Reviews by mjentrance
Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.

 

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145698
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: mjentrance Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

I love this chapter and I absolutely love your writing!! 

Your work and your writing style is exactly what I needed after finishing FSOG. I too was looking for "more" and it brought me to FF. I read everything you wrote there and followed you here for the x-rated version. Please don't stop! I can't wait to see how you end it.

Your writing is absolutely superb. 



Author's Response:

Reviewer: mjentrance Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

That was amazing!! 

Thank you so much for exploring the psychological root of Christian's issues. This chapter, and the previous ones where you dealt with Ana's self-esteem problems were what I found lacking in FSOG.

Are you sure you're not EL and secretly posting this story? Because your work is the perfect compliment to the books. This could easily be book 4. 

Love it! Please don't stop. 

I wonder, how far are you planning to take A and C?



Author's Response:

How far do you want me to take them? They are young and I've got a few years left. LOL Thanks for reading. If I were E.L. I'd be far too busy with my accountant to have time to write fanfiction. But thanks. I felt like there were emotional  issues that would eventually get in their way. Growing up does that to you.

E.