Reviews by bluebellz
Summary:

if we die

 

Something different. A series of pov's of each of the main characters, and how they knew they loved their counterpart. Give it a shot. Read, Review, and Enjoy! I don't own SM characters.


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3403 Read Count: 203
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2010 Updated: 25 Oct 2010
Reviewer: bluebellz Signed
Date: 13 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Love Is Forever

Wow! The way you described each of their love and life was unique. And the quotes were the cherry on top.

Summary:

 

Dexter is a wickedly evil Dominant and Bella is his submissive. They have a very unconventional BDSM relationship. Dexter is a serial killer who historically does not kill innocent people. He has no intentions of seriously hurting or killing Bella but her increasing need for edge-play complicates everything. Graphic sex and violence. OOC.


Categories: Twilight, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Dexter
Genre: Horror
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Bdsm stories only
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 19086 Read Count: 7472
[Report This] Published: 21 Aug 2011 Updated: 15 Sep 2011
Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Mind-blowing story! You have amazing writing skills. I must admit I like Dexter a lot - always liked him. I love his twisted personality.

I remain, Yours by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 469]
Summary: Past Featured Story

i remain

After unexpectedly being given an antique desk and finding a letter written by Edward to his cousin over nine decades earlier in a hidden compartment, Bella, on a whim, decides to respond and starts them on a journey neither could have ever imagined. 

Perhaps there are some things we aren't meant to understand, just accept....

This story will eventually contain character death.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Historical, Humor, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Love to drive's Stories to read set 2, Can't wait for an update, J's Read and Loved Stories
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 419567 Read Count: 77530
[Report This] Published: 26 May 2012 Updated: 09 Mar 2013
Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

When I first started reading IRY I thought if this story were already complete then I wouldn't have to wait for a whole week to read each chapter (Don't get me wrong I loved the story but I'm very bad at waiting for something) but now that IRY is nearing its end all I can think is "Why is it ending so soon?", "I wish it could be longer."



Author's Response:

I can't believe how fast its gone by, but it's been nearly a year since I started posting, and it's well over two since I started writing. I'm so incredibly grateful for how well received IrY has been. I hope everyone will be happy with how I wrap it all up. I've got another fic (HP) partially written that I want to work on, an original idea, and now I've got another idea for Twilight in my head. I listened to "A Thousand Years" at least 20 times on repeat one morning, and now I'm thinking, hmmmm.... The Twilight idea I've got is completely different. Bella is the vampire, which is actually my preference and how I had initially intended IrY to be, but it wasn't what the characters wanted. I learned very early it's useless trying to fight the characters on what they want.  It is their lives you're writing, after all!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Feb 2013 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

The trees. . . Mike and Leah. . . Bella's (may) not being Edward's singer. . . so many unexpected twists. . . it was really beautiful. When Edward said all those things about onions and carrots and the way he cooked, loved it!!



Author's Response:

I have to admit I hate pierogies, but I loved that scene, so I'm so glad you liked it too. There's been so much seriousness, I wanted to add some humor. I got such a kick picturing Edward scoop the pierogies out of the water with his bare hands. Kind of like how he had trouble watching Bella wrestle with a mountain lion in her first hunt in canon, she had trouble watching him do something like put his bare hand in boiling water.  But really, him using a slotted spoon or a spatula would be like using tongs to take an Oreo out of the tray, wouldn't it?  Why would he bother?

I liked the connection of the trees, like Bella's soul knew Edward was there even if she couldn't know it consciously. 

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

After reading chapter 19, (I don't know why) I simply wanted to read the story again from the beginning. You are a brilliant writer.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I hope you like it just as much the second time through!

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed
Date: 03 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I came across your story last night and I absolutely loved it:)



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I never thought  I'd say this but I actually like Charlie and Tanya together. They are good for each other. And as for Edward, I think, for the moment, it's a good thing that he's forgotten about Bella. Otherwise he would be feeling guilty for Bella's current state(and as we all know Edward loves to feel miserable and guilty for everything - it's like his hobby).



Author's Response:

I really wanted Charlie to be a bigger part of the story than he was in canon.  I never really liked Charlie with Sue Clearwater.  She wasn't enough a part of the story to really feel any connection to her, and Tanya was the only one left unmated at the end fo the story, so...  There you go.  Charlie and Tanya.

Edward's memory loss and his "death" before he was able to send the pictures he and his friends took are important to the rest of the story.  I hope you'll like it!

Thanks for reviewing!

 

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

How did you manage to make this chapter both depressing and amusing at the same time? While I felt bad for Bella I couldn't help but smile at the mention of 'Fido' and when Tanya made scrambled eggs(with Alice and Carlisle's help).



Author's Response:

I tried to add a little humor to break up all the heaviness and drama, so I'm glad you liked it!  The pack openly displays their "dislike" of the Cullens, calling them leeches, bloodsuckers, etc.  The Cullens don't show their animosity as much, at least not publicly, I think simply because being 100 or so years old, they're more mature, but among themselves I imagine they have a few select names for the pack as well.  I wanted to kind of show the rough surface beneath the polished facade, if you understand what I mean.  Its an odd paradox, being both 17 and 100ish.  I think you'd have characteristics of both.  I wanted to show the vampires as a little more human - pardon the pun!

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

At last Carlisle knows. But why is he stuffing all these info in his head? Edward needs to know too!



Author's Response:

Carlisle is going to have a heart to heart father/son chat soon.  But I wrote my Edward with all of canon Edward's hangups, so he's just giving himself a chance to work out how to tell him.  Remember, a matter of a couple days is nothing to vampires who can live for thousands of years.

 

I've been nominated for Fic of the Week on The Lemonade Stand!  There are only hours left to vote, and currently I'm in second place!  Please vote for IrY!

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Yaaaayyyyy(I feel like a 5 yr old)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe Edward will know about everything in the next chapter! Congrats(because IrY got the second place)! Btw I watched 'The Love Letter' and I loved it - it was amazing.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm calling it my silver lemon on account of the Olympics.

I'm glad you liked "The Love Letter." 

See you on Saturday!

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I was almost as nervous as Edward when he was about to meet Bella. And I can't wait for the next chapter - I want to know how Charlie knows and how much he knows and the reason for Bella's tears (I think its Edward).

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I wish Edward will soon read the letters he wrote to Bella; he seemed sad that he doesn't know what he wrote to Bella. It's a good thing that Bella spoke to Michael - now she knows more about his family.

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I loved how Bella made Edward speechless with her "pants" remark - it was epic. rofl

I am desperately waiting for the moment when Bella finds out everything. And yes I think I remember reading about Mr. Mason though I have no way to check it because in my book, there's no page 15 & 16(courtesy of my nephew). Will Emmett seriously walk Bella to her next class? Please plz plz include the Bella and Emmett scene in the next chapter.....:)



Author's Response:

Emmett won't be Bella's only escort during the day.  Now, how do you think Bella will respond to that?

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

The way Edward understood each and every word Bella said to him, it was both hilarious and romantic at the same time.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Another great chapter - as expected from you - with Bella being self-conscious about her dreams and I'm sure Edward heard the conversation between Bella and Tanya(because see seemed so happy). And I think I need to try pancakes with peanut butter.



Author's Response:

You still need the syrup.  Don't forget the syrup!

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

When she was about to open the attachment, just like Bella, my heart was pounding. I used to think she was so dense for not realising the similarities between both Edwards but now I know that deep inside she knew it all along. I confess I never expected her to be so accepting but I guess she is just like Charlie. Now I am desperate for the next chapter - 'the aftermath'.



Author's Response:

I don't know about all along, but I think very recently her subconscious caught on.  The conscious mind has to battle through things like logic which the subconscious mind is free from.  She could accept the letters traveling between the two of them because she had concrete, or rather paper, proof in her hands.  I think she needed that same level of proof to accept that Edward really is her Edward. 

As for accepting....  She's only just laid eyes on the picture, she hasn't quite gotten around to anything beyond "He's alive.  He's here."  That'll come next.

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Bella's anger, confusion, hurt, it all seemed like a natural reaction, in Bella's case, to me. And when Bella made that comment about food - "He drinks blood. Well? So what, really? I eat flesh." I remembered something I told my friend - "I dont think vampires and werewolves are evil but zombies are horrifying. If vampires are evil for drinking human blood then we are evil for eating chicken." After saying that we started laughing so hard, apparently, I compared us(humans) with chicken. And I am rambling like an idiot.

Btw this chapter was about Bella but it makes me wonder about Edward's feelings because we all know Edward is extremely sensitive. So please, please, reveal a little more of what's going on inside Edward's complicated and over-dramatic mind.



Author's Response:

Edward will have his moments, don't worry.  One of the things that I really missed with canon what that we never get to see how Edward thinks or feels, so I really wanted to include that.

Summary:

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Edward is the vampire who is forever seventeen and Jasper is the time travelling human he eventually marries. 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 16716 Read Count: 285
[Report This] Published: 04 Jun 2012 Updated: 04 Jun 2012
Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It was beautiful. At the end, all I could think was will he change Jasper or, may be, end his own life after their last meeting so that he could follow him.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I left the ending open, so the reader could make up their mind what happens, but with time travel, you don't know how previous/future actions affect events.  I hope they find a way to be together forever.

When Doves Cry by SimplyMatt Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Sequel to The Next Three Days.

Emmett has already gone through so much, lived through what most could not. Yet after three perfect days, we was back to where it all started.

Can he live through it all again?

Will the thought of Carlisle be enough to pull him away from the beautiful light?

THANK YOU ARC MORPHEUS FOR MAKING THIS BANNER


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Carlisle/Emmett
Genre: Angst, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35608 Read Count: 1619
[Report This] Published: 07 Jun 2012 Updated: 20 Jan 2013
Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Facing Fears

That was so sweet



Author's Response:

thanks so much

Summary:

"It's amazing how someone can break your heart and yet you still love them with every last piece." Warning: Angst and issues of infidelity. Written for the Driven to Desire Challenge.  A/J


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Jasper/Alice
Genre: Angst, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12119 Read Count: 393
[Report This] Published: 23 Jun 2012 Updated: 23 Jun 2012
Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Their complicated relationship and the way Jasper called her Mary Alice it reminded me of 'Once Upon A Time' and when Alice was reading Jasper's letter all I could think was about the song Hero by Enrique. I'd love to know what the future holds for them so I'll be waiting for your new story.



Author's Response:

Hmm, I've never read that story.  I'll have to go check it out!  Yeah, his letter was pretty sweet wasn't it?  As my other WIPs wrap up I'll start working on the other story again.  It might be a little while, but I promise, i really want Alice and Jasper to get their HEA.  :)  Thanks for the nice review!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Rebecca Summers enjoys pleasing herself with the curtains open. That is, until a mysterious man calls to tell her that he is watching. Her fantasy becomes reality as she begins to perform for this stranger, following his instructions over the phone while he watches from afar. Rebecca’s world is turned upside down when finally they meet and she enters into a D/s relationship with her Midnight Caller. This is not the complete fic. These are the original pictures that went with the drabble version.


Categories: Erotica
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Drive's Stories to read that are Completed and Not completed, Lilyellacullens want to read list!, My Favorite Stories, kegkaty's read stories
Chapters: 320 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24894 Read Count: 3028744
[Report This] Published: 26 Jun 2012 Updated: 31 May 2013
Reviewer: bluebellz Signed
Date: 12 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 249: Chapter 249

lmfao. . . Don't tell me vampire cum makes you and your senses almost as strong as a vampire!!!!!!!

Efficacy by BoydBlog Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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Edward is going to leave Bella. She knows the situation will be dire if she doesn’t act quickly.  Will her faith in his love inadvertently save them, or will they both live a lonely existence without hope of ever being together again?


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10534 Read Count: 715
[Report This] Published: 03 Nov 2012 Updated: 03 Nov 2012
Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Efficacy

It was beautiful.... amazing

The Beast by AnImaginary Mann Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

beast

A story about corrupted innocence and the human monsters that surround us all.

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Angst, Drama, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6088 Read Count: 1636
[Report This] Published: 12 Nov 2012 Updated: 16 Nov 2012
Reviewer: bluebellz Signed
Date: 25 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Beasts

Edward did the same thing to a child that Jasper did to him but I must admit that he didn't end up entirely like Jasper because at the end when he realized that he was like his brother he didn't write sick letters to Jacob, he didn't claim that he branded him, he didn't want the same fate for the kid instead he confessed to Bella all about his life and wanted to help Jacob to have a normal life unlike him.



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving this story a shot.

Child abuse is an alarming reality and more scaring is the amount of abused children that become abusers themselves. In trying to understand the mechanisms behind this reality I came up with this story.

Thank you for keeping an opened mind.

Your House by SimplyMatt Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

 

Edward has loved Jasper since the day they met. His every waking thoughts are about him, but something is not right, something has changed.

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Edward/Jasper (slash)
Genre: Angst, Drama, Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8670 Read Count: 394
[Report This] Published: 16 Dec 2012 Updated: 16 Dec 2012
Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 18 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You are an amazing writer. While reading it was like I could also feel his pain, love loneliness, insecurities, all his feelings with him.



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your kind words

Summary:

Scorpius needs a teacher before he goes to Hogwarts. Several teachers/tutors with the best credentials and impeccable background have been hired, then rapidly fired. Enter Harry Potter, who immediately hits it off with Scorpius. It takes a while longer for the Lord of the Manor to come around. (H/D Slash)

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Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy
Genre: Angst, Drama, Family, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance, Slash
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 37626 Read Count: 811
[Report This] Published: 08 Nov 2014 Updated: 26 Nov 2014
Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really liked the way you portrayed Draco and Harry's relationships with the kids.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2014 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

It's kind of funny how both Harry and Draco are attracted to each other but they think it impossible that the other will return their feelings. I liked that you kept Draco's relationship with his parents, even after their death, still strong.



Author's Response:

That misunderstanding of "He's straight.  He'll never feel the same." is one of my favorite things with H/D, so I'm glad you're liking my take on it.  I've never written Lucius before; I usually kill him off rather than deal with him.  (Well, I killed him off this time, too . . .)  I see him as having been completely broken by the war, but I still picture the family unit as strong, not like it was portrayed in the movie, with Narcissa and Draco walking off and leaving Lucius to run after them.  I liked the book portrayal better.  Two things I was very disappointed with in the film were that Draco never got his brave moment in the Room of Requirement with Goyle and the Malfoy's weren't shown as they were in the book.

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

"He likes cauldrons, not wands" - lmfao.... Excellent chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad liked it--I thought it was funny myself.  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2014 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Nice ending! As usual, you did an wonderful job.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! 

Seizing Second Chances by momatu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

 

Five years after Draco lost his infant son to complications following his premature birth, he sees a happy, healthy dark-haired child the same age his own little boy would have been playing on the swings in a Muggle play park. One year after the sudden loss of his wife, Harry sees Draco quietly watching children play in a Muggle play park. If they can put the past behind them, can they be each other's second chance at happiness?

 


Categories: Harry Potter
Characters: Harry Potter/Draco Malfoy
Genre: Angst, Drama, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Mpreg, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 8994 Read Count: 254
[Report This] Published: 12 Mar 2015 Updated: 15 Mar 2015
Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow! I almost cried when Draco and Narcissa were discussing about Scorpius.

Reviewer: bluebellz Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

A sad beginning; beautifully written...