Reviews by ChocolateDrop76
A True Heir by Anonymous91 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 55]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Carlisle's world comes crashing down with the resuilts of a blood test on his son.

 

Will he be able to overcome the pain from the treason he was submitted to, and have what he always wanted; an heir? 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34315 Read Count: 16633
[Report This] Published: 01 Jul 2013 Updated: 29 Jul 2013
Reviewer: ChocolateDrop76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Isabella

The three words are not too soon in their case b/c they felt the same way. 

Reviewer: ChocolateDrop76 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The beginning of a Dream

They should have told the children they were getting a divorce and explained to them what that meant. Children are extremely perceptive.  Also when you were explaining what Bella wore to the gala you listed phone twice. But awesome story all the same!!!

Reviewer: ChocolateDrop76 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Will the dream come true?

I don't know why you made her so fucking weak (Bella). You should have made her a soldier someone who is not afraid to stand up to Esme.  When Esme said she would take Carlisle you should have had Bella ROFL. Bella should have brought up the fact that she knew Emmett wasn't hers and when Esme called her a whore she should have gotten real brazen and said. "Um fucking another dude the day before you wed and passing said child off as your husbands baby. . .no sweets the "whore award" goes to you!!! That would have been awesome!!!



Author's Response:

Hello there, glad you are liking the story, yeah i should have written something like that but I think that bella was being the bigger person in the whole situation and she didnt want to answer the same way or with the same things esme comfronted her. Thanks for reading and revewing!! :-)

Reviewer: ChocolateDrop76 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Meet the parents...

I'm glad they found out quickly. . .who did it!!! Send that bitch to jail make her big Bertha's bitch!!!



Author's Response:

Oh thats nasty, LOL! Thanks for reading :-)

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Bella Swan has had a crush on Dr. Cullen for two years. Will her greatest fantasy come true after a night of babysitting?

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Carlisle
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 109464 Read Count: 86203
[Report This] Published: 16 Jul 2013 Updated: 13 Aug 2014
Reviewer: ChocolateDrop76 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Jul 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was awesome!!! To bad you didn't make it into more than a one shot!!! It has real potential. . .



Author's Response:

I might add more, you never know.