Reviews by znadias24
Summary: Past Featured Story

What does Jason Taylor think when he meets 23 year old Christian Grey? After four years of working for him, what does Taylor think when he meets little Miss Steele?

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166683 Read Count: 57798
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2012
Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 04 Jul 2012 Title: Fifty Shades of Taylor

Took Taylor long enough! 

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 27 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Haha, i love the last line. looking forward to your next update



Author's Response:

Excellent! Thank you!

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25, Masquerade

I'm glad things are starign to calm down for you! :)

 

Also can I just say how much I love your characterization of Taylor. 

 

Is it possible byt the way that if you do more POV switches you make that clearer? I got kind of confused the first time since I was expecting Gail to be talking and same when it switched back to Taylor. just a Request! 

 

Keep writing!



Author's Response:

Okey doke. Will do!

Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.

 

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145673
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 06 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

And so the questions begin. I can't wait to hear more of Christian's explainations to Teddy. A Very sweet end to the chapter.  

Thanks for Writing! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks. Who knows what he will hear in a future chapter. Little people have big ears.

Thansk for reading and reviewing.

E.

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138644
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 24 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

im so surprised he even told her what all he did to the troll



Author's Response:

Well he had to. Since this is written from Ana's POV, it's the only way I  could write about what happened. But I think he is getting better about  being upfront with Ana, as long as it suits him. 

Thanks for leaving a comment.

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Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 29 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

I can proudly say i've never been that happy for someone to die: Elena, not Baby Sammy. 

 

Poor Sammy. :( 

 

So how'd she die?



Author's Response:

I know. I miss him.

E.

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 14 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Hallelujiah! He's back! Our favorite guy is back! :)

In all of this hubbub, I'd forgotten about his biological grandmother leaving a note for Anastasia!

 

Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

We haven't forgotten about Grandmother Douglas. She's on the way.

E.

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 11 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Love it. And all during lunch. I'm excited to read more! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm sure Christian is glad to hear that you are eating properly. I appreciate the review. E. 

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

and christian gets what he wants again, haha. im excited to read about baby number three :)



Author's Response:

In an upcoming chapter, Ana tells him it is his ultimate act of controlling her. Luckily she is good natured about it. 

Thanks for reading.

E.

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 17 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

"horny" will always wake christian up! haha

and i'm glad you made sure christian got a sense of being watched whilst sleeping.

And I hate Elena even mor ewith this chapter. I mean how far gone is she that she is now listening to this husband and wife have sex. 



Author's Response:

Yes. Sometimes I'm surprised that Christian has enough blood  left to get up to that  CEO brain of his. Evidently Elena has added voyeur to her repertoire. Oh, well. I guess everyone needs a hobby.

Thanks. 

E.

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

um talk? haha  

and totally did not expect mr. grey to attack in the middle of the night 



Author's Response:

Why?  He is, after all, Mr. Sex on legs. They will talk.

E.

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Sadness. I am not okay with Teddy getting kidnapped.  

Also I think the story behind Christian's mom is really nicely done. I mean it's just one of the fifty shades of fucked up. 

And i'm sure teddy beign gone might become his 51st shade. 

I hope he does get found. 



Author's Response:

I love Teddy, too. 

thanks for reading and commenting.

E.

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 26 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Of Course, that woman would be back. When is she not wreckign havoc in the world of the Greys?

I'm liking this sequel. :) 



Author's Response:

Hopefully she will get the message sooner rather than laters. (Couldn't resist.)

Thansk for reading and leaving a review.

E.

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Not the government? Then the drug lords? My imagination is going wild!

 

Keep it up!



Author's Response:

Thank you. More on the way.

E.

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

oh no, that cant possibly be good!

 

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I agree with Thompson-it's about time somebody took legal action against Mrs. Lincoln. And pain pill up the ass is definitely the best way to go for telling him haha. 

 

Keep it going!

 



Author's Response:

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 07 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh Thank Goodnes! I was scared you were done writing this series!

 

I'm excited to see where you take Book 3



Author's Response:

It is posted.

Thanks.

E.

Summary:

This is my take on Ana and Christian as they prepare for their wedding. Wedding Fun, 50 Shades style...


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 29972 Read Count: 19103
[Report This] Published: 30 Jul 2012 Updated: 30 Jul 2012
Reviewer: znadias24 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 15: I love you forever

This entire story has just left me with this smile on my face. I loved it! :)

Phoebe's Babies by LizLemon Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

... and more unanswered questions! My sequel to Phoebe's Wedding (read that first!). I wanted to wrap things up from my first story!


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 116370 Read Count: 24949
[Report This] Published: 27 Oct 2012 Updated: 06 Sep 2014
Reviewer: znadias24 Signed
Date: 28 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 19: Lunch Date

I look forward to reading the rest of the story. For some reason TWCS wasn't sending me chapter updates about your stories and I only found out about this sequel just recently: and I've laughed, smiled, cried, and hurt with this story. I will say though that I just have such a hard time imagining Ana and Christian older.

 

I know in the last story there was a future vow renewal, so I look forward to reading it once again! :) Keep it up!

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Lingering pieces of shrapnel

I'm glad he is back! I'm excited to read what you have in store for them!