Penname: Siobhan_Whitlock [Contact] Real name: Cherish
Member Since: 13 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I read Twilight Fan fics constantly.  I have read and reviewed over 11,000 in just this past year.  I plan on reading alot more.  I have been addicted to our Twilight montage of characters ever since I came by a waiting line for Eclipse at our local book store.  Hooked ever since I was.  Then I was on Twilight chat and found out about the amazing and wonderful world of Fan Ficiton.  Oh my, there are no words for my addiciton.  Lets just say I love Jasper/Bella stories the most, I have no qualms about triads or polymory, and I wish more than anything that vampires were real, I lived in Ireland, I was changed by Siobhan herself and that a version of a Whitlock brother was my mate.  There are no vampires that compare to Jasper and Peter Whitlock.  Nuff' said.


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Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Takes place after Edward leaves in NM.

 Follow Bella as life takes her through twists and turns that eventually lead her back to a strangley different Edward. Can true love overcome all lifes jagged twists and sharp turns?

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119541 Read Count: 24411
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Devastating Adversity

Oh, just like the coward that he is, throw Bella to the sharks then run away.

Bastard.

Now I have switched teams yet again.  Go Tristan, Im rootin' for ya!



Author's Response:

Dude, u so make me giggle :-P

 

Teaser:

Bella sprawled out on the damp earth of the forest floor, broken and lifeless.
The unborn child in her womb squirming, desperately fighting to live. Her stomach bulging out at an odd angle as the baby wiggled, until it stopped all together.
Victoria’s gleefully, crazy laughter followed by my murderous roar ringing through the forest as I fell in a heap beside Bella’s cold, inanimate body

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Life's Little Mind Games

wow...just, wow...

poor Bells!

I am anxious to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Here's a teaser for ya, doll,

I gasped as my mind was bombarded with thoughts as the sweet, tiny angel in front of me glanced in the direction of her lifeless mother.
Thoughts of love and admiration poured into me, followed by sad thoughts of wanting to see her mommy. Where’s mommy? The little girl was thinking. I want my mommy. I staggered back in pain, my mind reeling as I spun and darted out of the room and into the forest. I ran and ran for what felt like forever, pushing myself further and further away from the pain that was now states behind me. All I knew was that I had to get away, away from Bella’s dead, broken body, away from the happy gurgles of the little girl, away from my family’s mourning thoughts, away from Tristan’s anguished cries, away from everything and everyone. I couldn’t go back, not now, maybe not ever. The pain was just too much to bear.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Goodbyes

*sobs uncontrollably*

OMFG

I dont know if I can handle much else...

to lose Bells?  Shit, I just...

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Prodigy Child

ok, where in the hell is Edward???????

Gawd, I want to grab him up, put him over my knee and the knock him into next week!

I will keep reminding myself that you said it wasnt going to be a HEA for everyone.

Damnit, I was hoping for and E/B HEA for this one....well shit...

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 40: Revelations

*covers eyes*

oh, wait, I cant type with my eyes covered, I need my hands!

Oh, I need to see too.... *smacks forehead*  Ow!  I have Carlisle's ring on, that didnt feel to good...

Ok, We cant have E/B I guess... thank for that *turns up sarcasm*

And I suppose we can't have a Triad...

*imagines Bells in the middle of a Tristan Edward sandwich*

oh so hawt...

So I guess teen Eddie can have every other weekend visitation supervised by Jazz of course ;)  Uncle Jazz is a scary sight *giggles*

And Bells and Tristan live HEA after beating the invisible shit out of the Volturi.  Along with the Wolves cocking their legs and pissing on those black cloaks... Good doggies!

I effin' love you, no matter what, bb!!!!! *crushes you in Emmett hug*

See you next chapter!  *plots chance to slap the shit out if Bella Swan*



Author's Response:

I am so mad that TWCS did not sends me any of these reviews- and mad at myself for just checking now. I really just assumed I hadn't gotten any :-S

 

You made me smile, laugh and smirk a lil with this one. Thank you.

I do hope the rest, epi and all- satiated you...at least a bit- prolly not- love you anyways... still love my angsty emo ass???

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 41: Endings Lead to New Beginnings

oh....

*blinks and stares wide-eyed*

Well then....

Um, wow, I guess?

Bring on the Epi?...

*turns away thoroughly confused*



Author's Response:

Confused...oh no.....were u still in this state when u finished??? If not, lemme help- ask away- I will uncoffuzzle ya. I hope :-S

Summary: Past Featured Story

gtth

 ***NOW COMPLETE***

Bella Swan had led a very ordinary life.  She'd married her college boyfriend only to be betrayed when he left her for another girl.  After the death of her father, she pulled out a map and threw a dart.  The implications of that one simple act would surprise her beyond her belief.  She found a home...she found a job...could she find love again after surviving a cheating husband?  Only time will tell.  What secrets will the beautiful stranger she meets have and how will she deal with them? 

AH/OOC.  Canon pairings, with twists.  NC-17 for dirty language, a smattering of BDSM, and the usual lemony goodness.  If you wouldn't read it with your mother standing over your shoulder, you shouldn't be reading it at all!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, My All-Time Favorites, Ageise02 Current Reads, Single parents , I Whitlock's read , My all time favorites, Amberina's Completed Favs List, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories Read by CNYBella, My Favorite Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 258357 Read Count: 174673
[Report This] Published: 21 Jul 2010 Updated: 09 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Commitment and Commitment Issues

I love this story.  Just caught up with you.  Love it, Looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Pain

Oh.

My.

Gawd.

...

Oh please dont leave us hanging too long... please?

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Heartache

Great chapter!  It hurts, yes, the debauchery the Eddiekins caused, but you got to sink to get enough air in the sails to float again.

I cant wait to see Carlie's reaction to Bells being back :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Beginning to Heal

Ahhh!!!  I want them back together NNNNNOOOOOWWWWWW!

*pouts with arms crossed and hip jutted out*

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 - The Next Phase

LOL!!!!!  Party in the USA?!  WTG Eddikins!

So funny!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Moving...Up and On

oh...no...

NY, here we come....

*holds on tight for the ride*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - A Real Family

Ok, are we EVER gonna get her to come out with it and talk about the D/s stuff so it isnt such a pink elephant in the bedroom anymore?!

Jeesh Bells!  *bops her in the back of the head*

And.. um... Holy cow shit batman!  Thats some steamy secrets there!

PREGNANT?!

I knew, it, I just knew it!  If it wasnt her screwing up her pills it was some time of medicine they gave her in the hospital.

Here comes Baby Makes Four!

love it!  :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - Party In The USA! (Come on, I had to!)

O absolutely love how you handled that!

I cant wait to see what other debauchery they get up to in Bora Bora!

Love it!  Oh, and please, for all thats holy, smack Em up the side of the head for Double C's speech...that is all.

:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - The Kind of Horse You Can Only Find in Bora Bora

4 and an epi?

*bursts into very large, very wet, croccodile tears*

I am gonna miss this story so much!!

I really didnt expect that reaction from Carlie at all, I was shocked!

Thank goodness for G C!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - The Great Car Caper

heehee, sneaky, snuck that baby right on in on us, eh?

Nice move :)

I do feel very sorry for Em.  Poor guy, I hope Ro makes it up to him.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Too Young To Die

*laughs uncontrollably*

Ha!  The Carmen fiasco came back to bite him in the ass AGAIN!

Bella is gonna have his ass in a sling.  :)

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 - Life Changes

You. Killed. Esme...

Holy shit!  *gasp*

... much later, after the shock has worn off...

Great chapter, moving things along quite nicely.

*cough*

Run for that safe house now.  Please, no babies should be harmed in writing this story. Thats a good dear.

*shakes head*

I cant fucking believe you killed Esme...

Although picturing a geriatric Carlisle gettiin' it on with the neighbor lady...

That HOT! *waggles eyebrows in Emmett fashion*  lol

Summary:

Bella, Edward, Alice, Jasper, Rose, and Emmett are back for the sequel to My Boys. What will the future hold for our favorite three couples? AH & NC-17 for language and lemons. E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/Es, Ch/R.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Brooklyn - to read, My Boys Saga, to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 97755 Read Count: 53007
[Report This] Published: 31 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

OMG I loved it BB!!!!!!

 

She got to talk to J and also found out how he felt.  I am glad he suggested Garrett's so that they both can work out some of their anger.

Love it BB, I cant wait to see whats in store for our couples next!  :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Wow, that bit in the store.... I still have tears cascading down my cheeks.

 

Amazingly beautiful.



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I did too!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wow, Im sorry *hugs you tightly*

 

You wrote this chapter beautifully.  I loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Apology accepted, we dont hold it against you anyway :)

 

I love this chapter, its time for them to get a break from the drama and that is just what this was.  I loved it!!  I laughed throughout the entire first part of the chapter due to the prank on Jasper, classic!!  Poor guy, just cant seem to get any respect!  First little green men anal probe him, then everyone pranks him about it.  Tough luck Jazz!  *gigglesnorts*

 

I cant wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

I laughed so hard while writing this one. I almost feel bad for Jasper, but not really.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

OMG ouch!!  Thats harsh!  I cannot wait to see whats up with E!  Poor B, she is going through enough shit as it is.

 

Looking forward to the next update!  Thanks BB!!  *hugs*



Author's Response:

THanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

OMG, I guess I just thought that E would have not felt that way, I thought that he would know that they all supported him too.

I guessed wrong.

Poor E.

 

Loved the update BB, I cant wait till I can read more :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Wow, my tears are right there along side yours BB

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you, honey.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Holy Shit!!!!

That was the fucking smack down right there.

I am worried about Renee...

I loved this chapter BB, they all need some harshness now and then darlin'.

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I trust you BB.

I am keeping the faith. :)

Gotta love James and Laurent, such sweethearts!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Happy New Year BB!!!!

This was a great chapter, gotta love Marcus!!!

 

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

I will SO be voting for you.....

its just gonna pull at my heart strings a bit...

Kit is there for Parachute...

IDreamOfEddy is there for her amazing Colliding Meteors and The Orbiting Meteor...

BUT, I am here to vote for you!  So I will :)

Love this chapter!  Eddy FINALLY went and said what needed to be said!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks:) Kit is a sweetie. I've been getting to know her through FB and she's such a nice person!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

It was a good place, I know, I am no big fan of cliffies, but it was a good place to stop.  Makes us anxious for the next chapter :)

I love the snowball idea!  I think Therapists should use that during the winter for patient therapy.  :)

 

See ya next update BB!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Gawd BB!!! I cried so damned hard!  Thank you for the tissue warning.  I locked my office door on my way back from the bathroom.

 

We have turned a corner, you're right.  It turned with that first snowball Bells threw ;)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I can see how difficult this chapter was BB.  Wow, very deep, and alot happened.

I love how they finally were able to break the surface of the problems.  Now its time to work on themselves and each other.

Beautiful BB, I love it. :)

 

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Ok, why would she say oh, fuck????

 

Ugh, BB, you drive me crazy with these evil cliffies!  I just want to chase them off with my shiny ebil penguin army! (no, it is ebil, not evil, go with it)

 

I am anxious to see what happens next :)  I need some fluffy after this tear jerker!  :)

*hugs*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Man!  I love it BB!!!!

 

Thank you for such a wonderful story!!  I cant wait to read the Final stage!

 

*hugs*

Summary:

Just when Bella is ready to give up on her dream, she gets accepted to the Cullen Ballet Academy. Will Edward be able to help her deal with her loss? Can she save him from his? E/B, Em/R, A/J, C/E

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Fics to Read, I Whitlock's read , Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, luv2write finished reads, to read
Chapters: 48 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78309 Read Count: 118496
[Report This] Published: 12 Aug 2010 Updated: 01 Jan 2013
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 12 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh my goodness!!!!!!  WHAT?!

 

Wow, what a cliffie!  *sobs uncontrollably*



Author's Response:

Me too!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Man, that was great!  Poor Bells, things can only go up from here.  Love this story :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

So beautiful *wipes eyes to see clearly*

 

*goes back and fixes typing mistakes*

 

That was so wonderful.



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Epilogue

This was such a beautiful story!!  I love it.

 

*runs to read Reunion update*  lol



Author's Response:

lol, thanks:)

Summary:

Living Amongst Vampires Banner

 

In a world dominated by vampires, humans are forced to donate blood and abide by the strict rules of the vampire government. Bella has never experienced life in an all-human world and one day the only life she knows shatters to pieces when her parents are killed by a vampire. She is adopted by her parents' friends, who happen to be vampires. Her life turns upside down as she moves to an all-vampire town. Will she have the strength to go on after all that she has endured? Will one special vampire heal her wounds as she struggles to live a life amongst vampires? Edward and Bella pairing, AU, OOC

Warning: This story contains explicit adult content, language, violence, vampire marking and bloodplay.

 

I want to thank Dazzled~by~Jake for this awesome banner! And my awesome Beta Lindz! xo


 

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Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 378869 Read Count: 224812
[Report This] Published: 14 Aug 2010 Updated: 23 Sep 2018
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Love it!



Author's Response:

Hiya!

Thank you so much. I'm happy that you enjoyed the chapter.

Thank you for reading =) It means a lot.

~Jells

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OME!!!!!  What is going on??  Oh no!  Poor Edward!  WTH?!

 

I know Bella is upset, but come on!  Is her ignoring him doing this to him?  I cant wait!



Author's Response:

Hi again! Shit! I somehow missed your comment.

I looooooooooooooooove mindfuckery. =D

Love your guess btw. But you'll see....

Thanks again,

XxOo

Jells

PS: Looking forward to more of your story

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Oh wow!!!   What could have happened for Aro to cancel...

 

I am wondering who is drinking Bella's donated blood...

 

I cannot wait to see what made them cancel, and I think Edwards change had something to do with it.  Edward is a special one, and I think they know that, even if the Cullens dont.

Wow, I am excited to see how that goes down lol  ;)



Author's Response:

Hiya *waves*

Thank you =)

It could be anyone drinking Bella's blood. You never know. lol I already have a vampire in mind, or two that may appear. ;) BuT I won't reveal that for a while. There's soooooooo much to cover, it makes my head spin LOL

I hope you'll like ch 16. I'm so close to wrapping it up.

Thanks again, love hearing from you and your thoughts.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh no, oh hell... oh shit!  WTF?!?!

 

Ok, I will be internally dying now until chapter 17 comes out! *sighfaints*



Author's Response:

lmao!

I should be able to post this week. =)

Loved ur comments btw.

XxOo

Jells

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

oh god, he's their cousin???  ugh...



Author's Response:

Hi *waves*

Yep, nuts huh? And there's more to it. I can't resist the mindfuckery *grins*

I'll have ch 19 up today or tomorrow.

Thank you,

xoxo

Jells

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 May 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

You still have your readers, dont fret  ;)

 

Great chapter!  The bathroom scene was... wow. 

 

So now what do they do about the release ceremony?  Oh boy, when can Ben be set free from his parents, this is heart wrenching!



Author's Response:

Hey *waves*

 

Thank you, glad you liked it =)

 

Next chap will be up in a few days.

 

Thanks again

 

jells

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh wow, what a come back!  We knew they had it out for Edward, but this is war!

Welcome back!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yay, Ben is back!  FINALLy!  I was so afraid Angela was going to have to go on without him helping her.

 

Fantastic chapter, love it!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2015 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

YES!!  Visitation, finally!!

 

And I want to smack the shit out of Lauren and Tanya!  ugh!

 

Fantastic chapter!

Be My Sub by nails233 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 740]
Summary:

stories/8628/images/be_my_sub_banner.gif

 

   

Thank you Emma Verberg for this new banner! She is wonderful!

After searching for a century, I have found what I have been looking for, a human submissive. The fact that I am a vampire and she is my singer, will not deter me from having the only thing I have ever wanted more than human blood, her body. D/S BDSM EPOV AU

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica, Fantasy
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Domward's Dungeon, Bdsm stories only, I Whitlock's read , Drive's Stories to read that are Completed, Ageise02 WIP Reads, Fav BDSM Fics
Chapters: 17 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 66673 Read Count: 103282
[Report This] Published: 15 Aug 2010 Updated: 06 Jul 2012
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Oh crap!  Another vampire!

 

I cant wait to see who it is :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The faux pas

I dont know what Jazz is gonna find out, but I hope it brings out the feral mate out in Eddie :)

I was squealing like Alice on Black Friday when I saw your update alert!

Yay!!

*dances in circles*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 The real bella please stand up

Definitely worth the wait!  That was fuckhawt!

 

I hope they get a lead on what happened to Charlie soon, someone has been watching Bells for a long time, and it sounds like the Volturi are up to no good.

I look forward to your next update :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 The merging of Bella's

GAWD that was HAWT!

 

I love jealousward!  Seriously :)

And how come the wolves didnt say anythinga bout Bella coming smelling like a sickly sweet vamp?

hmm...

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 The new playroom

OH my!!  This chapter was great!  And add to that Bella's POV and I was floored!!  :)

 

Lovely!  :)

The Reunion by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 254]
Summary:

Bella Swan and Edward Cullen both left Forks on the night of their high school graduation, each going their seperate ways. Now, they are back for their ten year reunion. Will they be able to see what has been in front of them all along? AH&NC-17 for lemons


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: butterflybetty stories to read , LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Kit's Must Reads!, to read
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 90847 Read Count: 72090
[Report This] Published: 19 Aug 2010 Updated: 25 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

*balls uncontrollably*

That was beautiful!  What a wonderful story!



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

The Dive by dna2679 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 53]
Summary:

Bella Masen, after a bad break up with her boyfriend James meets Carlisle. He helps her in more ways than he can know and she does the same for him. Their lives seem to revolve around where Carlisle works, a bar called The Dive. Carlisle, Bella and the owner of the bar Charlie are their own little family and protect one another. Eventually things get complicated and danger will arise. They will need one another to pull through everything life and others will throw at them. They will face any and all trouble together and hope that they all make it out. Will they be able to or will they face tragedy?


Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 133291 Read Count: 5698
[Report This] Published: 21 Aug 2010 Updated: 26 Nov 2016
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Its probably already been brought up, but I just wanted to point out that Betthany got lost in the shuffle somewhere.  There should be 5 kids, not 4... right?

Jonah, Charlie, Cassidy, Betthany and Henry.

Love the chapter though!  EMMETT BEIN' A BABY DADDY!!

woot!!

lol



Author's Response:

god i hate this laptop... i was typing and it went back and erased what i had typed i didn't notice.. shit.. i will fix it.. thank you

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Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh no!  Crap!

I cant wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

i know i'm so excited for the next few chapters.. thank you so much for reading this and reviewing.. you rock

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Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Damnit James!!  Not Bella, the boys AND Charlie!!!!!!!!

 

Ok, sick cliffie, I hope the next chapter comes soon, the suspense will kill me slowly!!



Author's Response:

the next chapter is in progress and should be up today or early tomorrow. i'm aiming for tonight!!!  

 

 

thank you so much for your review.. you so rock

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Date: 15 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

OMG tear jerker for sure!

I loved this chapter!  And the baby names are adorable :)

I cant wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

oh i know right. i was a mess writing it.  it took me forever to nail down the names. i kept going until they felt right....the next chapter will be a good one!

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Date: 27 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

*wipes tears away*

Im gonna miss Charlie.

Awesome chapter.



Author's Response:

i know.. me too...   and thanks!!

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Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

LOL, this confrontation is gonna be great!  How exciting!



Author's Response:

thanks for sticking with me and the story!  i hated doing it but it had to be done..

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Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

OMG that was so sweet!  Gotta love a druck Bells and Garrett! or as they say, Ella and Gammmbett.  :)

I hope Kate gets taken out in jail...

hey, Im just sayin'

*wink*



Author's Response:

I FOR ONE LOVE DRUNK ELLA AND GAMMBETT!! LMFAO.....  AND YES... THIS WON'T BE THE LAST WE HEAR FROM KATE'S CRAZY ASS!!!!

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Date: 06 May 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

OMG amazing, Im lovin daddy Aro  :)



Author's Response:

me too!!!!! i was so excited to write that  chapter

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Date: 08 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

GAH!!!!

If something happens to that baby, Emmett and Bella are going to be devastated!

I hope that Garrett tracks his cars GPS and finds her and opens a can of whoopass!



Author's Response:

I know i felt so bad doing this to Emmett and Bella, and hell, everyone else but it needed to be done.... and we all know that Garrett is a smart cookie so i'm sure he will be a very important player in all of this...

 

 

thank you for sticking with me btw..

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Date: 04 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Oh man Bella is a stong woman.   But Eddie was right about one thing, you cannot HELP but fall in love with her :)

I hope she is okay!  Eddie wont hurt her, at least I hope not!



Author's Response:

I hope he won't hurt her but as we all can plainly see, he is bat shit crazy. 



thanks for the review!!!

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Date: 30 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

OMG this is so freaking awesome, I love it!!!!

 

Oh my gosh, I want more!  *giggles and bounces with giddyness*

 



Author's Response:

LMFAO!!! YOU MY FRIEND ARE BEYOND ANY LEVEL OF AWESOMENESS I'VE EVER COME ACROSS!!!


THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW!!!


LOVES YAS

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Date: 10 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

OMG that was an AWESOME chapter!!!!!!  *jumps with glee*

Yay!! Aro gets to be in his grandbabies live!! :)



Author's Response:

lol thank you so much for your review. you are one of the few that keeps me going. you are one kick ass person let me tell you

Summary: Past Featured Story

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28 year old English teacher, Bella Swan is dreading being dragged to her 10 year reunion with Alice; until a certain social networking site offers her a very welcome blast from the past... BxE, AH. NC-17 for lemons in later chapters.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories Read by CNYBella, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 126861 Read Count: 60429
[Report This] Published: 06 Sep 2010 Updated: 13 Aug 2011
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Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

LOL, I love it.  *turns on intercom* Will someone please help Mr. Black pick his jaw up of the floor?  Thank you.

*giggles*

Love it.

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

awesome chapter! Aside from the fact that James was in it... lol

I really dont like him. -_-

Love it, cant wait to read more :)

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Date: 10 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

*plots Kate's demise*

 

Loved the update, absolutely livid of the contents.  *growls uncontrollably*

 

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Date: 11 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Whew~!!!  Well, we knew Tanya would be up to something.  At least E and B are very open with each other and there are no assumptions.

 

Great update, I look forward to the next :)  I hope Tanya gets ripped! lol

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Date: 16 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

This chapter was NOT an utter fail!  I wanted to know what was going on in Bella's head, and I am sure others wanted to as well :)

 

I am looking forward to the Tanya tongue lashuing though!  *giggles*

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Date: 17 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Loved it!!!  Tanya should be at 'jump off a cliff' level right now for what she has done.

 

I really hate Lauren, Tanya and James, they all need to talk a long walk off a short pier.

:)

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Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

OMG I love it!!  I was so happy that he got home sooner rather than later.

 

I loved it, I cant wait to read what happens next :)

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Date: 04 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Wow baby talk!!  Awesome, little Eddies and Bellies!!

Loved it!

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Date: 07 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Awww, Eddie is a shoe in!!!  Go Chief!

Loved it!!

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Date: 10 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Wow.  Nice Lemonade dear!!! 


Loved it, that was HAWT!

Looking forward to more :)

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Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

lol awesome :)

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Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

aawww, naughty Cullen!!

I wonder what is in the garment bags??  *giggles*

Love this!!

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Date: 19 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

OMG How romantic!

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Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

ahhhhhh!  love it  :)

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Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Fuckin beautiful!

I loved it!

*shakes off Jacob bit*

Love it!

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Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Ha!  Alice's revenge!  Call in the calvary... eh, thats Charlie ;)

lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

Third story in the Awakenings Saga. Join Bella, Edward, Alice, and Jasper as they face their toughest challenge yet, the stress of having school aged kids. Will they be able to survive? Or will this tear them apart? NC-17, AH. Same pairings as in LA & SA

 

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Categories: Twilight, All Human, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Themslovebug90's read stories, Stories I've Already read, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 54 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 189515 Read Count: 84190
[Report This] Published: 14 Sep 2010 Updated: 26 Jan 2014
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Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Holy Shit!

Fucking James, what did that car ever do to him?!  Asshat.

*grumbles under breath*

Loved this update BB!!

Its about time she accepted help, she was going to burn out way too soon and anything could have happened.  Thank goodness for Papa C!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Again, who said it was James?? Yeah, I went there!! Thanks, Sweetie:)

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Date: 28 May 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

I would never hate you darlin', wherever you may leave us at  ;)

 

Great chapter!  Carlisle thrown in there was a head turner for me!!  And now, a new baby!!

*shrieks*

Love it, BB!!

 

*hugs*

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Date: 11 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

*hugs you hard*

Im here, BB.

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Date: 20 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Damn, BB... Just, holy shit!  First Carlisle, then the fuck hawt shower, then the most amazing love making in bed... FUCK!!

*pants and wipes brow*

 

Ok, Carlisle still has a bit of an issue with rejection I think,.,.,. or something close to it.  I didnt even think Alice was trying to separate them till Carlisle said something.  I think the adjoining offices are a great idea!

I cannot wait to see this baby... but I know they will love it no matter what.

Great chapter, BB!  I am off to recreate the show scene!  *snickers*

*hugs*

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Date: 02 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I love it I love it I love it!!! *squee*

 

Oh my Gosh!!!!!!  Phil!!!  *hugs you relentlessly*

 

*racks brain for characters*

 

Oh, who is he paired up with??  I am so anxious to see :) 

*bounces in place like Alice on a sugar buzz*

Thank you for updating this, I love this story and I cannot wait to see the down-nosers like Mrs. White (whom was left by her husband 7 years ago for another man because she was such a bitch *giggles*) get their just deserts.  Karma can be such a ass-biter sometimes!!  lol



Author's Response: lol, thanks:) I am still working out the deatils of Phil :)

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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Holy shit that was HAWT!  You are an amazing author!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 24 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well, for me personally, I say do it as an outtake.

I will read it if it is an outtake, not if it is its own story.

Loved the update BTW, Mrs. White has it coming, I just know 8it.  Phil is gonna step in, she is gonna cause a scene, and make an ass out of herself, anf Phil will be the hero!!

I love it!

Oh, wait, that was just my imagination.  Drat!

Anywho, I cannot wait for you to show us whats in store, Im all excited!!



Author's Response:

Thank you:) If I did make it it's own little story it would only be a handful of chapters.

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Date: 17 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

*smacks self for not reading the novella*

Ok, so Seth quits.... HOLY OYSTERCRACKERS BATMAN!!! There deep in the soup now!

*giggles at bad joke*

Peter is hunting, and Charlotte is shopping, so I can get away with corny jokes like that.  ;)

I get bad vibes from James.  I think he is up to something to get back at Alice and Bella.  I don't like it.  It could hurt all of them.  There are children involved.  This is scary.

Wow, I am so happy to see an update here!

Now I eagerly anticipate an update for FFL.  See ya next update BB!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks:) My Boys is up next and then FFL:)

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Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

You know that feeling you get... when the hair on the back of your neck stands on end?

I have that now...

and it involves something that is going to happen...

because of James.

Weird aren't I?

He wasn't even in this chapter.

Its just a feeling I get.  I am strange, I know.

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I hope all is well now that you are home and your daughter is recovering.

I liked this updaet alot.

James gives me the serious creepies!

Love it BB!!!! 

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 30 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I hope you are feeling better, and that your computer doesnt hate you anymore :)

As for this chatper, I loved the sweet torture that is a seductive dance from E and Jazz.  So nice...

The James thing is gonna blow... I am not looking forward to that.

Loved it, and the promise of exacted revenge from the girls :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon:) I am feeling better and for now, my computer loves me. But that's just cause I gave it smut :)

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Date: 09 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have fear pumping adrenaline through my veins.  Who is following them?!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thanks  ;)

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Date: 04 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Well thats a hell of a shocker ending!!  I love the way your mind works BB  :)

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 17 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh dear... who is this sick bastard???

 

This is killin me BB!!  I want to hunt him down and demand answers before I drain him dry!!

 

Love this chapter, especially the bonding at the end.  simply magnificent :)

*hugs*

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Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Yes, very intense!!!  I will absolutely go into cardiac arrest if something happens to the family, ANY of the family...

I want to post nomads at every corner of each family house and the office.

Love it BB!!  The suspense is a real awesome clencher!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 28 Aug 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I know how hard this is for you to write, BB.

I am a very gracious reader though.  I appreciate all of the time and effort you put into us readers.. Thank you.

 

*hugs*

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Date: 10 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Wow, Bella's insecurities come back like a freakin tsunami!  Holy shit!

 

Jeebus!  Can she GET anymore angsty?!  lol

Love it BB!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

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Date: 16 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!

Ok, thats creepy!  I am scared to death of this stalker now!

*hugs*



Author's Response: Thank you:)

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Date: 23 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

This chapter was... wow.  Thank the heavens for iron skin Jane!

Bless Carlisle's heart for calling her.

I would be acting like Bella if I were in her shoes too!

Breach by Catastrophia eh?  Hmmm.... I will go check it out :)

And what is this group for?  What do you do in this group?  I read all the time, I dont think I have time for groups :) lol

Love it BB!!!!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

I don't know if Breach is over here on TWCS or not. I'm reading it over on FF.net. It's super smutty good! As for the group, you get to hang out with me and talk to me and did I mention me?? No, seriously, I put up lots of teasers, we talk about all the dirty things we would like to do with Edward and the rest of the Cullen boys, who I have locked away in my basement.....