Reviews by toomanycats
Broken Immortal by Sephrenia Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 270]
Summary: Past Featured Story

When Edward leaves Bella she gets changed when she visits the meadow. when she wakes she hides in the Cullen mansion. Will she be reunited with her mate? 1st story ... constructive criticism welcome

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Featured Story September 2013


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Hurt/Comfort,
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55208 Read Count: 60603
[Report This] Published: 28 Aug 2013 Updated: 04 Nov 2013
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

oh man i hope they find her soon so she don't hurt the wolfs or anyone please update realsoon i love this story keep up the good work



Author's Response:

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Date: 29 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

oh boy i  can't wait and he needs to hit rose and alice update soon please and keep up the good work



Author's Response:

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Date: 30 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

more please



Author's Response:

First I would like to apologize  ...when I replied to your previous reviews I was not aware that IE would not send it through to you..  Thank you so much for taking the time to read & review my story.

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

take her the family  so the wolfs don't get her



Author's Response:

The wolves won't get her and they will have problems of their own in the not too distant future. Thank you for letting me and my story be a small part of your day.

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow i love it



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story ... thank you for letting me know. i really appreciate it.

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Aug 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks  ... I'm glad you like it 

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

i can''t wait for more please and keep uo the great work



Author's Response:

Thanks ...  I'll do my best

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

aw that's no fare get them all with her



Author's Response:

they don't all have her best interest at heart  ...  she needs to stay safe and hidden for now ... thanks for your all your reviews they really mean a lot .. 

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

yep your catching up ya



Author's Response:

I think I might be there by the end of the day ... 

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

okey dokey ... coming right up on both sites ..... thanks

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

wow i love it i what more please



Author's Response:

Hi, glad you liked it ... the party starts in a few hours 

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

can't wait for ch 26 lol



Author's Response:

LOL  you won't have to wait long ... it will be up shortly

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

love it so much



Author's Response:

thanks for taking the time to let me know ..

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

you love leaveing me wonting more lol



Author's Response:

Hey I gotta keep you coming back don't I ... thanks for reviewing

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

can't wait intil forks



Author's Response:

We're getting closer ...  

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

love it



Author's Response:

thank you .. next chapter up tomorrow

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

WOLVES YES THE WOLVES LOL



Author's Response:

yep, the wolves .... next chapter will be up in a few minutes

Seph

Summary:

 

Bella is travelling and soon grows tired while doing so. her vehicle begins swerving all over the road and she is dozing off to sleep. a pickup truck behind her tries warning her with a blast from his horn. 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 22373 Read Count: 1219
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 25 Mar 2014
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

glad your back can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for this. I am not too sure if i should have put it up since it isnt a 3 way with Peter, Bella, and Jasper, nor is it a Jasper/Bella fic. So i am glad someone likes it.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Mar 2014 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow i love that you back writing again  the ch 2 was great can't wait to read more of your storys keep up the great job



Author's Response:

I am glad to be back. I had no internet for some weeks at one point so i couldnt even check emails. Bd huh? Oh well. am going to write to you soon and show you the idea i got for a true blood twilight crossover. see ya then.

Summary: Past Featured Story

banner

 

Somewhere in life I took a wrong turn and never found my way back. For me there were no second chances, there were no redos...or at least that's what I thought, until I met a girl on a bus who looked just like me...just a little richer. 

Contains Daddyward/Doctorward

Title Change! Once called My Redo Life

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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 24485 Read Count: 23444
[Report This] Published: 05 Sep 2013 Updated: 04 Jun 2014
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Isadora Meet Isabella

can't wait for more

Summary:

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A very lonely Bella deceided to take Alice's advice and order herself a toy for the night.

Beta'd by RAH07890

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 911 Read Count: 3166
[Report This] Published: 12 Sep 2013 Updated: 12 Sep 2013
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love it

Summary:

One time, no matter how hot or sexy was not enough. We both knew it. So he made me an offer I couldn't refuse. For the next year my body would belong to Edward R Cullen; the billionaire, the genius, the sex addict and the married man.  How did I get here and why don't I want to leave? 

 

 


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Themslovebug90's read stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiHu, Stories I've Already read, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 104383 Read Count: 281049
[Report This] Published: 21 Sep 2013 Updated: 29 May 2014
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

got to love bella 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

love it

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love it wont more

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Sep 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i like her lol

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

someone  needs to teach tonya a lesson

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i what a man like him

Aquatic Love by my mermaid bella Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Mermaid Bella, Bella and her siblings spot a sinking ship out on the one night and against their wishes she saves the survivors but will this be a decision she'll live to regret. Rated M for the usual, summary would've been better but I can't decide if it's historical or modern.


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Fantasy, Friendship, Historical, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Historical Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 36 Read Count: 243
[Report This] Published: 01 Oct 2013 Updated: 01 Oct 2013
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed
Date: 01 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Prologe: Drown

modern times wood love to read more

Summary: Past Featured Story

A change in the past makes an early intervention necessary for the Cullens. This story is complete and I will upload one or two chapters each week.

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 59 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 253021 Read Count: 132213
[Report This] Published: 12 Oct 2013 Updated: 06 Oct 2014
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i feel sorry for bella can't the cullen's ask her dad to get away from her mom?



Author's Response: They have to wait!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

i wood not do that bella lol



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I'll post the next chapter on Saturday or Sunday so you can see what happens.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

aw i say live with them not with her mom



Author's Response: That would be too easy:) Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

cool love it



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i fell for bella



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Poor Bella, but don't worry I always have a HEA

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

poor bella don't know what think lol



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

they could have told her that she eddie mate



Author's Response: Shhhh... that's a secret, you don't want her to panic and run away!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

good ch



Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

poor bella she gets to both ways



Author's Response: I know:( Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

poor bella she don't fit in anywhere



Author's Response: I don't think she really wants to at this stage. She has spent so long deliberately cutting herself off so people didn't find out about her home-life that she just wants to be left alone.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

can't wait to see what eddie say's



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. The next couple of chapters will fill in a lot of Edward's time away and his reasons.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

poor eddie and bella 



Author's Response: Don't worry they will sort themselves out a bit soon.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

poor eddie he needs love



Author's Response: Or a kick up the arse

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

just change her and have fun figering out



Author's Response: Tooooo easy!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

he loves her so much

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

wow that's called love

Summary:

when Bella is finallychanged Jsper's feelings only grow stronger fo rher. but he will not make any move as he thinks she does not return them equally.

 

It is when she is in her room dancing around singing that Jasper checks in on her activities. What would wake up the fire in his loins and heart, and does this person care at all for him?

 

What are Bella's feelings on her maker, sire, Major Jay?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7212 Read Count: 1042
[Report This] Published: 21 Oct 2013 Updated: 21 Oct 2013
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love it glad your back



Author's Response:

Thanks, babe

Hope to have another one shot complete soon.

Pity you and i arent friends away from twcs and fanficdotnet. I couldemail some ideas to you to peruse.

Tired of Being Sorry by speklez Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by Ellie Wolf

Even death couldn't free her from the iron grip that was held over her life. Even vampirism wasn't enough to allow her freedom to live. After a century of being placed in glass on a shelf, she breaks free and runs. She put no thoughts to her actions and must now face the consequences.     


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Peter
Genre: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, One-Shot, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My favs past present and future
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6601 Read Count: 2858
[Report This] Published: 23 Oct 2013 Updated: 23 Oct 2013
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow wow  love it

When I Pretend by Kittyinaz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

 

wap

When I Pretend: Blood is spilled, and instead of James losing his life, a mate is found and the world is in a world of hurt.  The God of War is about to give lessons on why leaving him and his alone is a good idea.

Rated M for a reason folks.

Many thanks to thewriteashley for taking up the reigns on Betaing this.  Again, this is your reviews making this a reality.

Disclaimer for the story contained under this heading: Stephenie Myers own Twilight.  Not me.

For more information, check out my website: http://kittyinaz.wordpress.com/


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 13511 Read Count: 8225
[Report This] Published: 25 Oct 2013 Updated: 25 Oct 2013
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Condescending Talk

can't wait to read moer then ch 5 hope ch is soon

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Age Has Never Made Me Wise

can't wait for ch 6

Unexpected things by sjdavis84 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 168]
Summary: Past Featured Story

ut

 

The accident prone waitress runs in to a jerk. Little does she realize how her life will end up changing, hopefully for the better. The jerk she runs into isn’t so much of as a jerk as he is arrogant and dominant… But Bella doesn’t know that.

 

Thanks AstridGreenEyes for the Awesome banner!!

fs


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 49952 Read Count: 41537
[Report This] Published: 13 Nov 2013 Updated: 23 Jun 2015
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

wow love at frist sight



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

go bella



Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you like her!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

one for girl power



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

stand bye your guns girl



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

he can be that dom with me



Author's Response:

Me too ;) Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

talk oh no ?



Author's Response: We will see! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i fig he tell her she staying where his dom persona now



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

love it  can't wait for more



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

this ch was great



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Summary:

Jasper goes back to ccheck up on Bella and discovers something he wishes he hadn't. The pack support his aiding them and they make ssure he does what he can for Bella.

 

They are told to leave Forks for a number of years to be safe, and they do comply, understanding why the pack asks this of them. Sam makes sure the death of Bella is done as well.

 

Whose hunting grounds are they both trespassing on? Is Jasper now his sister's sire since hsi venom is so much an so strong and so little of the other vampire is in Bella anyway?

 

Does Jasper find his go at love?


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Family, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31578 Read Count: 4111
[Report This] Published: 17 Nov 2013 Updated: 22 Nov 2013
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

god who don't love a dom jasper lol



Author's Response:

Oh my god! I know, but then we would have to fight every woman and their pet to get him to ourself. lol.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

glad your back writing



Author's Response:

Thanks doll, i am glad to have edited what i can to the best of my ability, just so i can put this old one up onhere for everyone.

 

Will be putting another one up soon, short story

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

great ch



Author's Response:

Of course it is. lol ;D

 

Thanks for reviewing it, sweets, you have a good one, bye

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

what's carlisle up to can't wait to see



Author's Response:

Is he up to anything, or just being nosy

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i still don't know what he whated with the papers



Author's Response:

It said it in the chapter.

Robert's client list. His vampire client list at that too.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i wonder what aro seen in his mind



Author's Response:

I didnt bother with details on tht as i figured there was enough mind reading and details already. sorry

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i wonder who sent them?



Author's Response:

Dunno!

But chapter 8 and then 9 and i am finished.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

i thought  that carilise is dead?



Author's Response:

Yes, between chapters 6 & 7. Why is that? I have reread chapter 8 but find nothing referring to carlisle. Did i miss something

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i love this story thanks for writing it and shareing it with us keep the great job your doing



Author's Response:

thanks sweets

I am glad you like it.

More Than One. by wendy1969 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

More than one: Emmett is single. Rose with Carlisle, Alice with Esme. Jasper is with a human and loves every minute of it. But what has happened to cause Bella to be bedridden and dying.

 

mto

 


Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper/Emmett
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23074 Read Count: 4447
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2013 Updated: 30 Nov 2013
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

poor bella  she always has heart ache



Author's Response:

Not for long. How about these pairings, huh?

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow two at once hot



Author's Response:

And no Edward in sight so far

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

can i get some of that hot dam that's hot



Author's Response:

Now i know i am not the only one out there who wishes they were Bella or were there instead of Bella. lol

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

love the three way



Author's Response:

I loved writing it, although i did go through and edit it so many times i lost count. by editing i mean rewriting. lol

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

wow eddie surly mest up



Author's Response:

Thanks darlin'.

But get next chapter read since it should be loaded in here now.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

don't trust maria



Author's Response:

No shit, woman. Since when does anyone trust her in most fanfic stories. lol

 

But what sort of writer would anyone be if they didnt bring someones past up at some point. Do not worry though, the girls arent as yielding and compliant and all that shit as the guys think they are.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

ya maria gone nexts is aro



Author's Response:

next is the epilogue

 

Thanks for reading this. I am putting another of my older fics up soon today.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

i love it as always



Author's Response:

Thanks mate, best get moving on things. B isn't E's anymore needs another chapter.

Summary:

Hey darling.

I see that jerk of a so-called brother of mine is being controlling again.

When you go home deny him entrance to you room and house. Emmett will take him hunting.

I will be waiting behind your house for you, each night until you come to me

Don't take anything but what you need. Identity, cash etc. leave you phone because he can have it tracked.

Wear some long sleeve clothing or a light jacket. Warm shoes or the hiking boots.

Seven tonight Bella. Hope to help you out some darling.

No matter if it takes you days to read this.

Yours

Jasper Whitlock, (a real vampire).

 

 


Categories: Twilight, Southern Vampire Mysteries/True Blood, Non-Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Action, Drama, Family, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 26949 Read Count: 8983
[Report This] Published: 22 Nov 2013 Updated: 27 Nov 2013
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow love it



Author's Response:

thanks darl

will update it tonight

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wow the cullens don't when to stop



Author's Response:

I know, it is a pain in the ass isn't it?

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

i have a feeling it anit going to stay clam for long



Author's Response:

Now what gives you that idea, hmm? lol

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Epilogue

love it 



Author's Response:

Thanks babe's, love that you are enjoying it.

Summary:

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"In three words I can sum up

everything I've learned in life:

it goes on"

Robert Frost


Five yrs ago, following Charlie's brutal murder & the Cullen's departure, Bella fled Forks, hoping to forget. That had been the plan, at least. However,when an innocent trip turned dangerous, she realized she hadn't buried her past as deeply as she thought. The supernatural world hadn't finished with her yet. In fact, she was the perfect weapon in an age old war.

*Note: Stephanie Meyer's vampire and supernatural parameter's are altered to fit my story—mostly regarding Bella's (eventual) supernatural parameters. I've labeled it NC-17 for explicit sexual content, language, character death, and physical violence.

~Edward/Bella~

(Previously named "Once Upon an Unfortunate September" and posted on Twilighted.)


Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, Alternate Universe
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Action, Angst, Drama, Fantasy, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Mystery, Romance, Sci-Fi, Suspense/Thriller
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 69899 Read Count: 5408
[Report This] Published: 27 Nov 2013 Updated: 05 Mar 2015
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Aug 2015 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14-The Blue Flame of Hope

can't wait for you to update this story

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9-The Royal Courier

love it wood like to read more

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Jasper: A Chance Encounter

wow can't wait for more to read



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll post again tonight or early tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing.

Summary:

This story is mainly just MC-17 explicit material. Please do not read if you do not like any writings of descriptives or of characters vocalizing during the pleasurable acts of this rating.

 

Bella isn't Edward's, but who is she with? Who is this female named Lizzy that Edward is hanging with and bringing to the house. Why does Alice have someone by her side who has a death wish when he is up against the major. How many places can they get away with doing it in before they are caught? Rose meets a singer.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper, Edward/OC
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02 Bella/Jasper stories
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 34249 Read Count: 12906
[Report This] Published: 01 Dec 2013 Updated: 07 Dec 2013
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

well that's one way to claim her hot dam that's hot



Author's Response:

Why thank you. Thank you so very much. Just for that, here is chapter 14

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

fuck in space niddle i wood have never thout about that



Author's Response:

I had it suggested by a young writer who so happens, apparently, to be deaf. She expressed her ideas on where they can fuck and they are good so i used them.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

omg thats realy hot



Author's Response:

next chapter coming up

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

wow you got to love jasper



Author's Response:

Yep!

chapter update in a few minutes

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

can i be bella and let him fuck me that way wow



Author's Response:

Nope! If you were Bella then who would be reading this in your place? :D

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

i still what jasper



Author's Response:

Really? Who wouldn't though.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

i now who don't what jasper that wood be eddie  anyhow i wood take anyhow anywhere and anytime



Author's Response:

???

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

wow love all those senes what about a three way with jasper and caius lol



Author's Response:

Nooo. Not a 3way. This is J/B hot and delicious. ;D

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

poor rose she will hate herself if she hurt anyone



Author's Response:

I know, but i thoughti would give you a little drama.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

they do like there sex



Author's Response:

Yep! I warned everyone about that, too, so they should've known not to read it if they are not us. ;)

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

alice anit going to have a mate if he don't leave bella alone i think he should change her so they can have lot more sex lol



Author's Response:

Be set for something else to throw a spanner in the works.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

bad tonya she anit going to like what happens



Author's Response:

New chapter and it is the final chapter as well, is up now.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

thank you for writing this and all your story's and can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support.

Others are up now.

MOMMA by wendy1969 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

 

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Not fantastic with doing a summery, so here is a piece from the start of this one shot to get your interest...

 

"Momma?" she looked to me curiously "Momma, who is that coming in our yard?" I looked out the window and then to my daughter. She is full of her usual curiosity, but although I never did hide anything from her, I didn't flaunt things either. I looked out the window briefly and saw who it was. My mind caught itself before I flashbacked to that time. I never bragged about anything really, especially about her dad and about the one man who I really loved, but that man is walking up on to my front step right now. It so happens to be the same man who is the father to Tonya.

 

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Adventure, Drama, Family, Friendship, Humor, Hurt/Comfort,, One-Shot, Romance, Supernatural
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15769 Read Count: 2314
[Report This] Published: 07 Dec 2013 Updated: 07 Dec 2013
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

yes i love the little family it was great to read but way did it show twice on the same story one right at the end  the same story right after it but it was great to read



Author's Response:

I do not know, but i will check it out.

Summary:

What happens when Edward sends Bella away before she can tell him a secret she has been keeping. currently a one shot


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7354 Read Count: 2565
[Report This] Published: 08 Dec 2013 Updated: 09 Feb 2014
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

love it

Summary:

  FORMERLY TITLED: A Grandiose Idea.

THE NEW TITLE IS AS YOU HAVE READ WHEN SEARCHING FOR ONE OF MY STORIES:

"Majorrr, come out to playay."

Major soon meets the real Isabella, and he plays a game with her before then claiming her as his, the only way the major knows how.

 

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Categories: Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings
Characters: Bella/Jasper
Genre: Drama, Femme Slash, Friendship, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15286 Read Count: 10172
[Report This] Published: 14 Dec 2013 Updated: 17 Dec 2013
Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

can't wait to see how this comes out



Author's Response:

It isn't a big dramatic or traumatic story, as i see so many of them on all sites i have read stories on, i prefer to try and keep it as light as possible so people don't expect too much from them but an amusing distraction and read. Thank you so much for reviewin and i do hope you enjoy the rest of the story.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

yes you know he will come to play lol



Author's Response:

Of course

 

I would be offended if you did not think that. :D

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

yay no more vickie and one hot pot of sex there major



Author's Response:

Well, now i have to put the next chapter up for you all. sheesh, you lot are gonna kill me when you see i told the truth to some reviewers when i said it is a short story. now i have 4 chaps left, 3 after i upload this one. bye my lovelies

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

o shit i can't wait to see this



Author's Response:

I have, believe it or not forgotten what was in each chapter so i hve to go reread the ufckers just so i know what ya' excited about. lol.

New chapter getting uploaded now.