Reviews by be johns
Summary: Past Featured Story

What does Jason Taylor think when he meets 23 year old Christian Grey? After four years of working for him, what does Taylor think when he meets little Miss Steele?

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: 50 Shades - Read
Chapters: 43 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 166683 Read Count: 57740
[Report This] Published: 21 Jun 2012 Updated: 30 Dec 2012
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Date: 23 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40, Mr and Mrs Jones, um, Smith, um, Taylor

Have enjoyed following this story, a well written alternative view. Thank you for completing.

Summary: Past Featured Story


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Fifty Shades...Full Circle

Book III

A continuation of the Fifty Shades Trilogy

*A Writer's Coffee Shop Featured Story May 2013*

Thank You.

This story  continues where Fifty Shades...Clarity left off. Ana and Christian have endured a hard year, scandal, heartache and Christian finally recognizing and  accepting his past  have plagued them. Yet they remain strong with their love for each other and  their family. Will new revelations tear them apart? Will the coming changes divide them or make them stronger?       This is Book III. You will probably want to read 'Fifty Shades More', Book I and 'Fifty Shade Clarity', Book II first. They are both posted here.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Erotica, Family, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: G8or Favor8s Read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, Fifty Shades ...More
Chapters: 162 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 660157 Read Count: 591625
[Report This] Published: 08 Sep 2012 Updated: 06 Dec 2015
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Date: 08 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Clever update. I was 100% Ana now I'm not so sure. Well done Dr Flynn but will have to wait and see the outcome.

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Date: 05 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Oh dear. Things are not looking good for Ana. Maybe now is the time to stand up for herself..........



Author's Response:

Ana  will do well I think. It's not tit for tat.

thanks.

E.

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Date: 18 Apr 2013 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 71

Christian and Anas antics make my day. THANKYOU for the regular updates which are eagerely awaited.

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Date: 24 Nov 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

How brilliant was that little episode. Love this story please keep it up..

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Date: 13 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

So he has realised that home IS where the heart is, hope she still gives him a hard time but most unlikely...........

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Date: 17 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Wow. Hot update. Total capitulation from Ana as expected but what the hell she loves him and her life so why not? . 



Author's Response:

Yeah. She does love him, just a little.

thanks

E.

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Date: 26 Jan 2013 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

One gets the feeling that Christian is not going to be happy about this lets hope she tells him her intentions but that would be to much to hope for, will have to wait and see.

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Date: 27 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 125: Chapter 125

Gosh that was a hot update. The grapes made me giggle. This has certainly been a marathon story, don't want it to end. Thankyou.

Summary: Past Featured Story

Banner by the wonderful and talented DeeBelle1.

Some so called friends invite Bella out for her birthday, and send her to a BDSM club as a prank. What happens when the owner of the club sees her? Will he be able to set aside his Dom nature? Will she ever believe she deserves to have her needs met? Will he be able to set aside his wants and desires to meet those needs, or will she find her true desire is to submit to him? AH/M


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Hurt/Comfort,, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, J's Read and Loved Stories, Stories I've read, Fav BDSM Fics, Read
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 204571 Read Count: 334497
[Report This] Published: 22 Jul 2013 Updated: 31 Dec 2013
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Date: 29 Oct 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Just found this awesome story and read all 15 chapters in one sitting. The best story's are the ones you can't put down like this and can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

The overwhelming response to the chapters so far have far exceeded what Nikky and I thought this story would generate.  We are both very proud of this story and humbled by your responses.  In lieu of the ‘boycott’ at FFN everyone will be getting Meeting Her Needs in their inbox later today.  We hope that you all will still take the time to leave us your thoughts, especially since this coming chapter is super wonderful, (Well we think so anyway!)  Thanks for trusting in us, and no worries things are really shaping up at the end we’re working on that will leave you all satisfied—we hope.  Thanks for reading and reviewing, Nikky and Kasi~

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I put on my tuxedo trying hard not to turn and watch Bella get dressed or look in the mirror.

“Edward ...” comes Bella’s voice as I tie my laces and answer her.

“Yes, Beautiful?”

“Two things, is it wrong to go to these balls ... things without under garments on, and could you zip me up, please?” I run through what Bella has said again and turn to her.

“Wh ...” I try to talk, but I’m unable to complete what I’m saying as I look at Bella, whose sheer beauty takes my breath away. The dress only adds to her natural beauty and I feel stupefied as I stare at my beautiful girl.

I look Bella up and down, taking in every part of her body. I slowly look her up, starting at her feet. My eyes trail up how the dress sits on her body like a second skin. I look at how it makes her already large breasts look fuller. I look at her neck that still displays my mark. My eyes go to her lips and I see that they are moving.

I close my eyes and shake my head. “Sorry, I spaced out there, can you say that again, Beautiful?”

Bella chuckles shaking her head at me. “You look really hot, like my own secret agent man. I was asking, because this dress shows every line, so I should I take off my panties, right? I couldn’t squeeze my bra into the bust area; the girls can hardly breathe as it is.”

I look back down her body and see that she's right, she has a panty line. “Remove your panties, Beautiful, no one will know,” I say. I watch intently as Bella wiggles out of her panties and comes over to me and turns around. My eyes trail down her body again and I start to kiss her back. I feel Bella shake and laugh and I look to her.

“I need you to zip me up. I mean, you can carry on doing that, but I think we’ll be late if you do.” I smile giving her one last kiss, open mouthed, at the base of her lovely neck, before pulling the zipper up. With the zipper up it makes the tight dress even more molded to her curves. It fits her like a glove, and I make a mental note to thank my mom.

“Come on, Beautiful, let’s get this over and done with so I can bring you back here and kiss you some more,” I say holding my arm out for her to take.

All's Fair by Greytosteele Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 161]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Christian Grey has proven himself in the business world. At thirty-one, he finds himself bored with life. The world of mergers and acquisitions no longer holds the same thrill. He wants more. Frustrated with government red tape and corrupt politicians, he decides to run for the Senate. Enter Anastasia Steele, an up and coming star in the political arena. AU fanfic.


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 134692 Read Count: 26481
[Report This] Published: 22 Oct 2013 Updated: 10 Mar 2021
Reviewer: be johns Signed
Date: 27 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Sometimes Reality Bites

Really love your story it's different. Please continue and update.

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Date: 08 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is shaping up to be a really good must read story and eagerly await the next episode. It's good to see a strong confident Ana showing Christian the way....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I appreciate you're support.  More to come soon.

 

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Date: 14 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Free pass or more?

Love this story. Poor Christian is own worst enemy. 

It's been a good week for updates. Thank you.

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Date: 22 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Dances and Confessions

Wow. Great chapter which I read too quickly to find out what happens. Now going to read again to make the story last until the next update. Love it.

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Date: 17 Dec 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Tit for tat

Hot update on my favourite eagerly awaited fanfic. Why do women i.e. Ana make things so complicated and not just say what they feel.

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Date: 10 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Coming out

Great update, love your story. Left hanging again please don't make us wait too long..

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Date: 26 Jan 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Declarations

Brightened up a horrible wet Sunday. Thankyou.

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Date: 13 May 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Mending Fences

Really enjoying this story please continue..........

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Date: 06 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - She's gone

Really enjoying this story please continue.

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Date: 30 Nov 2015 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Hope you can sort out this issue would love to see your story finished. Continuing support guaranteed. Looking forward to next update.

Summary: Past Featured Story

TCOACG Banner by Mina

 

(Banner by Mina)

 

A perfect cafe au lait was all it took for Hollywood's most eligible bachelor to fall in love with me...the coffee girl.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Stories I've Already read, Dumbeline's WIP to read list, Stories I've read, My favs past present and future , Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 38 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 93585 Read Count: 142597
[Report This] Published: 01 Nov 2013 Updated: 18 Feb 2014
Reviewer: be johns Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14 Feb 2014 Title: Chapter 37: Epilogue

Thankyou for completing this enjoyable story. Look forward to future works.

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Date: 13 Nov 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Three

My e-mail alert for Chapter 4 gives me the same chapter as 3. So disappointed as eagerly awaiting update. Am I doing something wrong..?



Author's Response:

It must be....There are a total of four posted entries. One prologue and 3 regular chapters, so when you get your email it will always be one off because of the prologue. Does that make sense?

Summary: Past Featured Story

This is a "What if" story-What if Ana said "No" to Christian immediately after seeing the Playroom for the first time. Would they find their way together or live their lives in different worlds?


Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Anastasia Steele/Christian Grey
Genre: Drama, Romance
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After, Love and Faith, Pure Romance, Spicy
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 72556 Read Count: 30609
[Report This] Published: 17 Dec 2013 Updated: 14 Nov 2014
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Date: 14 Jun 2014 Title: Chapter 22: Double Jeopardy

Glad of the update wish they came more often have to go back and read the previous chapter again but no matter enjoying it . I like the humour in your writing.

Took your advice and downloaded Caasual Rule. Great read, can't put it down. Look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm so glad you;re enjoying the Casual Rule...I LOL's a few times writing it. 

As far as this story. Im going to try my best to update more often.  I wish I was a faster writer.  Thank you again for the feedback!

 

My Life as a Sub by ordlas Rated: NC-17 starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 135]
Summary: Past Featured Story

What was it like to be one of the fifteen? This is the story of a CG submissive, some time between Leila and Susannah; it takes place before Ana comes into his life.

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Categories: Fifty Shades Trilogy
Characters: Christian Grey/Other Character
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 87651 Read Count: 29472
[Report This] Published: 10 Jun 2014 Updated: 17 Feb 2017
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Date: 11 Dec 2016 Title: Chapter 1: The Arrangement

Glad you're back. Your fans wait patiently for updates, like your characters in this story

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Date: 21 Jul 2015 Title: Chapter 32: Land of Confusion

Oh you do continue to tease. Thanks for staying with your fans of this story, don't know where it's going or do we?.....

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Date: 27 Oct 2014 Title: Chapter 28: Never, Ever

Really enjoying this story, please update.

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Date: 29 Aug 2014 Title: Chapter 23: Ups and Downs

Just found this story and unable to put it down for 23 chapters and can't wait for more.

l really like your style of writing and differant perspective on our favourite story. Thankyou.

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Date: 09 Jan 2015 Title: Chapter 29: Sleepy to Seattle

I love your style of writing and are so glad you have been able to update this fascinating story. Please continue.

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Date: 30 Mar 2015 Title: Chapter 30: Confession and Inspection

Oh please don't leave us dangling and update your delicious story which makes me hungry for more.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Edward Cullen is a famous movie star as is his girlfriend Tanya, the mother of his child. Their son is a week old and can't seem to keep any formula down. Annoyed by the crying and finding motherhood tedious, Tanya takes off for the spa and a commercial shoot leaving Edward alone with their newborn. 

After trying nearly every formula on the market, Esme, Edward's sister suggests breast milk. It seems like a long shot, but when Bella Swan answers the unusual ad, Edward thinks all of his problems are solved. His son is doing well, but he has a new problem, an undeniable attraction for the woman who saved his son's life. 

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Categories: Twilight
Characters: None
Genre: Erotica
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: Happily Ever After
Series: Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 159 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 91905 Read Count: 1113973
[Report This] Published: 12 Jan 2015 Updated: 11 Jul 2017
Reviewer: be johns Signed
Date: 05 Oct 2015 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Why do I hate this story and wish you would get on with it but I can't keep away and look forward to your regular updates .  Here's to the next  chapter........Thankyou.