Reviews by jaxfan
Summary: Past Featured Story

Fifty Shades...More

Book I

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

Ana and Christian have been together for 7 years. They have built a good life together and have 2 beautiful children. But, in spite of Ana's love, will Christian ever gain insight into his past and be able to deal with his pain? Will Ana be able to continue if he can't? After reading the trilogy I discovered that I needed ….More.

This story was originally published on FanFiction.net, however it had to be altered to meet their rating requirements. It continues to be updated there. This is the original. ENJOY.

NC-17: Content is only suitable for mature adults, ages 18 & up. May contain explicit language and adult themes.

If you have difficulty contacting me on this site, feel free to PM me on the FF site.

 

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: 50 Shades - Read, G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107982 Read Count: 145698
[Report This] Published: 24 Jun 2012 Updated: 10 Jul 2012
Reviewer: jaxfan Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

I have loved this story so far, but a baby by an ex sub would really ruin it - besides there are several of those out there already on ff and twcs.  Seriously, with Christian's control tendencies and Taylor, they surely would have followed up to be sure....Not sure how they could survive that after all the recent drama.  Please don't go there!



Author's Response:

Not to worry. Has a purpose, but not a story line. Thanks.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed
Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank goodness!



Author's Response:

All better? Thanks again for reading.

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Date: 07 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

 

AMAZING!  Well done - you really should write a book.  Now I hope Ana is pregnant - before not so much, but I think it would really help them now.  Thanks again, more soon, please!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much and thanks for reading.

Summary:

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Fifty Shades...Clarity

Book II

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

 

 

You will probably want to read Fifty Shades More before starting this one.

"I look  into his beautiful gray eyes and my heart melts. I still love this man. He taught me how to love. He gave me my precious children.  He tried to  lay the world at my feet and he gave me his love and his trust."  Christian has confronted his demons. Ana has accepted his past. But will Christian's past intrude on the future? Can Ana live with it, if it does?  This is Book II.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy, Canon
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Angst, Erotica, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Risqué
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 139308 Read Count: 138686
[Report This] Published: 10 Jul 2012 Updated: 05 Sep 2012
Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstar
Date: 12 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Love this chapter!  Are you planning to revisit Escala/Amy at all.  Not sure why I want him to explain that in detail, but I feel like Ana would need that....thanks again!



Author's Response:

Maybe. I was almost lynched for bringing her in to start with. I thought Flynn did a good job, by explaining that Christian returned to the only way he knew how to handle stress and anger and that was to have a sub. Hopefully he will learn other more acceptable coping mechanisms. But, we'll wee. There will be more villans, though. Never a dull moment with the Greys.

 Thanks. E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh! Hoping for sme happy times ahead for these two!  



Author's Response:

I'm writing a happy chapter now. I prefer to write them that way.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed
Date: 10 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Please, please, please no children by subs - can't believe his control freak side would allow that!  Please no!



Author's Response:

At this point there are none. Already too many stories with that plot. 

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Aug 2012 Title: Fifty Shades...Clarity

My heart just breaks for them, but once again, you have done a beautiful job capturing all of the emotions so perfectly.  How fitting a finale for Elena.  Bravo for that!  

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed
Date: 28 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Poor Sam, how will they get through this?  As for Elena, it is about time...Well, we know Christian didn't do it because he was with Ana, my bet is on Grace or Carrick...



Author's Response:

Bet again.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed
Date: 21 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Confused about how far along she is....top paragraph says 12 weeks and Dr. Greene says 15 or 16 - maybe that is why she is so big????



Author's Response:

Thanks. I appreciate you catching that. She is farther along. I'll correct it. 

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed
Date: 23 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

You are the best!!! Please don't keep us hanging! 



Author's Response:

Not too much longer.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed
Date: 25 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Oh, I have such mixed feelings....Of course, I love your writing, but I really felt like he finally had remorse in More...now this makes it seem like he may revert again...Ughh!  Poor Ana...they both need Flynn now!  Elena needs to go down for good!  This also makes me go back to Amy and the need for details there...was hoping to get past that, but this made it rear it's ugly head again.  All for the drama, but maybe a different kind...still feel like Ana needs a distraction!!!



Author's Response:

There are things down the road for Mrs. Grey. Don't get down on poor Christian. He has come so far. He didn't really mean to slip and fall. It was probably more of a slight trip. 

Thanks for reading and leaving a review.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed
Date: 29 Jul 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

As always, you are fabulous, but please no more Amy, unless it is just to tell exactly what happened in the playroom...I mean didn't he get rid of all the whips, belts and canes years ago???  I also hope the new housekeeper is a forty something blond...surely Ana knows better on that the only person that needs temptation these days is Ana :)  A little worrying on Christian's part would be well deserved after all she has gone through.  Of course, we all know Ana would take the high road, but a little attention would surely be good for her battered self esteem!!!



Author's Response:

Ana will get her chance. It's hard to tell what happend with Amy, because this is Ana's POV and she can't know anything unless Christian tells her. Maybe we can figure out something. 

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed
Date: 01 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Surely after all they have been through this last year no housekeeper could come between them...possibly planted for something, but please nothing romantic!  At some point, enough has to be enough, right??? Please:)

 

 



Author's Response:

I agree. Things coming up, but nothing can separate these two.

thanks for reading and leaving a review.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed
Date: 04 Aug 2012 Title: Fifty Shades...Clarity

Ughh!  Please don't make us wait long for an update.  You've spoiled us so much three days felt like an eternity!

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed
Date: 05 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wonderful as always.  Please don't make us wait long for 18!  Hope he hasn't lost his business ethics with whatever this insurance company is... Doesn't sound good.  Oh the drama, but such a nice reprieve from subs and Elena!:)



Author's Response:

Yes. Elena needs to die. Put her and us out of our misery.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Wow! Once again, you have outdone yourself.  Please update SOON.  Thanks for another great chapter.

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Date: 15 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Brilliant as always...hoping Ros not calling and Andrea questioning Ana's authority is addressed....maybe she should rethink joining GEH!  As you know, I am always hoping for Ana to develop a backbone and give Christian a taste of his own medicine for once....I am confident you'll make that happen for us, as well as a fabulous demise for Elena!!!  Please!!! 

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Great as always! Hoping Louise stays on, seeems like a perfect fit and she likes kids!

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

It is time for Elena to rot in hell....really hoping you have something suitable planned soon!  Please?



Author's Response:

On the way. A couple more chapters.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26 Aug 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oh my God, Elena pushed her....please let Ana and the baby be okay!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Ms. E,

 

I just left a review on FF, but wanted to reiterate my deep appreciation for your brilliant writing.  Your version of the C and A we have come to love, is far superior to the original.  Thanks for taking us on the ride looking forward to Full Circle.

CJ



Author's Response:

Goodness! From your lips to E.L.s ears. As you know Full Circle is up. 

E.

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591761
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
Reviewer: jaxfan Signed
Date: 10 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Oh, Ms. E,

You are so good at weaving your webs of drama and so different from all of the rest.  I know I've said it before, but I really hope you never stop writing.  I'm waiting on the update that you've been published!  Thanks for three amazing stories.  You know that I always count on you to keep our favorite couple together, and I'm sure you won't disappoint.  Looking forward to "more" soon.

 

 

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Welcome back, Ms. E.  looking forward to everything coming "Full Circle".  Hoping that is the last we see of Ms. Bellows....hmmm.....



Author's Response:

Ms. Bellows may have thought she was a major threat, but she is a minor character in my book. 

Thanks. E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Brilliant as always!  Real life at its best!

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Beautiful as always, Ms. E.  You never disappoint!  

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed
Date: 25 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Well that should make for an interesting explanation to Mr. Gray.  What on earth is he doing there?  Can't wait to see...



Author's Response:

The answer is today. Why is Paul there? Because I put him there, silly.

More today.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed
Date: 26 Sep 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wonderful as always, Ms. E.  The only thing that troubles me is her going to that dark place about the cheating....please not that here!  This is my happy escape, save for some pretty fabulous bouts of drama!



Author's Response:

Neither of them would ever cheat. Not here. Never.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

So sad that he was trying to help with the nursery and only made it worse. Communication, communication, communication!  Myra the cleptomaniac?  Too funny! I did not have a chance to review the last chapter, but I am sure whatever you have in store will be fabulous.  These two have had more than enough drama to last a lifetime, but I have no doubt in your capabilities to keep us enthralled.  



Author's Response:

Thank you. I think Ana will convince him to open his mouth and talk to her. No CEOs in a marriage.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Whether it is war, peace, drama or lemons, you never disappoint!  Looking forward to the make-up and finding the ring!


 



Author's Response:

Both coming up. Make-up written and writing the ring now.

Thanks again.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ms. E,

That was just not nice to leave us hanging like that...can't wait to see what is next.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Oh Christian.  I have a feeling Elliott was not fit to drive and someone else dropped him off.  Hope there is no blackmail drama to come...poor Ana!  The girl seriously needs a spa weekend.



Author's Response:

Yes she does need a spa weekend. Last one she had is when Mr. Grey had a new sub in Book I. Don't need to go there again. She's starting the new job though. More good stuff on the way for her.

As always, thanks for leaving a review and hanging in there with this story.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22 Oct 2012 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Can't wait to see what is up with Kate and Elliott...excellent as always.  Thank you, Madame E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Ms.  E,

You are sorely missed when we have those torturous three day gaps between chapters...lol!  Thanks for another great day in the life if the Greys!  I can feel the drama coming!  Always looking forward to "more"! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for keeping up with me and always leving the nice comments. I appreciate them.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29 Dec 2012 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Please E, no drama on their anniversary!  That last line has me worried, though I laughed like crazy over the dog biscuits.  Great, as always!  Happy Holidays!

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

I reviewed on FF and when I saw this alert, I tortured myself and read it again!  Please don't let this be full circle's meaning- my heart could not take that.  Brilliant writing, but the man still needs regular therapy.  My hope is that with all that Ana has endured and overcome she has come full circle and regains enough strength to face the CG freight train head on.  He has betrayed her time and time again in the last year alone, let alone the last eight.  She made a mistake, yes, but he is the king of hypocrisy here.  I really think she should head out of town before he overreacts and throws her out. An early posting would truly be a gift - this cliffhanger is worse than the kidnapping!

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

You are officially killing me here, Ms. E.  Thanks for the early update, though I would be lying if I said I wasn't hoping for a Saturday anniversary surprise tomorrow.  Surely he has sulked enough - time to talk, apologize, forgive and move on.  She has certainly done that enough for him...maybe Taylor could put the bug in his ear!

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Ms. E,

A million thank yous, not only for bringing them back together, but also for the extra chapters this week.  You are so talented and so very much appreciated.  Can't wait until Wednesday.