This was an interesting pairing to me... but this school has really opened my eyes to a lot of different pairings, I am usually all about the canon pairings.

I thought your description of the position was right on, I could picture it perfectly. That she wasn't a virgin made this more likely to me, because this is varsity level sex. My only complaint is the lack of foreplay, she doesn't seem excited enough for him to just push all up in her...ouch.

Overall I think this was a great read.