Penname: Siobhan_Whitlock [Contact] Real name: Cherish
Member Since: 13 Feb 2010
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I read Twilight Fan fics constantly.  I have read and reviewed over 11,000 in just this past year.  I plan on reading alot more.  I have been addicted to our Twilight montage of characters ever since I came by a waiting line for Eclipse at our local book store.  Hooked ever since I was.  Then I was on Twilight chat and found out about the amazing and wonderful world of Fan Ficiton.  Oh my, there are no words for my addiciton.  Lets just say I love Jasper/Bella stories the most, I have no qualms about triads or polymory, and I wish more than anything that vampires were real, I lived in Ireland, I was changed by Siobhan herself and that a version of a Whitlock brother was my mate.  There are no vampires that compare to Jasper and Peter Whitlock.  Nuff' said.


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The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3519]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
I don’t own Twilight

 

 

TPW Avi 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1570928
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41

Oh god, Carlisle makes me sick!

 

I love this story BTW, I found it on here, after I had read a few chapters over on FFn.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story. Thanks for giving it a chance.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward has given up ever finding a vampire mate. He's decided on a new strategy-he'll find a human to become his mate. Easier said than done when others are in the way of who he wants.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read (Geddy), Misstoria's Stories to Read
Chapters: 36 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109413 Read Count: 121647
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 May 2014
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh I am so excited to see where this is headed!!  Yay!

 

Eskimos wearing black have thrown me for a loop lol  I love it!



Author's Response:

I wonder what she's dreaming about....

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Gah!!!!!  I love it love it, the suspense is killing me, and I love it!!  :)

See you next chapter!!

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Date: 12 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh wow!!!!!  Awesome!  I cant wait to see what happens next!!  :)

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Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Gah!!!!  Who is that?!?!?!  Leah maybe?  lol

*giggles*

It sure as hell isn't Paul, right?  I mean, he is in one of these chapters before, I think... right?

I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!



Author's Response:

Very good for thinking outside the box...

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Semi cliffy there dear! *hold back a growl*

Loved this chapter, I cant wait to find out what Paul's motivation was to cause such a scene.

And now I am waiting with anticipation to see what Edward is going to do.



Author's Response:

Fun times ahead! Bella is going to see the hot vampire Edward really is. :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Oh dear... yikes.

Damn that Paul!



Author's Response:

Yes termpermental werewolves can be a real pain in the ass.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 May 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

AHHH!!!!  Darn Cliffies!

*wacks it with rolled up newspaper*

Love this chapter!  Was worried for BElla...

now something else!  ugh!  *giggles*



Author's Response:

Glad you like!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jul 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow!  That was scary there for a minute!

 

Whats going on with Bells??

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Date: 18 Nov 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh my!  That was an AWESOME chapter!  I want to see the hunt!!  So cool!

I love this chapter!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it! The hunt will be from Bella's pov.

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Date: 17 Jan 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

whoa!

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Date: 03 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

That was awesome!

 

For minute there I was wondering if she was part wolf or something!

 

lol  Great chapter!



Author's Response:

The pieces will start coming together.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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A silent war came that changed everything. Humans are chosen at birth to be a vampires mate. What happens when Bella is given to the God of War on her 16th Birthday? Will she survive the darkness and her mate? Or will she beg for her own death.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 69505 Read Count: 106231
[Report This] Published: 10 Feb 2010 Updated: 28 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow, awesome chapter all the way through!!  I was so happy this updated, I was not disappointed in the least bit!  Thank you and I look forward to the next update  :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 22 Aug 2010 Title: Once Upon a Vampire

Gasp!

 

Wow, theres a kicker thrown in, Esme is Charlie's real mate?  wow!  Didnt see that one coming :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Whoa!  Sweet niblets!  That was awesome!

I cannot WAIT to see what happens to Carlisle!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Awesome chapter!!!!!!  I hope Cullen is caught soon.  I cant wait to see him go down for what he did.

Why did he have such a strong connection to Bella?  Or was that all in his head?

Anyhow, I cant wait to see what her reaction is to Italy!  :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

*giggles*  I dont think the massage is gonna help AT ALL!  ;)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Save the castle!  lol  :)

 

Awesome chapter!

Sight by Aurora Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 427]
Summary:

“Swan! I wanted that file ten minutes ago, on my desk, it’s outside my door, are you blind?!” “No Cullen, I cannot see your office, because yes, I AM blind and I don’t want to walk in and listen to you with Tanya Denali!”


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read
Chapters: 29 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 164515 Read Count: 53282
[Report This] Published: 13 Feb 2010 Updated: 12 Oct 2014
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Oct 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - I Want To Hold Your Hand

Oh wow...

*fans self*



Author's Response:

Just the reaction I wanted :) thank you for reviewing - Aurora

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 16: At Last

Not bad or good.... freakin EXCELLENT!!!  GAWD  I am so happy!!  I love how you did this, so beautiful!  I look forward to your next chapter :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Element of Surprise

Oh HELL YES!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pit Bull Bella has been released!!

 

James is goin' down!!!!  Love it!!!

 



Author's Response:

A pit bull she will certainly be, I wouldn't like to be James right now, she's furious.

Thanks for the review :) Aurora

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Go Bella!!!!

James is such a douche!

Ed is probably nothing but a ball of frazzled nerves.

I cant wait to see what happens next!  Maybe Bella can say it while Eddie is awake

*giggles*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Bella Swan

I enjoyed the start of this story.  Alice being her personal outfitter.  No bouncy pixie in this one... shucks!  :)

lol

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 2: New Beginning

Damn that mouth baby Cullen!

Go Bells!!  lol

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Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Edward Cullen

LOL!!!

*rolls out of chair laughing*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Decisions

lol, love it!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Friends and Foes

OMG Yay!!!!  They finally said it!

*sqeeeee*

How perfect, that was just perfect!

I cannot wait to see Emmett!!!



Author's Response:

I know, I was excited to write it believe me :) Really glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reviewing, have a great weekend. Aurora

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Emmett

OMG I am loving your Emmett!!  This is great!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words, we'll definitely be seeing more of him. Aurora

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Substance

I loved every BIT of this chapter!  The Rosie and Emmett bit was priceless :)

Of COURSE Aro is a manipulative bastard.  I want him stung up by his toes!

Oh I cant wait to see what happens next :)



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks for reviewing. I'm really happy you liked the Rosalie and Emmett bit. He will be punished I assure you, I'm glad you liked the chapter. Aurora

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 26: The Benefit of Candid Conversation

Oh!  I cant wait to see the surprise!

And *swoon*  Jasper... hawt southern dreaminess  *wipes off drool*

I wonder if Alice in Bellas closet is his Mary Alices voice?  That would be a small world thats so awesome :)



Author's Response:

And I can't wait to read your reaction to it :) Thank you for reviewing, I can tell you now that Bella's wardrobe voice (dubbed 'Alice') is not the same as Mary Alice's, I couldn't quite pull that one off I'm afraid, but I promise you that the two will meet in the future!

Take care,

Aurora

Summary: Past Featured Story

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What if Edward finally found his mate, but she had a troubled past and wanted to kill herself? Could he help her? This story has DARK Themes and Rape discussion.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Finished, Edwards Paradox Completed Favourites
Chapters: 51 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 248279 Read Count: 73607
[Report This] Published: 15 Feb 2010 Updated: 14 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 09 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Meet the Cullen's

I came across this story today, and I usually dont comment until I have caught up with the writer, but I just had to interject here by saying I absolutely LOVE this story!

Your style of writing has captured my interest and I am curious and intrigued to watch everything unfold.

So I just wanted to say thank you, and I cant wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 - part 1

I really enjoyed this chapter.  Bells had a great discussion with E and Jazz.

And the progress is amazing!  I cant wait until the trial is over and she can move on

I love it, I cant wait to read part two!  :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 42 - Getaway

LOVE IT!  Except for the Russian wacko  lol

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 51: Epilogue

Wow, this story is absolutely breathtaking.  THank you so much for writing it and sharing with us readers  :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

Summary - Bella is kidnapped by a beautiful stranger that cannot kill her, but hates that a human can have power over him. Which road will he choose? When Jacob wants her, will that make his decision? Both men want to own Bella, however her heart only belongs to one. Which will have her in the end? Can Edward protect her from Jacob and his past, or will she eventually be consumed? 

 

 

 

Banner Created by the wonderful MsAmbrosia 

 

Vampires and Werewolves. OOC. Darkward. And every so often there shall be a sprinkle of the fluffy stuff. But mostly dark.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 122877 Read Count: 75630
[Report This] Published: 16 Feb 2010 Updated: 29 May 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 24 Sep 2010 Title: Chapter 30: The Voluri

Oh man, how exciting!!  I cant wait to read more!



Author's Response:

More will be coming soon, :) xx

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Isabella's Ball

Oh wow!!  That was awesome!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Gratitude

She has a long frightening road ahead of her, but she is gaining ground none the less.

I love it!



Author's Response:

Yes that she does, but you're right, she is a tough little cookie and is fighting her way through it :] thanks so much for your review and cups :] xx

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Mar 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Like a Moth to the Flame

Oh, wow!  A turn for Carlisle!  hmm....

Edward has his work cut out for him, but he has started the wheels turning on this one already!  :)



Author's Response:

Yup! Carlisle is a little less of a dick haha :]

 

The wheels are definitely turning :] xx

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 May 2011 Title: Chapter 37: Saving Grace

Thank you for this story, I will always remember it :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

The story begins six months after Edward left Bella in the forest, but unfortunately things have taken a darker turn than our beloved SM wrote. This is the tale of how Edward and Bella eventually find their way back to each other, although it is a difficult road traveled. There will not be any reference to the events in Eclipse or BD.

Rating: NC-17 is for lemons sometime down the road!

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Much love to changedbyEdward and JustBiteMePlease for my awesome banner!!!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Amberina's Completed Favs List, Brooklyn - to read
Chapters: 39 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 94477 Read Count: 28088
[Report This] Published: 19 Feb 2010 Updated: 11 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 21 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I thought this was a E/B story?  Ugh, I am not a Newton fan by any means lol

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen has survived for years drinking the blood of the dregs of society.  He longs for something different, the blood of an innocent.  Enter Bella Swan.  Will desire for her overrule desire for her blood or will he take both?  All EPOV.  Starts darker, quickly turns humorous.  Language, lemons and some violence.

My awesome banner was made by ambrosia over at Twificpics.com.  Go check them out!

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Amberina's Completed Favs List, J's Read and Loved Stories, Bella's Must Reads!
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204849 Read Count: 49095
[Report This] Published: 26 Feb 2010 Updated: 02 Jun 2012
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Epilogue #1

Wow, holy shit, that is a great part on of the end of one hell of a story!!!

Now, lets get Eddie over there and help the damsel!

Onward, fellow readers!



Author's Response:

Thank you :)  I'm so glad you liked it!  I thought it suited them both perfectly and gave her a chance to not only support his choices, but encourage them!  He'll save the girl!  Thanks for the review ;)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Oh wow!  Thank gawd for his squealy side!  Made things a bit more hot :)

 

Fluffy and cocky all in one, love it :)



Author's Response:

Haha So glad you liked it!  IMF definitely adds an element, doesn't he? :)  Smugs is happy in love but he's still in love with himself as well.  That will never change!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Holy Hot Vampire Bompin' Batman!  That was amazing!!

*Batman lights cigarette and rolls over*

Yes, Robin, all in a days work. *wink*

 

That was amazing!  Until the victwhoria part, I really dont like her.

I cant wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

Haha Thank you very much!   Glad you liked it.  None of like her, but we'll let Bella unleash her special brand of crazy on V's and see what wins out :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue #3

*standing ovation*



Author's Response:

*blushes*  Thank you so much!  I"ll do some outtakes when I get time and I'm very very happy you liked my crazy story!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 School Daze

SO beautiful!  Poetic Justice for his beast  lol



Author's Response:

Haha Thank you!  Love those two!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Cowtake

*falls over laughing hysterically*

That was the funniest shit I have read in sooo freakin long!!

Love it!



Author's Response:

Hehe Thank you!  I had a blast writing it and couldn't wait to share it with you all :)  So happy you liked it!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 The Hellmoutake

*shoots coffee out nose onto computer screen*

BWUAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!   That was great  :)



Author's Response:

Hehe Thank you!  So much fun to let him play again!

Beyond Time by Tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 715]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After the Cullens leave Forks, a twist of fate lands Bella in Chicago in 1918. She thinks it's her second chance... a chance to build a life with a human Edward. But when she finds him, he's not quite what she expected... and Bella has some hurdles to overcome to create the future she's hoping for.

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Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's not read yet, Ageise02 Current Reads, Finished, Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, My all time favorites, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiSup
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 286920 Read Count: 59998
[Report This] Published: 05 Mar 2010 Updated: 05 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32: Of Prayer and Purpose

Ok, so I cried throughout the entire chapter.  Every emotion that warred within made tears flow the entire time.

 

Thats one heck of a cliffie...

I cant wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31: Of Saying Goodbye and Saving a Life

Wow!!!!!  I never thought of that!  BRILLIANT!!!!

I cant wait to see the results!  :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue - Of Final Farewells and Facing the Future

Thank you so much for this beautiful fic.  I love it, and I hope many others did too.

Thank you.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33: Of Running and Reality

OMG AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!

My chest in clenching in anticipation and giddiness.  OMG what is going on!!

Where is his watch?

Where are their wedding rings?

I eagerly await your next update!!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34: Of Truth and Trust

GAH~!!!!!!!!  The suspense is killing me!!!!!

Loved the update, will be on pins and needles till I see what happens next.

 

Where are Bella's rings?!?!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35: Of Confessions and Committments

*gasps* Oh...*hiccup*My... *snorts*Gawd...*sobs uncontrollably*

 

I am so happy!! *cries loudly*

Love it!

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jun 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue, Part II: Of Marriage and Memories

Oh, my gawd.

 

Absolutely beautiful  :)

Summary:

 

 

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 I wish I could tell you that the world is a wonderful to live in…but I’d be lying. Unless you think living in a world where the Vampires are at war with the Werewolves. Not many humans are living free, never mind living a wonderful life. Those who don’t live locked up under vampire rule are either hiding or are in the resistance. My name is Isabella Swan and I am a human.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 64005 Read Count: 28786
[Report This] Published: 22 Mar 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2016
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

A very exciting chapter!!  I have to be wary of Tanya...

and I really dont feel like it is the opportune time to leave her.

I cant wait to see what happends next!

Happy Holidays.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 28 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great chapter!!!  Man, that was alot.  I feel sorry for the Port Angeles pack and the Seattle coven.  Team Cullen!!  lol



Author's Response:

Sorry it took so long to reply to your review I was on vacation with no wifi! Thank you so much for reviewing! I hope you continue to enjoy my story! There will be a new chapter soon. Thanks again for reading it!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Apr 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Holy crap, Aro is bloodthirsy and a raving lunatic!



Author's Response:

it's going to get more interesting, now that the cullens will be getting involved. thanks for always reading and reviewing. you are truly wonderful for always doing it. nails233

Summary: Past Featured Story

Bella Swan is a humble young girl determined to prove she's serious about making art. Edward Cullen is the pragmatic debonair foreigner, focused on his career and duties. On the surface, Bella and Edward may have nothing in common, until a chance encounter in a hotel hallway sparks a mysterious attraction and a deep need to keep the connection alive. Will true love prove strong enough to overcome the secrets and challenges that lay ahead? Or will they succumb to the pressure and expectations of the people that think they know best? 

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Go check out my blog for teasers, outfits, pictures and more!
minawritesfanfiction.blogspot.com


Categories: Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 78741 Read Count: 29705
[Report This] Published: 04 Apr 2010 Updated: 02 Nov 2015
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jun 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

Oh nop, he's going to hurt her?!?!

 

well shite!  My chest already hurts!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

GAH!!  I was sent to read your stories, and OMG, I love them!!!  I hope that you are still writing them :)



Author's Response:

Yes, I'm still writing, though because of RL and my studies I don't update as often as I wished I did. Thank ouy for reviewing and I'm so glad you are enjoying reading my story!

Thank you for your kind words again, and here's a litle teaser, forgive my mistakes, my betas haven't fixed it up yet! ;D

xoxo

Mina

TPG Chapter 7 - Teaser


~Alice POV~

He huffed out a frustrated sound, but I could see the corners of his mouth turning up as he fought a smile every time he his gaze passed by the folder on top of his desk.

"You should know by now to never bet against me, Edward." I said with a little bit of cockiness, "or to never lie to me, for that matter. It is my job after all to be always in the know," I winked.

He narrowed his eyes at me, but finally smiled and stood up and kissed me on the cheek. "I have certainly learned my lesson, my dear friend," he chuckled, "and thank you, though I doubt neither Jasper nor Paul had anything to do with this folder's content, since you are the one delivering it to me."

I threw my head back in laugher, "Those two shmucks are too concerned with all the tech and safe issues to notice you making goey eyes to a pretty girl, Edward."

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 May 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

love it!  sorry to hear about the job and computer thing.  Ugh, I sympathize!  It happened to me too!

 

I do say I cannot wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2011 Title: The Perfect Girl

Love this!!!  Renee can fall from a cliff and disappear now :)

Now I eagerly await the reunion  :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 15: The Modern Fairytale Part I

Congrats on the Noms!

 

And fantastic chapter!  Love it!  I can imagine what the gossip rags are gonna say about that pic.  Vultures, paps are.

Summary:

Sequel to Lustful Awakings. When Bella wakes up from her coma with no memory of her life with Edward, Jasper, and Alice, will they be able to help her remember? Will she still want them if she does remember? Same pairings as in LA. NC-17

Banner by rpattz1990

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Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Alice/Jasper/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, The Awakenings Saga
Chapters: 63 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 153264 Read Count: 147389
[Report This] Published: 18 Apr 2010 Updated: 14 Sep 2010
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 03 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

I think adding a third would be great!  And you could call it Rude Awakenings! 

 

I would love to see a momma Bells come uncorked on some snooty bitch who thinks that her kid and she are better just cause she is in a monogamous relationship with fighting and a cheating spouse and a fat bratty kid.  LOL, my mind just went off on a weird tangent.  Dont mind me :)



Author's Response:

Thank you:) I was thinking the same thing. Rude Awakings is on the list of possibles:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

Oh I love Beautiful Awakenings!  Thats perfect! 

 

Oh... and so not cool with the cliffie  :(  lol



Author's Response:

Thank you:)

Summary:

 

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“We found her Chief Swan, she’s ALIVE! We found Isabella!" Alive? She had really survived the last tens years?

They said I was going home but where was home now?

OOC AU Dark themed you've been warned. No rape! But there is talk about slaves and abuse   Bella x Edward

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Suspense/Thriller
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 77399 Read Count: 32548
[Report This] Published: 25 Apr 2010 Updated: 25 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Oh I cant wait to see what else is in store to shock everyone with Bells's reaction!!

Merry Christmas!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Ouch, and the cliffie ends with needing a cold shower... burn!

 

LOL

 

Loved this shapter, I cant wait to see what happens with Alice's visions now  :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Great chapter!  Of course Ed should have yelled Isabella instead of Bella when she went through the glass.

Its all good now though!

Yay!  I cant wait to see what happens next :)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella struggles to survive on her own after Edward leaves her. A chance encounter with Jasper will alter life for both of them. BxJ. Rated NC-17 for language, adult situations, and eventual lemons.

  ***Thanks to christine30974 for the beautiful banner!***

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 34 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234838 Read Count: 37142
[Report This] Published: 10 May 2010 Updated: 05 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Love it!

oh man, action packed and marriage and everything!  Perfect :)



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the romance and action!  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

OMG, I am so sad, yet so happy!  I love this ending!!!

THank you, so much for sharing this story with us readers.  I for one will be forever grateful that I got to read such a wonderful story.  I look forward to reding more of your work, for sure!

*hugs*



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it.  Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Til next time :)

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The Great Con by ButterflyBetty Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Carlisle Cullen finds himself tempted by the devel herself, his naughty step-daugher, Bella. NC-17 for language and lemons. One-shot.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3833 Read Count: 4286
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed
Date: 05 Jun 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy Shit!!!  wow that was awesome!  You, my dear, are a Wonderful writer :)



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Parachute by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1971]
Summary: Past Featured Story

parachute

After finding a child abandoned on the streets of Seattle, Bella Swan raises him as her own. What happens to their lives when his biological family is finally found?

 

 

 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, Finished, My all time favorites, Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, My Favorite Stories, Misstoria's Stories to Read, J's Read and Loved Stories, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 145849 Read Count: 204664
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2010 Updated: 04 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Drama with a touch of humor and throw in Tanya, awesomeness personafide, and you have a perfect chapter for the highly anticipated update!  :)

 

Its getting even more exciting.  I am looking forward to the next update!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog! (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

A huge thank you to everyone who sent their birthday wishes and/or nominated Jack & Parachute in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump up and nom an OC that you love, do eeet!


XoXo

Shel

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She watched her son carefully as he made his way downstairs, with Alice by his side. Something wasn't right. Sure, he was smiling and acting jovial, but there was something that was just off. Their gazes met and her worry increased exponentially. Jack's eyes were dull and missing his usual spark. 

She pulled him quietly to the side and whispered in his ear.

"What's wrong, baby?"

He smiled genuinely at her and shook his head.

"Nothing, Mom. I'm just a little nervous."

She narrowed her eyes and nodded, although she wasn't convinced that he was telling the truth, but starting an argument right now wasn't really an option at the moment.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstar
Date: 05 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Please, oh gods please for the love of all that is holy, PLEASE do not let Vicwhoria get her hooks in Jack or gods forbid, Bella.  James is part of all of this, it just pissed him off that she was flaunting her shit at Edward.

Bitch.  'nuff said.

-_-

Gods please let Charlie bring his A-game.  We need his badge to cover up the disappearance and body of Vicwhoria and James.

Loved the update, would have been 1000 times better without V and J.  ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) One word for you: Charlie!

I know a lot of you get excited for updates and I want you to know that I get just as excited to post it for you, seriously! Your reviews make me smile, laugh and occasionally shed a tear. You guys mean so much to me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving this story a chance in the first place!

Also of note, the Fandom for Preemies total has jumped to over $3,ooo raised for the March of Dimes! Freaking phenomenal! To those of who you won't be able to contribute, but still want to read the Jack Outtake, I'll be posting it on FFnet after Christmas sometime.

♥ Shel ♥

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Tanya sighed. "What happened after we left last night?" 

Emmett's lips quirked, trying to fight a smile. "Mom sucker punched Victoria when she started running her mouth again."

"Esme!" Bella gasped and glanced at Esme, who looked proud of herself. 

"What? She deserved it. I only regret not doing it sooner."

Bella shook her head and tried to hide her giddy smile at the thought of Victoria spread out on the ballroom floor.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

ALL CAUGHT UP...  I love this story!!!

 

I cannot wait to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow (well, later today, lol). It's a bit shorter than normal, but on the plus side, you'll be getting a full chapter again on Friday. Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet? There is doozy of a one up there this week! Plus the one for Chapter 22 will go up Wednesday night. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Thanks for all of the love and support!

=)

Shel

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Now that she had fallen in adoration with the Cullen clan, she couldn't imagine leaving them. But on the same token, she couldn't imagine leaving her own family and friends behind. The questions whirled around like a tornado, forcing her to blink back tears at their sudden force. She felt a nudge and turned to Esme, who was smiling at her.

"Hey, no frowning," she half-whispered. "Try to enjoy the day, sweetie."

Bella shook her head and smiled sadly. "I'm sorry, Esme. Too many thoughts running around in my head. I don't know what I'm doing."

Esme laughed lightly. "Oh, sweetheart! None of us know what we're doing. Life's a dance that we learn as we go. Everything will work out for the best, you'll see."

"How can you be so sure, Esme? I can't see how this will end happily."

Bella sniffed and looked down at her plate.

"How can I not, Bella? Fate stepped in and brought you to love and keep Jack safe. Fate brought you and Jack back to us. I can't help but be hopeful for the future, especially knowing that my grandson is alive and safe and loved."

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

Yay, Tanya's there!!!!!!  SWEET!!

Loved the family time together, this chapter rocked!

I cant wait to see the meeting with the Prestons.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up sometime this afternoon! I completely forgot how busy this week was in RL when I decided to do the double update, lol! But, no worries because it's off with Stratan the amazing now! Oh, and have you checked out the Blog teasers yet?  Chapter 22's is up if you want that to tide you over! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

You'll have to forgive me because Saturday is my birthday, lol. Isn't that a rule somewhere? ;-) Love you guys and I hope to get the chapter out to you soon! I haven't missed a Friday yet and I don't plan too!

<3

Shel

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"So, wait a minute," the younger woman interjected. "Jack's my nephew, but I have to go through you to talk to him? That's bullshit." 

"Irina," Diane said in a warning tone.

"No, don't 'Irina' me, Mom! How can you be fine with her keeping Jack from us? You're just as bad as Victoria," she snarled at Bella.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Oct 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Gah!!  Whats wrong with Jack?!  *wrings hands nervously*

 

Loved the update!  I cant wait to see what happens next!  I want to know whats wrong with little bit.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The Monday teasers are up on the Parachute Blog! http://kitsushel.blogspot.com

Don't forget to nominate your favorite OC character and their story in the Twilight Original Character Awards! If you'd like to jump and nom an OC that you love, the link is up on the blog and on my profile! Keep Jack and Parachute in mind if you decide to head over there, but if not, we'll still love you anyway! =)

♥ Shel ♥ 

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"Are you bored, too, Mom?"

Bella huffed and sat back. "Yeah, so sue me."

Jack looked around the room and then back at his Mom. "How about we make a quick escape."

She cocked her head to the side. "Go on, you've intrigued Mother."    

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

James is the dirtbag from the park when Jack was left...

I put money on it... *grumbles*

I want to strangle Victoria.

I await eagerly to see how this plays out.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! The next chapter should be up in just a few hours from now! (Midnight, EST) I hope you enjoyed the surprise update, it'll be the last double posting for awhile. I've got other O/S and Outtakes that need my love as well! 

The Fandom for Preemies fundraising has been doing spectacular! Almost $2,ooo have been raised for the March of Dimes! To those of you who contributed, you have my thanks and gratitude! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"I was scared. When I saw her, I was so scared. I- I've been having nightmares about her. That she takes me away from you and Dad. That she hurts one of you or she hurts me. I don't want to see her ever again. Please, Mom, please. Don't let her take me."

Bella's heart completely shattered as the listened to the distress in Jack's voice. In that moment, she could have committed murder and not thought twice about it. Victoria Preston deserved to be be sitting at the gates of Hades right now, waiting to have her soul judged. Bella kissed the top of Jack's head and rubbed his back.

"Ssh, baby. It's okay to be scared, but no one will let her hurt you. There's no force on Earth that will take you from us. Now that he has you back, your dad will move mountains to make sure you're safe, and you know that I would fight like hell for you. There's a very long line of people willing to stand between you and Victoria."

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

Yay!!!  Go Edward!!!!

That would be the best decision EVER!!!!!!!

Move to Seattle, Ed! 

Then have Victoria and James burned at the stake in Chitown!!!

Awesome sauce!!  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

I just posted a O/S to my FFnet account called "I'm not that Girl." I'm proud to announce that it won one of the two First Place spots in the Public Vote for the FanFicAddicts Anon 100 Pictures contest!

Also peaking of oneshots, I have another one in the OSS Contest called "Misery Business." It's my second time writing a lemon, so consider it preparing for your Parachute one. ;-) Check it out - vote and leave some love for the authors, even it's not for me! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"What has you smiling so beautifully?" Esme asked curiously, just before the flight attendants announced that they were free to exit the plane.

Bella wasn't sure exactly how to respond. Edward wanted to be the one to sit down and explain his desire to relocate to his parents. Plus, nothing was set in stone, like he himself has said. She decided to go with the partial truth.

"I was just thinking about Jack and Edward. I thought my life was complete with Jack, but Edward adds a whole other dimension. I can't picture our lives without him."    

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Nov 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

So awesome!, yay for her boys being there :)

I voted for you :)  You deserve it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are already up on the Blog now. It's pretty, umm, hot? (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Just a couple of things before I leave you with your teaser! Parachute is up for two Avant Garde Awards, Best Bella and Best Kid. Voting ends on the 4th so please vote if you can! We have some tough competition! 

Also, we've been nom'med for three Original Character Awards! Mostst Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kiddos! But, alas, I do love Jack more! Voting for those open up on 12/1! 

♥ Shel ♥

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"Jack?" Bella called anxiously. Her head whipped from side to side frantically. "Jack!" 

Edward's hand squeezed her tightly as he pulled her towards the customer service department. The crowd was heavy with people and her heart pounded in her chest painfully.  She pulled her hand away and started to push through the crowd, heading back towards where she last saw her son.

"Bella, wait!" Edward called, but she was too far gone in panic to listen. 

She stopped for a minute and tried to think clearly. What would Jack most want to see in this store? 

Immediately thinking of the answer, Bella tore off towards the escalators.    

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

I voted!!

*hugs you*

You definitely deserved it!!

This story rocks Bella's toe socks!!

lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog now. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)  

Emmett's Outtake has also posted, so check it out if you'd like!

Voting for the Original Character Awards! is open until 12/14! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough against A Rough Start's Anthony, who is one of my fave kids! But, alas, I do love my Jack more!

♥ Shel ♥

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The music surrounded her, swirling like a tornado. Bella moved her hips and danced along side of Tanya's lithe body as she got lost in the sound.

"Excuse me," a deep voice spoke into her ear. She turned and saw a tall, handsome man smiling down at her.

"Would you care for a dance partner?" he asked.

"No thanks," Bella responded. "I'm fine with my friend."

He looked over her shoulder and nodded in that direction. "Looks like she found someone else."

Sure enough, when she looked, Tanya was dancing with a blond young man. She shook her head and laughed before turning back to the man.

"The answer is still no, but thanks for asking."

"Ah, come on. I'm alone and you're all by your self. What's the harm?"

"I think the lady declined your offer, pal," Edward spoke, sliding up against Bella from behind.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

Oh no!  What is James up to?!

I am scared for Bells and Jack and Eddie...

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) It ties in with this one nicely.

Voting for the Original Character Awards ends today! We're up for Most Original Plot as well as Jack for Best Offspring and Best Male! It's going to be super tough!

Make sure you leave your pitchforks at the door before reading the teaser! This chapter's drama skyrockets, but I think it's necessary to complete our journey and it's the way that I've always pictured it heading.

♥ Shel ♥

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"Call Tanya and give her this info. She'll know what to do."

"Yes, ma'am. I'll keep my ear to the ground. If I find anything else out, I'll let you know."

Bella pocketed her iPhone and her hands curled into fists. The anger that she had experienced minutes earlier paled in comparison to the rage that coursed through her. The proof that James was a part of Jack's abandonment was black and white in front of her face. She fully planned on marching back into that office and tearing a new asshole into anyone who dared to get in her way. When the elevator reached the final floor, she was alone.

The doors opened and before she could step out, she found herself once again face to face with James Brooks. His eye widened in shock and her fist flew without thought. He swiftly caught her hand and pushed her back into the elevator with his body weight. "

What the hell are you doing?" he hissed angrily.

"You- you-" she stuttered. "You piece of shit! I'm not leaving here until I talk to Edward. I know who you are and what you did to Jack. You're a miserable excuse for a human being!" she shouted in her fury.

Quicker than she could blink, one of his forearms was pressed against her throat menacingly while the other hand gripped her by the hair.

"You couldn't just leave, could you?" he ground out. "No, you had to be Miss High-And-Mighty. From the first moment I laid eyes on you, I knew you'd be a challenge."

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31

Ouch, my chest hurts.

Thats one heck of a cliffie.

*runs away from it*



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com) Sorry these went out a few days late, but I was busy working on EPOV to go hand-in-hand with the next chapter, so I hope I'm forgiven. The next chapter should be up in a few hours and the Outtake sometime this weekend. ;-)

I'm so sad to see Parachute ending soon. It's been my baby for the past six months and I'm so thankful and grateful to each one onf you who has walked this journey with me! I'm not a big fan of angst or unnecessary drama, so our loose ends are starting to become tied up with Chapter 32. I only anticipate another 6 or so chapters before we're all finished. *sad face*

Parachute ended up winning the 3 Original Character Awards that it was up for, so much love and adoration to everyone who voted! Voting for The Avant Garde Awards ends on the 26th.

♥ Shel ♥

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Victoria flew at Bella, pushing her forward as the other girl struggled.

"Stop it!" Victoria whispered. "Unless you want to fucking die, then keep right on fighting me."

Bella ceased to move and felt Victoria's hands pulling at the knot in the rope around her wrists. "Why are you helping me?" she asked in confusion.

"I may be a shitty mother, but I'm not a killer, Bella. We've got to get out of here. He's come unhinged."

"Really, Vicki? Is that what you think of me?" James voice echoed throughout the room.

Victoria froze just as the knot slipped away and Bella felt her hands come loose. She fought the fire in her shoulders and kept her hands together so that James wouldn't realize that she was free. Victoria's ice blue eyes were large with fear as she turned to face her lover.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Dec 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 32

Thank you for this wonderful Christmas present!  I love it!!

I really enjoyed this chapter, Thank Goodness Bella was seriously hurt!  And hopefully James rots in jail.

Jack still has his mom and dad :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm sorry that I didn't get around to finishing up the EPOV, but between the holidays and an annoying family, it got pushed to the side. Never fear, it'll still go up!

♥ Shel ♥

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Jack rolled his eyes and shook his head. "I know you, Mom. There's something that you're not telling me."

She bit her lip slightly. "Victoria was there as well. James shot her and she died."

The boy's jaw dropped in shock. "She- She's dead? Like, she can never hurt me again or take me away?"

Bella blinked in surprise. She wasn't sure of what his reaction would be, but that certainly wasn't it.

"Yes, baby. She can't ever hurt you again," she responded quietly.

Jack bit his bottom lip and nodded resolutely. "I mean, I guess it sucks that she's dead, but does it make me a bad person being kinda happy about it?"

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 33

Awesome!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

In other news, Bella and Jack both won the Avant Garde Awards that they were up for! I simply can not thank everyone enough! You guys are the single biggest reason that this story has been as successful as it has! I adore each and every one of you! And not just for voting or reviewing, but for continuing on this journey with me and loving Jack as much as I do!

I'm shooting to have the EPOV up soon, but he's been difficult. I'm also in the process of writing a Victoria POV for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence compilation. It should be interesting to see how well I can channel bat-shit crazy!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Edward, can I ask you something?" she asked in a quiet voice.

He shifted slightly and brushed a piece of hair from her face. "Anything, baby."

She swallowed nervously, worried about what his response would be to her question. "The documents that James showed me, were they real?"

He took a deep breath and nodded hesitantly. Betrayal pierced her heart and she felt tears spring to her eyes.

"Ssh, don't cry," he whispered, brushing thumbed across her cheeks. "It's not like it sounds."

"Then how is it? Why were you petitioning for custody if you're moving across the country? Or was that a lie?" she replied with a small sob, her body beginning to shake.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 34

Sad and beautiful.

Man I love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

I'm saddened each week that brings us closer to the end, but I'm happy for E, B and Jack to get their HEA.

The promised EPOV from Chapters 31/32 is up now! Go check it out!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Garrett was just telling us about the Flag Football team sign ups. I really want to play this year. Please?"

She placed her hands on her hips, eyeing her son carefully. "Let me talk to your dad and we'll see."

Garrett's eyes widened and he looked at Jack, grinning. "Is that weird?"

Jack's brow scrunched in confusion. "Is what weird?"

"That you have a dad now."

"I always did have a dad," Jack responded. "I just couldn't remember where he was."

"But still," Garrett continued, "after all of this time apart, is it weird now?"

Jack thought for a moment before shaking his head. "No, not really. It feels right."

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35

I have probably missed a few chapters on reviews...

well, Im here now, arent I? *cocks an eyebrow*

I loved this chapter, even with its cliffie ending... I wanted her to scream YES to the top of her lungs... well, you know... *giggles*

Loved this chapter!  I cant believe the story is almost over!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reviewing! Over 1000 for this chapter alone between here and FFnet! You guys amaze me! The Monday teasers are up on the Blog. (kitsushel.blogspot.com)

Parachute is up for three Walk of Fame Awards: Angst Goddess, Queen of Hearts and Story of the Year. It's up against some major big ones like University of Edward Masen, Master of the Universe and Emancipation Proclamation, so I don't hold any expectation other than getting squashed like a bug. I am also up for three writing awards as well: Rising Starlet, Hopelessly Devoted and Musical Maestro.

I would adore winning the Hopelessly Devoted award. It's for the one writer that you know you can always count on. I think I've proven to you guys over and over that I'm "hopelessly devoted" to you, with the weekly updates and review replies to each and every reviewer. If you head over there and end up feeling that another author up for the award deserves it more, please follow your heart and vote for them. I just ask you to please keep me in consideration. ^_^

That being said, here are your promised teasers! The first from the next chapter of Parachute and the second from Victoria POV that I've written for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence fundraiser. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Parachute ~ Chapter 36 Teaser:

Bella stood, drenched head to toe, in the middle of her front lawn. Hot tears streamed down her face as the chilly rain pelted her skin. Her mouth was open slightly in shock, as she gazed down with wide eyes at the man she loved more than life itself. Edward's hopeful, joyous face grinned up at her from his stance on one knee. The ring held in his hand was a single brilliant diamond that was simple, yet elegant.

"Isabella Swan, I have been captivated by you since the moment I first laid eyes on you. That love only grew and expanded as I got to know you and saw first hand what a wonderful mother you are to our son. Forever could never be long enough for me, to feel like I've had long enough with you. Marry me?"

She covered her mouth and let out a sob, before throwing her arms around him and shouting, "Yes!"

They fell together, a mass a limbs and lips, their hearts beating both beating wildly. He pulled away slightly and pushed a lock of rain-saturated hair from her face.

"Let's go inside, please. I don't want you to catch a cold."

When they stood, his eyes were drawn to her white shirt, now completely plastered against her bare breasts, her nipples hard and straining against the fabric. His hand reached out to brush against her breast, causing her to become self conscious and cross her arms across her chest. She laughed lightly and nodded her head towards the house.

"Come on, let's get dry."

Edward let out a loud guffaw. "I'd rather keep you wet, love."

His hands wrapped around her waist and he pulled her back to his chest as they tumbled into the house. Sopping wet clothes soon littered the foyer floor and hands roamed greedily.

"Where is our bedroom?" he asked huskily, sweeping her into his arms.

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Victoria POV Outtake ~ "In the End" teaser:

I won't ever be remembered for my common sense. I know most of you hate me and I'm fine with that. I deserve it. I was a bad, bad girl. For those of you who don't know my story, I'll start at the beginning.

My mother married my father for his money and power. When she'd finally had enough, she left and took half of his net worth, including me. He never seemed to mind. He sent an obscenely large support check once a month, but it always felt like a buy-off. Once he re-married and began a family with his new wife, our interactions were even fewer. Who knows how I would have turned out if he had made more of an effort? He's just as much to blame for my upbringing as my mother is. He knew how she was, yet he still didn't lift a finger to keep me.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 38: Epilogue

Brava my dear, beautiful.

I am sad to see it end.

Of course, I am definitely looking forward to your next story and your outtakes :)



Author's Response:

Once again, I want to say thank you so much for all of the love and adoration that you guys have given to me and Parachute! People are going to get tired of hearing me say how much in awe I am of my readers and their giant hearts, but it's so very true! This story wouldn't have been nowhere near as good as it was nor had the kind of response that it had without my loyal and fuckawesome Verucas! (Heh, haven't heard that in awhile, have we?) I am prostrate at your feet. (Not to be confused with prostate, lol) I owe you all so very much!

The blogs have undergone some work over the past two weeks. KitsuShel.blogspot.com will now be used as a hub for everything that I write, with links to actual story blogs. Parachute's will remain up, just under a different name. Parachuteff.blogspot.com My next fic, Rabbit Heart's blog is up as well. There are a few pictures and teasers up there as well. =) RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Rabbit Heart will start posting this Friday, February 18th and will follow the same update/posting schedule as Parachute. I hope that you guys decide to continue on that journey with me as well. =)

♥ Shel ♥

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Teaser from Rabbit Heart Chapter 1:

The streets were eerily empty as the girl stealthily slipped out of the Beverly Hills house, although one could quite easily exchange the term mansion in its stead. Her shoulders were hunched as she made sure her hood was firmly covering her blond hair, her back laden with only an over-stuffed backpack and a guitar case. She needed to escape quickly, unseen, and today was the best time to make that happen. It was just after eleven pm, on Christmas Eve and there was practically no movement on Santa Monica Boulevard. She traveled on foot for almost three miles before coming across a cab running on the desolate streets.

She quickly stowed her meager possessions in the backseat before climbing inside.

"The nearest Greyhound station, please," she requested as softly as she could, but still within the driver's hearing range.

The older man glanced at her in the rear view mirror. If he thought anything was off about the way she kept her face hidden, he made no mention of it.

"Heading home for the holiday, sweetie?"

"Something like that," she murmured, staring out of the window and watching the lights pass by. They reached their destination in just under fifteen minutes and she handed him a $50 bill.

Summary: Past Featured Story

 

Takes place after Edward leaves in NM.

 Follow Bella as life takes her through twists and turns that eventually lead her back to a strangley different Edward. Can true love overcome all lifes jagged twists and sharp turns?

 

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 119541 Read Count: 24410
[Report This] Published: 05 Jul 2010 Updated: 19 Feb 2011
Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Losing a Piece of me

Awwww, Ed is coming BACK?!

Well shite, that sets a load of shit bricks in the road, eh?

 

I hope he gets his ass kicked for what he did.  I hope he is gay.

If he is with another woman, I will write my self into the story and light his pyre myself -_-

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19

Oh.

Shite.

Now what?!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Blissfully Unaware

Yay!!!!!!!

 

So, is this story have a HEA with E/B at the end?  I really hope so!

Yeah, Tristan is nice and all, but I want E and B to get back together, and then for her to kick his ass to the four corners of the earth!

lol



Author's Response:

I make no promises. I'm not known for being the flowers and rainbow type.....but I can say the ending will freak u the hell out.

 

Did that help? Prolly not, eh. Ummm... my bad?

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Perseaus

He has the AUDACITY to ask what she is to him, even after all those images?!

 

Doucheward has entered the building ladies and gentleman.

 

I cant wait to see what happens next!  What can I say?  Im hooked  :) lol



Author's Response: Since I have been so fail at replying to reviews- here is a teaser form the next chap...a form of bribery? I think not...just me giving back a lil and saying thanks. xx As I lay there holding the woman of my dreams, watching her tiny chest rise and fall with each precious breath, I fought internally with myself. Keep her for as long as she would want me. OrÖleave her now and give her to the man I knew she would want more than anything, if only she could remember him? This decision ate at me, clawed at my insides like a flesh eating disease. It burned, it ached, it was raw and unfair and for the first time in my very long life, I contemplated a way to end the pain. I had never before in my existence been so torn. I truly was, at this very moment, a man of two minds.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Man of Two Minds

Poor Tristan!!!  But, its Bella, she is just that lovable!

 

Besides, even though they seem 2-faced and conniving, there are two single girly vamps....no, wait.

I would never wish either of those two on anyone.

Tanya and Irina are sick, twisted monsters and they need torn apart and burnt.

 

We could have a triad!!! Bells, Ed, and Trist....

no, that wont work either.

I want E/B, but Tristan is a good guy!

man, this sucks! lol



Author's Response:

Looks like ur nice and confuzzled...I love it!

 

Teaser to tickle ur curiosity?


Before I could speak, a flash of blond whipped by me, and instantly, Rosalie was on Tanya. She screeched and snarled in an animalistic manner. The look on her face was one I knew I would never in my lifetime be able to erase from my memory. Pure unadulterated hatred and fury. She pounced on Tanya with cat-like grace and started clawing at her face. Irina moved to try and help her sister, but Alice blocked her with nothing but a stern look that said ‘back the fuck off’. Surprisingly, Irina made no attempt to get past her. She ducked her head apologetically and dry sobbed as the horror before her unfolded.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 23

Ahhh!  Yay!  Go Rose!!

Yes, lets tear Tanya apart... PLEASE!  Burn her to ash that can blow away with the wind, if the wind will have her!

*spits on the proverbial ashes*

ugh, now I have to clean the carpet in my office....

looking forward to the next chapter!!! yay!



Author's Response:

Enjoy!

 

I pulled her up from the floor and almost toppled over as she let loose one quick blow with her foot to my shin. I felt the bones shatter and howled in pain. The red took over then; I sprang forward and up and latched onto her hips with my legs. My hands wound in her tangled hair, and with everything in me, I snapped my wrists and ripped off that pretty fucking head of hers. I collapsed to the ground seconds later and swatted the severed head towards the door. I clutched at my shin as pain seared through it. It was already healing, but I thought the healing may have been hurting more than the shattering did.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 27: You cocky bitch!

Oh, if only Tanya's head accidentally rolled into an open fire...

that would have been perfect :)

Ok, enough of the crazy one, lets get to Eddie and Bells!

*waits with anticipation*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 28: The Cracken

WTH?!?!?!

*sobs uncontrollably*

Im still pullin for E/B!  Im rootin for ya, kids!

Tristan, I will find you someone else there dear.  Bella is easy to love, yes, but she belongs to Eddie.

nuff said.

I cant wait to see what happens next!

*hugs self and rocks back and forth to calm down*



Author's Response:

Dude, ur just way too cute. Luv ya!

 

Chapter 26 teaser:

I didn’t look either way as I darted out into the busy street. I didn’t flinch as the bright lights came at me. I didn’t feel a thing as I barely acknowledged the screeching tires and twisting metal as an oncoming car smashed into my trembling body and sent me flying, landing with a soft thud on the asphalt. My mind shattered on the verge of giving up all together. Darkness swarmed around me, threatening to overtake me. I welcomed it. I yearned for it. I needed it. I needed to drift away into nothingness and get lost in the wonderment of my own mind. I needed to shut down and never look back. Never again to wonder what if. Never again to have to look into Tristan’s heart wrenching eyes as he watched me in horror as my memories of another man filled my mind. Another man’s touches, another man’s kiss, another man’s love. I wasn’t worthy of him. I deserved to die for the pain I would surely cause him. I wanted to die; life hurt too much.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Descending into the Darkness

Wow....

That was intense, wow.  Just, wow...

Amazing!!!!  I love how this is goin' down!

I am eager to see what happens next!!  :)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Mnemonic

Oh god, I love Tristan!

But, I love Edward and Bells! C'mon people, its Ed and Bells!

Tristan will find the love of his life, his soul mate.  Bella's souls is already spoken for...

Gosh I cant wait to read more!  I love this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks, bb.

Teaser fro you....

 

“Well, apparently someone missed me,” he whispered huskily into my ear, his cool, sweet breath fanning across my face, causing me to drool. I quickly snapped my mouth shut and pulled him impossibly closer, my one leg hitching around his body. I could feel his rather large, prominent erection pressing against my inner thigh. I wiggled against his leg, trying to cause any amount of friction. I was so turned on and desperate for any amount of release from the pressure building in the pit of my stomach. [KG1] 


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Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Home sweet Home

Oh I didnt guess Eddie boy, cause I thought his eyes were a different color now?

Oh well, I love being surprised!  Thanks for htat :)

Now, I DEFINITELY want you to continue from right here

*pictures all the naughty things the duo is about to embark upon.

Yee Haw!  lol



Author's Response:

If I haven't said it yet, lemme say it now, I adore the shit out of your reviews, ur too f'ing cute :-)

Teaser:

 

As I lay there watching Bella’s sleeping form, a huge rush of regret swept over me.

What had I done? Would she hate me for this in the morning?

It didn’t take a genius to know she had been drinking, which likely altered her state of mind and made her make decisions she would likely not make had she been sober.

Would she regret making love to me in the morning? Do I regret making love to her?

No! No, I didn’t.

Suddenly a crippling pain shot through my head. I gasped for unneeded air and clutched my throbbing skull.

My phone began vibrating in my pocket. I ignored it. I fumbled in a half coherent state to slip out from under Bella without waking her and fell into a heap at her bedside.

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Jan 2011 Title: Chapter 32: If you love something, run away, right?

Um... wow.

that was abrupt and cold...

I really cant wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Teaser:

I flew through the window and immediately saw Bella’s broken body sprawled out on the floor in a pool of blood. I dropped to her side and pulled her into my arms, carefully looking her over to see where the blood was coming from. I noticed a small piece of her ribcage sticking grotesquely out of her skin and grimaced at the sight. My poor Bella. I quickly checked for a pulse as I rose from the floor with her in my arms ready to take her back to Carlisle.

Pulse –check.

Breathing –check.

Heart beat – check.

 WAIT! What was that?

I stopped short and listened intently to the distinct sounds of a rapidly fluttering heart beat. Was someone else in the house? I quickly scanned the near area for any thoughts. Nothing!

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 34: It Just Can't Be!

GAH!!!!!!

OMG, Realy?!   Yikes, cliffies are NOT my friend *pouts*

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Leap of faith with a hint of trust.

OMFG... thats a shitty cliffie  *grumbles*

LOL, you love to toture us, dont you?  *giggles*

I hope the baby is Edwards.  I really do.

 



Author's Response:

If I said that, yes, I do, would u still love me??

 

:-)

Teaser:

“Bella?”
My head whipped around and tears sprung to my eyes, “Tristan?”
Tristan slowly came and sat beside me on the bed. I could tell something was bothering him, the pain lacing his eyes was plain to see. “Are you okay?” I whispered.
“Bella, we need to talk.”