Penname: Siobhan_Whitlock [Contact] Real name: Cherish
Member Since: 13 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
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I read Twilight Fan fics constantly.  I have read and reviewed over 11,000 in just this past year.  I plan on reading alot more.  I have been addicted to our Twilight montage of characters ever since I came by a waiting line for Eclipse at our local book store.  Hooked ever since I was.  Then I was on Twilight chat and found out about the amazing and wonderful world of Fan Ficiton.  Oh my, there are no words for my addiciton.  Lets just say I love Jasper/Bella stories the most, I have no qualms about triads or polymory, and I wish more than anything that vampires were real, I lived in Ireland, I was changed by Siobhan herself and that a version of a Whitlock brother was my mate.  There are no vampires that compare to Jasper and Peter Whitlock.  Nuff' said.


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Summary: Past Featured Story

Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 84190
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2014
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*drool*  in your basement?!  Uh... well, I...

*gives puppy eyes and pouts perfectly*

Is Peter there?  I know he is technically a Whitlock man, only Cullen by association, but a girl can dream...

*winks*

And the most appealing thing of it all, is you of course!  Did I mention that before?  Well, I did now, so... ;)

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I cant wait to hear from Jasper!  Gawd!

I want this sick fucker caught and fried.

*growls*

Still love it BB!

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 May 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I love you BB, I always will, no matter what writings can or cannot come to you at the moment. 

This was a phenominal chapter!  Alot came to head, more so than I thought would!!  I am ecstatic at how this panned out!!!

 

Loving it BB, This has alot of us hooked!  :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 May 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

BB...

OMG that must have been very hard for you to write.

I am here, BB, I am here.  I am looking forward to where you are taking this.  This is gonna be the blowout of epic proportions!

 

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sweetie. I'm phsyically sick over this right now. I feel so guilty!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

BB.....

*Peter hugs me from behind*

BB, I love your stories, I just really hate anything happening to some of them...

well, actually any of them... *closes eyes and bows head*

*takes in a shuddering breath*

This was a great, action packed chapter, alot happened!  I love that!

*gives a watery smile*

I just really really love Carlisle and Bella...

*tears invade my eyes and I cant see the screen while a lump of emotion blocks my throat*

Peter... *dissolves into violent sobs*

"BB, darlin', she loved your chapter.  She is looking forward to the next, I just know it."  Peter gives you a sexy grin and tips his head as if he were wearing a hat.  "We'll see ya next time, sweets." He winks with the smile still visible on his lips and in a heartbeat we're gone.

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

*hugs you tightly*

I am a bit chocked up, BB, so I will make this short and sweet... well, as short as I can, it is me here...

It did get my pulse racing.  Wow, that was so exciting, and now, to see the aftermath from other views, this is an amazing chapter BB, I love it.

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wow...

 

That was a high on emotions chapter!  Love it BB!!!

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

*hugs you tightly*

 

You treat us readers so good BB!!  This was a great chapter!

Its not gonna be any easier for these two for a while.  I hope the rest of them see that!

Love it darlin'!

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

wow...   I feel ya darlin'

 

This HAD to be hard to write as hard as it was to read...

Love it, BB.

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Wow....

 

This was an intense chapter.

I felt the dispair and the angst.  For a moment there it felt like Bella was about to end it all... then Jane came.  None too soon Im sure.

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Wow...  

That was so much... I dont know what to call it.

Great chapter, BB. *wipes tears out of eyes*

Progress will come, I just know it  :)  Hang in there Bella~!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Oh...

 

My...

 

God.

 

Holy shit, BB!!!  That was an awesome chapter!  Getting her to open up and get over the aversion to that name Alice calls her.  That was powerful, darlin!

 

And then BAM!  Drama with Carlisle...  I hope they get there in time!

 

Love it, BB!!

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 May 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Oh wow BB, so THATS what Carlisle was doin' there, awesome  :)

Loved this whole chapter!  Especially the reconnecting at the end.  Can we hear from Esme sometime soon?  I am curious to see whats goin' on in her head.

 

Love it, BB!!

 

*hugs*



Author's Response:

I have a few outtakes planned for this book, just like I did for the other two and will be adding them as soon as I stop needing to sleep, lol

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Loved it, BB!!!!  Thank you for giving this to us, even though your plate is full right now.


Congrats on Pub day for Angel's Heart!!!  *hugglesquishies*

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Twilight retold. Bella has always felt that she was different. After moving back to Folks to live with her dad. Bella learns not only how truly different she is, and also the world around her AU/OOC Bella/Jasper*Rated NC-17 for Sex&Lang* A/E,Em/R,C/Es,P/C

stories/34076/images/TrueHeartsBanner.jpg      Banner By: Rachel MS

 

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 279948 Read Count: 27391
[Report This] Published: 16 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Beautiful chapter, very insightful!

I love the way you write their interactions!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, writing a conversation between people/couple is my favorite part of writing! Hugs~Izzy

Thank you for your review of Chapter 30. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 31.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 31

(JPOV)

I instantly knew that there was no way to keep the Major from escaping the cage that I’d kept him in for so many years. I knew that Jasper Whitlock was a man known for his compassion and tolerance. And the Major on the other hand was a possessive and uncaring bastard that would only worry about what was his and his alone. I knew that he scared the hell outta our mate, but I couldn’t help but let him outta his carefully crafted cell to protect our mate and our child.

Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Heehee, the fun that is messin' with Petey.

I love it!



Author's Response:

Gotta love getting one over on Yoda! Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 34! Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 35~

Hugs~Izzy

I couldn’t believe that my girl had pulled the wool over my eyes like that. I’m an empathic vampire, for fuck’s sake. She really had Peter, Char, and me going there for a few minutes, and I was starting to really wonder what in the hell teacher’s were teaching this new generation.

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Loved it!

She can throw a fit if she wants to!

lol



Author's Response:

I agree, but sometimes she needs to where and when to throw a fit! LOL Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chappie 36. Here is your Sneak Peek at Chappie 37!

BPOV

Today was the day of wedding shower, and I knew that there weren’t going to be that many women attending, not to mention anything that I wanted before or after the wedding I’d get on my own. I wondered if I’d even know the women that were attending this shindig, at Chris’ Tea Cottage? Geez, Tea Cottage? Who the hell came up with that name?

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Well done!  I loved it!  Great lemon, written perfectly for this story :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, I just couldn't do something way out there. I figure you readers get that enough craziness with the story. LOL!

 

Thanks for review from Chapter 11. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 12.

Hugs~Izzy

 

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Chapter 12

(BPOV)

 

“What’s there to work out this better not be over my mark. Peter told me that the wolves bit there imprints so this wasn’t going to be a big deal.” I said scared about what this could mean.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh wow!!  OSM for sure!!

I love, I cant wait to read more :)



Author's Response:

OSM yep yep yep! ;) Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your review of Chapter 12. It’s starting! L Your words are keeping me writing, and giving me the motivation to try and write at couple of chapters a week. I hope that you’re enjoying THaTH.

.Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 13.  Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 13(JPOV)

Why do the elves have to be so secretive if we’d a clue about this Arising shit? I could at least kick the lil fucker out of the house if I knew more, as it is he and his daughter ain’t moved a muscle yet. That could be the horse sized wolf breathin’ down their necks. Maybe those foul smellin’ things will come in handy after all.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Arrggg!!  Cliffies are my enemy  *sulks in corner*

Love this chapter, I never get tired of the Major's story :)

 

Until next chapter  *uncrisses arms, waves, re-crosses arms and sulks more*



Author's Response:

Smile Cuase your wait WON"T be long! Tomorrow at 3pm CCT how's that? I need to Proof read it a couple of more times. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 13. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 14. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 14

JPOV

Next fuckin’ thing I know the lil fucker’s up here and in my girl’s room. He’s runnin’ away from a girl vampire like the true pussy he really is. He must’ve pushed his way past Irina to get his sorry no good fuckin’ elfin ass up here. 

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Aww, sweet Charlie and Katiedid, so cute!

 

Loved this chapter!



Author's Response:

Yes Gotta love Kate, she's cool!

Thanks for your review of Chapter 14. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 15. Hugs~Izzy

 

Chapter 15 (BPOV)

Family Ties

There have been times over the last almost four days when I’ve wanted nothing more than to rip my own skin from my body, and just pull out every strand of hair out of my head. The pain is all consuming and overpowering.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Awesome, now we're gettin' somewhere!

 

Yee Haw y'all, lets get this shit storm started!!

 

*stops channeling inner cowgirl*



Author's Response:

Cowgirl Up! LOL Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 15. Here’s your Sneak Peek of Chapter 16. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 16 (BPOV)

Ten Long Days

He was standing behind me looking at my body from the reflection in the mirror. He pulled back a little and unclasped my bra from behind, and he watched as he brought both of its straps fell down my arms.

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Awesome!

Little Aaron is starting to rub me the wrong way.  He seems like he is up to something, and not just creating an heir. 

I cant wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Aaron is a complaicated dude! LOL

Thank you for your review for Chapter 16. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 17. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 17

Happy Birthday Bella

(BPOV)

I was in no mood to be level headed right now. I just wanted to kick the shit out of something and then throw a tantrum like a three year old. How come everyone in my life with the exception of Jasper or the Cullen’s always seem to want something from me? Why in the hell do I allow myself to be put into those positions?

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Wow, are the dogs really that stupid??  Goodness gracious, they need to knock that shit off.  Bad dog!!!  lol

I loved this chapter, I cant wait to see how things go with Charlie and what other magic Bella can do!  :)

 



Author's Response:

You know what they say about old dogs and new tricks! LOL Hugs~Izzy

Thank you for your review of Chapter 18. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 19.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 19

(BPOV)

My reverting back into a second grader did nothing for Jasper’s mood at that moment. So I used his gift on him. I pushed as much happiness as I could at Jasper at that moment. He was trying to be completely hardnosed and bad assed, but he lost it when I started singing.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

OMG that was beautiful, wonderful, fun, and amazing!!

I absolutely love this chapter!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad that I could make you happy chickie. Lol Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your review of Chapter 17. I love that Chappie. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 18.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 18

(JPOV)

Carlisle walks up to the front door as an old pickup truck comes into view. I see Billy Black in the passenger seat, and Harry Clearwater is drivin’. As they get out of the truck and Harry gets Billy’s wheelchair outta the back, nine wolves come to stand behind their leaders.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Oh no!!  helluva cliffie!

 

LOved the update, the battle was awesome :)

Did everyone on Bella's side survive??  Whats going to happen about her injury?!

I am so excited to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

We'll have to wait and see! LOL **walks away laughing evilly** Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your Review of Chapter 19. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 20.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 20

(JPOV)

All I could do was stand there, holding my mate in my arms, and growl when I thought someone was too fuckin’ close to her. I knew mentally that she was right, and that Carlisle needed to look at her. But I couldn’t seem to put the Major back into his box.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow, I really enjoyed Carlisles POV. It was nice after the POV of one very pissed off Resolute mate Major.  Poor Jazz.

Now, I have a question for the other resolute couple.

Is conception possible, and if so, what is the gestational period and what is the result?

*giggles*

The answer to the first part of that question, I feel, will be a resounding YES!  *snickers*

See you next update, I cant wait!!



Author's Response:

That sounds like a great question to ask them, thanks for letting me know what you would like to know. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 20. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 21!

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 21

(BPOV)

He walked over to my side of the bed, and gave me the once over again.  I knew that my fever was high, but Aaron had warned us beforehand that it would be. He checked my pulse, my temperature, and my eyes and ears. Same old, same old really.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

I forgive you ;)  lol

I LOVED IT!!!!  This chapter was great.  I really cant wait until Bella is better.

Aaron still rubs me the wrong way. Sneaky little elf... *grumbles*

I look forward to your next update!  :)



Author's Response:

Yep, Aaron still has a 'I'm better than you' attitude! That's not going to change anytime soon though. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 21. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 22.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 22

(BPOV)

What are you holding back from me, Jasper Whitlock? I know that you are trying to hide something so you might as well spill it before I have to go dig through that mind of yours. I said, while crossing my arms over my chest. I’d rifle through his thoughts if I had to, and he knew it.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

*gets the subtle hint to review*   lol

This was a great chapter!  I know that Carlisle is in medical heaven, being able to not only research this pregnancy, but also to be the practicing physician for it.  He is a scientist at heart!!

 

Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Add a soon to be Grandpa to that list! LOL Yes Carlisle is loving this.. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your Review of Chapter 22. Here is your Sneak a Peek at Chapter 23.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 23 (JPOV)

“Isabella Swan and Jasper Whitlock,

 You are both invited to the first ever Cullen / Whitlock Family Night.

*Clothing is optional*

Meet your family in the living room no later than 7pm.

Snacks and party to follow.

RSVP: by yelling ‘Hell Yeah’ NOW!”

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

*tries to catch breathe*

HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That shit was funny right there!!  :)  *busts out laughing again*

Great chapter!  Peter is awesome!  Nuff said.  ;)

 



Author's Response:

Peter is a twisted and cleaver soul, I will give him that!!! He's also a crazy assed Mother, who needs the help of many mental health care professionals, but who wants to split hairs about him? LMAO! I had a ball writing that chappie.. It is one of my favorites so far... Hugs~Izzy PS: I think I am going to pick you guys a differnt Sneak Peek every time you review, what do you think, should I try that?

So here's another snipet from Chappie 24 I hope you like it! ;)

Chapter 24 (BPOV)

My hands were working my exposed breasts, as I started making good use out of Rosalie’s birthday present to me. I never knew what a vibrator could do for a girl, but I was really starting to enjoy myself. As my BOB started making me feel unbelievable pleasure, I closed my eyes and was lost in the sensations that were coursing through my body.

Hugs~ Izzy

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

YAY!!  Here comes pictures of the baby!!!!!

 

I am mostly excited of seeing the baby  :)

 



Author's Response:

Well, let me help you out there with the name of the next chapter. Chapter 25 is named: It's a What? So yep you will find out on Tues if it is a Boy or A Girlie! Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of chapter 24. Here’s your Sneak Peek into chapter25.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 25 (JPOV)

“Before I turn this picture into 4-D, I need to know if you two want to know what you are having? The fetus’ outline will be quite clear from this new angle.”

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I loved Charlie's reaction :)

 

I was hoping for a boy as well.

 



Author's Response:

It's a Boy! Three words that had never been spoken to Charlie! LOL Hugs~Izzy

Thank you for your Review of Chapter 25. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 26.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 26 (BPOV)

Alice was still talking about what she had planned for us to do today, and how Jasper and I had kept everyone from getting ready earlier. I kind of laughed at how one couple kept all of the others so busy that they were unable to get ready for their day. Especially since one half of that first couple, slept for several hours in the night.

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

HAHA Loved it!!

I am so TEAM WHITLOCK!!!!

I have been since I read Colliding Meteors

Peter is a must have character in any Jasper story :)

Love it, cant wait to see more :)



Author's Response:

I agree girlie! Gotta love Peter! Lord, knows that Charlotte does! LMAO Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your Review of Chapter 26. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 27.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 27

(JPOV)

When Bella was awake during the day, I tried to read as much as I could about pregnancy, the birthing process, what the lil Peanut was doing on each giving day, how he was changing and growing. Anything I could get my hands on about this shit, I was taking to like a duck to fuckin’ water.

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

It may be a short chapter to you dear, but your readers appreciate it none the less :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks ... I really try to write between 10,000 and 15,000 words a week for y'all. That was such a hard week for me to write. So, i just finished where I was when the call came in, and sent it off to Balti K (My Beta). I just couldn't deal with writing anything happy right them. And i daught very much that y'all would have liked a sad chappie! Hugs~Izzy

PS: Thanks for being my 100th Reviewer on TWCS!

Thanks for your Review of Chapter 27. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 28.

Have a Great Thanksgiving!

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 28 (BPOV)

I watched as Jasper normally butterscotch colored eyes turned into jet black orbs with his lust. As I took an extraordinarily, painfully slow time releasing each button on the shirt of his I was wearing. One by fucking one. Jasper’s body went to move off of the bed, but I made sure to hold my shield securely around him.

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Aaah!!  Why were his emotions going haywire???

Eeek, I is Skeered nowz.

:)

Loved the update though!



Author's Response:

I dunno? LMAO Maybe, nah, I ain't giving anything away! Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your Review of Chapter 28! Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 29!

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 29 (JPOV)

I’ve been trying since we found out that Bella and I are expecting the baby to be more open to the Lil Fucker, but he and I are like oil and water; we just can’t mix together. I’ll admit that he has been doing better and trying harder than I’ve ever known him to, but I always have a thought of ‘what if’ or ‘what’s he up to now’ in my head.

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

WTF?!?!?!

Yikes that is kind of a scary ending!

*shakes in my boots*



Author's Response:

You are calling it scary and someone else called it creepy! LOL I dunno???? I guess we will have to wait and see what the hell happens! Hugs~Izzy

Thank you for your Review of Chapter 29! Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 30!

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 30

(BPOV)

I slowly rolled over and was staring at the ceiling as Jasper got up off the bed and made his way toward the bathroom. I heard the water in the sink running and a few short seconds late my mate walked out of the bathroom with a wet washcloth in his hands. After handing the cool cloth to me, I started to slowly rub my face clean and it felt wonderful to me.

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Sweet niblits!!!  Poor Bells, the Major was a bit much for her.

I have a feeling it will get better though :)

Awesome update!  Cant wait to read more  :)



Author's Response:

Yep, the Major does seem to scare her, but I think she might start getting use to him soon! Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your Review of Chapter 31. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 32.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 32

(BPOV)

I mean let’s face it. This is not your normal human pregnancy and I am sure that things are bound to different with me than what the books are saying. But these damn nagging thoughts just wouldn’t leave me alone for very long, and I wanted answers. I was getting tired of the ‘let’s just wait and see,’ bullshit.

Hugs~Izz

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

OMG, the baby can throw his bloodlust at his daddy?!

Wow... That is awesome!

:)

 



Author's Response:

Yep, he's gonna give Jasper a run for his money, that's for sure! LOL Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your Review of Chapter 32! Here’s your HOT Sneak Peek at Chapter 33…

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 33

JPOV

I know that this is new to you, but want to show you all the ways in which you body can feel pleasure. Remember how we talked about gettin’ some pleasure from a lil bit of pain? Have I hurt you in any way since we started this journey together?

No, you’ve always been very caring with me, she answered.

I wouldn’t start harming you now, and you can tell me quit at anytime.

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I think that was a great chapter.

I really enjoyed reading his POV....

wow, I think I need a cold shower now.

*runs away from steamy screen*



Author's Response:

I gave you a warning! You can't say I didn't! LMAO Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your Review! Here is your Sneak-a-Peek at Chapter 34!

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 34

(BPOV)

“Isabella, why are you doing this to us?” Jasper, or hell, I think it was the Major asking.

Charlotte was rocking with laughter at the two fools sitting at the table acting like five year olds, asked to eat there lima beans.

“Well, I thought that since you weren’t paying attention to me earlier that this might be a great way to get and keep your attention,” I boosted.

“Major, believe that your pregnant mate has lost her better judgment and took up smokin’ crack,” Petey all but growled out, causing Char and I to laugh even harder at them.

See you on Saturday! Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

OMG I loved this chapter so much!!!!!!!

 

Petey is SO gonna get it *snickers*

I am gonna love readin it too!



Author's Response:

Yeppers! LOL Gotta Love It!

Thank you for your Review of Chapter 35! Here is your Sneak Peek at Chapter 36! I hope that Everyone has a Great Christmas and enjoys the ones that you are with this year! Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 36

(BPOV)

You need to get outta here for a while. Do ya wanta go for a ride with me? Jas asked as I sighed after inhaling his wonderful scent.

Yeah, but it will have to wait until after I eat and get some blood into me. Your son ... I stopped and pocked my finger into Jasper’s chest … is a demanding little bugger.

 

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Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

OH NO FUCKIN WAY?!?!?!

DAMNIT ALL TO HADES!!!!!!

Are you shittin me?  Are you shittin me?!?!

Damnit....

I guess there is no getting rid of Hippie Bitch now...

Damnitol, its for when you just cant handle the fuckery anymore...

I cant wait to see the result of this mess :)



Author's Response:

Go ahead and tell me how  you really feel??!!!?? ROFLMFAO! Too Funny! Happy New Year! Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your Review of Chapter 37. Here is your Sneak Peek at Chpater38.

Hugs~Izzy

Carlisle’s POV

Esme and I had left the house early today. Carmen and Eleazar wanted to meet up with us early. Jasper’s and Bella’s shower was not to take place until the early afternoon, so we had a few hours to kill before our presences would be needed at the Tea Cottage.

 

 

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Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I am a selfish woman...

So, naturally, I am afraid for Peter.  I am worried about Peters safety and well being, and so that includes Charlotte as well.

Renee can just go away to Volterra with Caius and never be heard from again....

And she gets downgraded from motherpod to aunt!

Aunts dont contact their nieces and nephews all the time, so that works!

*falls over laughing uncontrollably*



Author's Response:

I swear that Peter and Char are going to be alright... Yes, there are a few bumps in the road coming, but for the most part as long as they both stay in Bella's good greaces they will be completely perfect! Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for Reviewing Chapter 38. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 39!

JPOV

She’s been through too much, and I have got to do something and do something now. I know that she is not able to handle all of the fuckery that is going on around her, and she has hit her breaking point. It’s not like I don’t blame her. If all of this shit had happened to me in such a short amount of time, I would’ve lost it long before now.

“Major, I know that this is goin’ get ugly and fast. I have a plan already setup for us, but we need to go and we need to now,” Peter whispered into my ear.

Hugs~Izzy

 

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Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

You know, right before she opens her eyes, the brief section of time between the last beat of her heart and her first unneccessary first breath, would be the opportune time to just rip her head from her shoulders, that way they could all be saved from her annoying voice when she awoke as a vampire.

 

But, that is just my mind going off in a tangent.  I really, really don't like Renee.  ;)

Great chapter, I cant wait to see how leaving effects Bells.



Author's Response:

THat would be great, but guess what??? Let me tell ya my plans with Renee... Oh, I forgot what I was going to say now! Sorry! ROFLMFAO! Hugs~Izzy PS I know that I am pure Evil! LOL

Thank you for your Review of Chapter 39. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 40…

BPOV

Jasper tightened his grip on me, as the full impact of had happened really started to kick in. How in the hell did Caius think that making that self-centered, hateful, egotistic, self-absorbed, narcissistic, bigheaded, arrogant, Hippie Bitch a vampire, that would live forever was beyond me, and I wanted N.O.T.H.I.N.G. to do with it.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

*falls over laughing hysterically*

HAHAHAAA!  Lil Fucker now has to rely on Charlie to go through this Aquisition for Bells....

Karma is a bitch, just like your daughter, eh Aaron?

*wipes away tears streaming down my cheeks*

Loved this chapter!  I cant wait to see what happens next!  :)



Author's Response:

Yep, Yep, Yep... Karma will diffently come back and bite you in your ass... When you least expect it to! Gotta love it... Aaron has to do some time on his knees I believe... LMAO ;) Hugs~Izzy

Thank you for your review of Chapter 40… Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 41!

(Charlie POV)

Here is am standing on the wings of a stage set up at the Marriott, in Seattle, muttering to myself about the monkey suit that I’m wearing. Everyone’s nerves have been on the fritz since last weekend when the all hell broke loss, but things have been settling down nicely as far as I’m concerned.

Hugs~Izzy

 

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Date: 25 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Holy wowsers!  Its a wonder Charlie didnt go all Newborn on their condecending asses!

Love it!!!

 



Author's Response:

Great self control remember?? LOL But that would have been good, too! Hugs~Izzy

Thank you for your review of Chapter 41… Here’s you Sneak Peek at Chapter 42..

(BPOV)

I took a deep breath and watched as Jasper gave me his famous shit eating grin, and I knew in that moment that I would love the man in front of me for as long as I lived.

Forever, Jasper said mentally to me.

Yes, for Eternity.

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Oh man!!!!

I cried the whole FREAKIN CHAPTER!!!!!

I love you, man!

You are like the freakin greatest writer of these two!  OMG!

*hugs you so frickin tight*

I cannot WAIT to see who gets the smack down for startin shit at the MAJOR'S weddin'.

*waggles eyebrows in a very Emmett fashion*

lol



Author's Response:

Balti K... My beta, said that she cried reading the chappie the first time too! I asked if i should have added a tissue warning, but we decided againist it! Maybe, we were wrong?? I loved writing this chappie.. You know that I am evil with my cliffies! I love them so! LOL

Thanks for the wonderful compliments! I love writting this story!

Hugs~Izzy ;)

Thanks for your Review of Chapter 42. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 43.

(JPOV)

After waiting for what seemed liked forever, I finally got my bride back on the dance floor where we both belonged. Yeah, we needed to go and thank everyone for coming, but I really just wanted to spend every second of our special day together, alone in our own lil world. The song that was playing was perfect for our wedding reception it was talking about how the singer would stay with his love forever.

Hugs~Izzy

 

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Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Oh wow!

*wipes sweat off brow*

that was a hell of an induction to the Mile High Club I'd say :)

Awesome sauce, is what it was! ;) lol

LOVE IT!



Author's Response:

I'd join the mile high club with him any day! LOL Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your Review of Chapter 43… Here’s your Sneak Peek of Chapter 44…

Chapter 44

(BPOV)

I was only half listening to Jasper’s side of the conversation. If there was trouble, I’m sure that I’d know about it before too much longer. ‘Don’t go chasing trouble, it’ll always find you,’ I think to myself. Here lately that statement held so much truth that I was surprised that it wasn’t perpetually tattooed on my skin.

Hugs~Izzy

 

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Date: 26 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Oh wow!

Im gonna miss this one like crazy!!!

*hugs you tight*



Author's Response:

I will be around! I may wirte another story, but not right now with work! I will start thinking of something new though!

Hugs~Izzy

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Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Wow!  Nice, hawt steamy smexin honeymoon!

Love it :)

*tries to shake off perverted thoughts about sand in hidden places on Jazz*



Author's Response:

Yes, I love sand in places that it should NEVER be! LOL Gotta to love those images! Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your Review of Chapter 44… Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 45…

JPOV

I caught her in the kitchen of our small home here in Montana, reaching for something on the very top shelves. Why is it that the something she’s craving at the moment has to always be on the top shelf where she has ta stretch out using her tiptoes to grab it? She’s been caught more times than I care to count, red handed, in the kitchen stretching herself beyond what a women who’s about to give birth in less than two weeks should be doing.

Hugs~Izzy

 

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Date: 23 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

OMG only one chapter left?!?!

*cries hysterically while spinning in circles*

Im gonna miss you!  This story is the total shiznit!

Love the name btw... ;)



Author's Response:

I know I can't believe it's over! Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 46… Here’s the LAST Sneak Peek to THaTH!

(JPOV)

Today’s my first day on the job as a ranch hand with Peter. We used to do this type of shit when we were human, and here we are doing it again. It feels right for me to be sitting here saddled to my favorite horse, Tink. Yes, I have a horse named Tinkerbell! Char named her. With my gift animals aren’t that hard to tame. Back in the day I’d had to break horses in the hard way, but not now. Being an empathic vampire does come with its advantages.

Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

*sinks teeth into your delectible neck*

*pulls away and lick lips*

Mmmm...mouth-watering my dear ;)

Loved that chapter, seriously!  I was just saying to myself as I went to click on the link..."my goodness!  Its chapter 45 already and no baby yet, WTF?"

(I truly did say WTF... bad habit I know)

Now we have the little one... Alexander Davis Swan-Whitlock-Cullen-Volturi-Bayne-whatever else. *cackles loudly like Alice ditching in line on Black Friday*

love you so effin much bb!!! See you next chappie! 

*hugs*

 



Author's Response:

 Alexander Davis Swan-Whitlock-Cullen-Volturi-Bayne-whatever OMG! Now , how would someone Monogram that onto a towel??? ROFLMFAO! Hugs~Izzy

Thank you for your Review of Chapter 45… Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 46…

(BPOV)

“It’s definitely a boy!” Ashling squealed as I watched a river of pee shoot over the side of the bed.

“Plumbing works!” Jasper yelled, causing Carlisle and Ashling to laugh like loons. I was still trying to figure out which way was up, and having a hell of a time doing just that.

Hugs~Izzy

 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Masen, Hollywood heartthrob, meets Bella Swan, shy college student, and the romantic sparks fly. Can they both overcome traumatic pasts and trust issues to be together?  All-Human

Thank you to Coleen561 for the beautiful banner!

Virgins & Villains came in first in 3 categories at the Summer 2011 Avant Garde Awards.  See banners below.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Humor, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, I Whitlock's read , Ageise02 To Read 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories Read by CNYBella, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 86 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 448890 Read Count: 303236
[Report This] Published: 20 Sep 2010 Updated: 04 Jan 2012
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 71: Milkshakes & Big Moo

Holy crap what an excellent chapter!  A bit of everything I love it!

 

OH, From the Cup of Duty is an AWESOME fic!!  I am sad to see it finished...

I cried during the entire chapter!  Everyone shoudl read it!!



Author's Response:

Thanks very much!  glad you liked it!

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Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 76: Outtake - Magnum Farce

OMG I laughed so hard I still have tears running down my cheeks!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Panty Droppers & Belly Dances

Loved this chapter!!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm glad.

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Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 44: Pink Chiffon & Man Skirts

*cracks up*

LOL, Emmett in a kilt...

thank you SO VERY MUCH for that visual!!!

*wipes drool off chin*



Author's Response:

golf wouldn't be so damn boring if we coult watch Emmett in a kilt...you know what I'm sayin'?.....crap, now I'm drooling..lol Thanks!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Genuflections & Surprises

Awwwww!  That was so sweet!  LOL, I thought it was funny, him saying he would have his bodyguard carry her out!

Loved it!



Author's Response:

he definitely wasn't going to touch her....can you imagine if a pap got that photo?  lol  Thanks!

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Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 48: Bubble Baths & Hell's Kitchen

Awwwwww!

What'd they see?!?!

 

I cant wait for the reveal!



Author's Response:

next chapter is up now.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 49: Chip Shops & Fairy Lights

OH MYLANTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*squeals and hops around like a schoolgirl... or Alice*

 

This is going to be so beautiful!!  I cant wait to see what you have in store for the remainder of this doozy!!  :)



Author's Response:

yes...and we can be thankful that Emmett is not closeby to ruin things with his farts. lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 50: Champagne & Diamonds

Awwwww!  How sweet!  He bought her that house?!

OMG Adorable!  So romantic!!

*swoon*

Love this chapter!   I SO want more!  :)



Author's Response:

More to come soon!  thanks very much

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Date: 13 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 51: Bite Marks & Sweet Revenge

HA!  bite marks on the perfect million dollar ass, just like J-Lo's legs and Julia Roberts' smile.  Priceless pieces of art. :)

And HA!!  Em called Rose a Jezebel!!!  He needs to shake off his retreat weekend for a bit...

thats just creepy  ;)

I want to know who these flowers are from!!!!!

I cant wait til Chief Swan gives his 2 cents on the situation with the creepy flower stalker!

 



Author's Response:

Charlie has a level head...but this is his little girl.  He may just be loaded for bear!  Thanks!

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Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 52: Edible Art & First Steps

Good start towards help, she needs to open up :)

I am so scared to see what happens next with the issue of the flowers.

Loved this chapter! :)



Author's Response:

Bella and the therapist will move slowly.  That portion of the next chap is already complete.  Don't sweat the flower/stalker...it won't be resolved for a while.  THanks!

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Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 53: Cake Tasting & Mama Bears

OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!  That was perfect!!!

So, whats the use in celibacy till the wedding now?

GO EMMETT!!  :)

Eddie is so cute when he is all nervous and shit. lol

I cant wait to see what happens next!!

 



Author's Response:

Next chapter....emmett finds out...it will be fun.  Thanks!

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Date: 31 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 54: Waterworks & Heartfelt Sentiments

*tries to clear eyes*

And once again, cue the waterworks!

I cried so much during this whole chapter!  It was so beautiful, the good and the bad.

 



Author's Response:

oh my gosh...i'm sorry it made you cry.  I've actually heard that from several readers now.  i'm kind of amazed...and happy about it. lol.  Thanks very much!  glad you liked the sappy!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 55: Skypeward & Karmic Rewards

LOL, I enjoyed this chapter SO MUCH ;)

lol, That Karma... yeah.



Author's Response:

it was a fitting end for Ms Chance don't you think?  I enjoyed writing it as well.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 56: Iron Man & Safely Home

That was a tough chapter to get through.  You laid it out perfectly for us :)

And I was HOPING Edward would show up and surprise her!

Beautiful!!!!!

 



Author's Response:

thanks very much!  it was a bit of a strange chapter...tried to have a couple of light moments to break the tension. 

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Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 58: Joy Rides & Clown Masks

OMG that was so freaking beautiful!

*cries*



Author's Response:

thank you so much. glad you liked it...sometimes i'm too sappy.  don't tell my family...although they'd never believe it anyway.lol.  checkout the sneak peek for thenext V&V posted on the blog.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 66: Badass Bella & Commencement Exercises

wow, that was GREAT!!

OMG I was literally biting my nails!  eesh!

I am so glad she had another epiphany :)



Author's Response:

me too. Thanks so much

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Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 59: Hallelujah & Zombie Dances

Love it!!

Jasper is gonna throw the smack down on Em when he gets the chance lol

I cant wait :)



Author's Response:

i'll let you in on a secret.  What Emmett did to Jasper was actually done to one of my dad's brothers (at my parent's wedding)  I always found the story to be hilarious...glad i could incorporate it here.  My dad and all his brothers except one were raised Catholic.  MomMom was NOT Catholic but tried to raise her children in her husband's faith.  One Uncle rebelled and hence was not raised Catholic.  By the time my parents married (Dad was the baby)  the parents were dead and his brothers told the one non-Catholic brother that he had to go to confession before the wedding.  Needless to say, he almost shit himself.  lol.

the story was too good to pass up.  glad you enjoyed.  as I've said before, I'm fricking insane...but it's not my fault.  I have proof that it's genetic. 

)_

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 60: Making Plans & False Allegations

Oh man!  What a slap in the face!  Bella was just trying to support him.  He didnt have to lash out at her...

Damn Ed dude, that stung.

I cant wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

men do that don't they?  at least some men, referring specifically to hubs here.  I usually call him an a-hole or throw something at him, and we're good. lol.  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: 09 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 62: Outtake: The Turkey of Ill Repute

Oh my goodness!  This chapter is VERY awe inspiring!

So deep, I couldnt hold the tears back.

Thank you for this chapter, its absolutely beautiful.



Author's Response:

I'm touched by your words...for heaven sake don't read about the inspiration for this outtake that I posted on the Facebook....it may shatter the illusion. lol.  You know I can never be serious for very long.  ;D

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 65: Boot Heels & Body Bags

wow!  holy crap, the ranger?!

 

Cmon Bells, be ok!....

 



Author's Response:

Thanks! next chap is up.

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Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 67: Reality Shows & Apparitions

I. Cant. Stand. Cliffies.

Cliffies are evil, I dont like them at all.....

Great chapter though, I always get excited when I see updates for this story.

Makes me even more anxious when I have to wait on an explanation of said cliffie.

Grrr......



Author's Response:

it will be good...think of this as 'closure'.  Thanks for liking the chapter anyway. lol.  more to come soon.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 May 2011 Title: Chapter 68: Strange Days & Sucker Punches

*giggles*  freakin Oprah!  Poor Bells, her filter is gonna go haywire again :)

Loved this chapter :)



Author's Response:

if you get a chance..read the sneak peek for LRM i just posted on the facebook and blog.  It gives Edward's POV during Bella's sexy limo dream.  Edward's dream is just plain crazy. lol.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 69: Scenic Views & Meeting Duke

Absolutely lovely!!  I cant wait to see the Oprah bit!!  :)



Author's Response:

glad you liked it! thanks!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 70: Shock Therapy & The Mother Road

Great chapter, I loved your Oprah segment!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad to hear it!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 74: Fireworks & Dream Homes

So freakin romantic those two!!

 

And those blogs... hilarious!  :)  I love it!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 75: Ultimatums & Quality Time

OH I laughed so hard throughout this chapter!  :)  Love it!!

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Date: 05 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 77: Wedding Dances & Viral Video

*all the air rushes out of my chest in a harsh gasp*

 

Holy shit, that little weasel did the interview anyway...  uh oh.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 85: Time Warps & Slow Motion

I was like YAY 2 chapters!!! Then got smacked in the face with a doozie of a cliffie!

 

Careful of the cliffies, the dark side is a cold one...

 

*snickers*



Author's Response:

tHirTeEn by twolipps Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 215]
Summary: Past Featured Story

In the aftermath of war, the Volturi have given Bella a choice-live as a vampire among the Guard, or die. What will she choose and will Jasper be willing to train her as a newborn and then give her up at the end of 13 short months? Vamp/Human OOC / A darker Jasper

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 169540 Read Count: 14658
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2010 Updated: 01 Sep 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

*cracks up laughing at Jaspers parting line*

Oh poor Jake....

on the other hand, there are a couple of non mated females in the house lusting for his body...

He might be doing some screaming of his own!

*busts out laughing again*

Loved this chapter!  This story is sti;ll so very awesome, I am eagerly anticipating the next!!  :)



Author's Response:

Yup, Jake's either gonna be howling at the moon or screaming! lol

Thanks for reading hun.

 

T

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Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

HOLY CRAP!!  Yay for wolves!  For now, anyways.  Jasper is in denial and he needs a dose of reality, like Bella could be taken from him by the mutts.

Sweeeeet! :)  This is a really good story!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad that you're liking the story!

 

T

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

LOL  HA!!!   Love it!!  :)

 

Lay it on thick there Eddie boy!!  :) 

The Major fucked up... majorly  *snorts at bad joke*



Author's Response:

Thanks hun for reading.

Yeah, the major screwed up and now Eddie boy thinks he has a chance!

 

T

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Date: 29 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Yikes!

oh, yeah, and Renee needs burned at the stake.

Im just saying...

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Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Gahhhh!!!!   Who would have thought?!  Jane!  Now I want to save her...

*plots taking away Jane and shielding her*

LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!  Its about damn time, Jasper!  Geez!!!

OMG I cannot wait until Eddie and Ali get their just deserts!

*cackles maniacally*

I cannot wait to read more!  I love this story!!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh I am SO LOVIN' UFC Bells :)

You Rock Bella Corture!  lol



Author's Response:

Thanks hun for reading!

 

T

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

*gigglesnorts*

Oh my, for the love 0of all things holy... she let the proverbial cat out of the bag!

LOVE IT!  I am anxious to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thanks hun for reading.

Glad that you liked it.

 

T

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

omg holy shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

No Edward, DONT!

Oh god, you have to hurry with the next chapter!  I hope they make it before they touch her!

*shivers*



Author's Response:

Trust me.

 

Thanks for reading hun!

 

T

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh MY GAWD!!!!!!!

Bells is so damned smart!  She came up with that answer all by her lonesome.

Yeah, they're fucked.

C'mon Petey, my man.  Get your all knowing mojo shit in gear, we have a family to save!

Love this, cant wait to read more :)



Author's Response:

Now you know that Petey and the Major are gonna work something out! Thanks for reading hun!

 

T

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 May 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oh. My. Lanta!

I absolutely LOVED this chapter!!!!

 

Nessie... does that mean... oh poor Jane if it is...

But this isnt canon... and it certainly isnt against polys.. right?  *giggles*

I love this story!  :)



Author's Response:

Nope, not cannon. But, we never know what's gonna happen next.  LOL

 

Thanks for reading hun!

t

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

OMG, I love the fluff!

This was awesome.  I cant wait for more~!



Author's Response:

Thanks hun!

T

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

holy shit hawt damn!

That was worth waiting for!

*fans self*

I definitely dont need to use the heater tonight!



Author's Response:

Yup, Japser gets me all hot and bothered too! lol

 

Thanks for reading hun.

T

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

*raises and waves hand frantically*

Oh I am SO DOWN for some naked Scrabble with Jazz!

I love this chapter! 

Except for the cliffie at the end...

But I am never a big fan of those ;)

I cant wait to see what happens!



Author's Response:

Now you know I love me some evil cliffies, almost as I love Jasper and naked Scrabble! lol

 

Thanks for reading hun!

 

T

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh, wow, that was some good lovin right there now!~

LOVED IT!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 

 

t

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OH MY GOD!!!

Yay!!!  I am dying to see the next chapter!!  I love this story :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with me hun!

 

T

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

OMG thats an evil cliffie!!!  *giggles*

Jasper was being a bit rough on her, but they will work it out :)

OMG Jake!!!  I cant wait to see how that turns out!



Author's Response:

Thank for reading hun!

Jasper will find his balance with training his mate!

 

 

t

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Holy shit!!  He didnt tell her he was going to see Maria?! 

OOooh, Jazz is gonna be in the dog house...

right along with Jake and Renata and Jane and their thing...

wow... I cant wait!  This is exciting!



Author's Response:

You know men, sometimes they're just dumb! lol

Thanks for reading hun.

 

t

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 May 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

YES!!  Oh yes!  Yes!  Yes!!!!!!

*giggles*

Love this chapter, I cant believe he tore Maria's head off, that was GREAT!

Too bad she can be put back together, especially after what she said about Bella... bitch...

Love this chapter!  Looking forward to the next definitely  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading hun.

Yeah, Jazz was thinking about taking her head with him, but then he thought about all the yapping Maria would do, and who wants to listen to THAT all the way home! LOL

 

t

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 May 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow, not a mutual imprinting... awesome sauce, never seen that one before!

 

I loved this chapter!  If normal couples were able to go on 3 day sex trysts, divorces would become unneccessary!   lol



Author's Response:

I think J & B should not only institute naked days, but sex binge days too! You're right, there would be less divorces! lol

 

Thanks for reading.

 

t

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Holy shit, this is getting really, really goooooood!!!!

 

*vibrates with anticipation*



Author's Response:

Thanks hun, working on more now!

 

t

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

*showing serious love for a kick ass amazing story*

 

Thank you, for writing this.



Author's Response:

Aw, you're too sweet! Thank you for reading and sticking with me on this!

 

t