though, and Mike needs to have a run in with My Boys' Jasper's late night alien abducters!!

*falls to the floor laughing hysterically*

 



Author's Response:

LMAO, Oh, that was priceless!!

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Date: 21 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Holy Swiss cheese!  I cried through most of the chapter!

My goodness, sent into a panic attack from her own nerves.  Poor Bells.

*wipes tears from chin*

I hope this doesnt effect the Masens' relationship with Bells.  I bet her and Elizabeth could be extremely close.

Looking forward to the next chapter!!!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:) FOr some reason I can't replay to your other review for Living Through the Pain so I will say that I hope you think about writing something, even if it is a one-shot

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Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Hey, the confusion is the best part!!  Suspenseful anticipation is what hooks readers in, and I love it!!

 

Love the update darlin'.  I cant wait to see what happens next!!

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

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Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh My GAWD!!!!!

Now that right there is some adrenalin pumpin' stuff right there!!

Pure Genius!!  *tackleglomphugglesquishies you*

 

I cannot wait to see where this goes :)  Im so excited!!



Author's Response:

Hehe, thanks:)

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

*closes eyes and takes a deep breath*

Ok... ok.

*opens eyes*

That was WOW and HOLY SHIT worthy.  Very well done.

I did love the chapter very much... except for...

*takes another deep breath*

... except for Isabella putting her damn hand (or fist...whatever) on MY Peter.  Did she not see his new tattoo on his forehead that reads 'Property of Siobhan Whitlock' in big bold letters?  Maybe Isabella needs for me to spell it out for her loud and clear, 'cause I am one possessive bitch when it comes to MY Peter.

NO TOUCHY ISABELLA!!!!!!!

Ok, maybe she just needs to see that he is not a bad guy.  Yeah!  Thats it!!

She will see :)  Just like I will see your next update!  ;)

lol, See ya next time BB!!  :)

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'll let her know. I don't think she will listen, though. She's kind of a bitch.

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Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Man!!  I always love some sexin' time, and its time they had some without having to worry about anyone or anything.  Loved it!

 

BTW, the little people say 'heeeeeyyyyy'.  In perfect unison as well.

Creepy little dudes!  XD

 

*huggles*



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

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Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Wow.  Leave it to E to deliver the blow to knock them all on their asses.  They killed her soul.  Now maybe they will get a fucking clue.  Selfish bastards *grumbles curse words upder breath*

 

They keep interrupting her and she is going to become ill and not have the strength to fight it due to malnutrition.  They need to get a grip on what they did wrong and stop trying to push her!  *polished brass knuckles*

 

Loved it, looking forward to more :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Oh crap!  All hell is about to break loose. 

At least one good thing happened in this chapter, you know, Renee getting her nose broke.  *giggles*

I am looking forward to the next chpater, I want to see how this plays out so bad :)



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

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Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

No!!  I liked this James and Victoria!!  *cries out*

Ok, this was a heavy chapter.  Alot was said, alot was done, but for some reason, I don't understand this Peter... *shakes head at that thought*

 

I am hanging on this cliffie with a death grip!  What is going on now?  Who is at the door?

See ya next update BB!!  :)



Author's Response:

Yeah, this is not my typical Peter.  I would have warned you but the threatened to send me to the nuthouse. My bad.

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Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Oh wow.  That was a very quick school day.  Although to say I am not shocked that it happened sooner rather than later.  Of course it was the teacher that always got on Ben about his language. Fool.

I cant wait to see how this plays out here.  :)  I promise, no threats to send you to the nuthouse this time.  I understand fully.  ;)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

lol, the day is far from over!

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Date: 01 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Awesome  :)

Ed and Liz get to stay!  Doubly awesome  :)

*texts Peter*

Ok y'all, say goodbye to the bitch brigade!

*beings to write eulogy for Lauren, Jessica, Mike, Tyler and Eric*

 

Love it BB, see ya next update!!  *hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

B is making herself sick, damn those assholes!

I wish her and E could just get away.  I wish that Esme and Car could just marry and get custody of B, or Elizabeth and Ed get custody of her, but I would rather Es and Car.

Love the update BB!!  I cant wait to see what happens next.  Is it possible for them to get home schooled?  Hey, Im just sayin'...



Author's Response: Thanks:)

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Date: 03 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

OMG I have been crying since they started yellinga t each other...

*blinks eyes hard to clear the tears*

Its not fucking fair.  *plots demise*

~cell phone rings~

I pick up my phone to see the caller ID.  I am leery of answering as it shows the number is unavailable.  I answer it on the fourth ring.

"Hello?"

At first there is no reply.  I am about to hang up when I hear a loud sigh.

"Darlin', I know I have upset you, and I am sorry for that..."

Thats all he gets out before I come uncorked on his ass.

"Peter Nathaniel Whitlock, just what in the FUCK possessed you to be such a DICK to this family?!  Are you TRYING to piss me the fuck off?!  Dont answer that, I dont want to know what your excuse is."  The tears build up again.

Peter sighs again "Honey, I know you are upset with me, but there is a reason for that, I swear to you darlin', it was the job.  Never in my lifetime would I want to hurt them or you that way.  It was supposed to be protection and it didnt go accordingly."  He pauses.  "Can you forgive me, I promise you, I will not do it again."

I sniffle "You better not Peter, or I will castrate you.  I have thew vet on speed dial thanks to those pups in La Push."

Peter snickers "Sweet cheeks, I would not even tempt you to do such a thing.  You have my word."

I sigh "Ok dear, as long as you do not interfere in a negative way again."

He chuckles at that "Got it.  BB will have me play nice for sure."

We say our goodbyes and hang up.  I wipe my eyes and prepare for the aftermath and reaction of the Cullen boys from Edwards outburst.

I await your next update BB!!!  *hugglesquishies you*



Author's Response:

*snortlaughs* Peter will be playing nice or I'll let BElla kick his ass...again:)

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Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

You know, Eleazar should be a saint.

Saint Eleazar, protector from all things bullshit.

Elly my man is such a presence, just I mean like, he's just there, ya know?

Deep shit dude, deep. *rolls eyes*

I really enjoyed this chapter, I have faith in Saint Elly that he wont listen Nolan and Corrine's bullshit.

Looking forward to the next update BB!!  :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

:) THanks!

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Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Oh wow, a little bit of everything in this chapter, I love it!

Spicy and HAWT in the beginning, funny as hell in the middle, and suspenseful and triumphant in the end.  Simply put... Beautiful.

LOVE IT!!  :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 06 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Mwuahahahahaha!!!!!

*plots dirty revenge on Esme*

I really hate the condom talk *grumbles*

So, I feel for Edward.

Loved this update BB!!!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Ok, what WILL happen when they get to Vegas??  *gets antsy in seat*

OK, will there be wedding bells??  *snickers*

I doubt it after Edwards reaction when Bella asked him to marry her.

I think that something is going to happen to in the fights.  I dont want it to, but I just have this feeling, since Edward mentioned that they would be fighting double what they did before.

I am looking forward to reading about the tournament.  I love reading those!!!

See ya next chapter BB!!  *hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 08 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

heehee, Operation Embarass The Shit Out of Carlisle and Esme is underway!!

Yipee Kiyay MoFos!  lol

I cant wait till you write the tourneys!  YAY!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

THank you:)

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Date: 12 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I dunno what they are planning, but it is going to be fun reading it!!!!!!!  lol

Loved it BB!!  See ya next update  :)

*hugs*



Author's Response: Thanks:)

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Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

*cracks up laughing slapping both knees*

That... Was ... Funny... As Hell!!!!!!!!

*rolls out of desk chair laughing*

I wonder when Carlisle and Esme caught on to the prank?

That was great!!

 

BB, you are a GENIUS!!!  I loved it!!!!!

I cant WAIT to see what goes down next!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I laughed so hard while writing this one!

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Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Yes, it would have been VERY COOL if they had actually gotten married, but Carlisle respects Ed and Liz.  He will do the right thing.

Just as Edward will for Bella.

I am so proud of these kids!

I love it BB!!!  I was literally bouncing out of my chair when I saw the update for this story.  You know you have made this one my fav!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks, sugar:)

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Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

I will await patiently for your wonderful writing BB  :)

I was as giddy as Alice on Black Friday when I saw this update!!!!!!!

This was an excellent chapter!  I love this story so much.  I cant wait to see who won the match.

I hope its Bells!

I am also anxious to see how Eddie is doing! :)

If I dont get to tell you before it gets here, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and your family BB!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you, honey:)

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Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

*busts out laughing hysterically at those two*

Oh BB!!!!!  That was simply PRICELES!!!

loved it dear  :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

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Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

*squeals loud enough for the entire neighborhood dog population starts barking*

 

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!  *does a touchdown dance*

I was so excited to see this update, and I loved the whole thing! 

Carlisle needed a good longue lashing... or some type of lashing...

I can't wait to see how this goes with the 'rents!

*waits with baited breath*

*hugs*



Author's Response:

LOL *covers ears* Thanks!

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Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

OMG are you serious?!?!  One more chapter??  *cries hysterically*

OMG I need a hug!

Love it BB!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Calm down, Honeybunny, there will be a sequel:)

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

*waves frantically*

OMG Hi!!!!!

Its been a bit, eh?  :)

I brag about your stories *cue blush*

I have you ranked at the top, along with lolashoes and idreamofeddy.

SO I twittered your update squealing like a little girl :)

Love this chapter, got me scared shitless with these finals!

I cant wait to see how it goes :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Seriously??? That is fucking awesome!! Thank you so much!!

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Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Wow!  Ok, so this is it for this story?  So now I just need to keep an eye out for the sequel?  I can do that  :)

Definitely!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Yep, that's it:) Thank, Sweetie:)

Summary:

Edward is a geeky comic book writer who has been secretly in love with his over-protective best friend Bella for years. He's too shy to admit his feelings, so he secretly starts writing a comic book inspired by Bella called 'Solar Eclipse.' 

After an embarrassing incident, Edward is forced to reveal his love for Bella to his friends. While Bella spends the summer before senior year with her mother, Edward, at the behest of Alice and Rosalie, goes through an extreme makeover.

 

Will Edward learn that unlike beauty, geeky isn't skin deep, it's the core of who he is? Will Bella finally see the love that has been in front of her for the last 8 years of her life.

 

 

 

 

 


Story is AU-Human and B/E (Jacob is only involved in flashbacks.) Themes are Romance/Humor/Awkwardness

Story is rated NC-17 for language, future lemons, and depictions of teen bullying. Story will alternate from EPOV to BPOV

 

Banner by ViiolentDelight, Evenstar, and Blinkie by Rason


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My All-Time Favorites
Chapters: 16 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72778 Read Count: 23597
[Report This] Published: 11 Oct 2010 Updated: 27 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Confessions of a Love Sick Geek

Gaaahhhhh!  Why is Charlie home early?!

darnit to kevlar!  Those two need to get some sexual healin' with themselves!  Charlie is a masterblocker, or batorblocker.

Isn't that so type of med?

*giggles*

I am high on coffee, and this story gives me gigglesnort fits!  I love it!

And I want more :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 ~* Cockblocking Bastards *~

Fuckin Emmett Cullen...

what a cockblock! 

 

I want E and B to at least get to home base making out, but NOOOOOOO!!

lol, I cant wait to see E's reaction *laughs hysterically*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 ~*Web Cams and Public Fondling*~

Wow, that was HAWT!

I love it  :)

The Moment by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

One moment, I was a young, carefree girl and the next, I was writhing around on the ground, as the venom surged through my body. NC-17 for language and lemons.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , Fics to Read, My Favorite Stories, to read
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 53585 Read Count: 33523
[Report This] Published: 19 Oct 2010 Updated: 10 Nov 2010
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

*preparesd to let you know what I thought about the chapter*

*clears throat*

Well..... THANK GOD THE ICE QUEEN IS TAMING!!!  lol

Never has the phrase 'taming the shrew' meant so much to me...  *snorts*

Ok, so its not the wolves that are the big thing coming...

*scratches them off list*

Ok, so that takes it down to... *looks at list*

The Denali clan, The band of nomad nimrods aka James, Laurent and Vicki, The Volturi, Maria *growls*, or something that is going to totally blind side me...

*mentally scoffs* Yeah, I am leaning towards the latter as well. *growls*

I am looking forward to your next update :)  I am in love with this story, just so you know.



Author's Response:

Are you saying that I like to blindside people with what I write??? I am...so not shocked because I totally do!! I will tell you that... I thank you for the reviews....muahahaha, I love being a tease!