Reviews by bratwoman_59
Summary: Past Featured Story

My continuation of the 50 Shades Series. One of my qualms with the series is that it didn't really develop Ana Steele as a person. My focus is to add more depth to her and continue the story. With my sense of humor. It begins with Ana 5 months pregnant

My story has language throughout and some sexual content.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Humor
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 24265 Read Count: 49123
[Report This] Published: 27 Jun 2012 Updated: 28 Jun 2012
Reviewer: bratwoman_59 Signed
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Mystery Party

Honey, it is obvious that you need a beta reader. I am very anal about reading stories containing spelling/grammatical errors. It distracts me from my enjoyment of the story.  This chapter contained many errors, but aside from them, I am looking forward to more.

Reviewer: bratwoman_59 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 28 Jun 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Love you, Mean it.

I am SO glad that I have been led to this site. "Fifty Shades" is one of my top 5 fave novels of all time, and I am SO glad to find an author who has continued it. This is just my first chapter and somehow I am going to restrain myself from reading the whole kittenkaboodle, but so far..an excellent beginning.