Reviews by AmethystDancer
The Perfect Wife by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3541]
Summary: Past Featured Story

After Renee and Phil die in a car accident on Bella’s 17th birthday. She is sent to live with her father, Charlie and brother, James in Forks WA after being separated for 10 years with no contact. Charlie dabbles in training and placement of the “perfect” wife for exclusive clientele. Bella quickly learns that she’s going that she’s going to get more than a high school education. She's going to be educated with a purpose.
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Categories: Twilight, Canon Pairings, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Ageise02's Read Stories, LeslieWhitlock's completed & recommended read stories, Finished, Themslovebug90's read stories, My Favorite Stories, Lady Luciole's Favorites TwiMaf, Read & Enjoyed
Chapters: 55 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 244105 Read Count: 1624968
[Report This] Published: 23 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25 Jan 2010 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 45

Edward is an idiot if he confides in Carlisle, who still has evil plans up his sleeve... But I appreciate the happy chapter, and I'm glad I've managed to track this story through all the changes.

Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed
Date: 06 Feb 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46

Oh no... what else can go wrong???

I do love the story though... I was so excited when I saw my update em-mail!

Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed
Date: 28 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50

Please, do me a favour: LEARN TO RESIST CLIFFIES!!!!

*sigh*

I liked this chapter, although I found that Edward was being sort of mood-swinging-y at the beginning. Then again, he was drinking.

The one annoying thing about reading this chapter was how all the paragraphs were really spaced out, so it looked like it was going to be twice as long as it was. I was all excited...

Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed
Date: 02 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Whew! I am glad Carlisle is dead and Dmitri too. That was a very neat way of handling the whole affair. It was so interesting to see through Carlisle eyes; he really was insane. I'm now anxiously awaiting Bella's HEA.

Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed
Date: 14 Apr 2010 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

You had me worried there... but that was a good and still realistic ending. HEAs don't tend to magically materialize in real life.

As for an original novel... that sounds fantastic. I'd absolutely read it.

Better Than Perfect by rmcrms5 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 103]
Summary:

Alice & Jasper's story from The Perfect Wife.Takes place 2 years before TPW covering the first few months of their marriage.


Categories: Twilight, All Human
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: My Favorite Stories
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 12187 Read Count: 19229
[Report This] Published: 25 Jan 2010 Updated: 07 Oct 2010
Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed
Date: 22 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Alright, so this was a bit short, but I'm still super glad to be able to read it... and to hear that TPW will be finishing up soon. It'll be sad when it's over, but I have to know how it ends!!!

I just also wanted to say how wonderful a job you're doing with Jasper, and the whole realizing this is wrong thing. I reread the first four chapters before reading this one and it's just so realistic that he could be that way and still change, even without someone there to help him along, like he is to Edward later.

Summary: Past Featured Story

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Nominated in the Indie Awards for Best 'Love Conquers All' One-Shot.


"I made a pact with myself. I would never again be the girl that people pitied; I would be the girl of whom people were envious..." - This is Leah's story. 

This story is POST Breaking Dawn and CANON; taking place AFTER The Volturi leave! : ) -  Canon and very OOC ! Rated NC-17 for strong adult themes.


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Categories: Supernatural TV Series, Twilight, Non-Canon Pairings, Crossover
Characters: Dean/Other Character or None, Leah/OC
Genre: None
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8484 Read Count: 234
[Report This] Published: 27 Jan 2010 Updated: 27 Jan 2010
Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Leah's Story...

Pretty darn good story! I'm so glad Leah got her HEA, even if it was slightly unconventional.

Breathe Again by ysar Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 149]
Summary: Past Featured Story

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

A BELLIE AWARDS NOMINEE!

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories that tell of Bella and Jacob during Edward's absence, Bella's start at college, and the Cullens' eventual return.


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards | Best Jacob Point of View in the Twilight Twins Awards


Categories: Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genre: Romance, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9, Jacob Black Wins the Girl
Chapters: 76 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 163880 Read Count: 35938
[Report This] Published: 28 Jan 2010 Updated: 12 Sep 2010
Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Admission: Bella's POV

Well, I admit that my first thought upon reading massive ans silver was car (more specifically Volvo) but that doesn't make much sense. As for the fire.... Victoria is dead???

Whatever the cas, I'm loving this story.

Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Quiet: Bella's POV

As of right now, I don't want Edward to come back, cause that would cause trouble for Bella and she's so happy in this world. In general, I'm all for Edward and Bella, but since I would pick Jake I have a soft spot for stories such as this one. Whatver happens, I hope everyone gets a happy ending.

Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 70: Honesty: Jacob's POV

I stumbled across this fantastic fic while browsing the site... that's how much of a life I have :)

Gossip by ysar Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Chapter 23: Comfort

 

Bella skips lunch, and misses out on some very interesting conversation.

 

~ "Whatever," said Jessica, rolling her eyes. "You know Bella. She just has to have any guy I like." ~

 

 

But Angela's there to see and hear it all.


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, One-Shot
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1309 Read Count: 359
[Report This] Published: 29 Jan 2010 Updated: 29 Jan 2010
Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Gossip (One-Shot)

It's one in the morning and I'me in bed readin Breather agin. I love it so far, and I really like the one-shots that give more insight. This one was good cause it was about Angela, who is one of my fave characters. I love that last bit betweem her and Ben. The only reason I didn't laugh out loud is that I'm supposed to be asleep!

Destined by ysar Rated: T [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Companion story for Breathe Again. Written as a side to Chapter Fifty-Three: Nuisance. Jessica is convinced that she and Embry are destined to be together. One-shot.

~"Finally a guy that was worth it. And just in time for prom.." ~


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight, Alternate Universe
Characters: Other Misc Char or Pairings(nc)
Genre: Drama, One-Shot, Young Adult
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: A Blazing Sun, 108.9
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2129 Read Count: 201
[Report This] Published: 30 Jan 2010 Updated: 30 Jan 2010
Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed
Date: 16 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Destined (One-Shot)

Hilarious! She lives in a diferent world. "It's not denial. She's just selective about the reality she accepts."

Dance with Me by tinaababy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Past Featured Story

A major league baseball player with a bad rep needs to clean his image. He signs on to do a reality dance show. Will he clean his image and have the right kind of chemistry with his partner? Based loosely on the reality t.v. show Dancing with the Stars. AU/AH. E/B.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Banner by: lindsiloolabell

Edward, Bella dancing.


Categories: Canon Pairings, Twilight, All Human
Characters: Bella/Edward
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: Amberina's Completed Favs List, Stories I've Already read, luv2write finished reads
Chapters: 32 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 107610 Read Count: 64341
[Report This] Published: 10 Mar 2010 Updated: 16 Jun 2010
Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed
Date: 17 Mar 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Fantastic story. I like the concept, it's original and interesting. Plus, a dancing Bella is so funny to think of... I can't imagine her being graceful.

Blind Faith by rmcrms5 Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

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Karsyn McKenna grew up, sheltered and loved, in a small Texas town.  Chase Carter is the local rancher who has secretly loved her forever.  Gabriel Thompson is the stranger who comes to town with secrets of his own.  Caught in a web of deception and lies that lead to murder, she must choose between the man she knows or the one who holds her heart.  Will blind faith be her salvation or her destruction?


Categories: Original Fiction, Drama, Romance
Characters: None
Genre: None
Language: None
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2357 Read Count: 683
[Report This] Published: 15 Jul 2010 Updated: 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed
Date: 18 Jul 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

When, exactly is this coming out? I'd love to get my hands on it... though maybe not since I'm in Canada. Anyways, it's so far pretty intriguing.

BTW, what's up with  publishing TPW? I'm sad to hear BTP is on hold.



Author's Response:

Blind Faith is coming out later this year, probably Oct or Nov.  TPW is still being published, but won't be ready until after the first of the year.  When I know more about how TPW is coming out (series or stand alone) then I'll know what to do with BTP.

I'm not sure yet where all BF will be available.  I'll know more as we get closer to release date. 

Summary: Past Featured Story

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He met the girl of his dreams. She met the man of her nightmares. How far would you go for your obsession? AH/AU/OOC

For the BEYOND THE PALE contest-Third Place Voter's Choice Winner

Banner by Mehek18

 


Categories: Non-Canon Pairings, Twilight
Characters: Bella/Emmett
Genre: Drama
Language: English
TWCS Romance Contest: None
Series: To Read, My favs past present and future
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 44991 Read Count: 48122
[Report This] Published: 26 Aug 2010 Updated: 22 Sep 2013
Reviewer: AmethystDancer Signed
Date: 26 Aug 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can appreciate the skill behind this story, and the work that went into it, and I can see that technically it's very good. But I really wish Emmet had died as a child. Sorry.



Author's Response:

Don't be sorry.  He WON'T be Bella's happy ending...someone else will.